Peer Review
Teddy Venora
Knowledge
Faith: Tristan's Slave
Faith: Pretty
Faith: Strong fighter
Tristan's Cat: Annoying
Tristan: Would not brand his own slave
Loot: None
Injury: Hurt ego! Jk
Fame: General good deed: +1 (sparing the life of a slave, considering he was assaulted by her)
Story: 3/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Comment:
Teddy has an interesting superiority complex and he is delightfully insufferable. I thought you played the character very well, even when attacked by a slave, he could only laugh as if his life were so dull that anything to break the drudgery would be welcome. Look forward to reading more.
The thread is unfinished (in my view) and felt it could have continued on. Perhaps you two decided to end it since the conflict was resolved?
Faith
Knowledge
Master's House: Areas Unclean
Teddy Venora: Master's Brother
Teddy Venora: Wimpy
Master's Cat: Small and Evil
Brand: Still Painful
Fear: Brings on Recklessness
Loot: None
Injury: None
Fame:
Story: 3/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Comment:
I was interesting that Faith had a realness to her behind this facade of an obedient slave. Couple this with the idea of two individuals on either end of the social structure, the misunderstanding Faith had made things quite fun. This conundrum between trusting the intruder or attacking was played realistically in my view. The part where Faith decided to attack Teddy had me laughing, especially concerning the brush flung at him. Hope to read more of her slave-capades.
As remarked on Teddy's comments, the thread felt unfinished and could have gone further.
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