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1st Trial of Saun, Arc 717
Etzos Bazaar


The raven peered down at the shop from above. It spiraled into a slow descent, carefully riding the wind towards the ground. The black wings wavered slightly in the wind. It made no sound, unlike its counterparts scavenging over the Bazaar. It saw what it was searching for and dove. The bird reached out with talons, groping as it beat its wings. In a flurry of flailing wings the raven grasped the blood red cloth with tiny black claws. It beat against the wind, launching back into the sky a heartbeat later, scattering the other cloth items on the table.

Even after the merchant’s furious screams the raven was silent. It beat against the air, flying higher and higher. It was a black dot with a long red tail like a banner in the sky. People watched and laughed as the bird made away with the merchant’s product. The incident was nothing more than an odd event in the course of a bright pleasant day. They had not seen the green glow of the raven’s eyes, nor the stillness of its heart.

As the bird soared down atop the ramparts of the Etzori wall a form came into view. The man stood up from where he was laying. He shook his head and blinked his eyes. It was always odd when he dropped the Link to one of his ravens. The difference of mobility between a human and a raven left him with an odd vertigo. Nevertheless, Neronin raised his hand and the undead bird flew into it roughly. Neronin caught the thrall by the throat and grasped the red cloth. He was satisfied as he looked at it with his own eyes rather than the ravens. It certainly would do nicely, and it was free.

Neronin wrapped the long cloth around his head as he had seen the easterners do when they visited Etzos. He had long pondered a way of hiding his ever growing witchbrand. It was reaching a point where his magic was evident to the close inspector. He could not allow his identity to be compromised. This would be an odd but effective solution for the public. He wasn’t sure yet how he would manage to divert Tabard with his dangerous receptive eyes. He had thus far managed to acquire a soft grey tunic that was long and had sleeves that would cover most of his witchbrands as well. Neronin had spent most of the morning enjoying observing the raven whilst it stole the items from the Bazaar. He could not very well go down himself with his witchbrand having grown so extensively. Neronin let his mind drift to the subject it had gone to in every calm moment since Ashan.

The Lich.

The concept of the crowning achievement in necromancy both elated and terrified him in equal measure. Neronin had been jarred by the utter extremity of it, shocked and surprised when he had first read Gavrel’s description of the final, grisly act. Now though, he thought that the path could not end in any other way. Of course the magic, that spark that coiled its existence around the dark place between life and death would require such a sacrifice for true power. The idea of shrugging off his own body, the form that had been his identity for so long, horrified him. It disgusted the mage. But it was tantalizing all the same. He could not help but yearn for it.

After all, he was more than his human form now. That was the whole point of the dark ritual. Transcendence of the weakness of humanity. That was the whole point of necromancy, of magic. He was reaching the point at which that was possible and it terrified him. Strength and focus were what he needed to combat this doubt. He had spent so long marching down this dark and lonely path that it was the only answer.
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Neronin laughed. Death or undeath. The spark had ushered him into this position where he could not deviate if he wanted to. Neronin sighed and threw the undead raven into the air once again. With practiced ease he flew the raven over to the Bazaar again. He moved once again into the slowly revolving survey of the many vendors and shops with which he had spotted the tunic and the turban before. The raven lowered itself in the currents above the Bazaar and Neronin watched using the familiar link spell, bringing his mind into the form of the raven.

Then he saw the leatherworker’s stations, all arrayed together. The raven slid lower and surveyed them, looking for a likely pair of gloves. Finding a quality vendor who seemed to specialize in a sort of soft leather than appealed to Neronin he willed the thrall to focus on that one. The raven spiraled down, the small beady eye focused on a black pair of gloves. Then as it dove, stretching the tiny talons out once again there was a jarring impact. Neronin felt a dizziness set over him as he watched through the ravens eyes as it fell to the ground. Neronin could see a crossbow bolt protruding from the black chest of the raven. A moment later a man had crouched down and picked the bird up.

