[Auster's School] Melody

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[Auster's School] Melody

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15th Ymiden, 718
That morning, Vega had met her piano teacher, Cecily - a woman who was, quite frankly, snooty. Vega had to admit though that the woman could play and she really hoped that she was going to learn from her. So, Cecily had shown her the keys on the keyboard and how to sit and hold herself. But other than a few random presses of the keys, there it had stopped. Vega didn't understand why, but equally she knew that she had to trust this weird woman to teach her.

"Very well," Cecily said and she motioned to the piano as Vega arrived. No greeting, no such pleasantries. Cecily was here and she meant business. "Your ability with the violin is not in question. However, we need now to determine your baseline with the piano. Hands into position, please."

Vega assumed that meant position for playing. So, she sat down and lifted her hands, placing her fingers on the keys. Looking at the keyboard, as Cecily took hold of Vega's hair and moved it over to one shoulder. "Hey, gerroff. Whatcha doin' back there?" Cecily chuckled and shook her head. "It will be easier for you, I promise. Now, the keys. White key are the notes, what are the black ones?" Vega looked at them and considered for a few trill. "Well, they've got to be the flats an' sharps, haven't they? Five in eight. An' since this is C, right here in the middle, then that makes sense." Cecily smiled. Maybe there was more to this woman than a brash accent and a colourful turn of phrase.

But only maybe.

"So," Cecily said with a smile. "I will call out a note, you will play. Then, we will move on. The secret to playing the piano is to play multiple keys so you will use the correct fingers." There followed a good ten bits of Cecily calling out first single notes and then things like "Together, a and c" and so on. She did it and followed it well enough and Cecily looked at her. "You understand scales?" Vega nodded. "Play then."

Cecily was moderately convinced that there was no way that Vega would be able to translate from the violin to the piano, but her fingers immediately moved with confidence and she began to play scales. Cecily watched her in something akin to amazement. The woman just did it. She had not played the piano before and yet, she understood it. There were still issues, and that was to be expected, but frankly, it was in that moment that Cecily started to believe that maybe, the woman was a musical prodigy.

Which would be, she considered, just about typical. Why the Immortals and the Fates saw fit to give talent to such a coarse and unrefined creature and yet there was no doubting it. The woman had talent. Cecily had worked with some very talented people in her past, but even she would have to admit that sitting at the keyboard and simply playing correctly was beyond rare, yet that was what this rough-talking individual was doing. Cecily was a bigot and overtly prejudiced in one way. Yet, in terms of talent? When she saw it, she wanted to encourage it.

Even when it came in this package.
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Musical Instrument: Piano: Scales
Musical Instrument: Piano: Following verbal instructions.
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"That's good. You have a good understanding of music. Instinct. These can only be taught so far, and will serve you well. Go and play the scales you would on the violin, please," Vega nodded and started to stand before realising that Cecily was handing her a violin. "Thanks. Ok. So I'd play this," Sitting in front of the piano, holding the fiddle in her hands, which began to glow as soon as she started to play it, Vega closed her eyes and smiled as she began. Cecily watched her for a few moments, listening to the very simple scales she played.

"Good," Cecily said and she smiled. No matter what, she was impressed with the woman - to Cecily that was all that was important, all that was necessary. Music was very much Cecily's focus in life and she could no longer doubt that Vega was musically talented in a way which was very rare.

"Now, tell me the difference," Cecily asked, sitting opposite the redhead. As Vega leaned backwards and put the fiddle into its case, she did not hesitate in her answer. "It's soul an' heart an' feelin' when I play the fiddle. It's emotion. This," she gestured to the piano and sighed slightly. "I mean. I don't mean to sound negative, I'm not. In truth, I'm lovin' it. But it's... I dunno, there's no heart in it yet because I've got to think about what I'm doin'." Cecily nodded. "And how do you put that into your playing of the violin?"

It was undoubtedly true that Cecily was impressed by Vega's ability but the trial had not yet dawned where she would be calling a violin a "fiddle", she thought to herself with a smile. Vega considered the question and answered the best she could. "I mean, it's not like I'm not thinkin' about it when I play the fiddle, y'know? I am. But I'm inside it, too. Inside the music itself. I'm outside this." Cecily nodded. "Most people spend arcs outside the music, or the instrument they are playing. Arcs. You, it seems, do not."

