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Three To Get Ready

The 93rd of Vhalar 717


Although nighttime had set in a long time ago, there were still people making a ruckus about. Those people were either laughing and drinking and yelling in a pub, or they were doing the same thing traveling to or away from one. Bran himself found him in the former category, thoroughly enjoying himself. The pub itself was nothing special; quite small inside, with wooden furniture and bar, some lanterns hanging from the beams at the ceiling –safely out of reach from rowdy customers—and a flutist standing on a small stage in one of the corners of the room. Tables were few, lining the walls, leaving the middle as well as the area near the bar free. There customers could dance and sing and swing their mugs as wildly as they pleased.

Oberan was sitting at one of the small tables, a chaotic collection of drinks in front of him. Most of the mugs were empty, but two still held liquid inside. One was in Bran’s hand, the other stood waiting for his companion, who currently had her hands running across his face.
”You’re quite handsome,” she spoke, tracing the line of his jaw, following the curve to his chin. The mortalborn tilted his head to the side, eyes half-closed.
”I’ve heard dhad bevore,” he slurred, ”but most don’t dell me.”
He let his eyes wander over her features again, loving the almond shape of her eyes, even though they were milky and unseeing. His gaze dropped then, a grin spreading. ”You are beaudivul doo.”

She smiled and ran her hand over his nose, examining it with her delicate fingers. ”Oh,” she exclaimed, ”have you been in a fight?” Carefully she felt the bump, frowning slightly.
”Long ago,” he explained, ”vrom bevore I could dodzj. I only ged hurd in fighdz when I’m drunk now.” He frowned slightly, and took a swig from his drink when her hand was out of the way.
”Well, you’d better not get in a fight then.”
Oberan snorted. ”I’m nod drunk. I am only dipzy. Haven’d drunk mudzj.”
She shook her head. ”Of course not.” Her hand searched for her drink, hitting it softly with a finger, telling her of its location. She grabbed it then, and emptied her mug in one fell swoop. Oberan stared at her, then at his own mug, shrugged, and downed it too.

”I’ll ged uz some more drinkz,” he declared, raising from his seat. His legs felt really wobbly, his view of the world teetering sideways as he nearly lost his balance. Then he took a swaying step, and another, moving through the small crowd to the bar. Once there, he found himself in front of two large foaming pints of beer, a welcome surprise. No waiting time? Obviously these were not for him, but Oberan couldn’t care less. He did not see anyone who was waiting to accept these; no-one was looking at them. So he just took them, not caring at all. Returning with those pints in hand proved a bit of a problem, as the people in the crowd bumped into him left and right, causing him to spill many a time. Still, he reached the table safely.

Sadly, that was all he could manage. Just as he was about to put the beverages down, someone shouldered past him roughly. The mortalborn stumbled forward and dropped the drinks, spilling them all over the table. He cursed loudly, turning viciously at the offender. It was a big man, at least one head taller than Bran, but the mortalborn did not care.
”Oi, you piece ov veck! Ad leazd apolodzjise, cund! I nearly zoaked dhe lady!”
The man turned around slowly, looking down on the mortalborn.
”You got a problem with me, runt? Piss off before you regret it!”
”Wa?”
”You heard me, Gentleman McWhoreson, piss o--”
”Whad did you call my modher?” Bran hissed, ”You dake dhad back, or elze!”
The man laughed, turning to his mates, with an expression of “did he just say that?” He turned back then, bending down enough that Bran could smell his stinky breath. Even in his addled state he could smell the alcohol. ”I said your mom is a cheap whore too ugly to make any money!”

Oberan balled his fists, feeling his blood start to boil. ”My modher is a godzdamned queen. I’ll give you dhree--” He burped, surprising even himself. He hadn’t felt it coming.
”Three what?”
”Dhree do ged ready bevore I zlap your zhid boy!”
The man raised his eyebrows.
”One!”
”What, you want to fight?”
”Dhree!” screamed Bran, skipping the two, and headbutting the man right in the nose instead.
Last edited by Oberan on Wed Oct 11, 2017 7:44 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 795
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Oberan was not too sure where he was. He did not remember this place, not at all. With his eyes open, he could see the night sky, stars shining brightly in the strip of dark blue, flanked by the dark edges of the silhouettes of houses. It was a beautiful sight. So beautiful, in fact, that he would not have minded to stay like this for a while longer. However, he was slowly becoming aware of his body, feeling a cold wetness on his back, hearing a rippling and splashing sound as he moved. Was he lying in a puddle? The mortalborn grunted softly, his face twisting slightly in pain as he tried to get up. Everything hurt.

