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There was a rhythm to be found, in this as well as all things. A balance. A beat. Once it was captured, once you could match the frantic energies of your body with that sustainable, repetitive staccato, it was just a matter of keeping pace. And spurring on the music.

No music in a brawl, though.

Kasoria ignored the cynical little voice and focused on the training dummy before him. His fists moved at quarter-speed, one pulling back as the other snapped out and smashed into the cloth- and rope-wrapped boards, showering the inanimate enemy with blows. Beyond the man and mannequin was nothing but an empty yard and a handful of slowly blinking, every judgmental felines on the wall surrounding it. Beyond the walls was a city bustling and heaving with life and commerce, and Kasoria paid no attention to it.

Half speed.

The punches grew faster. Doubled their pace. Up and down, his knees bending as his punches hammered lower: ribs, kidneys, crotch, then-

-jerking back up with a creak in his joints as a right hook crashed into the thing's jaw and as he drew back his left was jabbing out into its chin-

-and the dance began again, the rhythm refreshed and redoubled. His face shone and he bared his teeth, but his limbs did not slow. He knew that much of his drive was pride. Proving that he wasn't the aging shell that his mind whispered he was becoming. Every arc that passed, he seemed to grow a little slower, a little weaker, and those he faced were just a mite faster, and stronger, and younger. So did that mean he called it a day and started looking elsewhere?

No, he reminded himself as his hands became a blur, pair pf body blows shaking the mannequin and bruising wood and knuckles almost in the same trill, it means you push harder, and for longer, and stop whining about it.

Elbows, now. A new instrument. The little man's arms seemed to invert, hands curled and almost touching his breastbone as his elbows swung out instead of his fists. His hips twisted and pivoted with each blow, speed and power of each one making his lower body twinge but still he kept moving, sweat running down his brow and around his mouth, echoes of the strikes against the wood clattering off the stone walls-

Full speed. Dummy shaking and vibrating constantly with a rain of strikes.

-getting down to one knee with a drop and a thud of one leg against the stones, elbow smashing into the side of one "knee", then the other, imagining the target stumbling down to one knee from the strikes, then rocketing back up-

It was basically an uppercut, only with an elbow instead of a fist. Kasoria went from kneelign to standing in one furious burst of movement, elbow swinging up as he did, the crescendo to this particular number and-

-winced as he felt a pain that told him he was but mortal, and his blow had connected-

-dummy swinging and swaying as it was lifted half a foot of the ground, at least, then bobbed crazily as the little man stood there, watching it. Had it been a real man, that jaw would be shattered and he'd be unconscious. He knew from experience. But doing it once was not the trick; it was being able to do it whenever it was called for. He stood there, panting, sweating and his body craved-

No. You earn water, remember?

The man smiled softly, just for a moment. A wisp of mirth across a face cowled and hidden by hair and shadow. He remembered where he'd learned that. Remembered the voice and the face growling the words. They were still right, still true, even after more than a quarter of a century. So he paced the yard for a bit, glancing hungrily at the pitcher of water by the door, but not partaking... and then began the dance again.


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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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42nd Trial, Ymiden, Arc 691
The Hall of Rule and Reprimand
13th break
"Oh, get up and get back in line, y'big tart. It wasn't that bloody bad."

Easy for you to fucking say.

Yes, that would have been the perfect comeback. Even with the unnecessary profanity. But at that moment, Kasoria was more concerned with getting air back into his lungs, and remembering how his eyes worked, and his legs, and certain parts of his brain. The training yard, usually blazing with sun and sound, was a shaded and shady thing until he finally blinked one more time and-

Ow.

"Having fun yet?"

"Go fuck yourself."

The cadet kept that one low and confined to the air between him and the grinning sod in front of him. More out of self-preservation than lack of wits. The instructors didn't tolerate useless blabber from their students, and Kasoria had no interest in scrubbing out the toilets for another season because of his "salty mouth". Instead he muttered the words and sat back down next to Watkins, who was clearly enjoying himself with his bobbing shoulders and undamaged throat.

