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Unto A Savage Race (Graded)

46th Trial, Vhalar, 718a
Outskirts of Etzos, Southwood River
23rd break

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He was no poisoner, and this time, he didn't have to be. Just like he didn't have to be an expert with sharpened steel to know that poison or not, Ithecal or not, shoving six inches of the stuff straight into his enemy's eye was... probably going to do the job. The fact it was coated with a toxin that shut down its victims lungs within a couple of bits was just a bonus.

Don't think he'll have the time for that.

Traitor Claw was still gripped tight in his left hand, and so Kasoria experienced the slow death of Jorg with the eerie, disturbing but not unsettling sensation of numbness. In the sense of pain, anyway, and truly he was disturbed from his usual state of being (which was to say, feeling like an ordinary man), but he was not letting the sensation force him to panic. He still had his audience, after all... and besides, judging from the numbness and the wetness and the exhaustion starting to seep into his muscle, it was probably better off to remain senseless for the moment.

"Fate's save us..."

The assassin looked around as Jorg coughed wet into his shoulder. He wasn't chomping down anymore; wasn't doing much of anything, nor ever would do again. He squatted on his knees like a man set to prayer, before an altar painted with the thick red blood pouring from his crotch. A massive scaly hand fell from Kasoria's own arm, releasing it-

-and a breath was sucked into dying lungs, shaking like a man in a blizzard, trying to get one more-

SHUNK

No, I don't think so.

An uppercut smashed into the bottom of Jorg's snout, and underneath it, Traitor Claw punched through the floor of his mouth and now his own blood filled it. Jorg tried to swallow but shuddered again, yellow orbs with black slits in the centers rolling back as agony impossible yet undeniable overwhelmed him. The pain he'd inflicted with his jaws, trying to bite through bone and muscle and the metal covering it, was now all Jorg's to experience... and he started to fall backwards-

-Kasoria twisting his fist as the Ithecal started to fall, karambit tearing a hissing hole into him as he withdrew it. He had to grunt to get the throwing knife out of his eye, though. Then he watched as Jorg grunted and fell back, twitching as the Ghost Mushroom worked its power. The Ithecal stared at the starry sky and the moons and found no watcher in that gallery so much as wincing in sympathy. All he saw was dead, indifferent light. Distant gods from forgotten people, just sitting and watching as the human straddled him, then bent down...

... and reclaimed the gladius that had been so rudely rammed into him. The human flipped it up and over, reversing his grip with a flourish so it looked like an over-sized dagger in his hand. He didn't speak. He didn't mock him, or curse him, or laugh. But he did wait, until Jorg was looking. Until the reptile blinked and found himself looking back at his reflection... and he wasn't just talking about his own tiny face trapped in each eye.

"Guh..." He tried to talk, one last time. But his mouth was filling with blood sooner than he could drink it. "Guh... fi-"

THUNK

Kasoria brought the gladius crashing down and the blade did exactly what it was designed for. Thrusting, stabbing, piercing, impaling... whatever word you want to use. It punched through the bone between Jorg's eyes, not slowing but parting glistening white bones as it went. That was the hardest resistance. After that first, brutal invasion of the body, the rest was just pushing, and pushing, and pushing.

Kaoria didn't stop until he felt the tip of the blade grind into the inside of the back of Jorg's skull. The lizardman's other arm slapped down into the wet mud, and there was silence. No more wheezing or grunting. No more Common regurgitated with equal parts resentment and necessity, bitten off into chunks and then coughed up at everyone he spoke to. There was no grace or finery of movement. No clashing warriors or eager, joyous journeymen, bent on testing skill against skill.

Almost two dozen men surrounded the rough arena that claws and feet had made for themselves. Now they were all silent, not even daring to whisper. The assassin was the loudest noise in that yard for the moment. Panting from exertion, not pain. Looking down at the devastation he'd wrought, and feeling tickling eels of ink-black satisfaction when he did.

He turned to Fozzie without hurrying. Enjoying the silence. Collecting all those stunned, hair, tattooed faces as he did.Their fear of him was almost intoxicating. He didn't stop turning until he had Fozzie Tatum in his sights. The he reached down, yanked the gladius free and-

There was a series of sharp, high sounds. The rest of his audience flinched a couple of times at the sudden noise, but he ignored them. It was hard enough using the curve of the karambit to hold Jorg's chief up and back, so he could get to the neck under it. Squat but broad, sinuous yet powerful, it took many blows. Yet even when he was through the clicking line of vertebrae, and finishing the rest of the amputation would become easy.

Sharp and high was replaced by rotting, tearing, dripping and nauseated. Kasoria swore every man in the yard took a step back, and some outright vanished into the shadows-

-when he held up that massive, triangular head. All the while locking eyes with Fozzie.

"A head. That's what you wanted."

There was a muffled grunt, camouflaged well by the sound of a severed head whirling through the air... and landing at Fozzie's feet.

"There's your head." Kasoria spread his arms like a man about to receive a benediction. Daring any of the assembled to rip him apart, jusrt like Dutch's boys would do, if ever their master was killed at such close range. Bu they did not. Their ranks thinned. Pale floating faces vanished deeper into the shadows, and did not return. Most looked down first-

"Anyone else?"