Well, it was not that bad, really, not if he remained still. Moving however, that was a different story. The muscles in his legs and arms and torso all complained, and the thief felt pretty weak and sluggish. He frowned, and stopped immediately as pain shot through his skull. Even that hurt? Damn. Slowly, biting through the pain, he got on hands and knees, and then hauled himself onto his feet. His legs felt like wet noodles, knees weak and arms heavy. There was some vomit on his shirt. He felt as if the slightest gust of wind could make him fall over. Oberan sucked in a lungful of air as he tried taking a step, wincing slightly. It wasn’t a step really, more like sliding his foot forwards like an old man, languid motions, a hand on the wall for balance.

Another step, his foot catching on a slightly raised stone of the street. He stumbled and fell to his knees, hands on the ground to prevent his head from hitting it. The shock travelled through his body and seemed to rattle his bones. Everything fucking hurt.
”Shit,” he mumbled, regretting it instantly as his jaw received a stab of pain.
The thief pushed himself back to his feet, once again using the wall for balance, cursing internally as every part of his body complained and protested. Maybe he should just go lay down again. No, bad idea, he thought, forehead resting against cool stone. Bad idea.

He continued onwards, head off the wall, feeling the world spin around him without the soothing chill of the stones. If he moved his hand away from the wall, he began to sway, walking in zig-zags. His body did not listen as well as it should. On top of that, he did not feel very good. The inside of his mouth flooded with saliva, too much of it to be a normal thing. He groaned, not wanting this to happen. Not now. Like he had any say in the matter. With a mighty contraction his stomach seemed to fold in on itself, diaphragm spasming, and the mortalborn retched. Pressing his lips tightly onto each other helped but not much, a little vomit still spraying from between them. He tried to swallow down what had come up into his mouth, but it was no use. Another contraction, the flexing of his abs, and the thief bent over, throwing the contents of his stomach onto the stones.

It was mostly fluid, he noticed, eyes tearing and squinting, knees bent, one hand resting on top of one of the joints. The other hand was still providing support for his body. He heaved, jaw hurting from being forced open, drool dripping from his lips. His nose was leaking too, watery snot running down his upper lip and flowing into his mouth. His breaths were labored, heavy panting as if he’d just ran a marathon. It hurt.

The scent of his vomit invaded his nose, and the thief already knew what was coming. He began coughing violently, feeling the saliva coating the inside of his mouth and throat already. He had no control. Another wave hit him, more stomach fluids taking the liberty of escaping his body. If Oberan looked closely he might have seen some half-digested chunks of what had once been a meal. Such things were not on the forefront of him mind though. Instead, he focused on not breathing through his nose, wiping the snot and drool away from his lips, and straightened up a little. He felt better. Not much, but it was something. The spinning was less violent now.

Moving with the speed of an old snail, Oberan began walking again, doing his best to avoid the puddle of processed beer and food on the ground. It might be his, but it remained gross. He smacked his lips a couple times, ignoring the pain in his face it caused, and spat, trying to clear the awful taste in his mouth. Alas, it remained, but he did get rid of a few left-behind bits of vomit.

”Shit,” he cursed once more, ”I’m never drinking again.”
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Bran is a fabulously mischievous character to read. Drunk Bran, well, he’s even better. Thank you. Hilarious dialogue and great combat.

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-4 Defeat in Drunken Combat

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Injuries + Overstepping

Bruises all over his body, a black eye, headache, bruised ribs which will last for several trials before they all stop hurting.

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Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Biting through pain
Unarmed combat: headbutt
Tactics: striking first for an advantage
Acrobatics: walking when drunk
Intimidation: the "or else" threat
Pickpocket:Stealing other people's drinks

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