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Summons to the judicial offices were not uncommon for members of the Iron Hand. Reports on arrests, warrants, bounties and court judgements all seemed to pass through the chambers at some point or another. Shuffled from room to room to be read by clerks, checked for consistency. Reports were added to files and moved on. Important cases were then passed to more senior staff to comb through. It was a narrow building beside the University and it was filled with neatly dress men and woman. Though the scent of parchment dust and ink seemed to always permeate the air. Some cases found their way to the Judges.
Down a long and winding corridor was a suit of rooms for Judge Burhan. An antechamber with mis-matched furniture. There was a desk by the door, manned by two clerks. Bent over their work. Leather armchairs, a carved wooden bench turned dark by centuries of oil. Books piles on tables, history, astronomy and legal texts. Visitors to the Judge were often kept waiting in the chamber for extended periods of time. The clerks liked to place bets how far they’d manage to flick through one of the ancient tomes before they were summoned through the door. A Venoran widow had once managed three quarters of the ‘Illustrated Skies of Rynlism.’ It had been a record. The scratch of quills on paper marked the passing of time, along with the distant echo of footfalls.
A woman exited the large wooden door with a tray. She turned to study the man before her. Grey hair was swept back into the ever-fashionable victory curls and her dark eyes were piercing.
“The judge will see you now,” she informed Malcolm Krome and bustled down the hallway. Shoes clicking on the floor boards.
Beyond the door to the Judge’s office was a veritable library of books. Long windows looked over the University grounds on the Eastern wall. Behind a wide desk was an ancient map of the world, missing some of the known continents of Idalos. Pavoo was sat, studying the stack of files and papers before him. He looked up as the door opened and straightened. He rested his elbows on the desk. A slender man he wore a neat jacket over a crisp shirt. Dark hair was well groomed and matched by the rich brown tones in his eyes. His beard trimmed to a point beneath his chin.
He waited for Malcolm to advance, expression devoid of judgement or emotion. Once the man was close enough he gestured to the empty chair, “sit if you would, Ser.”
Pavoo sifted through the papers before him, pulling aside the brilliant pale leaves. Many of them covered in Malcolm’s own handwriting. Neat rows of reports and facts and findings from his past arcs as a Captain of the Iron Hand. Older papers from his time in Burhan.
“I hear you want to arrest my son?” Pavoo looked up.
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Malcolm took up the doorway, tall, he walked in with only a few inches between himself and the wooden frame, shoulders draped in a thick, wolfskin cloak. He looked tired, but then most knights did, brow heavy and furrowed. The mortalborn was not quite sure why he had been summoned, and by Judge Burhan of all people. He took up the offered seat, the worn leather groaning under his weight as the door was pulled to behind him by the man’s secretary.
“Among others, my lord, my own son, Marcus Krome, and his mother, my late wife Vanessa Krome, if indeed the rumours are true, that she is still of this world. There is also a long report there on a man by the name of Yoreth Blackwood, a man I tracked to Ne’haer only to find he had found his way back into Rynmere without going through the correct authorities, and thus his name and was never recorded.”
He studied the man across the desk from him, thin and dark of features, just like his daughter, warm brown eyes giving little away. Malcolm’s own posture was relaxed, one father speaking to another, his arms rested against that of the chair, fingers curled against the small, bronze studs that held the leather in pace. He could only imagine the man's shame, one they probably shared in doing all they could to raise two fine boys, only to have a lifetime of hard work and dedication thrown back in their faces.
Marcus had been greedy, selfish, and cunning with his actions to aid the rebellion, and Malcolm had been led to believe that Edmund too had been involved. Of course, it was entirely possible that the judge felt no guilt or shame, that he believed his son was completely innocent. Malcolm would have quite happily liked to believe the same, but hope and sense were bitter enemies on this battlefield, and being a man of the law, the knight believed lord Burhan to be rather rational in his thinking.
”Not without your blessing, my lord.”
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Pavoo listened with care. He ran nails over the stubble on his jaw, thoughtful. “If indeed the rumours are true, then you were wrongly sentenced to trial at the arena. I’ll be honest with you, Ser. If your arrest had crossed my desk, you would have seen trial in court before seeing Arena sand. The speed of your judgement concerns me. It renders me suspicious of the evidence presented and the truth of facts presented. It makes me believe that you were never supposed to live and therefore someone would still want you dead. If your wife is still alive, I can’t help but feel the wrong has been done to you. Would you have me issue a warrant for the arrest of Vanessa Krome?”
