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A Legacy Left Behind

Zi'da 30 701, Evening

Location: Barnell Residence, Dust Quarter

"Patrick, make sure the fire is kindled a little more would ya?" Dominek asked as he stacked their dishes from the table, their dinner had just now been ate and their bellies filled. What more could a growing boy ask for?

"Sure Dom, it'll only be a Bit." He answered as he handed over the cleaned off plate as he stood from his chair, it may not had been the most filling of dinners but at least they weren't hungry now. Least not for another long while. Their mother Elinora hadn't ate much though and really it surprised Patrick, usually she would eat her fill once the boys had enough but tonight was a different case apparently. When he moved from the rugged dining room they shared to the sitting area, where they mostly slept to stay warm during winter, he found their mother sitting close to the hearth with a blanket wrapped around her body. "You cold mum?"

"Just a wee lil' bit m' love, must be the Zi'da weather gettin' under me skin." She remarked with a soft chuckle and warm smile, though her hands appeared to quiver underneath her arms. Patrick couldn't really blame her quite honestly, Zi'da was always cold and Cylus would only get slightly colder.

"I'll be kindling the flame in just a moment, we should sleep rather warm tonight." He assured her with a soft grin as he took one of his hands in both her own. Her skin felt cold over his and for a moment he watched, the corner of his lip turned upward when she kissed his hand dearly. Patrick moved over to the door as his hand gently slid out of her grasp, and as quickly as he could the boy opened the door just a crack to slip out into the cold. On the street next to their doorstep was a small stockpile of wood... or was but apparently another decided to steal the vast majority of it. Cursed assholes. Dominek and Patrick would have to go out later to either butcher more from a tree, since they really couldn't afford to buy some on their own. Maybe they could... if they did a few light jobs within the Quarter.

Disappointed however he picked up what remained of the wood and held it underneath one arm, they'd have to make what little they had left last the night in order to keep warm. With the door pushed opened once more Patrick moved in as quickly as he could, a shudder made after he closed it behind him with his back. Now that he'd made it inside he moved back over to the hearth and sat down next to his mother, Dominek now on the other side of her as the three huddled close to the fire.

"Where's the rest of it?" Dom asked a little puzzled... Patrick didn't answer at first.

"Patrick." Elinora murmured with concern in her eyes.

"Gone." He finally told them as he worked hard to snap a smaller branch in two. "Someone took what they wanted and this was all that's left." Both mother and older brother sighed, clearly baffled that someone would have the audacity to do such a thing. Don't know why though, this was Dust Town after all.

"We'll go out and get more tomorrow." Dominek reassured Elinora with a glance over to Patrick.

"Gonna have to," the younger brother remarked, "or else we'll freeze before the new Arc."

"Oh boys..." Elinora sighed as she drew the both of them close to her, she tried her best to hide it but Pat already knew good and well.

She was crying.
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Zi'da 36 701, Evening

Location: Barnell Residence, Dust Quarter

The following trials were ones that became difficult for Elinora really, not just because of what happened with the firewood... but because of everything in general. She'd fallen ill and it had grown worse, to the point where she couldn't work any longer. Often the boys had to tell off a couple of her employers, who didn't seem at all happy that their mother was so suddenly sick when they needed her. For whatever business though was beyond the boys, Patrick didn't really care either as his mother's welfare was more important than their coin.

"Here mum, drink some o' this." Dominek encouraged as he held the wooden bowl of soup up to Nora's lips, the woman had lain on the cushions wrapped in blankets majority of her Trials. She would often cough uncontrollably and had been sweating nonstop with the fever, something that the boys wasn't sure how to cure since they weren't actual doctors. They tried though to help her deal with it, yet as the trials passed her sickness didn't seem to ease up on her. Patrick watched her weakly drink from the bowl and broke apart the wood they'd gathered, a feat that wasn't easy but both he and Dom managed to pull it off. Now they kept their firewood inside to avoid another chance of mistake, and their wood thief would have to find his steal somewhere else now.

"Thank you Dom." She quietly uttered as she huddled back down over her pillow, another few coughs followed as she shivered violently beneath the covers.

"You need a doctor mum." Patrick said as he chucked the two pieces of wood into the hearth, his eyes now upon them while Dom placed the bowl of soup near the hearth. "We can go to the Cathedral, they'll help us without charge I'm sure."

"Oh dear Pat." She moaned quietly with yet another soft smile forced on her sweat covered face. "No such luck I'm afraid. No doctor nor healer wouldn't help without some sort of payment to expect."

"Then we'll steal something."

"Pat." Dominek interjected swiftly as if the idea was complete taboo.

"What?" He rose from his spot with tears in his eyes. "We can't even afford any medicine, we can barely afford our next meal. Can't even buy wood without scrapin' by!" Furious he kicked at the two logs next to him, a hiss made as he forgot he wasn't wearing any shoes or boots. The silence between them all spoke volumes to Patrick. "If we don't get you medicine mum, then what good are we as your sons?"

