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Finn O'Connor
:: 8th of Vhalar, 717
Reviewer's note: Robin and I have given each other permission to control each other's character. These posts were crafted in a true collaborative fashion in google docs. There is no godmodding here!

Finn thought he’d never use the candle granted by Thetros. It felt wrong, treacherous almost, to make use of the Immortal’s gift. But ever since Zipper had unceremoniously dumped him in the orphanage, he'd been met with much trepidation and wariness from his peers. He was no longer the pissant at the bottom of the food chain, thriving off his sister's legacy. He was the danger now: one of only two souls who had entered Barnelby’s office without permission and lived to tell the tale. He was the one that had travelled further from Etzos than many orphans would in their lifetimes. He was the one that had spent several maddening trials in the halls of justice before his sister had dragged him back to the orphanage. He hadn't told anyone about any of these questionable achievements and yet everyone knew. In some this prompted an unprecedented level of respect. Arguments would end the moment he stepped into a room, replaced instead by a hushed silence, only to resume again when he left. Most, however, seemed to fear him more than anything.

One trial after another went by, each more fleeting and mundane than the one before it. After his morning ablutions he went straight to Doran’s laboratory and returned to his bed on the attic in the evening. There were meals in between too, but he scarcely remembered them.

It wasn't until Doran, by mistake or by kindness, let him go a little earlier than usual that he returned with a modicum of vitality in his body and spirit and was reminded of the candle. He had no particular desire to see or speak with Nir’wei, but the candle would let him share dreams with another, a more kindred spirit.

Right after the evening meal, he scurried up the stairs to the attic and retrieved the candle from a chest under his bed. It would only be a few bits before the other children would come stomping in and he didn't want to be shaken from his dream when they did. After he'd closed the chest, he moved down many flights of stairs until he reached the kitchen and asked for flint and steel to light his candle. The inevitable “why” was answered by some muttering about prayer, not exactly a fruitful endeavour in the minds of any Etzori, but not wholly forbidden either. With the candle lit, he went out the backdoors and into a small courtyard where some chickens were held in a hen house. It was small and cramped, but he fitted in regardless and the hay strewn across the floor provided some warmth and comfort at least. He sat down, leaned his head against the rickety, wooden boarding, and closed his eyes while he tried to summon the sights and smells of the sitting room, just as Thetros had instructed. Sleep didn't come easy in the presence of cackling chickens, but their noise faded eventually and he awoke in a much more comfortable leather chair, placed in the far corner of a luxurious sitting room. He wasn't sure if he could summon Robin, or if he'd simply had to hope the defier would be there. With not much else to do, he decided that perhaps thinking very hard about the young defier would help bring him there.

Finn wasn't sure if he had somehow managed to bring Robin into the dream bubble. Time was a funny thing in dreams, passing at ever fluctuating rates. And so it was after no time, or perhaps a very long time that Finn greeted the unmistakable defier's silhouette with a bright smile. How Robin had arrived and whether or not he was just a figment of the imagination became secondary thoughts as Finn welcomed Robin with a quick embrace. Even if the touch wasn't real, the message certainly was. Thirteen was the age at which such acts grew rare, and stiff and awkward in their execution. Hugs were childish and the last thing any growing boy wanted to be accused of was acting childishly. He broke contact quickly then, despite none of his peers being anywhere in sight to judge him.
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Robin held his candle. The wick alight, curling into the cream colored wax.

He didn’t trust Thetros. Robin didn’t trust people, in general, and that went double for the immortals who asked him and his for favors. And even then, Thetros hadn’t been giving with information. Empty promises and vague expectations.

The fact that Fridgar spoke so highly of him probably meant he was a rapist thug.

He sighed, alone. He was outside, on a boulder, on a hill, overlooking the city of Foster’s. A collection of wayward cobblestone streets and small, ugly hovels. A port with a few wooden docks and modest boats. A central trading hub. It smelled like one, even from here.

They live like rats,” Robin huffed, his candle flame sparked in agreement, briefly coloring an intense white. A flickering star in his hand. It warmed him. It calmed him. Robin frowned; fire had tried to cradle him to sleep before, but he wasn’t sure if the candle flame was true fire or a divine trick. He yawned.