-at the Ithecal. The monster. The corpse. Then they looked at Fozzie... then at Kasoria... and that's when they left. All but his two cousins, who looked almost as terrified into muteness as his uncle. They weren't running, though. We're skulking away like the liars they were, leaving the old man and his kin to their fates. The larger, broader one was white as a sheet but still unlimbered his cleaver. Stepped in front of his fat cousin and bookworm little brother. This Raggedy Man was wounded, though. Wounded and sluggish and easy prey.

Kasoria turned to face him. He wasn't finding much weakness in those eyes... so Edmond shrieked and threw himself into the fray regardless.
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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He was a savage among savages, standing over the corpse of a monster and bathed in monstrous blood.

He was tired, not in pain. There was a very real difference. Traitor Claw was not an infallible or indiscriminate device: it nullified the pain of blows inflicted, not everything else that could hurt a man. His heart was pumping acid through his arteries and his muscles were lead weights strapped to bones cracking and creaking and heavy as ivory. His breath cut with every heave of his chest. His hair was plastered to his face with as much sweat as blood and he was leaving his own pool of crimson when he stood still for more than half a bit.

Etzos was gone. At least in his mind. There was no explosion of lights, no towering inferno of eternal civilization beyond the ring of braziers. Even the buildings around the yard seemed to vanish now. They'd crumbled away and there were only furtive figures flitting into the light and shadows, spread across churned mud with naught but a still wagon to prove there was anything of Man beyond the ground they claimed.

He was a savage among savages, and thus he would dole out his laws in a savage fashion.

The first was hurled through the night, stars and moons catching the shimmer of blood on dead scales. It did not roll when it landed; just lolled to one side, as if to stare at Fozzie. Thus was the law laid down, thrown down, made clear to all in bellowing the consequence of defiance. But these were savages, and one edict would not suffice. Blood and fire and steel would and need to be further employed; one death was not sufficient, even one so vast and alien as the wreckage at his feet.

The young prince yelled out his war cry and charged from his brother and uncle. Sought vengeance and restoration, among the eyes of his dwindling pack.

Kasoria watched the younger man hurry towards him. Such was his gift that many things happened at once, at least within him. A chattering crowd rose from the mansion of his mind. Factors and considerations clamored and were whittled down into the undeniable and relevant; correlations and discussions were found and made in the space of two trills, how long it took the furious Reaver-Cleaver founder to reach the blood-drenched little man.

The Raggedy Man was not superhuman. What he did was not magical. It was, in fact, what most any other man could do, with time and training.

The difference was, he just did it all much, much faster. And held no remorse after for when the grisly deed was done.

Edmond swung with the cleaver, because it was a cleaver: that's what it did. It hacked and slashed and, well, cleaved, but that didn't make it too precise. He lashed out with a blow that would have split Kasoria from shoulder to lung, but the little man stepped back and to the side, avoiding the first blow-

-then stepped back again, avoiding the obvious, predictable backhanded second attack-

CLANG

-gladius in his right hand snapping up to meet the cleaver when it hacked towards him again a third time, metal screeching and squealing and at almost the same time-

-Traitor Claw slashed first forward then back, the first slicing open Edmond's side, under the ribcage, ripping into the liver-

-the second, a backhand, opening up the meat of his leg, severing tendons and maiming muscle, and as the big man shrieked and dropped an uppercut-

-slammed into his cleaver-wielding arm at the elbow, karambit blade punching into the conglomeration or bone and muscle and ligaments and he ripped it out-

Killing the grip. Removing the cleaver from the man's hand. There were no thoughts in Kasoria's head now. No little whispers urging him or warning him. This was... a retelling, not an original tale. Repeated across hundreds of faces, thousands of fights. His muscles made his limbs a blur, face almost impassive above their furious movement. Long after, he wondered if it was not the strength-without-skill that had so numbed him when it came to this killing, so much as it was the thing he had fought before.

An Ithecal. A towering, musclebound creature, with intelligence and will to fight him to near-ruin. Compared to that, what was Edmond? What was a big, mean, angry young human with a weapon he barely knew how to use?

Three strikes, he made. In as many trills. Piercing a kidney. Disabling a leg. Crippling an arm and taking the blade it was holding. Too easy. Part of him wondered if any man he killed after would bring any glimmer of satisfaction, after conquering the lizardman.

Maybe not, he'd tell himself, pragmatic and unimaginative voice of his father replacing the ego of his mind. But you'll win, and survive, and get paid. That matters more.

Edmond clearly thought he could still win. Even with two limbs taken from him, along with his weapon, his left arm swung up and around in a big, brutal haymaker-

-Kasoria meeting flesh and muscle with steel and speed and-

Exley felt his bowels finally give up when he saw his brother's arm hacked off at the elbow. Piss streamed down his breeches and into his boots as Edmond - always so strong, so fierce, indestructible and implacable - barely got a full scream out before the gladius arced towards him one more time... and the Raggedy Man buried it into his chest through his clavicle. It wasn't the through-the-ribs impalement one would expect from a warrior, but the professional, path of least resistance a killer would know. The gladius stabbed down through the space between Edmond's shoulder and neck, crunching and slicing through muscle and ligaments without the bother of too many bones to think on-

-until it skewered a lung on the way to the heart, and then tore than in half. Edmond coughed and shuddered in disbelief. The Raggedy Man didn't watch him die. He just let go of the gladius, his eyes fixed on Fozzie and Exley who-

"F-Fuck this!"

