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1st of Ashan, 716
3rd Break



Paplo awoke to the clamor of a bloodthirsty public, the banging of their wooden tankards against the caged pit, and the spit flying out their rabid maws. Everyone wanted a piece of him, and they made that clear to the fighter on the opposite side of the pit; the thin man Paplo had tried to unsuccessfully seduce. Paplo’s head ached greatly, pounding as harsh as the figurative battle drums that fueled his public. His body felt on fire, and even after confirming this illusion as a mistake, he still patted his torso in search of embers. As he blinked and stood up, the fighter opposite him tossed his shirt of out the cage, revealing an unimpressive skeletal physique, yet his confidence was astonishing. Paplo knew he was in trouble.

“I mean you no har—“ Paplo’s words were interrupted by a quick jab delivered by a trained fighter. The otherwise simplistic hit broke his nose and sent him back down into the bloodstained ground. His blood pooled out into his mouth. Meanwhile, the public’s rage was only fueled further; they wanted this. Paplo tried to recover, but he no longer faced the fighter for he stood no chance. Now, he looked towards the men yelling from the other side of the cage, and tried to reach for them, to grab them and tell them to help him, that he didn’t want to hurt anyone, that he was simply hungry, that his life was in danger. All he received in return for his unspoken and unheard pleas was a shove back into the ring, and perhaps the notion that mortal men were cruel creatures.

Paplo had also made the mistake to give his back to his opponent, who now gripped him by the hairs and tugged with extreme force, dragging him back down onto the floor for the third time in the evening. There, a harsh punt onto Paplo’s kidney made the teacher squirm to his side, and a kick to his stomach emptied his lungs. It was in this moment, while the other fighter boasted about the death he was to bring to his defeated opponent, when Paplo considered simply unleashing his organism’s potential. The possibility was there, always, and he’d repair any damage done to his body in a matter of thrills. He could kill them all for what they tried to do to him, for being so uncaring to him.

However, he refused it. It took all his mental strength, as little as it was, to not do so. The cage was the reason for this logic; he was locked, just like when Vuda’s men had locked him on those two occasions. Nobody could know about him, and if he wasn’t certain about his ability to eliminate the witnesses, then he’d never make the same mistake again. The decision was, in its own way, an advancement of Paplo’s own discipline, a step towards maturity, and, hopefully, towards longevity.

It took even more willpower to resist the decision, for the boasting of his opinion had ended, and the fighter came to end it all. He flipped the Mortalborn on its back, and after straddling him, he grabbed his hairs with one hand as the other clenched into a fist. That fist slammed against the pale and bloody face of the powerless man, again and again, with the same force as a hammer against an anvil. This thin man had truly rocked Paplo’s world, even if the context was entirely different.

Paplo’s limbs flayed like fishes out of water; trying to reach for something that wasn’t there, perhaps, or simply a reflex action as his nervous system was slowly shattering within him. He felt no pain anymore, as his body shut down all those receptors for his own safety. Even with all the chaos around him, Paplo only thought about his hunger, as if the fist that spites his face had sent him into a state of meditation. His hunger made him strong, stronger than those around him. It made him overcome many burdens, and it made him survive despite leaving him empty otherwise. However, in times like these, it made him weak, and no matter how much he ate, he starved. If he could get rid of said hunger sometimes, then maybe he could be even stronger. And as he thought it, it happened.

His hunger was no more.
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That very same hunger transformed from a powerful sensation to a disturbing physical form. A cloud of thick black smoke had exploded around Paplo, dense and visually heavy like ink floating in water. The man who was previously murdering Paplo now backed off against the cage while the physical hunger slowly overran the room. Paplo himself was very surprised; not because of the disturbing and mysterious visual spectacle, but rather for the clarity of mind he was experiencing. For the first time in perhaps his entire short life, he felt no hunger. No longer did he need to focus his entire will into ignoring said intense sensation, nor did that very same sentiment cloud his thoughts. He was lucid, more lucid than he had ever been. He shed a single tear in that one moment of true joy.

Something grew within the room; hunger, again. The cloud was slowly being ripped to fine shreds, traveling quickly into the nostrils of every man locked into the locale. Pleasure was seen in their features, as if whatever the mist smelled off brought them true joy as well. That joy lasted little, for the more they breathed, the more they seemed to be afflicted by what previously afflicted Paplo himself – hunger. Their mouths twisted in awkward animalistic displays, and snarls rose within their throats. Their eyes lost life and consciousness as they were corrupted by the burden Paplo alone had been carrying. And as their mouths began to foam, and they banged against the cage, with their hands trying to reach towards Paplo, the Mortalborn finally knew how strong he had been all this time.