He patted the boulder. Robin stretched out, lying flat on his back, the night sky twinkling above him.

The candle burned in the night.
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Robin held his candle. The wick alight, curling into the cream colored wax.

He was in the same desert. The brown colored dunes and the hot and heavy sun. The dry air grabbed and spun the endless sand in the wind. The sky stretched into the horizon, empty and blue.

And Finn jumped him. He stumbled, candle still in hand, imbalance obvious in this dream. He laughed as he saw Finn, red-faced and smiling. He had missed his shadow.

I met your sister,” Robin cracked an easy smile.
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Finn O'Connor
:: 8th of Vhalar, 717
Finn grimaced at the news and was about to make a vile remark about his evil sister who’d been ruining his life since the day he was born, but then didn’t. It was nothing but a tired cliche, a story he had repeated to himself a million times. Though he didn’t miss his sister much, he had entertained the idea to make amends when she returned. Now that he knew what hard work felt like, thanks to Doran, he had gained a shred of respect for her.

“And?” he asked. He hoped Robin didn’t think too poorly of him now. He walked back to the leather chair and curled up on it, drawing his knees up to his chest. “I’m glad you’re here,” he muttered, “wherever here is.” A sigh escaped him and his eyes settled on his toes, never moving back up even as he spoke directly to Robin. “What did she say about me?” he asked. “She hates me, doesn’t she? I just don’t know what she wants me to do.”

Robin’s smile weakened at the corners. “She doesn’t hate you,” he tried desperately to keep the pity out of his voice. He scrunched it up, pushing it deep into his stomach and lower and lower and lower. He scratched his head lazily. His eyes looked anywhere but Finn’s.

“How would you know?” Finn demanded to know. “D’you have a brother or sister?”

He nodded. “Her name is Felicia,” or was, he realized, his expression souring. He hadn’t heard anything from her in the past few seasons -- not that he blamed her. He was the one who left, after all. Robin sighed, sitting down in the loose sand. It was warm. “We were close, before…” Hans? Victor’s death? Robin left Ne’haer? “She’s good though. She’s got her magic and her wits. She’ll be fine,” he echoed these things whenever he thought of her. He wasn’t needed anymore -- not that he’d ever been. Felicia had always been the more capable between the two. “You two would’ve gotten along, I think,” he almost laughed. Finn and Felicia, scouring the world for corpses and mischief. Zipper would hate the idea.

“Maybe,” Finn shrugged.”I don’t know her and I don’t have magic either.”

With Zipper, it was always about outwitting the other, about coming up with the most vile insults. It was a tiresome exercise, and the biggest reason why he was loathe to be around her. Robin was much different. He didn’t even need to say anything. Robin would simply understand the implication.
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Would you want magic?” Robin asked, his lips curling into a sly smile. Victor had asked him the same question, once long ago. He’d been younger than Finn, quieter and demure. Magic had been the catalyst to his freedom. “The wind missed you. It whined like a baby when we left for Foster’s,” he laughed, remembering. The elements were mercurial creatures, the winds especially. It was an honor, he thought, to have won the attention of one of the four.
Finn snorted. “Want?” Robin might as well have asked him if he wanted to be free. Free from the orphanage, free from his sister, and free from the tyranny of the Immortals. He bit down on his lips, a steely resolve coming to his eyes. “I want nothing else but…” he lowered his chin to his chest. “I don’t think I’m brave enough,” he confessed. “I’ve heard you’ve got to rip an unborn child from the womb with your bare hands and eat its beating heart before you can become a mage.” He looked up to Robin, finding it difficult to believe that his light-hearted friend could’ve done such a thing.

“Zipper told you that,” he said, a tired accusation. “It isn’t true,” he sighed, knowing the reality of magic wasn’t much better. He’d been buried alive. Others had been burnt at the stake or thrown to the winds and sea. “A man, a hedge wizard, took me in when I was young. My parents weren’t around,” another sigh. “Initiation isn’t killing babies or eating hearts, but it’s not exactly easy. He buried me.”

