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Kura smiled slightly at the reactions her upbringing got, and shrugged when Faith said her upbringing sounded interesting. "It was just home. It was big, busy, and I kept getting lost, but it didn't feel special to me. It was just...home. When I got older, I realized why it was important, but even when I started working there, I didn't let it go to my head." she said, before looking at the smaller creature in confusion as she asked if she was a god wolf. "Um...no, not at all." she said, before she realized it was the comment about her age that had brought up the subject.

"Oh, I see what you mean. No, I'm not. Or at least, not wholly. My father was a Sev'ryn, but my mother was Karem, the Immortal of Wolves. I'm half-Immortal, so my life span is much, much longer than most." she said, smiling at her companions as she sat down.
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This was getting strange, Faith considered, and she looked at Famula's statue and smiled. The sight of her beloved Immortal was enough to calm her, as always. That she was a statue was, much like for Niv, perfectly normal. So, she smiled and gained what pleasure and calmness she could from the presence of Famula amongst them. But she also paid attention to the words of her companions and when Niv spoke of eating bugs, Faith wrinkled her nose. "My Master does not let me use my hands when eating so, unless he did, the bugs would crawl into my nose. I would not like that, I do not think" she considered it and shook her head. "No. I would not. Are they still... crawling? Can you feel them when you eat them?" in fairness, Faith had seen and even done some really horrid things, but the thought of eating something that was still crawling? She promised herself there and then that she was not telling Jamal about it.

Because that would be gross.

But a god wolf? She turned to look at Kura with wide eyes as Niv asked that question. And as much as the answer was no, Faith's eyes just grew wider as she learnt what the answer actually was. "Your... that means you are half Immortal? That is immense" she said and then she realised what she had said and she blushed slightly "I am sorry, I should not speak so to... it is an honour to be in your presence, Mistress" she said, her manners and her realisation returning to her.

And as they did, the scene of the dream shifted and they were sitting in a morgue. Sitting in a circle in the middle of the room. Four tables were in the room, each one with space enough around it for a few people to work on the corpses. And there, sleeping on the floor with a ragged blanket full of holes was Faith. The awake Faith, the one that sat in the circle (or square, sincer there were four of them, including the Famula-statue) looked around the cool and dark room and smiled "Oh, look, we're home" she said with a smile. There were two corpses in the room, but both were covered. "Would you like me to get you some tea?" she asked, meekly. In the waking world, she mumbled slightly, stirring into a slightly less deep sleep and so in the dream she started to see and feel things nearer and more usual to her.
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“wait why..” Niv caught herself before she went deeper down that rabbit hole of Faiths personal life. The Tunawa had the awareness to know that she couldn’t help the raven haired human in a dream so it was best not to talk about it. “The bugs are still alive and crawls about but half the fun is catching them.” Niv demonstrated by clapping her hands together and pushing them toward her mouth.

“Aww that explains why I see you as a wolf, its because you have wolf blood in you.” Niv looked over at expossed fangs of the grinning Wolf and smiled back.

Niv found herself in a steaming teacup with her arms spread out along the edges of the rim. The cup was thin and white, a stark contrast to the thick earthen ware Niv was accustom to. The water was a nice golden hue with a temperature that was just hot enough that the Tunawa didn’t worry about being burned.
“This might be the best bath I’ve ever had.” Niv looked around the room and noticed the dead bodies but wasn’t alarmed. Even for a self proclaimed healer the pale skin of a non breathing human didn’t raise any flags. “It’s so relaxing in here, I could just fall asleep.” Niv eyes fluttered a bit as she made her oblivious statement.

“Oh thank you for the offer Faith, I would love a cup of tea.” Niv gave a warm smile, not realizing the fluid she was currently chest deep in. “Do you have any acorn cups? Tea always tastes better out of an acorn for some reason. ”

Before faith could even get a cup for Niv, the tunawa's eye lids had gotten heavier and heavier until they eventually closed. The tiny women seemed to blink out of existence leaving a cup of tea where she once was. Skret was gone too as well as the bird spirits that clung to Faith's shoulders.
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It had been a whimsical journey so far, a lot of curious insights shared between all parties involved as Faith's dreamscape had become a comfortable refuge for people all over Idalos, it seemed. Famula, though frozen in all her glory, watched as the story unfolded and approached a seeming end---starting with the departure of the Tunawa as they no doubt awakened wherever their physical body waited for them beyond Emea. Once the first inhabitant of the dreamscape had departed, the nigh on forgotten statue had started to move again. Though she didn't recover her live features, Famula vacated the spot she'd been occupying until now, turning to Faith and Kura with an eerie and cold smile, no doubt due to her features emerging through the wood (or rock) that formed her face being devoid of genuine life. Her lips parted with a crack and a creak, but where her voice should've carried to the two women... there was nothing.