His rejoice was short lived, too, for his opponent was also afflicted by the Misty Mania. No cage stood between Paplo and him, a detail Paplo realized as the man jumped atop him and bit him in the arm. It wasn’t a dirty trick from a fighter, nor was it a childish display of rage. It was a true bite, one that aimed to devour and thus one that ripped a chunk of flesh from Paplo’s arm. The Mortalborn, still somewhat dazed from the previous beating, did manage to gather the will to fight; now that he didn’t feel like a dying creature because of his hunger, he found little trouble to focus. As such, he pushed the male off, and quickly returned upon his feet.

His opponent banged against the cage, and despite the possible pain, he still launched himself against the teacher. There was no more professionalism or discipline in his motions; it was not a fighter what Paplo faced. It was just a rabid dog, strong, enraged and inefficient, what tried to eat him. A glimpse to his side made him aware of the situation outside the cage; nobody craved for him anymore, as instead they craved for one another. Like dogs they jumped each other, biting and eating their struggling or dead comrades in between tears and yells of pain. Now that he looked, in fact, he noticed something new. That presence that he had felt following him in the evening was there, almost invisible to the naked eye; swirling black balls with many watery tentacle-like limbs overran the room, dividing themselves repeatedly just like the insatiable hunger Paplo had caused. The one moment he had to focus on them, he could hear their growling, and he understood it as if they spoke a guttural ‘Feed me more!’.

Looking back towards his opponent, willing to finish him at last, Paplo didn’t have any problem in using a dirty trick. It was clear to him that nobody would be leaving his locale except him, and so nobody would speak of whatever monstrosity happened inside. With his newfound focus, Paplo knew his options were almost unlimited. His body felt his for the first time, and so everything it was capable of doing was not at as his disposition. Few times he had such clarity of mind when using his mutations, and so he focused on his left arm’s mass. Clenching his fist, he began sacrificing his intestine tract, using its mass to create a thick bone structure on the elbow area. Thrills later, everything was complete. Now, Paplo’s right hand reached for his left wrist, and as he tugged, his left forearm came loose.

The flesh around the freshly amputated stump was immediately cauterized, and no blood was lost. The ripped off arm was now held like a weapon, for it was; a makeshift mace. When his opponent tried his ineficcient attack once again, he was met with a harsh block to the forehead, and as the skull broke and caved in, his opponent died. Paplo had won fair and square, for he had won using only his hands. His future as a hand-to-hand fighter could be truly bright.

The Mortalborn returned his arm-mace to its original position, and his body accepted the limb, correcting any anomalies and mutations and returning its original function. As this happened, Paplo once again thought about how easy everything became with a clear mind, and now watched as those cruel men that refused me died because of him. Even if he hadn’t wished them any harm, he didn’t mind their deaths.

He was serene about it.
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Paplo’s first action was to take off his clothes. He wasn’t particularly fond of buying new clothes, and most of those he had were looted from corpses. Furthermore, bloodstains proved to be challenging stains to get rid of. Nudity wasn’t a concern for him. In fact, it made him feel more comfortable. He approached the cage, and with some help from his Perfect Organism, he began squeezing through the vertical bars which resembled those of inefficient prisons. His body, malleable like clay and undying like the earth, shifted his size as he pressed himself against the bars, slowly squeezing out of his prison. Once outside, he found the nearest weapon, which was a knife, and began crippling those still capable to fight. Most of them were wounded, and many were already dead, and with their ravenous nature having numbed their intellect, he found little trouble in doing so. Stab, pull, repeat. Twelve casualties in total.

It was now when he focused on those beings that fed from the hungry. Those black balls of energy that latched on to the hungry, growling in their own language their needs to keep feeding more and more. Paplo’s imagination was gone just like his hunger, and thus he discarded his imagination’s play into the deciphering of their vocabulary. As their hosts died, the spirits sought the nearest living man and latched onto them as well, ignoring Paplo completely. It wasn’t until the last witness died that the spirits began fighting against themselves. Their numbers, great from what Paplo could see, were quickly reduced to the one being. That being now crawled towards Paplo.
“Please,” it said. “Please feed me more, Master.”
“What are you?” he asked, his voice monotonous and cold, much like the creature that hid behind his acting.
“Don’t speak to me, you scum! You’re not my Master!” exploded the being in its own guttural tongue. Nonetheless, it still crawled to Paplo’s feet and bowed. It didn’t touch him at all.
“I’ve got nothing to feed you with,” he replied.
“Please, Master, please! Don’t let me die, Master. Master! Master!!” begged the semi-transparent being, which slowly died before the unhungry Mortalborn. Thrills later, the creature began eating itself, its size reducing bite after bite until it was gone without a trace.

