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22nd Trial, Saun, Arc 707
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22nd break


"They never tell 'em about shitting the bed. Poor dears..."

Sally was of little mind to be charitable, though, given it was her hands that had to go sifting through that mess just to take care of the baby. The father, the sisters, the slack-jawed husband, they'd bustled back and forth and be oh-so-bloody-helpful... but when it came to the kack their darling daughter left on the sheets?

Such is a midwife's lot. Tack on another silver nel, that'll learn the buggers.

Happy, exhausted voices called to her and she turned to toss a wave back the way she'd just come. The doorway was flung open and light poured out, outlining the grandfather, father, and the bundle he carried... until a breathless call beckoned him back inside. Sally smiled as the figures retreated inside and that blaze of light was shut off, drowning the street in darkness.

She'll be in bed for two whole trials and then won't sit down again for another arc. Enjoy it while it lasts, girl.

The old woman chuckled to herself and began her slow, measured way back home. A handful of bits in the open air and already she felt the sweat start to seep through her skin. Was it hotter this year? Seemed that way. Every year did, though. Maybe it was something that happened when you got older? You got cold easier?

"Closer to Death, I suppose," he said to herself, ignoring the odd look from a passerby. "Body getting ready for the cold of the grave."

The stranger quickened his pace. Sally's grin widened. One of the benefits of being another doddery old crone: you could get away with shit like that all the bloody time.

Old knees and ankles were sore by the time she got home. There seemed to be less torches burning in the streets, but that wasn't unusual. The long days of Saun lasted deep into the night, odd as that sounded, and more than that, no-one wanted more heat soaking into the cobbles and bricks at night. The dark breaks were the only time the city got too cool down and now lose all its moisture to endless sweating.

Sally licked her lips, anticipating a nice, cold glass of water when she got through the door... followed by a short, hot shot of rum. She'd bloody well earned that one-

It happened in a handful of trills. Maybe less than that. The movement behind her. Boot soles scraping on the cobbles. A shadow against the shadows she could see, as if the texture of them just shook and trembled, flowing towards-

-her. She started to turn, and knew in that moment before the rag came down across her mouth that he'd come from the alley across the way. How long had he been waiting? How many breaks had he squatted in the rubbish and dirt? Just to ambush an old woman who delivered babies for a living?

Sally got no answers. Her scream was muffled by a rag that was wet and smelly and forced across her face. Only her eyes were left unblocked, wide and frantic and staring. She was old but not weak, and she thrashed and struggled but the form behind her was solid as an oak wrapped in rags. One hand wrapped around her like a branch, pinning her flailing arms-

-but not for long. It took ust trills before whatever was stinking up the rag worked its evil on her. Then the world went dark and weightless and quiet, and Sally went into the void ignorant and alone.

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Last edited by Kasoria on Fri Mar 16, 2018 6:10 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 627

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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He had to be sure. When he doubted what he was about to do, he remembered that. When he thought he was crossing a line or being paranoid or simply worrying about nothing, about a trifle that could never become a real problem, those words thumped into his head like a boulder in the middle of a field.

He had to be sure. Because of that fucking cat from when he was a kid.

He squatted in the stench and the darkness and clothes that were composed more of sweat and tiredness than cloth, and he waited. Cloak wrapped around him like a blanket, pressing himself into the wall behind the trash. Collection was always more common in the Hot Season, but this was not the nicest of areas, so he had a trial or two before he had to worry about being moved on. More time than he needed.

No searching was necessary. No questions that might get back to his target. He knew her and her house and her family and her work. She'd been there when his sister was born. That was why he'd gone to her when Jessye started grunting and bending over and Kasoria saw the puddle of water at her feet.

He'd flown across the cobbles like Z'da Wind to find the midwife. Practically carried her back to his place on his back, on the jog. Watched her wrinkled, steady hands work their magic for breaks and then she handed him this perfect, ugly, sticky, odd little sack of skin.

Kasoria didn't understand about that fucking cat, until that moment.

His epiphany lasted all of that night. Then the cold, cruel reality of his profession intruded and colored everything he thought and understood. He'd sat in the dark and listened to this gurgling creature in the other room. He made his plans, for the coming trials and then the arcs to follow. Jessye would be willful, he knew. She would be made to understand it was the best move for the boy.

A trial and a night in the garbage, and he would have waited longer. Because he had to be sure.