“Damn pesky thing, you aren’t getting my wares! This birds been pestering merchants all- Hang on, what’s this?” The man’s eyes had lit upon the bird and Neronin felt a pressing need to abandon the thing. If he determined that it was more than an overly clever raven, he might start an uproar. The necromancer yanked his mind back from the raven, abandoning the animation as well.

He sat upright with a violent jerk, his mind reeling for a few heartbeats as it returned to him. Neronin groaned as he set his palms against the stones beneath him to stead his spinning head. The necromancer found his balance and sat for a long moment, recovering from the suddenness of the retreat. He controlled his breathing and focused on calmness. It was never a pleasant sensation, returning to his body from the Link. Truth be told, he hadn’t focused on that particular magic enough to get used to it, especially in such quick succession.

Neronin stood up and slid down from the battlement he had clambered upon to land with a skid and a slight stumble upon the walkway of the Etzori wall. He adjusted the scarf around his head as he set out for the lower levels once again.

Etzos seemed to be abuzz with the summer seasons. The people of the city mingled with travelers from other cities and the farmers from the surrounding area. The markets were alive with new wares and the huntsmen had come in from the woods to peddle furs for the winter seasons approaching. Already the men of the farmlands were looking to their final harvest and anticipation permeated through conversation and atmosphere alike. Neronin was not concerned with most of it. He moved amongst the streets, disguised as a foreigner to protect against his witchbrands. If it meant keeping his magic unknown he could pretend to be a man of the desert. There were enough of them coming in from Foster’s Landing to not seem too noteworthy.

As he moved from uptown to the slummy areas of the outer city he felt more at home. These dirt roads and grim encrusted shanties were more familiar. Despite the many years since he had been a boy living the dual existence between the streets and Gavrel’s vile hovel, he felt a sense of returning every time he walked through this area. Though he wanted to step away from Etzos, step away for society and all it meant, he had originated here. That was a fact that could never change. It was a part of him. It wasn’t belonging. He knew he did not belong. He had not in a long while. Too far down the path of necromancy to belong anywhere but in the shadows between life and death. The urge to complete that final rite and find true belonging came over him once again and he had to rein in his thoughts, bring himself back to the life that was before him. It was more a sense of familiarity.
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The Etzori thought his reverie had taken him back further to the dark days when his father had abused him. He heard his raspy voice muttering insults as he turned a corner. It had been arcs since he had thought about that old bastard, why had his mind gone there now? Then he realized that it was not his father, but someone else. A man was speaking with drunken hate in the house he now leaned against. He spat a slur of threats with all-encompassing relish as a lover might whisper to the object of their love. Neronin perked up, his back straightening. He turned and listened at the door.

It was a shabby house, boarded up in places with wood from crates. There were no windows but some places had wide, moldy cracks. The door stood on its hinges with a strap of leather wrapped around the outer handle and tucked inside, as if they had to tie it closed. Neronin stepped up to the door and paused. He could hear whimpering now on coming from inside the small home as well. He felt the blood drain from his face and a pounding sounded in his ears. This was both a relapse into his past and a reality of the present. Neronin reached down and drew the dagger from his waist without conscious thought. He slid it across the leather thong without realizing and pulled it open.

Inside a bedraggled and fat man stood with a belt in his hand. He had threaded nails and tacks through the holes that were meant to adjust the tightness. Neronin watched them glint briefly in the dull light of the two greasy lanterns in the corners. He was drunk, that was apparent instantaneously. Neronin stared at the man and could not make out his face, for all he saw was his own father.

The man turned in surprise and yelled. “Get the fuck out. Who do you think you are, barging in a house like tha’?” He still held the belt up, but now he turned it on Neronin. The necromancer did not answer. He turned his attention on the girl laying on the straw bed. She was young and pretty in a dirty, slum kind of way. Her smock was stained with grease and grim and her linen pants were ripped up the seem, to her thigh. She looked to be about twelve. She was bleeding from tiny wounds on her arms and her legs. Neronin’s gaze turned back to the man. He was moving towards Neronin now and instead of the belt in his hand it was a fire poker. A subtle difference of method, Neronin supposed. The cruelty was the same.

