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IV. The Logical Conclusion

8th Trial, Ymiden, Arc 718
South Ezos, Outer Perimeter
21st break
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"You hear that?"

Deshak's nightmare began and ended with words in his basement. But all the space in between was blood and steel and bestial screams.

He'd seen much of Etzos in the twenty years he'd lived there. Built a life, an eatery, cooking his father's food with his mother's business sense. He'd prospered. Raised a family. But he'd seen the ugly side. Seen men beaten and extorted and mutilated by upright wolves that laughed at their wailing. He'd seen still, pale slabs of flesh in alleys, and hurried by with eyes downcast, not wanting to even report them.

He thought he'd seen the worst Etzos had to offer. He indulged himself a mental swagger that he knew some of the racketeers by name, like Stacks, for gangsters always congregated where good wine and food were to be had. He dabbled in... leasing, or so he called it. Just the basement. Once, maybe twice an arc, when he truly needed quick cash, and well... that arc, Stacks had it. The bald little man was mad as a starving falcon, he could see, but he needed him, and he knew him.

Deshak thought he'd seen the worst.

"Huh?"

"Did you... for fuck's sake, what the fuck do I fucking pay you for?!"

The cook looked up from the row of shelves before him as something heavy smacked onto the table. Stacks was glowering at one end of it, face red and uglier than usual. Like some mummer's farce, three men were at the other end. One huge and hulking, the other two flanking him, smaller and younger and... well... Deshak knew what image came to mind at the sight of them, and kept it to himself.

Rice... peppers... dried tomatoes, he went through the mental checklist that sent him down there in the first place. Jars and bags were piled into his arms and he did his best to ignore the quartet. Beets... damn, out of-

"Shaun, get the fuck up there and see what that was."

"Stacks, I didn't-"

"Don't call him fuck-"

There was a rush, a crunch, a choked scream, and the restaurateur flinched as if it was he that was struck. Behind him, the runner whimpered into his hand, blood from his broken nose dripping onto his palm. Above him, eyes wide and rabid, stood Stacks. Fingering both weapons on his belt like he was stroking his fucking cock. Bazza rolled his eyes, safely to one side. Little fucker was bright, but he had that bloody temper.

"Don't. Call me. Stacks!"

"S-Sorry, I-"

"Get up there, ya cunt! Tell Larry and your cunt brother to keep it down!" He kept talking even as Ron started moving to the stairs, leading up from the candle-blanketed air of the basement. Stacks sat back down and returned to counting his money. A plethora of herbs, powders, and liquids was spread across it. By dawn, it would all be gone. A queer magic, in a way: all things organic and varied disappeared, leaving only a pile of gold. "And don't take forev-"

SHKKKK

Deshak whirled around, knowing that sound of old. Not the thick, meaty sound of knuckles connecting with flesh, but flesh being parted by something keen and fast. A little man with blood already spattered on him had exploded from the doorway the moment Ron opened it... leading with a fist that seemed made of brown flesh and shining metal. Ron barely had time to choke out a curse before the first diagonal blow laid open his throat at the side, ripping it open-

-then the backhand did much the same for his jugular, his voice-box, his windpipe, so he was spewing bloody bubbles even as his arteries burst into the smoky air-

-and Kasoria was already lashing out with his leg, a ruthless kick to the chest that sent the mortally-severed flying back into the wall. He crashed into another set of shelves, crunching and pulling down each level as he slid down to the floor. Deshak's mouth gaped as he stood there, mind watching and seeing and unwilling to believe. Barely seventeen arcs, now bleeding out in his basement. Items expensive and mundane rained down around Ron as he finally settled on his back, struggles and coughing fading, like a candle in a rising storm... until he was still.

"Fuck me!"

The little man's head snapped around to the men watching him, audience and victims both. In the space it took to blink, he divided them fairly equally. The man laden with foodstuffs? With wet eyes and piss dripping down his leg? The boy not much older than the carcass he'd just created, doing much the same? He slid them over to a separate group.

But the big, shaggy cunt... and the wee bald fucker who showed not a dram of fear and gallons of sheer, dripping hatred... they were his business down there.

"You fucking-"

Little bastard, yes, very fucking original.

