Insomnus

The Gauthrel Plains reach from the coasts of western Idalos to the very edge of Ne'haer before meeting the forests surrounding Hiladrith. The Fields of Gauthrel can be a dangerous place, one that is home to the most deadliest of creatures. It holds many secrets in the history of the land and may offer rewards to those who choose to journey out into the wild plains. It is best not to wander out alone in these fields. Even caravans have been known to go missing.

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65th of Ymiden, Arc 717

"Void," the master commanded. His apprentice - Alistair - stepped aside, throwing his feet back and narrowly dodging the spear. "Do you remember what Voiding is?" the man asked, jabbing the Venora with a rapid strike from the butt end of his spear. "Clearly not," he stated, spitting.

"Voiding is the art of consistent, fluid dodging. Not a singular backstep, not a singular motion that ends before another can follow. It is the art of keeping your feet light, keeping your eyes peeled and your reflexes keen. Try again!" he yelled. With a similar motion, he swept the spear horizontally, and Alistair stepped back and dodged. Then, with a strafe, he pulled away from the jab that followed. Keanu swiped his spear downward, only to meet the shaft of Alistair's spear, who then utilized his strength to counter and disarm his opponent, flinging it to the side with a firm and swift motion.

"Good, good!" the Biqaj exclaimed. "But I am not dead yet. You see, a Shadowdancer can fight even without a weapon. It is not only a spear style, but a style of reflexes, adaptation, acrobatics and maneuvering. In truth, it is as much acrobatics as it is the spear, though the dilettante practitioners would tell you otherwise," he explained. Alistair nodded his head, shuffling his feet and jumping lightly, back and forth.

"Excellent, Alistair. Keeping yourself moving is a wonderful way to be nimble and untouchable in a fight. Remember that," he stated.

"Now, I want you to perform a proper front-flip and back-flip. The refinement of your acrobatic skill is something you're direly lacking. You can dodge well enough, but you can't do so in the most unique and challenging ways, and certainly not on the fly." The man stepped back, giving himself some space between he and his apprentice. Then, turning his face to the side, he leaned forward and proceeded to flip himself straight-wise. A demonstration.

"Let me explain. Do you know what a punch jump is? It's a jump where as you fly forward, your hands - typically curled into a fist - are before you and ready to beat some trashy strumpet. Start with the punch jump," he commanded, and then demonstrated it for himself, landing and preparing to go again. "Then, tuck your knees, and rotate forward. Keep your hands around your shin, or near at least. Eventually I'll teach you to perform a master's front-flip where you need only a singular hand or even the weight of your spear, but that's a while from now. For now, front-flip like a loser," he stated, and began a second demonstration.

"Land with your knees bent, your arms before you," he motioned, showing Alistair what he meant, visually. "Then, straighten your body and raise your arms straight up for your finish. Well, I suppose that's if you want to be theatrical. You don't have to do it exactly like that," he explained. With a gesture, he motioned for Alistair to try.
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Punch jump, he whispered to himself, and practiced the motions. Tuck your knees, he spoke beneath his breath. Rotate forward. He envisioned Keanu, and then himself. He could be as nimble as the Biqaj was - he'd proven that to himself. Land with your knees bent, your arms before you. Then - straighten yourself, and...

He pictured it in his head, over and over. A silhouette of his own shape, jumping from his mindscape and onto the grass, performing the same flip Keanu had just done for him. Then, when he was ready to try, he tried. He performed all of the motions how he imagined he could, and somewhere in the first few steps he failed, and ended up rolling. That was fine. Alistair stood back up again, and tried once more. Another failure, this time landing on his ass after the flip. He was close.

After a third attempt, he flipped forward, and did so successfully. He straightened out his body and brought his arms up from his sides, his spear strapped to his back. The master nodded, moving over to pat his apprentice on the back. "Now, stick your spear - Shadowsong - into the ground in a diagonal angle. With similar principles, I want you to rotate your hips and elevate your body over the spear, flipping over it with your legs swinging upwards towards the sky. It requires abdominal and back strength, as well as mobility and experience in performing flips - but you already have all of these things. You're ready for this move," the man stated.

Alistair followed his instructions, attempting to perform it. It was a cartwheel flip using the spear's weight as a foundation. Pressing the tip of Shadowsong into the ground, Alistair grappled onto it from one side before swinging his hips forward, leaping and attempting to rotate his body to the opposite side with a maneuver of his legs. He failed and instead it was more like a jumping kick, though he figured that would happen at least the first few times.