"Everyone get a good look?" Sergeant Tantos swept a gaze across the class, cold as the granite they sat on. As usual, a series of nodding head answered him... and just as usual, he sighed. "Useless, the bloody lot of you. Yusef! Get up here!"

The raw-boned youth with copper skin shot up like the floor had turned to lava, fear of enduring what Kasoria had overridden by the greater of fear of disobeying the Sergeant. Once he stood across from the man, the Sergeant grunted, nodded, and Yusef gave it as best as he could.

He feinted to the side. He aimed low, beneath his target's guard. His form, the way his muscles exploded through his shoulders and arm and carried the punch so deftly, it was all textbook. A season of daily training, and he applied all of it.

It didn't matter. This was the Sergeant, after all. The only one worse than him was Corporal Drix.

Kasoria marveled at how such a big man could move so smoothly. He slid to his side, boots scraping across the granite, Yusef's punch going wide, already trying to pull back his arm for another-

Tantos didn't give him the chance. His leg lashed out and delivered a sharp, precise kick into the side of the kid's knee. The boy yelped and his face screwed up in agony, already toppling on his feet but there was Tantos, sliding behind him, arms coming up to catch him-

-around the neck-

-and Kasoria's winced in sympathy as his throat started to ache all over again.

"Your strong arm," Tantos said, speaking clearly over Yusef's muted coughing, brawny right arm wrapped around his throat as he stood behind him. "Goes around his throat, and the hollow of your elbow... goes right here-"

He flexed his bicep and everyone in the yard could see it swell, expand, press against Yusef's throat. The boy's eyes bulged and yet Tantos wasn't finished. His right hand gripped his upper left bicep, the rest of the arm snaking up behind the cadet's head, slow enough for them to see it clearly.

"-but you don't need to flex like that. Once you get your left hand here, at the back of his neck, you push forward-" his bicep relaxed but Yusef was still red-faced and choking, Tantos pushing his head and throat into the hollow of his arm "-as you pull back with your shoulders-"

Kasoria followed it all, and liked what he saw. It was so simple, yet so effective. Tantos wasn't even squeezing anymore. He'd locked his arms and hands in position, and now all he had to do was flex his shoulders back, a movement barely perceptible... and Yusef was suddenly on his tiptoes, spewing and spitting and nearly puking and frantically hammering on Tantos' arm-

"A'right, a'right, calm the fuck down..."

Bloody hypocrite.

He let Yusef go and skulk away, the boy from the Eastern Lands now bearing a matching bruise with the scrote from the streets barely a quarter-break from where they sat. Kasoria flicked him a glance but paid him no more mind: his eyes were on his instructor, his commander, his patron. Watching as he went through the moves again, in mid-air, choking a ghost.

Strong arm around first. Grip your other arm, make it a solid circle. Then push, and pull with your shoulders...

"S-Sir?"

"Sergeant!" Tantos snapped back at him without hesitation. "I fucking well work for a living. What is it, Cadet?"

"How, um... how long do you do it before you... well..."

"... kill 'em?"

"Yeah."

Tantos kept his glare as rigid as ever, but when he swept it again around those youthful faces, Kasoria could see an earnest concern pricking behind them. He wasn't training killers, after all. This wasn't some fabled redoubt of assassins and warrior: they were peace-keepers, law-givers, upholders of the public good. Kasoria had rolled his eyes and sneered and chuckled through those lessons, but seeing them in such a man... it made him close to a believer. Sergeant Tantos wasn't some shiny-cheeked, perfumed, nose-in-the-air nob from the Citadel. He was a gutter rate like him, came from the same muck and grime and yet he believed. He believed in what he taught and every trial, without fail, he gave them a reason to, as well.