Vega shrugged slightly, uncomfortable with the idea of her having a talent in that way. It was what it was to her and she didn't really see the point in making a fuss about it. "Either way, though, I'm likin' this. It makes a beautiful sound an' I can imagine that it's well lovely. We don't have one, so I'm gonna have to hope I remember what you teach me, but I'm sure I will." Cecily was sure too and said so. "So," Vega's music teacher said with a slight smile. "Scales, practice practice. It is only in the practice that you will build the muscle memory to simply do what you must. Do not slouch, do not fall in to bad habits. If you can, at home, practice on a desk or some such. Practice without keys, if needs be so long as you can visualise."

Vega considered that and raised an eyebrow. "I'm gonna look like a right plonker, but a'right. How much does a piano cost, any'ow?" Cecily shrugged slightly. "The most basic would be two to three hundred gold nel." Vega raised an eyebrow and said, quite honestly. "Yeah, I can't afford that. An' if I could, it don't seem fair to be spendin' that amount of money on somethin' that jus' makes a noise." Cecily looked horrified and Vega grinned at her. "Well, you know, it's a good noise, a beautiful one. But that's what it does. That price, I'd like it to fetch me a cup of tea in the mornin' too." Cecily sighed although in fairness, she was starting to appreciate that Vega was, at least, joking. She hoped. Still, time for a change of subject. "Next, lets talk about your feet."

Vega looked down at said feet and smiled. She'd been wondering what those pedals did.
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Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Putting emotion into your playing, even just scales.
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"The first thing to remember," Cecily said with a serious tone to her voice, "is that the piano is a stringed instrument. You must understand the instrument at a fundamental level in order to truly get everything out of it." Vega nodded and looked at her teacher with a serious gaze. "Yeah. I want to learn to make them. I do a lot of woodworkin' already. I've always been good with my hands, you know, an' I can make stuff now, an' do it well but... I think it could be more. I think it needs to be this, you know?" She sighed and looked at Cecily with an expression which told of her confusion. "I mean, I gotta be honest, I think I'm gettin' a bit obsessed." Cecily smiled and nodded. "I understand," she said. "It is in your blood, yes?" Vega nodded, unable to deny it.

"Good!" Cecily said and she smiled, reaching to move Vega's hair again. That caused a deep frown from the redhead, which Cecily ignored. "Look, gerrof," Vega said, not one to be bothered by such small things as social conventions or such. "Don't be pawin' at my head. It's my head you've got yer own. Paw at that." Cecily blinked twice in some surprise and then cleared her throat. "So. The pedals. The one on the right is the sustaining pedal. It allows you to sustain the notes longer. Each string, inside the instrument, has a damper. That means that the string does not continue to vibrate once you have taken your finger off the key. The sustaining pedal lifts that damper."

Vega listened to what Cecily said and shook her head. "Yeah. I get that there are words comin' out, but I got no clue what you mean. Hang on." she said, then put her fingers down on the C, E and G of the middle octave of the piano. Once the key was fully depressed, she lifted her thumb, which played the C, but kept the E and G there. Listening to it, she nodded once. Cecily opened her mouth to speak and Vega, with typical grace said "Shush up, I'm listenin'," and then hit the chord again. This time with the pedal depressed. She lifted her thumb, then moved and played the same chord an octave down with her left hand, whilst the pedal was depressed. Then, she nodded. "Right. Got it."

Cecily looked at her in some surprise, and queried, "so, when might you use that on the scales? Just using that pedal, have a play?"

As an idea, that was one which Vega wholeheartedly approved of and so she lowered her eyes once more to the keyboard and then began to play. Simple scales, but such a difference, she realised, when she could use the technique of keeping the key pressed for a single note to have the damper removed, or by depressing the pedal to do it to them all. That made a real difference and so, she played the scale keeping the first note pressed and then came back down the three octaves she'd gone up with the pedal down. It produced a beautiful sound and Vega beamed in delight as she realised that this was the same feeling as the one she got when she played the fiddle. There wasn't the depth of emotion or skill in her playing yet, but as the piano glowed slightly with the nimbus of starlight, the redhead closed her eyes and smiled.

Cecily watched and her expression mirrored Vegas. Moving to sit next to her, teacher and student played the scales together, in a harmonised melody.
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Musical Instrument: Piano: The Sustain pedal
Musical Instrument: Piano: Learn by doing, not by listening to someone explaining
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Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Putting emotion into your playing, even just scales.
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You are so organized. The little word count and specific skills underneath each post are enviably awesome. Now I wanna give that method a try. Vega brings her own perspective to every situation, finding ways to shove people out of their comfortable boxes all while helping them realize that sometimes their box was dumb anyway when she outshines their expectations. Nicely written. I do love Vega-speak. Always.
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