And it did. He kicked forward instead of jumping, several times over, inciting for Keanu to take a hold of the spear and show him the motion. He stepped forward, stuck the spear into the ground, and quickly leaped across with a spinning rotation of his legs. "That is a diagonal polearm cartwheel," the man explained. "It's easier and more often used in combat. Try again," the man commanded.

He threw Alistair's spear back to him, and the man nodded. Jabbing the tip of Shadowsong into the ground with a stepping motion, he quickly cartwheeled over it, rapidly flinging himself from one side to the next. His performance was successful, if a bit nervous and sloppy in the beginning. He realized that this maneuver would be useful for dodging opponents in mobile battles, and seeing the utilization of the flip, Alistair practiced it a few more times in order to refine particular details.

"Good," the man nodded. "Now, stick it in vertically with a step - jab it straight into the ground, with the shaft facing the sky and the tip perfectly centered. Extend your arms when doing so, and then using your arms, hips, back and legs propel yourself. You'll jump straight over the spear and throw your legs over the rest of your body, before coming across on the other side. It's a mobility maneuver, meant to expertly evade or gain distance whilst keeping the spear thoroughly under your control. It can easily be followed up by a butt-end strike or even a lunge, depending on the situation," he explained.
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After a few attempts, Alistair performed the maneuver, and did so with relative grace. He nodded his head, taking a heavy breath and leaning into his spear. This was challenging and tiresome work, but today he'd learned a great deal about acrobatically maneuvering with the weapon, and utilizing the spear in general. Fluid Voiding, void-disarming, front-flips, diagonal cartwheels, vertical cartwheels, punch-jumping...

As time passed, he did attempt to perform a back-flip, but for some reason continuously failed. Perhaps due to a lack of confidence, or his depleting stamina as a result of the rigorous exercise and lack of a meal, he found his motions failed half-way each time. Whatever the reason, they did not further attempt to master the back-flip on this trial. Instead, Keanu sought to teach him a final ability: Insomnus, a Shadowsong skill he'd created and mastered by his lonesome.

"Insomnus utilizes either the vertical or diagonal spear-cartwheel. After reaching the other end, one ducks, raises their spear in line with their face via gripping it with their underarm, and rotates in a three hundred and sixty degree angle. It's often called the full-moon sweep by those others who have attempted it under my guidance, but I retain the name. Insomnus is a graceful ability with deadly efficiency, and immensely appropriate timing and skill. I call it Insomnus not only because it symbolizes the moon - and thus sleep - but also because of the mesmerizing effect it can cause on those who have witnessed it. It is a beautiful ability, and a deadly one. Let me show you, in practice," the man stated.

Performing a vertical cartwheel with the spear, flinging himself over the shaft and landing on his feet, Keanu immediately pulled the spear from the ground and tucked it under his arm. With a dexterous twirl, he spun in a full three-sixty motion, transferring the spear between his under-arm to a grip of both palms midway through the motion. "You don't have to grip it with your under-arm, you can also just pull the spear and fling it around you with a vicious sweep. It depends much on the user's strength and skill," he stated, nodding. Alistair listened intently and observed equally as well, and then attempted to perform the ability.

He aced the vertical cartwheel, and followed into a leaning grab with the area of the arm between his shoulder and elbow. Lowering his head, he spun viciously, though at the end of the motion - whilst attempting to transfer it back to his grip - he accidentally loosed it from his grasp and nearly launched it into Keanu's chest. The mage's eyes widened for a moment, though he quickly calmed upon realizing he did not in fact kill his spear trainer.

The Venora tried again. This time, he did well, much better. The motion was fluid and convincing. While it wasn't as perfect as Keanu's demonstration, it wasn't all too far off. His mechanical skill was beginning to rival his master's - all he needed now was practice.

"Good," the man nodded. "Wonderful display, Alistair. Now--" Keanu paused, raising a small purse of gold nel from his belt and tossing it to the air. "Let's go eat, you belligerent fuck. I'm hungry, and you rushed me to the lessons. You'll be paying for my second entree," he grinned, and invoked a roll of the eyes from his noble apprentice.

"Fine," Alistair replied. "But I'm going to need to write that down - Insomnus, what it does. You'll help me, yeah?" Alistair asked.

"Sure. But start preparing to write your own skills in. I want you to pioneer this art, Alistair. You have the mind for it. Just have the patience, too."
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Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Insomnus
Polearms: Spear - Underarm Swing
Acrobatics: Frontflip
Acrobatics: Vertical Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Diagonal Cartwheel
Acrobatics: Fluid Voiding

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Comment: Keanu seems bad ass, at least Ali knows what he's doing with that spear now! ;) Anyway, this training thread was a fun read, I'm glad I got the chance to review it!
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