"That's a fair question... and it's the simple answer. When they go limp, when they aren't fighting back, that's when they're ready to wear their nice new metal bracelets and go to the cells. The Choker is for when you need to put someone out fast, and quiet, and sure." He tapped the side of his stubbly throat. "You've got a big, thick vein on either side. Pumping blood to your brain, so the healers tell me. The Choker cuts that flow off, and without that flow... everything else goes to sleep. Including them."

Another long, hard look. His voice slid into something new as he paced, looking each cadet in the eye as he went. Some urgency, hidden and camouflaged behind a wolfish growl... but Kasoria could see it. Heard it when he stopped in front of him, and met his gaze.

"I know Blackjacks who've gone too far. Took a punch or a worse, got their man in the Choker and just didn't stop under he was past limp. Past dreams. Past life. You know what happens to those men. What does a lawman become when he breaks the law?"

They replied as one, Kasoria alongside them: "A traitor to his Oath and his City!"

"Again!"

"A traitor to his Oath and his City!"

The Sergeant boomed his approval and added his voice to the voices echoing off the stones, then allowed a rare contortion of his lips that passed for a smile to race across them. He looked across them one more time, then nodded, as if satisfied with some personal test, and got out of their way.

"When they go limp, they're no threat. That's when you know, Cadet Kasoria. Now pair off and show us what you've learned."

The youths got to their feet and soon little partnerships formed, two boys facing each other across the granite... and of course, Little Kas from the South Side got Watkins looming over him, good-natured shit-eating smile all over his chops.

"Were you paying attention?"

"Time t'find out."
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Like Yusef, like all of them, Watkins hadn't been idle or deaf during their lessons. Those that were had been weeded out and tossed back into the city seasons ago. An education in the Hall was gained by attention, dedication, and taking your lumps and bruising long enough to learn from them. Watkins was a big, beefy boy when he'd arrived. Now he was streamlined, if not necessarily skinnier, and moved swift into his attack.

Kasoria hadn't been idle, either. And he was used to being on the defensive.

"Slippery wee-"

Whether or not he was going to snarl out a curse or bite it back, neither lad found out. Instead a pained grunt escaped his mouth, as that sly little sod Kassie backpedaled and then slid to his side, avoiding his punch-

-kicking out at his knee instead, slamming his toe into the shin just under it-

Then wincing and limping away. Sandals. Not shoes. He had to stop forgetting that. It was all the gap Watkins needs to come on again, swinging big punhes to back him off, and then coming in with jabs, shoulders bunched up, power and strength hammering into Kasoria's blocking arms, shaking him, driving him back-

That ain't gonna work.

Pacing and observing, Tantos opened his mouth to bark what Kasoria already knew: he couldn't stay on the defensive forever. Someone as big and fast and trained as Watkins, coming on and on... eventually he'd hit a wall, and the beefy sod would obliterate him. So he watched as Kasoria swallowed his fear, his uncertainty, the animal, primal fear of any kind of pain, and burst forward-

-taking advantage of the bigger boy's size, knees bent as he came in low-

-hammering a short, fierce punch into his gut, force and power increased by his bursting lunge-

-Watkins grunted again and was grasping for the smaller man, already twisting around to grab-

-empty air, as Cadet Kasoria kept circling him, so close Watkins could feel his clothes whipping across his back and his breath on his neck as he-

"Little shit..."

Tantos' eyebrows snapped to his hairline as he saw Kasoria leap onto Watkins' back, anchoring himself with his right arm around his throat-

Strong arm first.

-then grabbing his left bicep with his right as Watkins' started to thrash like a maddened bull, stomping and swinging and swiping but never getting close enough. Kasoria was tossed around like a cat for a trill, until he snapped his legs tight around the other cadet's waist, holding himself in place. Tantos wondered just one thing: when the boy was going to realize the best and fastest way to get that little fucking barnacle off his back. For his part, Kasoria hung gamely on and started pushing that boulder-like head forward from the back, then flexed his shoulders and-

Solid circle.