Kovic was now alone, and his Paplo charade was dropped. His blue eyes scanned the torch-lit room, finding only bodies, blood, and fragments of that black mist he had accidentally released. He took a deep breath, still without feeling the slightest mote of hunger in his body. However, he knew he needed to eat, for his body was hungry, nonetheless. His skin was turning bluish, and surely his hairs were already dying. Not feeling hunger was not the same as not being hungry. Before tackling that priority, Kovic approached the remnants of mist that remained in the room. Crouching down, his hand reached for it, the mist clinging onto his flesh like cigarette smoke to a cold surface. It danced in his hand as he rose it, the mist slowly flowing down his arm.

He tried to sniff it, to inhale it, but the mist wouldn’t do so. Strange, he thought, considering he had seen how tendrils of this mist forced themselves up the dead public’s nostrils. He could only assume that this was truly his hunger made physical. Closing his eyes, he tried to repeat the motion, to release the hunger he did not feel. As expected, nothing happened. Done with the mist, he tried to blow it off his hand, an attempt that was unsuccessful. The mist barely swirled from his breath. He blew harder, but the effects were similar. Looking around, Kovic armed himself with a hat, waving it against his arm to create a stronger wind current. The mist moved slightly more, but it was clear it wouldn’t go away just because of wind. Efficient, he thought.

It wasn’t until he brought his hand down on the floor that the mist didn’t leave his palm, like a spider a curious child now released back into the nature. This evening was turning out to be quite interesting, and a well of knowledge for himself. At last, it was time to address the matter of feeding. With a clear head, he knew that his hunger made him irrational in his eating patterns, despite him needing constant fodder to remain healthy. Eating one of the many bodies in here would only cause him to vomit remains he couldn’t use, and thus waste sustain. Furthermore, he was somewhat dubious about his usual feeding methods, too; absorbing nutrients through his flesh left his mouth out of the question, and thus neglected him the pleasure of taste.

Because of this, Kovic decided to cook for the first time in his life.
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  • Your anonymous hero has arrived~

    Skill Points:
    • Story: 5/5
      Structure: 5/5
      Collaboration: 0/5
      These points may not be used for magic.
    Knowledge:
    • Negotiation: Trying to Reason With a Highly Aggressive Opponent
    • Endurance: Getting Sucker-punched
    • Endurance: Getting Bitten by a (Crazed) Human
    • Discipline: How To Resist Prideful Provocation
    • Discipline: Denying Your Nature
    • Discipline: Using All of Your Willpower To Get Results
    • Discipline: A Clear Mind Makes a Smart Man
    • Strength: Recognizing Your Own Prowess
    • Tactics: Assessing Danger
    • Unarmed Combat: Predicting Your Opponent's Next Move
    • Unarmed Combat: How to Turn Your Body Into A Weapon
    • Melee Combat (Blades: Dagger): Dying Targets Are the Easiest
    • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Temporary Pain Receptor Shutdown
    • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Squeezing past Bars
    • Mortal Born Ability (Perfect Organism): Temporary Amputation
    • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Black, Ink-like Smoke
    • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Causes Insatiable Hunger (On others)
    • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Removes Hunger Sensation (On Kovic)
    • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Doesn't Affect Kovic
    • Mortal Born Ability (Misty Mania): Resilient to Wind Currents
    • Some Spirits Call You Master?
    Loot:
    • Kovic will suffer from a broken nose and a number of bruises that will take about 2.5 weeks to heal, assuming he doesn't use his healing ability on himself.
    Fame:
    • In my opinion, you should get hella negative fame for this, but since there are no witnesses.... >:(
    Devotion:
    • As much as I'd like to give Syroa devo for this, I'm not allowed unless Kovic specifically thinks, dedicates, and/or prays to her before doing his creepy, crazy shit fests. I liked the story though, so +1 Bumblebee Devotion.
    Reviewer's Notes:
    • Well, a shame I couldn't award Kovic negative fame, because man... how does this guy get away with killing 12 (13?) people and just walk away? Grr. As always, the story was great and the hunger spirit bit calling him master (although it said he wasn't their master) was fascinating. Definitely wouldn't mind reading more about that. In fact,
      this whole thread was wildly entertaining. Good job. Keep up the good work.
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