The old woman came wobbling up the street and Kasoria doused the rag with the concoction he'd purchased, sure to hold his breath when he did. Scarf Rot was supposed to be smeared into a weapon, but he'd seen what a whole dose could do when you soaked some cloth and shoved it into someone's mouth and nose. Not as artful, but it did the trick.

He waited until she'd turned her back, this woman that had aided his family, delivered his sister, smiled at him and patted his hand and called him "a lucky big brother". He watched her fiddle with the keys as he glided out from the shadows, walking heel-toe with care, minimizing the sound of his steps. She'd half turned when he tensed and scuffed his boot on the cobbles. He wondered if he could do it, if she saw him, if she looked into his eyes and knew who he was.

No. You would have.

Because you need to be sure.


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word count: 542

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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The smell struck her before the words. Rotting and wretched, more than the regular garbage-and-horse-shit smell of Etzos. This was older, curdled, like meat left out for trials in the suns and just allowed to congeal into something horrible. An outhouse never cleaned but still used, until it was overflowing and the bottom rungs were backed solid, bricks of turds and piss pressurized into stuff you'd have to break apart with hammers.

Old stones, too. Moss and algae. Fungus and rotting wood. Sally had visited a castle once, outside of Etzos, a ruin more than anything else. She'd smelled that there, too. The weight of decades, of centuries, pressing down and crushing all the fresh, new life. The way it grew teeth and gnawed at big, solid blocks like they were bad teeth.

Shit by the ton. Rot. Stones. Darkness. Sally knew where she was, and-

The slap wasn't really worth the word. It was too light, and came in bunches, on each cheek. Almost like insistent wings flapping at her, brushing away the sleep and bringing her groaning back to reality. She was sitting on something hard. Her eyes snapped open and in the trill it took to fill her lungs, she could see that she was in a room far older than hers. Dusty stone walls. A muted flow of water beyond a door made of rotting wood. She was about to scream in this lifeless face when she saw the man looming over her sit back down across from her and-

"... K... Kas?" He didn't answer her. He just stared, through the hair sprouting out of his crown and his face. He seemed to be thinking very deeply as he looked at her. Weighing up his options. "W-What in the fucking hells are-"

"When I was... I dunno, maybe seven arcs old, there was a fire near where my dad worked. Upholsterers place. You remember it?"

Sally's gaping mouth answered him. She was in a sewer - no, correction, had been kidnapped and dragged into a sewer - was tired and groggy and now this uppity fucking sod was asking him about shit that happened thirty years ago?! Decades of child-rearing, child-delivering, losing husbands and parents and friends and, yes, even a grandchild filled her skinny chest with outrage.

"Are... Are you bloody mad, boy?! Take me back home this bloody instant or-"

Something caught her eye. Blinded her, actually. A long, sharp, silver glare from Kasoria's lap. She looked down... and her words stopped. There was a gladius across his knees. Lit by the oil lamp burning in one corner. Throwing shadows across a face already masked by hair and cloak. All but his eyes. Steadily smoldering just like the oil. His expression didn't change, but he'd definitely caught her attention.

"Answer the question."

"I... yes. Y-Yes, I remember."

"Me and my mates watched the fire, watched Old Roger and his wife get out as much as they could. Then all the other folk down the street started getting buckets and skins and made a chain to douse it out. Took a while, but they did. I missed a lot of that. See, I saw something in the side entrance. I saw this cat, go into the flames through the door. I mean, I couldn't believe it. A cat, of all things. Selfish fuckers, right? But she did. She walked in, low as she could, and vanished. You know why?"

Sally guessed that she was going to here why anyway, but shook her head all the same.

"Because her babies were inside. She came back out, with her fur singed, and a crying little kitten in her mouth. Then you know what happened next? She went back inside. And every time she came back out, and then went back inside, I got closer. And I could see what the fire had done to her. Her fur was gone. Just black, scorched skin left. One of her eyes was burned shit, probably popped by the heat. She could barely walk when she came out with the last one. Just collapsed on her side, panting, and her babies were suckling at her. She died like that. Giving milk to her babies as she died."

Kasoria leaned forward, and Sally felt a slow, suspicious terror creep into the back of her mind. There was a calmness to him that was... eerie. Unnatural. Some great and terrible decision had been made, something grander than a mercenary's usual pragmatic choices in life. Something that had given him a strength that frightened her.