"Oh Patrick!" Her eyes narrowed as she propped herself up on an elbow. "What on Idalos are you sayin?"

"I'm sayin that we can't keep livin' like this mumma! Every Trial we struggle, and every Trial your sick is one we waste. How can we help you if we can't afford anything..."

"Hush now boy," She scolded him but her voice somehow remained sincere, "I'll hear none of that you understand. None of it." She reiterated just as he opened his mouth to protest, Patrick looked at her somberly as he tried not to break down with tears. "Come here love." She beckoned for him and while he didn't want to, he couldn't protest against his own mother any further for any longer. With a tug at Dominek's arm she also wanted him to come closer as well, her head later rested in his lap as she held Patrick close to her.

"The both of you are young and strong, and still have a whole life ahead of you. Times may be hard now but... One Trial they'll get easier for you. Besides no matter what happens I'm always right here," She clutched a hand over Patrick's chest, "right here inside this beautiful heart you have." Her voice sounded a little more wispy and her breathing lightly shallow, but somehow her words still comforted him even when he didn't want to believe a word. They were just boys after all, boys trying to weather the storm they were always within.

And thus the three remained close to one another as they watched the fire burn just a little longer.
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Zi'da 43 701, Midday

Location: Barnell Residence, Dust Quarter

They had worked harder ever since that night spent by the fire, doing whatever menial favors they could to earn some coin. Until to-trial when the boys managed to scrounge up enough Nel, even in this Immortal's forsaken spit of a place, to buy a few herbs to help alleviate their mother's symptoms. Most of it ground powder from the essential herbs needed to combat the fever, but hopefully just the right curatives dear Elinora needed in order to get better. It had been a hard endeavor indeed since work was scarce for two small boys, but somehow both Dominek and Patrick had managed to get a fair price for what they brought home.

"Mumma!" Dominek called out as they entered the hovel with a quick shut of the door, Patrick being the one to close it while Dom moved closer to where Elinora laid. Pat somehow first noticed the fire had died down in the hearth, an easy thing he'd fix once they gave their mother her medicine. "Mumma, wake up." Dom encouraged with a few gentle shakes at her shoulder, yet somehow the woman remained heavily deep in her sleep. She had gotten so pale and cold, her body still covered in sweat but not as much as it had been when they left this early morn. "Mumma," Dom repeated with a forced chuckle, "Mumma wake up. We got you medicine."

Patrick moved over to the hearth to check the embers, one or two seemed to remain so he could probably still burn wood with those. "Seven hells Pat, she's cold as ice." He looked to his brother and the limp woman who just laid there, eyes still shut and the faint trace of that same smile still on her face. Patrick released the wood in his hand and moved over to his brother's side, the back of his hand rested against her neck where there should've been a pulse. "Mumma?" Dominek gave her another nudge with a concerned look this time, and Patrick immediately shared the sentiment when she lacked a pulse.

"She's got no pulse... and she ain't breathin' either." He remarked as he looked upon her lifeless form with a heavy heart, both he and Dominek had tears pour from their eyes as Dominek yet again tried to awaken her.

"No... Mumma! Mumma wake up!" However no matter how much he tried or how hard he nudged her, Elinora didn't once seem to stir in their presence. "But we... We worked hard. We got her medicine."

"The medicine is useless." Patrick muttered as the two boys held each other in one arm. "...We weren't able to get it on time."

"She's... gone." Dominek finally seemed to understand it, although neither one of them wanted to accept it.

Just like their mother the embers of the hearth finally died out.
In the Trials that followed Elinora was given the funeral rites every Rharnian had upon their death, both boys were left behind under the guardianship of the woman Felissa but they hardly stuck around. Both grief stricken and heartbroken they sought to find ways to distract themselves, to improve their lives for the namesake of their mother. Elinora had been known and remembered as a dear and loving mother who did everything for her boys, and while she certainly wasn't loved or favored by all there were several who remembered her quite fondly.

Both Dominek and Patrick had nothing to inherit really save for the necklace left behind by her, everything else which wasn't much to begin with had been either taken or sold off by the Merchant's Guild. Yet the boys wouldn't allow this to get under their skin, they intended to perservere and continue what their mother left behind. They would remain her legacy until such a time comes where Vri determined their fate sealed.
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A Legacy Left Behind

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A very sad thread - one slight point I'd make is that it is probably worth to be more explicit in your review request. Some people would not want to review a thread dealing with the death of a parent, so I'd put that in the warning. Other than that, it was sad, well written and poignant. So sad - I just wanted to wrap Pat and his brother up in a warm blanket and look after them both! If I've missed anything, please don't hesitate to PM me.

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