"Ex, we gotta-"

"An' fuck you!"

If this fucking maniac wanted Uncle Foz, he could fucking have him. Exley shoved his Uncle towards the thing that had butchered the Ithecal and started to scramble up the side of the wagon. Kasoria judged distance in the time it took him to get one foot on the wagon. By the time his other one had got up there, his right hand was moving to his wrist, and by the time the co-founder of the Reaver-Cleaver Gang had grabbed the reins-

SHUNK

"EX?!"

Never turn your back, boy.

The savage seemed to leap into the night sky. Stretch one hand up to grasp the stars, while he other grasped stupidly, futilely at the throwing knife in his back. His breath came out in shuddering clouds. His last breaths, most likely. He froze there, for a moment, pawing and stretching and clutching, watched by all and helped by none... until the Ghost Mushroom on the blade started to pump its way around his body in earnest, and he fell back into the mud.

Horses whinnied in horror and cantered away, taking the wagon with it. Mud splattered and wheels whirled and that final example of civilized man quit the yard. But now Kasoria could make out the buildings around them. Now the mind he wore in battle, that destroyed all it beheld save for enemies near and further, submerged again in his soul. He could see Etzos. He could see the grain house and the cottage and the barn and the stable. All dead and hollow places where nothing lived or moved. Only the men around him moved, them that were dead, and dying, and doomed-

And fleeing.

"K-Kill him! Fates damn you, killing this fucking bastard! A thousand nels to whoever kills him!"

The man at his feet was bleating for death. A break ago, he wouldn't have had to offer coin. His reputation, his name, his word, the deeds of his nephews and the platoon of cutters he commanded would have been enough. Much had changed in that break, obviously. One nephew was dead, and the other was choking to death a little ways from them, Ghost Mushroom strangling him from his lungs upward. The other had a gladius through two major organs and was already dead. His lizardman champion was dead and the two dozen men they'd brought with them... were no longer two dozen.

Fozzie Tatum looked around, resembling nothing more now than an overfed rat with wide, tearful eyes. Not even a half-dozen. Men were weighing their odds as they looked at Kasoria, remembering every trill of what he'd done. Jorg. Edmond. Not Exley. They were armed. Some had their weapons in hand at that moment... and none of them strode forth to take that commission. Fozzie's jaw hung slack in disbelief than tightened with rage. He got up to one knee and started shouting, cursing, swearing-

-until Kasoria's fist snapped out, a short, businesslike jab that broke his nose and sent him squealing back into the muck. The faces watched that, too. Watched and understood that it was over. In case there were any doubters... Kasoria's hand went under his coat... and came up with two more knives. He looked around at his audience, now cut down to almost nothing... and cocked an eyebrow.

One by one, they walked away. Leaving Fozzie to his fate, sobbing from behind his hand as he cradled his broken nose. When he dared open them again, it was to the sight of Kasoria howling at the night like a rabid wolf... and with his gladius back in his hand.

"Right..." The killer said, with his voice now choked with pain and the hateful anger than bred. "Time... Time t'end this shite..."

Concluded here
word count: 1686

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Re: Unto A Savage Race

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Kasoria


Knowledges
Dual Wield (Gladius x Karambit): Gladius Is Best Suited to Block/Parry
Dual Wield (Gladius x Karambit) : Karambit Can Quickly Counter/Disarm
Dual Wield (Gladius x Karambit): Gladius is Effective for Keeping an Enemy At Range
Dual Wield (Gladius x Karambit): Karambit is Better for Short-Range, Fast, Slashing Strikes
Intimidation: Decapitation Presentation
Intimidation: Butcher the Leaders To Demoralize the Soldiers

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Renown: N/A

Points 10

Comments: When you said Exley's bowels had given up, I thought he was going to poop himself, and I was totally done. :lol:

Again, wonderful thread; you put an insane amount of work into these solos, and go above and beyond. The descriptions in this one were especially compelling, for example, "The assassin looked around as Jorg coughed wet into his shoulder. He wasn't chomping down anymore; wasn't doing much of anything, nor ever would do again. He squatted on his knees like a man set to prayer, before an altar painted with the thick red blood pouring from his crotch. A massive scaly hand fell from Kasoria's own arm, releasing it-

-and a breath was sucked into dying lungs, shaking like a man in a blizzard, trying to get one more-"

It's so clear. I can always (I think) perfectly visualize your threads, which only adds to the movie-like effect of them. I know reviews are supposed to sometimes contain constructive criticism, but I honestly feel that Kasoria's flow and the way that you populate the world around him with such compelling grit leaves little for me to critique. I'm looking forward to the finale!
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