Bazza came lurching his way like a walking rock slide, heaving a cleaver-looking thing out of his scabbard as he came. By the time he'd raised it over his head, the little bastard had snapped his left arm towards him. The empty one, or so they'd assumed. But the abundance of candles in the basement was confined to the tables and chairs in the center, not the bottom of the stairs... and even then, they didn't know the man who was among them.

Who'd filled his off hand with a pair of straight, short, smelly throwing knives as he'd made his way down them. Because he was always outnumbered, and they were always bigger, and when that was the case... well, you didn't get points for fucking nobility.

"Baz-!"

Stacks' warning came too late as Kasoria flicked out his hand, released his grip and-

CLANG

Fuck!

-one blade spun wide and away, as one would expect from a rank amateur with those sodding things. But he'd waited for the bulk of Bazza to begin his charge, and of course, he'd chosen the biggest bastard in the room as his target. He knew it to be a good universal rule that when you weren't that great a marksman, it was best to stick to a large target.

THUNK

The big man grunted as a knife he could have picked his fucking teeth with sunk two inches deep into his torso... and didn't seem to do much more than annoy him. Behind the giant, Stacks grinned. Yeah, took more than that to stop Bazza. But even as the man ripped the blade away and tossed it, he could smell... something. A familiar scent. Cloying and sticky and it made him blink a few times as Bazza lurched-

-and staggered-

-and shook his head-

-as Kasoria allowed himself a feral grin.

"You... shit, Baz, he dosed the fucking-"

The warning came too late. Baz's irresistible charge had stymied, big man shaking his boulder of a head as sudden, inexplicable weariness rippled through his muscles. It was like the hard work of a trial, no, two trials on the docks was hitting him all at once. The hunger, the exhaustion, the heavy eyelids and the weakness in his muscles. His cleaver suddenly felt like a warhammer in his grip, pulling his hand down-

-as Kasoria charged, slashing at him with that curved blade-

-but Bazza was a big lad, and the poison was slow to work. He swayed back, avoiding the blow, grunting and stabbing out at the little man with his cleaver.

At full strength, without those rising waves of blackness crashing against his eyes, he might have skewered him. Might have seen what was coming next. But the stink of Scarf Rot was thick and obvious in the air now; all but Deshak knew what that meant, and Kasoria slid to his side, avoiding probably impalement-

-backhanding with his karambit as he went, laying open Bazza's meaty bicep as he did, drawing a bellow like an enraged oxen and the machete trembled-

SHKKK

-then fell as his arm lashed out again, ripping a ragged tear from his wrist to his elbow. Bazza's huge arm seemed to split open like rotten fruit and he swung a fist like a bag of bolts at the little man's head-

-who ducked under it nimbly, using his size against the behemoth, fist sailing over his head, karambit going clear the opposite direction-

-in front of Bazza, across his stomach-

Deshak's nostrils filled with the stuff of retching as Big Bazza was gutted like a hog. A foot-long gash an inch deep was hacked into him, yellow fat and red muscle exposed to the squalid candlelight as he fell down to one knee. The fug of Scarf Rot warred with the sudden, mortal terror that came with seeing his own guts draped across his legs like a devil's apron, hanging and swaying there like sausage links. He tried to push them back in, like a child, prayers tumbling from his lips and Kasoria-

-pivoted hard to his side, bringing up a knee as he did-

-slamming it high and hard into the side of Bazza's skull. Something cracked when he did, that misshapen thing snapping to the side from the impact. Not dead, if Kasoria had to guess, but enough to cross his eyes and felling him like a tree. He crashed onto the floorboards and Deshak could see coils and ropes and entrails and food, actual fucking food, pulsing in those tubes that steamed and twitched and-

"You're him, ain't ya?"

And what truly frightened him in that moment, was the fact that Stacks did not sound afraid. Angry, yes, but more than that... aroused. It was the only word that came to the Ne'haer-born immigrant, and looking up at his erstwhile partner... his mind was jumbled anew by the look of sick pleasure on the man's face.

"Vorund's boy. The Raggedy Man."

Kasoria blinked and stepped over Bazza. Three men left. One a huddled mess by the shelves. Another a boy, as scared as the man but raised hard on the cobbles, by the look of it. Which meant he would at least hide it better. And the third, the last, the only one that mattered... Stacks.