Instead, the room around them briefly echoed with a woman's heavy breath, an exhale almost like a sigh... though it never touched their ears. Instead, it seemed the room itself had exhaled into their minds, briefly expanding outwards as the walls of the morgue stretched, the building's foundation howling almost as if in pain. A crack appeared in the northern wall, in view of Faith and Kura.

"That's right," the statue muttered hollowly, and out of nowhere. With a creaking (or grinding) sound, the Famula-shaped creation turned to face the rift that was forming in the wall of the morgue, slowly but surely taking shape and causing ripples in reality as they perceived it. It distorted their surroundings and struck their senses in waves, threatening to topple them out of their restful sleep and throw them back into Idalos---and yet, something beckoned from beyond the forming rift, and Famula seemed just as aware. "It's time to go."

With no acknowledgement of the two women present, Famula stepped towards the rift and reached out a hand to touch it.
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Light crept through the crevice between the two wooden doors as it formed inside the wall, licking the floor enticingly and reaching towards Faith, rising the dist into wispy fingers to grasp onto her attire. The feeling was surreal as they dug into the cloth and tugged almost imperceptably, but the skirt of her dress still felt taut over her thigh as the light crept into it.

Famula turned.

"If you'd just come with me, please. We've things to discuss."

The smile had vanished from her face... and a statue she was no more. In the flesh like she'd been at the beginning of the story, Famula's aura flared to cast an ethereal red light throughout the room afore she turned once more, back turned to Faith and Kura, hand gingerly grasping the handle of one of the doors to push them open---though she and her light faded out of existence in a split second, leaving the two women to their thoughts, trapped still in their sleeping bodies with their minds swimming the dreamscape with no means of return... The door continued to beckon, creeping closer to them by the second. Someone, or something, was waiting for them.

Continued here: For Those Who Serve (Faith, Kura Wolfsdotter)
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Review: Completed!
I'm Anomaly, and I come bearing gifts in the form of a thread review. The thread has been thoroughly combed and all participants have been alloted their rewards, listed below. If you can't find your name, please see the closing comments at the end of the post. Thank you!

Faith

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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

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Dreams: Famula the Secretary
Dreams: Gaining Self-Awareness
Niv: The Tunawa
Medicine: The Moukou Bean
Medicine: The Seaweed Buoy
Kura Wolfsdotter: Mortalborn of Karem

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N/A

Notes

Good job! I couldn't pinpoint any issues with your writing and it flowed effortlessly and the story was enjoyable, so I give you full marks!
Niv

Skills

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

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Dreams: Famula the Secretary
Faith: Human Slave
Slavery: Ownership of Another Being
Medicine: The Moseke Mist
Kura Wolfsdotter: Mortalborn of Karem

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N/A

Notes

Good job! No outstanding issues with your writing that I want to prod at, so you'll be given full marks.
Kura Wolfsdotter

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Story: 3/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

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Faith: The Human Slave
Niv: The Tunawa

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I deducted points for Story due to you coming into the thread very late and your posts into the thread, themselves, being rather short. What you brought to the table was still enjoyable, but it was so little that I can't confidently award full marks. :) Nevertheless, enjoy your points!

Closing comments: Something I need to make a note of is the dreaming awareness. Normally. one wouldn't actually be aware of being in a dream at all (primarily aimed at Niv, here). I will be making an announcement to address this in particular, so I won't be deducting or penalizing for it at this time, but please keep it in mind in the future. :) Overall, I enjoyed this thread. It was very quirky, as dreams go. I'm very sorry it's taken so long.

Lastly, if there are any questions or concerns about your review, send me a message as soon as you're able so we can sort it out if need be.

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