Finn’s jaw slackened. “He what-?” He should have known Zipper had made the story about blood sacrifice up, but for once, her rendition of the truth wasn’t that far removed from reality. Burial didn’t sound very appealing though. He scrunched up his nose and eyed Robin with a curious stare, half-expecting the young defier to burst into a fit of laughter at his naivety. But no laughter came. “You’re serious?” Finn pressed.

Robin kicked his right boot into the loose sand. The suns dazzled the world in sharp golden light. “I thought I was going to die,” he stood in silence, the wind spinning around them, tousling their hair. “The water likes you. Its offered before, to give you magic. You’d just have to promise yourself in return.”
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“So I won’t have to be buried?” Finn asked. It didn’t seem right. There had to be a catch. Some regarded magic as a taint, a force wholly against nature and a cruel violation of the human soul. Some of those people had tended to him in the orphanage, and had oft warned against magic. To take on magic was to succumb to the temptation of unnatural power. At least, so they had said. Few ever considered how such a stance benefitted the shadowy puppet master of Etzos.

Finn slipped to the edge of the seat. “What kind of promise? What would you have me do?”

Robin smiled but it never reached his eyes. A part of him knew Victor had been wrong: he’d been too young; desperate to survive; all too willing to say yes. “You’ll have to trust the water,” he shrugged, “We could do it at the Foster’s port. You’d jump in and then…,” well, he either came out a mage or he drowned.

“Think about it, really,” Finn was smart. He’d survived Zipper after all, he knew the dangers and tricks of magic. “You won’t be human any more. Not fully,” A small price, but a cost most wouldn’t bear with -- why magic was so rare.

Finn narrowed his eyes. He trusted Robin more, far more, than anyone else. Their time shared on the road from Uthaldria to Etzos had seen to that. It only served to make Robin’s omission of what exactly he was supposed to do all the more alarming.

He slipped off the edge of his seat and let his feet sink into the sand. Emea was a strange place and their surroundings appeared to have morphed into a beach. He heard the call of rolling waves and seagulls in the distance. “I want to,” he confessed as he mulled some sand over with his feet, “but it sounds dangerous. Are you sure-? Is it-? Is it safe?”
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“No, it’s not. You could die,” he watched as the sea and clouds and the birds rolled into the scene. The air was saturated with salt and humidity. “The water wants you, but you have to trust it. You have to accept it. I…,” he sighed in frustration. There was only so much he could explain. “I was ten when he buried me. It was dark and I was desperate. I said yes because I had to -- and you’ll say yes because you have to,” Robin loved the elements. But what had happened hadn’t been his choice. “I’m letting you know now, because if we start it, there isn’t going back. You’ll die if you fight it.”

Concern marred his face and for a while he remained silent, frozen on the spot, his gaze fixed on some distant point on the horizon. Then he stirred again, a light showed in his eyes. “I think I’m in luck,” he smiled faintly. “Zipper thinks I’m shit at fighting.”

He sensed something warm on his hands. A steady, hot drip splashing down on his hands. Yet he could not detect the source on his Emean form. He heard the cackling of chickens, smelled the scent of moist straw. The dream was fading. He stepped closer to Robin, even as the dream started to slip further and further away. Small digits rested on Robin’s shoulder as he leaned forward and whispered into Robin’s ear. “We’ll keep it our secret, yeah?”

Robin gave him a smile. “Sure. Just as long as you survive.”
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Finn

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I really enjoy Finn's character. Vulnerable and yet - he's just becoming himself. Will he take on the magic? I suspect so and I'm really looking forward to seeing that thread / those threads. His sense of detachment, his inability to fit in anywhere but to sit in a dream and be honest with Robin is really well played. Good work!

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This felt like a very different sort of thread for Robin from the few I've reviewed before. He was in the role of friend / mentor / big brother here; intrinsically honest and trying to be protective whilst supporting Finn in his decisions. I really like how he's portrayed here and I really felt for him at the description of being buried so young. Poor Robin!

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