He flicked his karambit to one side, sending an arc of red spraying from it. Stacks drew his weapons and chuckled, a wet and swollen sound in the low basement, now turned slaughterhouse. He licked his lips, flexed his shoulders, and was met by stony silence from the vagrant opposite him. At his side, Denis was trembling like a virgin on her first night at the knocking shop, and Stacks sneered.

"Draw that blade, boy. Time t'earn yer pay..."
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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IV. The Logical Conclusion

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"Fuckin' geddim-!"

Stacks may have relished the chance to test his steel against Vorund's pet executioner, but that didn't mean he was going to be stupid about it. Kaoria had taken two steps his way before the little man shoulder-pushed Denis towards him. The hapless runner had only just got the dagger into his hand before his boss sent him stumbling towards the little monster who'd invaded their basement-

-slashing out instinctively with his knife, teeth clenched, face pinched and pale, stinking far more of fear than reckless courage-

Kasoria's left arm snapped up as he lunged in under the boy's strike, forearm stopping his slashing dagger (you're meant to stab with those things, not slash, you idiot), following it up a trill later with a right cross-

-that slashed his cheek open at the same time, since he was holding the karambit in that hand, too. Denis reeled back screaming, clutching his face, unable to see any of the damage but all the blood, all the pain, overriding any desire he had to fight or prove himself and Stacks took proper fucking advantage-

-coming fast and low at Kasoria from the blind spot behind his human shield, lunging at his stomach with his short sword-

-Kasoria twisting away, dodging-

Only for Stacks to pull the sword back and rake the blade along his stomach as he did. But instead of a scream or a strip of fresh blood, all the pusher felt was the judder of metal on metal, and the sight of Kasoria's stinking shirt get laid open... to reveal the chain-mail vest underneath it.

"Sneaky-"

Kasoria wasn't giving him time to do the whole Witty Fucking Banter Thing. He roared like an animal and swung at him with the karambit-

-drawing up his dirk into a block, only there was nothing to block-

-because it was a feint, and he drew back the blade and the hand holding it and kicked low instead from his left-

Drawing a grunt and another curse from the little man as it hammered into the side of his knee. But Stacks was as much a veteran of the streets as Kaoria; he'd just put in less arcs. He let the pain feed his anger, his animal desire to survive and triumph, and even as he staggered back a step swung a roundhouse with his dirk-

-making Kasoria jerk backward to avoid it-

-following up with another stab from the sword, making him go back again-

-then the dirk, and back, and again, and Kasoria knew this couldn't go on forever. Stacks was coming at him like a tornado made of blades. One in each hand, one striking when the other was winding up to do the same. No openings, no easy way to get close. So he had to make an opening. And as he was back into the table, steadying himself with his left hand, he reached back and grabbed a handful of-

Fuck it, have to do.

Stacks grinned, sensing blood. No where to back to now, Raggedy Man. He'd heard the stories, the rumors, the whispers that had grown to legends over the arcs. A shadowy, shambling figure that looked like any other piece of street trash... but with the command of his master, he became death itself, incarnated and unleashed on the Etzos streets. He'd had friends... well, associates who'd suffered and died at his hand. Hell, just look at Baz. Ten years they'd been working together, and now he had to find new muscle.

What a fucking bother. But on the plus side? He got to be the man that killed the Raggedy Man. His sword came back and-

-Kasoria's arm swung around from behind, hand opening up and-

-a cloud exploded from his palm and Stacks gasped out of instinct-

Which was very much a mistake, given what he was about to inhale. Shards of glass stuck in his face, powders and herbs lodged in his mouth, all of the above plastered his eyes as Kasoria hurled a handful of his wares at him. He backed up and slashed blindly, buying space and time, shaking his head until he could-

No. You're not going to get that.

Kasoria knew his window wouldn't last, but he didn't need long. In the trill it took for him to close on the madly slashing figure, trained and seasoned limbs were already moving in for the kill. Stack's sputtered and coughed and swung his sword backhanded-

-only for Kasoria's on right arm to jerk up and stop it, forearm-to-forearm, then yank down hard-

"Fucker!"

