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Frostbound

5th Cylus 706

Cold.

Was an enormously understated way of describing the bitter, all-consuming frostbound wound that ruptured into the world when Cylus kicked Zida out of the room. It was like calling a growing hurricane a gentle breeze or a firestorm raging through the Rhakros jungle a mildly warm incident; it didn’t quite capture the proper reality of what it meant to suffer through 30 days of blizzard and snowstorms and winds dipping so cold you could walk out the door and the storm drain the color and the mind from you, your fingers swelled and rot to blue, your shivers start shivering, and you see snow demons haunt you in the storm, whispering warmth in your ears and asking -oh so politely- that maybe, just maybe, those clothes are wrong, and the snow is right. The snow is lovely, and warm, and if you would just lie down for a bit and rest your head there, everything in the world would make sense for once.

And it did for the next few bits. For the last few bits.

It took too many arcs after for Zipper to separate the superstition from the facts, that there were no intangible snow monsters in the Etzori streets of cylus calling you to an early grave, just the fact of such things like frostbite and, the real killer, hypothermia driving people to madness as their minds went cold and their heart found the blood too chill to pump.

Every fact simplified for a child’s ears, every whim of the weather blamed on demons from the beyond - and not out of some kindness, but sheer fuckin’ ignorance. Zipper spent arcs burning out the rot from a flawed education of a flawed institution, but there was always the sinking fear that the damage done to her was inherent at the foundation: that her mind would never leave the naturally-inclined trappings of orphanage mediocrity.

But that was the problems of the future pre-pubescent Zipper’s. Those was the fears and the insecurities and the tantrums that were never truly resolved, following her all the way to young adulthood

Young Fiona’s only concern was surviving the cold.

They never had enough wool for every child. A lot of them had to make do with their hand-me-down rags hardly fit for the cold. Once in awhile, if the mood -or circumstance- suited a merchant right, a charitable donation would be made to the orphanage for clothes that would fare the children better in Cylus.

Once in awhile.

Lots of burying to do when every other time.

Fiona, naturally, decided to turn to Transmutation: fight the world’s banes with its boons.

She scoured the orphanage for the warmest thing she could find and settled on the flame of the fireplace - the one reliable source of heat in the entire building. Correction: Mr. Barnelby had his own in his office, of course, that selfish old fuck, and the rest of the staff weren’t exactly dropping like flies, so they had their own ways they weren’t sharing.

She couldn’t blame them. She whined, she moaned, she bitched, but deep down in her heart she couldn’t really blame them. They were simply acting out the features of their flawed design: Relentless, black-hearted self-preservation and cold authority that decided that the lives of kids weren’t worth letting a few into the kids into his room.

She couldn’t build people with Transmutation; but at least were meant to be tools on purpose.

She put her hands to the fire and…

It occurred to her that this was the first time she tried to memorize something that wasn’t solid, that wasn’t fixed in the world. Ever-flickering, with a warmth that was too much to bear even before she had wanted to touch it, how would she go about unravelling this unfixed oddity?

She used a piece of wood as a proxy, tossed in by her very hand for the fire to freshly burn from the start.

It charred, it blackened, it ate away at itself while Fiona squatted there looking at it.

She learnt another thing that cold Cylus day: wood took a shitload of time to die in fire.

And as she looked into the flames, she saw the destiny she envisioned for this place when she and Finn were done with it. A cleansing fire that would wipe away everything that was wrong with it and char and break and slice the earth underneath so that nothing would ever grow from this institution of inefficiency.

Everyone has power fantasies. Everyone has secret hatreds they wished to enact, childhood bullies they wished to maim and kill.

Fiona -Zipper- just happened to grow up into the exact sort of person with the will and the way to twist all these fantasies into reality one sick deed at a time.

And every once in awhile, when she found a day she couldn’t fill with busy and busy and busy, she did.
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Taking wool into herself was easy after the time-consuming endeavour that was inscribing fire into her palette. Forcing the warming properties of wool into her rags were easier still. There was no fuss or fanfare to that.

But she needed to know it would work. Truly work.

Wrapping a 2nd insulated rag over her head to cover her face from the snow, then a 3rd around her arms, and a fourth to cover her legs and her feet, Fiona walked out into the cold-

And there it was. The first line in this thread in all its tempest. It was almost hard, Zipper might have thought once or twice, to fault the fools for believing the Cylus blizzards came from raging snow demons.

She stood there for ten trills before going back in.

It won, she supposed, if you count dodging one fire breath from a dragon and beating a hasty retreat a victory.

She… she had to go out again, didn’t she? It hurt, it bit at her, it made her feel even smaller in a world that spent all its time doing that. It engulfed her, it made her for all purposes blind, seeing only white. It shoved her around like she was nothing.

She looked around to see whether nobody was there, and went out-

If she gave up the moment a harsh Quality came her way and gave her pause, she was no better than the complacent authority figures of this place, who dwelled in adequacy and did their jobs to the bare minimum.

-again.

In and out, in and out, in and out, the patterns repeated and when someone came, she would stop for a bit, only to resume - until the picture of Cylus, of cold and ice, of the chill and the slip, became clear to her. Like a jigsaw, she placed in a new piece each time she stepped out, and she came in to ponder the sensation that was the result of Treid’s petty answer to Faldrun’s suns.

The feud that gave us Cylus. The feud that said “Zida wasn’t enough, let’s step it up and let it loose."

She couldn’t go back to the fire though; it was a Quality of the other extreme. It would break her out of it.

She had to take it to the very end.
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That night -okay, it was always night in Cylus, but you know what I mean- Fiona wrapped baby Finn in as many wool-inscribed rags as she could find and held him close to her bosom. She kept a fire inscribed piece of stone near, away from any wood, mustering as much warmth for the both of them as she could. She would press her head to his, and feel the very slight rise and fall that meant he was still breathing, feel him stirring ever so slightly only to return to stillness, hear his little sneezes and coughs.

She wondered whether she should have felt relief or resentment that he was still alive.

Everyday she thought about leaving him out in the cold. Everyday she thought about putting him somewhere cold and isolated and sparing both of them the burden of his life - and the needless mess that was growing up like this.

Maybe she thought taking in the cold into her soul would give her the icy fortitude to do what she needed to do - but that was a lie she couldn’t even manage to tell herself, a fantasy that a Quality served as liquid courage, influencing the soul as whiskey influenced and removed the inhibitions of the mind.

But no; it was just her in the end. Qualities were tools and weapons and things of the craft, and a lifeless sword had no power to command the hand of its wielder.

She was just never strong enough to do it.

Arcs later, she still wasn’t sure she had made the right decision.
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Frostbound

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Knowledge: Zipperoni

Transmutation: The Freezing Chill of Cylus
Transmutation: The Heat of Fire
Transmutation: The Warmth of Wool
Transmutation: The Slipperiness of Ice
Endurance: Withstanding the Cylus cold
Medicine: Understanding the causes, symptoms, and preventive measures of frostbite and hypothermia

Loot: N?A
Injuries: I wish this was in the present so I could kill your PC with hypothermia.
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Magic XP: Yeah, sure. Use 'em on magic.

Story: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: 4/10. Not the best. Whatever here are your points, demon.

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