Fates and Fuckery, he was a strong one. He roared and Kasoria felt his right arm nearly pushed, torn away from the man's throat. Watkins reared back but his steps were coming less frequently now. Already the smaller man was leaning back with his shoulders, pushing Watkins' head from the back into his bent arm and slowly, slowly, he was starting to-

Push and pull.

"Here it comes..."

Sergeant Tantos winced as the inevitable happened. Watkins realized the only advantage he had - the only option he had left, before the darkness swallowed him whole and he collapsed - was to use his sheer size to his advantage. He paused for a moment, then threw himself backwards-

-with Kasoria acting as a big, skinny, human cushion-

"Fu-"

The little man never finished, but The Sarge would have let him get away with that one. Hardly blame the boy, could he? He smashed into the granite like the shell of a suicidal turtle, nearly shattering across it as two hundred plus pounds of desperate, dizzy cadet played his last card. His eyes bulged and his ribs rattled, his spine ached and his back roared as loud as he did and his grip... it budged... but did not break.

"Fuck... Sh... Shit!"

Watkins was wriggling away from him like some great, bloated, terrified snake. Swinging his elbows back, hammering them into Kasoria's flanks... and Tantos stepped forward, seeing a look of pained, grim, bloodless determination etched on the smaller boy's face. But that spirit would only last as long as the body it was inhabiting, and eventually the blows took a toll. His grip started to fade, slackening as Watkins' face went redder, than paler, and finally he reached up and tore Kasoria's hands away with a snarl.

Spun around, straddling the kid, joviality so common upon his face shattered and replaced by a stark moment of murder-

"Enough!"

Stark and thick though his mood was, Cadet Watkins knew that tone well enough to obey without question. His tankard-sized fist paused just as it was about to hammer down on Kasoria, forearms up and covering his face and neck. The others in the class paused and watched the Sergeant stroll over, slow and measured, making sure every inch of his considerable intimidation was exemplified in every step. He didn't want Watkins forgetting who he was, after all.

"Fight's over, Cadet."

"But you said-"

"And now I'm saying, fight's over." He didn't need to add anything else. The tone sold it. Watkins nodded, resentment and revenge flashing in his eyes as he clambered off Kasoria. "Help up your partner."

It took a couple of efforts. Kasoria was bent over and groaning like an old man, clutching his ribs and walking with... well, more like hobbling with one arm on Watkins' shoulder. Tantos looked him up and down and grunted, the closest he came to giving out praise.

"Cadet Watkins? Fine work. You improvised, you overcame, you used your body as a weapon to break the choke. Cadet Kasoria? No shame in that one, boy. Man twice your size, and you almost had him. Next time, you'll know to brace for that move. And you better." He stepped closer, looming as large and certain as the future itself. "Because out there, beyond the Hall, when you're in uniform and someone his size comes at you with murder in mind, "almost" won't fucking cut it. Understood?"

"Yes, Sergeant!"

"Y... Yes, Sergeant!"

"Good. Clean up, both of you. Next class starts at the bell."

They lumbered and hobbled as their injuries permitted, quitting the warm, hard granite and leaving the brawling class behind to suffer against each other.

"Could... Coulda' had ya."

"Keep tellin' yerself that, Kassie..."

Continued from here
word count: 1120

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Name: Kasoria

Knowledge:
Discipline: Water is a Reward, for Completing Training
Endurance: Keeping Your Grip, Even When Hurt
Tactics: Can't Play Defense Forever; Fights are Won by Offense
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Uppercut Elbow Strike
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Rear Naked Choke Hold ("The Choker")
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Breaking The Choker by Hurling Yourself (and Your Enemy) Backwards onto the Ground

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Watkins and Yusef: Black Guard Cadets, Circa 691
Tantos and Drix: Feared, Respected, Haters of Foul Language (From Others)
Etzos Blackguard: Enforcers of Law, Not Purveyors of Death
Etzos Blackguard: No Mercy for Members Who Break City Laws

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Magic XP: N/A

Points: 10
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