-karambit slashing Stacks' arm down to the bone, through tendons and muscle and the meaty practicalities of maintaining his grip on his sword. It fell down from his hand and Stacks tried to counter, stabbing with his dirk, twisting his body around at the same time, giving the blow more speed and power and-

That didn't mean much when your enemy already saw it coming. Kasoria even had time to blink before he slid forwards and to the side, around the blade aiming to stab him through the guts. As he pivoted and slid, feet light as oil across water, he slashed low and from the side-

-karambit scraping and trembling in his grip, as it cut through bone and ligaments, slicing through all the vital sinews around Stacks' left kneecap.

The dealer howled like an animal, left leg now joining his right arm as a useless, nerveless limb. He collapsed to one knee, dirk in his left hand almost forgotten. Until his vision finally cleared and he saw Kasoria standing before him. Without wounds. Without pain. Without anything save cold, implacable intent.

"F-Fuck you!"

Time to end it.

Kasoria blinked, and much happened in that trill. He saw Stacks in front of him, kneeling, right leg bowed out as his left was broken... the dirk in his left hand, rocketing towards his chest... he saw things pulsing and waiting for his attentions, just like he'd read of and practiced for. He saw all of that, and in the time it took for those two words to echo and dissipate, he moved.

Speed. That's what Deshak and Denis remembered. Married to precision. The little killer pivoted hard to his right, left arm coming up as he went-

-open palm smacking into Stack's forearm, stopping the blow in the middle of the air, long enough for-

-his right fist to shoot up in an uppercut, only it missed... but the curved blade he was holding didn't, karambit edge ripping through flesh and muscle and Stacks was defenseless. For one brief trill, Deshak saw the despair in his partner's eyes. Denis blinked through the ruin that Kasoria had made of half his face, and saw fear in the eyes of the man he thought too much of a nutter to be afraid of anything.

But there was no doubting that. Not when they heard the tone of his last words.

"Pluh-Please, don't-"

Kasoria wasn't listening. This could only end one way. It wasn't even murder, or killing. It was math and physics and natural law. The logical conclusion of a path borne from defiance, betrayal, and misplaced ambition. His face was flushed and sweaty, bloody and turbulent, but his eyes... they were calm.

Things were as they had to be.

The karambit was already moving again, before the dirk had even fallen to the ground. And as his terrified and scarred audience watched-

One.

Carotid.

Two.

Jugular.

Three.

Stomach.

Four.

Femoral


His arm moved, back and forth, up and down. The blade sang and drank of cloth and skin and blood. Deshak and Denis shrunk into themselves as they blinked once, maybe twice, and with speed that birthed fresh terror, four blows were delivered to Stacks. The last four. By the time Kasoria stepped back, crouched low from the final punch-slash to Stacks' inner thigh, the man looked like a ravaged dog toy.

Blood pumped from a neck nearly cut through. White bone winking through whatever tiny gaps there were in the flow of crimson.

For the second time, Deshak was treated to the sight of a man's innards falling out of his stomach and onto his floor.

Then Stacks fell forwards, eyes starting to dim and-

-a strong, merciless hand snapped out, and grabbed him by the back of the shirt. Not allowing him to fall. Not allowing him to die in peace, quiet yet. He'd lost that right the moment he'd gone against his betters... and Kasoria had yet to impart the words of his master.

"Now," he said, breathing a little hard but nothing more. "As fer you two..."

He started to drag the dying man closer, and they could not get away.
Last edited by Kasoria on Thu Jun 14, 2018 1:05 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 1498

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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IV. The Logical Conclusion

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"Pay attention."

Like they could do anything else.

Like the sight of anything else would be crowding their minds for trails, for seasons to come. Because that was what was wheezing wetly in front of them at the moment: not a someone, not a he, just an it. A ravaged and torn package of meat, made up of broken bones and rent flesh, most of his blood already leaked out and soaked into the floor. Looking at them with pleading in his eyes; lips trying to move and beg them for help. As if any help they could offer would save him now.

Just die, Deshak remembered himself thinking, shameful though it was. Just fucking die already...

"This is what happens when you defy Bangun Vorund."

Kasoria didn't bother looking at Stacks anymore. He wasn't a man to him, either. He was a prop. A means to convey his message. No, his eyes were focused on the two men cowering by the shelves. One young and with his cheek laid open like a side of beef; the other older and wrinkled, paler than his tanned heritage should allow, stinking of piss.

