Dirty Thief (Patrick)

Gennadiya and Patrick look for the supplies stolen by Pirates.

The surrounding lands of Rharne boast several towns and settlements that lie on the northern shores of the River Zynyx. This includes Mistral Village, Caervalle Town, Zynyx Market and Volta.

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Re: Dirty Thief (Patrick)

Thu May 30, 2019 7:45 pm


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Gennadiya

Gennadiya Lyosha
Skill Points: +15 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: +5 for talking to the weird guy, with a lion and a ball of light, out of the crowd.

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • Detection: Determining when someone is open to be talked to.
  • Discipline: Not blurting out what’s on your mind.
  • Socializing: Asking polite questions to learn more about someone.
  • Discipline: Distracting oneself from being motion sick.
  • Detection: Asking others about their plans
  • Socializing: Returning help to someone who offer to help you.
  • Medicine: Recognizing others using ginger to fight motion sickness
  • Discipline: Being polite when surprised
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Ri’ki: Is a pixie
  • Ri’ki: similar to Fae, but not the same
  • Ri’ki: Is very polite
  • Lush: A intelligent lion
  • Lush: willing to help in a fight
  • Patrick: Looking into a legend.
  • Patrick: has a lot of unique friends.
  • Patrick: Handsome, and tempting.
  • Patrick: has a brother who is a ghost
  • Dominek: appears when you touch a locket.
  • Dominek: Polite when the situation calls for it.
Notes: You can request up to 2 more skill knowledge, PM me if you wish to.
Player Word Count: 1908 words.

Patrick

Patrick
Skill Points: +15 (cannot be used for magic)
Magic XP: None.

Renown: +5 for having a lion and a ball of light following you around in a new crowd.

Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Loot: None.

Skill Knowledge:
  • none requested.
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Personal: Accompanying Gennadiya On Her Quest
Notes: You can request up to 10 knowledge for this thread, PM me if you wish to.
Player Word Count: 2372 words.

Rugged handsome man and platinum beauty meet on a boat... Gennadiya's thoughts make perfect sense here. Patrick has quite the entourage with him as well, makes for an interesting reunion between the two. Despite it being a reunion, you both managed to include the plot about pirates and further the story along with the characters' interactions with one another. Wasn't expecting the ghost bro either!

I hope their dealing with the pirates went well!

Great job the both of you and enjoy your rewards!

PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.

Total Word Count: 4280 words.
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