"I never understood why. Because it was just a cat, y'know? Just a dumb animal and those were flames. So why would it go into them over, and over, and over, and over, just for some kits it could shit out again next season? I didn't understand, because it died right after, and so did those kittens, I'd wager. How long would they last without her, right? Small and stupid and noisy. That don't last in Etzos."

One hand rose, pointing at her. Sally swallowed hard.

"Then you gave me that boy. I looked into his eyes and felt his hand holding my thumb... and I understood. I understood so much and so quickly that I wondered how I could have been so stupid not to. I knew that I would do anything to see him safe. I would kill my way across creation or sell my soul to all the daemons in hell. I would burn all Etzos down to the lowest sewer, if that's what it took. But this is the real world. Probably won't come to that."

He looked away from her, and Sally wondered for a crazed trill if she could get that sword off him. Snatch it and smack him with it and just run. He didn't seem to notice her glance down at his lap. He was away in his own head, or so it seemed to her. Talking to her and the wall and the shadows and himself

"But what it might come to, is someone finding out who his father is. Because I've got more blood on my hands than you can imagine, Sally, and that means I've got enemies by the cartload. And I sleep like a baby at night, because it's only my soul on the block. That ain't the case anymore. Someone finds out I have a son, then he becomes walking leverage to use against me. And if you think people wouldn't use a baby like that, you're wrong. So I need to be sure, Sally."

His eyes flicked back to hers. Molten in the shadows. Merciless and determined.

"I need to know who you've told about delivering my son seven trials ago."

Thanks for Jade for the template
Last edited by Kasoria on Tue Mar 13, 2018 4:33 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 1161

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Kasoria
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"Do! Not! FUCKING! LIE TO ME!"

He didn't even try to be subtle. Not with so much at stake. He didn't need her frightened, he needed her terrified into submission. He wasn't a stranger to the rage and lust of combat, the red glare that seemed to surround him as he fought and killed. Nor was intimidation a new exercise for him, enforcer and executioner as he often was. But he would struggle to remember, arcs afterwards, when he had been so...

Unhinged.

The woman shrunk and sobbed as he buffeted her with screams. They echoed long and loud through the tunnels, and always after there was the following sound of her muted crying. He circled her like a wolf and snarled his questions. Who had she told? When had she told them? Who had they told? Did she think he was an idiot? Did she think he wouldn't learn the truth?

"I-I-I-I don't, I haven't, I swear, please, please, Kas-"

"Don't call me that like you fucking know me," the words came out dripping with anger, spittle flying with each one, a bare inch from her ear. "You will tell me, woman. You will fucking tell me!"

On it went. Until he was almost watching himself doing this. Like he was seated in a corner of the room and watching this vulture sliding around a braying calf, ruining her, threatening her, cajoling her. He was so far into this that... that it was not him. All his life, only one, terrible time had he laid about himself with bloody intent purely for personal reasons. He saw now what that could make him into. How brutal and coarse, without the pretense or veneer of a mercenary's sensibilities.

Only for coin. That was the unwritten rule. You shed blood for nels, and nothing else. Or you were just another murderer.

Kasoria would never believe that again.

"One more time, then-" He grabbed her by the hair and pulled her face up, so she could see the fury stamped on his face. The glittering blade was under her chin and tears ran off and onto it. "You know what I'll do? I'll put you under again. Dose of that stuff on my rag, leave you down here tied up and gagged. And when you wake up, first thing you'll see will be your grand kids-"

He pointed at a bare spot on the floor as Sally moaned low and strangled. Let her mind conjure Jules and Bryce and Hannah on the ground.

"-trussed up like pigs. And you will watch as I gut them, one by one, until-"

"I swear I haven't told anyone!" She wailed now, all desperation and anguish in a place never touched by the suns. "I haven't! I-I-I-I went home, I went-went-went home and-and-and I didn't, please, I didn't..."

The rest trailed off into gibberish and prayers and tears that seemed to suck all the life from her spine. She bent over nearly double, crying into her hands and leaving Kasoria standing there. Looking down at the brave, fine work he'd done to an old woman who'd given him a son. Who'd sweated and strained along with his wife, eyes flinty and determined, as much as his had been wracked with doubt. He stood in the shadows cast by that lamp and he saw no lie in her words. He knew the truth. He was sure of it.

"Look at me, woman. LOOK AT ME!"