Neronin reached up and caught the man’s hand in his own. The necromancer released the dagger from his grip and it clattered to the floor. The man swung around and punched Neronin in the face. The fist, surprisingly sturdy and strong, broke his lip. The second punch split the skin of his cheek and the third caught him in the eye. Still the necromancer said nothing. He reached up and grasped the man’s throat gentle as he punched him. He had been too afraid to do it himself all those years ago, as this girl was. She did not need bravery though, he had vengeance.

Neronin let the ether erupt from his hand on the man’s throat. He had been unconcerned with it as he pummeled Neronin’s face, but now his eyes went wide. Neronin tightened his grasp as the Wither took the man. He poured the pent up rage and hatred into the spell and the spark within him seemed to pulsate with joy. The man blanched as the decay crept into the skin where Neronin touched it. The smell of death permeated the room and still Neronin stared into the face of his father, who was not there. As his hate poured forth, Neronin felt a subtle shift in the spell. He felt a dual current flowing from the man into him, where before it was always out of himself. The current was warm and it permeated through him and into Neronin’s face. As the sensation reached his wounds Neronin felt the pain diminish.

The cuts and the bruising began to subside as he Withered the man. Neronin’s spark was drawing the life essence from the man, he knew. Neronin could not explain how he knew, but the connection to that spark was stronger than ever. They were rapidly becoming one, he knew. The siphoning effect healed his split lip, his cut cheek, and his swollen eye. The man was dying now, his throat a disgusting mangled mess of rotting flesh and pus. The decay had set in deep with Neronin’s force of will.
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The necromancer dropped his grip, slime from the man’s throat coating his fingers. The drunk stumbled back and gurgled, dropping the belt. He slumped against the wall and sunk to the ground. Neronin’s flickering witchbrand subsided and he turned his gaze upon the girl on the bed. She stared at him with horror he recognized. Perhaps it was not the same horror he had felt at the sight of his father, but it felt the same. Him standing over her much as her father had, much as his father had stood over him. Neronin held up his hands.

“I’m not going to hurt you.” He said, placatingly. Neronin had just saved her. He needed her to know that was his intention.

“Get away from me! You’re, you’re a mage!” She sputtered, her eyes full of tears and her legs drawing in upon herself.

“Yes, but I saved you.” He said, taking a step forward. The drunk still slumped in the corner, staring at him. Neronin knew he sounded foolish saying it. It was as though he was a little boy again.

“You’re a mage! You only hurt, evil vile witch!” She screamed at him. “You killed my father!”

“You didn’t need him!” Neronin shouted back at the stranger, gesturing to the pitiful drunk in the corner. “You don’t need someone like that.”

“He’s all I have left!” She said, her face breaking into a fierce, desperate sadness.

“You don’t need anyone, you’re stronger without him.” Neronin said, making a vague gesture towards the door. “Come on, we can leave this behind you.

“What kind of a monster doesn’t need anyone? what chance do I have on my own? You think things will be better for a girl on the street.” She shot back at him, her eyes messed up with pain and anger. “You’ve ruined me. You killer, you monster, you witch.” At these last words she began throwing blankets and pillows at him from the bed. Neronin backed away.

He could not understand her anger. Why would she care for a man who abused her? Why had she not been glad to see the father put in his place. As Neronin looked at the drunkard in the corner he saw him for the first time. It was not his father, but some other man. Some other abusive, vile wretch. And he was dead.

Neronin fled from the home, the sounds of the girl’s sobbing screams of Murderer and Witch chased him like some specter of the undead. He did not belong amongst them, the people.

The living.
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Knowledge:

Discipline: Resisting the Urge to submit to magic
Necromancy: Link: Used to steal
Necromancy: Siphon
Necromancy: Use Siphon to heal wounds
Endurance: Use fury to resist the pain of a punch

Loot: Scarf and Tunic.
Injuries/Overstepping: None, healed via Siphon.
Fame: -2 for Breaking Law, -2 for being a Mage in Etzos.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes


Notes: Dang, that got really deep really quickly. The mental discussion that Neronin is having between being alive and dead, and where he belongs is fascinating, and I look forward to its culmination. Also, very clever to steal with a raven, my good man. :D

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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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