Actually, that was both of them. Which was quite encouraging.

"No-one walks away from him." He shoved the dying man closer to them, one hand on each shoulder, karambit wiped off and returned to its sheath. "No-one goes behind his back. Look at him!"

Denis looking away for a moment was enough to draw his snarl, and suddenly he had their undivided attention yet again. So he made the most of it. He reached down and collected the dirk that Stacks had dropped. As the man started to finally close his eyes, the mere handful of bits he had left after having his arteries opened up finally coming to a close... Kasoria pressed it under his chin.

"You're going to spread the word. That's the only reason you're alive-"

The sound was what they'd remember. Hideous and wet and sucking as he just started to... push. And the flesh yielded. Stacks stiffening for a trill, eyes popping open, fresh pain buffeting him as the dirk started to vanish inside.

"-the only reason you will wake tomorrow-"

He had to tighten his grip. Stacks was becoming nothing but dead weight. But the path of the dirk was softer, easier, and he felt blood trickle down and soak his hand. Saw the horror multiply like plague in the eyes of the restaurant-owner and the runner, both of them trembling, lips on the older man moving in silent prayer.

Kasoria grinned. No-one to hear him in this city. Not Etzos.

"-is because Bangun Vorund wills it-"

SHUUUCK

One more thrust, one more push, and he buried the dirk up to the hilt in Stacks' throat skull. Then he let go, and the sack of wasted flesh fell forward... and onto the only two people he was leaving alive that night. They scrambled away from the carcass, pushing and cursing and tears soaked their cheeks, shameful and terrified. Kasoria looked across them both and remembered something.

"Don't forget the message."

He went over to Bazza, and reclaimed the knife that had poisoned him.

"And don't forget to spread it."

Then found where the other had landed, spying it through the anarchy of spilled, broken crockery and ingredients and blood spatters. He sheathed them both with the others strapped to his thighs, and walked to the bottom of the stairs. Sparing not a glance for Ronnie, now pale as flour and about as alive. Instead he turned back to them. Let the two frightened mouse see the Raggedy Man smile at them. So wide they'd see fangs in his mouth, and blood flecking his beard.

"Or you'll see me again."

Nothing more needed to be said. The name of his master had been given, the reason for his visit made clear... and the consequences were scattered all around them. The two men in the basement squatted in the offal for what seemed like a long time. Lit only by fading candles, listening to soft, measured footsteps getting quieter above them... then vanish entirely.

"... who... who was that?"

One had no answer for the other, save to look around at the wreckage. And that answer was enough.
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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IV. The Logical Conclusion

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Kasoria of Etzos, The Raggedy Man
Knowledges
Blades (Karambit): Slicing Forearms to Break an Opponent's Hold on Their Weapon
Blades (Throwing Knives): Bigger Target, Smaller Chance of Missing
Blades (Throwing Knives): Smeared With Scarf Rot
Discipline: No Blade Left Behind (They Aren't Cheap)
Intimidation: Using a Dying Man as Punctuation
Unarmed Combat: Roundhouse Knee Strike

NPC Deshak: Ne'haer Eatery Owner and Occasional Underworld Facilitator
NPC Denis: Small-Time Crook, Freshly-Scarred

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Renown: 20 - tales of The Raggedy Man's deeds spread like a wildfire after that night; though many already knew his name, now he's more than just a story, and people are jumping at their own shadows.

Points 10
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This definitely was the logical conclusion.

Dear lord. Reading your writing is like watching a fight scene, only it's in my head and the imagery is like ten times more than anything you get on screen. Visceral but you kept a... I'm going to say "poetry" but it's not exactly was it was, but a poetry about your writing so that it flowed as smoothles as the blood from their necks. Excellent, excellent use of formatting as well as what I have been waiting for for this whole time: the one, two, three, four. Man. I felt beyond satisfied reading that part. Also? I've read a lot of "PC is threatening" threads before. Sometimes they're alright, sometimes they're kind of goofy, but Kasoria was the embodiment of intimidation. I was so impressed and felt a little sick reading the last bits and dang. Like clearly I'm biased at this point, but you're an amazing writer. Please never stop writing.
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