She did, eyes puffy and face wet. Kasoria's heart faltered. He'd lost count of all the men he'd killed, and women, too. They all blended together in a whirl of faces and screams and curses, ten years worth, working the will of rich, evil men who had use for his talents. But it was all business. It was never for the sake of murder alone. And it told him much that even then, even now, he drew a line. Between killing and murder. Between guilty and innocent. He looked at Sally and saw innocence, and fear, and a life that delivered life.

That did not break him. What he knew he had to do, though... that came close.

"... seven trials ago, you were home. Do you understand me? You were at home, all night, you did not leave, not for anything. That's what you tell anyone who asks."

He was nodding through her tears, jerky movement showering salty water onto her palms. Hope. That was the cruelest thing of all. It would haunt him. He kept moving as he talked, walking around and stopping behind her.

"And if you don't... if even a whisper, a rumor, a ghost of a story or a lie comes to my ears... that Kasoria has a son-"

"It won't, it-it-it just... Kas, please... I swear..."

There was no answer from him. She kept staring straight forward and there were no images of her life or family flashing before her eyes. Fear had hollowed them out and left nothing but the glassy, broken resignation of the condemned. He could imagine hope growing there, now. The beast sated, satisfied that her silence had been purchased.

There was no sound save for the sputtering lamp and the shuddering breaths from the woman. Kasoria swallowed, and squared his feet.

"You may stand," he said, words muffling the movement of his limbs. "And you may go. Speak nothing of this night."

Sally started to rise. A smile, careful and cracked, started to form on her face-

-the blade swung. It was a skinny neck on an old body. Kasoria barely felt the crunch of bone as it went through. He wanted it to be perfect. Over in a blink, so fast she'd not even know she was dead. He didn't want her to see the blow coming. To have that terror etched on her soul when it went to... wherever.

She slumped like a dropped puppet, abandoned and forgotten. Her head smacked onto the dry stones and did not roll. Kasoria peered over her carcass and saw that same look of sadness he'd been staring at for the better part of a break. Maybe she knew. Maybe the shadows told her. Maybe she realized, in some corner of her terrified mind, that a man like him knew only one way to be sure.

He stared at those eyes in silence. He had to be sure. Now the list was down to three. Two who would never harm the boy... and one who knew what his favored killer would do if he ever tried to. Vorund had already put in motions plans to move mother and child from the city, covering their tracks so well that it would appear a mage had just snapped his fingers and, poof, they were gone.

They would be far from here by the start of the next season. Far from the gutters and the grime. The killers and their masters. The father who had just lopped the head off a woman far into her seventies.

Kasoria closed his eyes, and nodded.

Now you're sure.

He sheathed his sword, picked up the oil lamp and smashed it atop her carcass. Fire, livid and liquid and greedy, spread across her clothes and her flesh like a ravenous daemon. Kasoria watched it turn the colors black, keeping his distance as he got to the door. Which would burn, too. Everything in the room would burn. But the fire would find no feasting on the stone, or the rock, or the cement. There would be smoke pouring down the tunnels, but no risk of the Blackkjack sending men down to combat the blaze.

No-one would find her. Not for quite a while. When they did, it would be charred bones and nothing else. That was why he brought the lamp: Sally didn't just have to die, she needed to disappear.

The stink of burning fat rose into the air and Kasoria closed the door behind him. The smell lingered as he walked, a wraith in the darkness, leaving the deed behind.

Thanks for Jade for the template
word count: 1388

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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You wanted me to give you some feedback? Here you go: wow. Honestly, this is probably one of the best solos I've had the pleasure of reading. Not only the meaningful plot, but just the way you write. There's something in the simplicity and flow of your words that gets so much more across than deep flowing paragraphs full of details. I couldn't take my eyes off this, and now I want more. You officially have a new stalker. Whatever it is you do, please keep doing it. I can't wait to read more of your work. The way you convey emotion and paint the scene was simply a pleasure to read. Good job. The only negative I could give you would be to proofread carefully for misplaced words or letters, but shit happens.

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EXP: 10 points

These points may not be used for magic.

Fame: None; this deed was not witnessed you sneaky bastard.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Patience to Endure a Stake-Out
Poison: Scarf Rot
Intimidation: Threatening Family to Break a Subject
Intimidation: Frothing and Raging to Terrify
Stealth: Hiding in Smelly Places
Stealth: Softening Ones Footsteps

Non-skill Knowledge:
NPC Sally: Midwife, Grandmother, Collateral Damage
NPC Vorund: Relocated Kasoria's Son and His Mother

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Items: None

Injuries/Overstepping: None
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