He waited for the answer to be given. “Marcus Krome, Edmund Burhan and a handful of other names young men and women who joined the Sailors with good intentions to serve the crown. Young people who decided to seek their own glory and a change to established order.” He lent back in his chair, scanned the endless bookshelf behind him before another file was pulled out. He opened the cover and slid his fingers over the worn parchment.
“Noble children who were elected to serve under an experienced and guiding hand. Someone to protect them and teach them. Yoreth Blackwood seems to have been a busy man. He served with your son and my own, and the majority of those other youngsters who joined Qe’Dreki ranks.” The file was pushed over the desk for Malcolm to examine if he chose.
Pavoo lent back in his chair once more, fingertips left on the desk, “young men make mistakes, but we are not young men – are we, Malcolm? It seems there was a venomous snake in the ocean. I have hope that if the head can be removed then the net will untangle.” The judge had a deep voice, heavy with gravel. “By your own admission you’ve already tracked Blackwood across Idalos and back again. I wonder if you are prepared to continue your quarry and assist in the capture and arrest of rebels and their leaders? I understand you are recently returned from Ne’haer and Rynmere offers less exotic travels. But we are all threatened by serpents left hiding in long grass.”
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Malcolm did not answer the judge, choosing not to act with haste but take in the facts. He picked up the folder containing information on Yoreth and his family, including his wife and son, who Malcolm had decided were probably somewhere in Rynmere with the man. At the thought of Vanessa, he felt the long, twisted scar across his side and belly burn, it still gave him trouble and coursed him discomfort from time to time, but none so much as when he thought of Vanessa. Could she have truly been behind this, was she so cruel?
The judge hoped to save his son in taking out the kingpin, Yoreth. Malcolm was not so sure this would see the desires of misguided youth dissolve so readily, but he hoped with all his heart that his own son was not the monster he feared, something lord Burhan probably wished to think of his own boy. How much did he know? Malcolm wondered as he looked Pavoo in the eye; of Elyna and Marcus, Vanessa, everything.
The knight closed the folder, done with it. “I share your concerns and I am not convinced for a moment that my life is safe. I was starved before I went into the area with no weapon to face two armoured and armed men before being chained to the most hated man in the capital.” Whether Thomas Endor had been truly hated by the masses or not didn't matter, people hated those with power, and loved nothing more than to see them fall. “After that I was only set free because lady Elyna paid a handsome fee to get me out, without her I wouldn't be sitting in front of you now. I believe I would have rotted in those cells, if I didn't die of infection first. Whoever organised that is still alive and I have no way of knowing where the next arrow will be fired from.”
Malcolm straightened in the chair and leaned forward. “I want a warrant for the arrest of Vanessa and Marcus Krome, Edmund Burhan, Zvezdana Venora, Vivian Warrick, and Yoreth Blackwood. I want a fair trial for the sons and daughters of nobles houses, and their noble titles stripped regardless of the outcome of those hearings. I want Vanessa Krome and Yoreth Blackwood to hang, and I want my youngest son, Vaughn Krome, to inherit my previous title as Baron of Krome.”
The folder was pushed back across the desk before Malcolm spoke a final time. “I am one man, and if you intend to send me to claim the head of the snake, I will go willingly, but I need men to bring these people back to you.” He wondered what lord Burhan must think of him, to speak of such a fate for his wife. She had poisoned him in cold blood, had seen that he went through a very unfair trial by combat, painted him as a murderer, and done something terrible to Elyna, though he couldn't be sure what. Everyone deserved a second chance, but Vanessa Krome had long outlive her nine lives. “I also need time,” he felt ashamed to ask for it, but perhaps Pavoo of all people would understand his reasoning. “I need to be here in Andaris at least until the end of the season, for lady Elyna.”
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The Judge met Malcolms gaze without flinching. Searching his expression without giving his thoughts away. The Judge had been master of his profession for decades and despite the more personal nature of their discussion he was famed for his equitable use of the law. He remained silent, raising a brow in surprise as Malcolm mentioned Elyna’s payment for his release. New information.
Malcolm made his requests and quick notes were jotted down. A list of warrants to construct and issue. It was a hard look that returned to the Mortalborn man. “Despite your trial in the arena you remain a respected officer of Rynmere,” he gestured to the files stacked around the desk, “your work has been completed to an exemplary level and your team of Knights well managed. You have the skills, the knowledge and the experience of a commander, Krome. As a Judge of Rynmere and in the service of King Cassander, I feel vindicated in my reasons for summoning you here today. I am able to bestow on you the title of Warden of the North. You will have the command of a hundred men and women of the Iron Hand,” a brief smile seemed to play on his features before they hardened once more. “The warrants will be issued, as you have requested. I expect that where possible they are returned alive, to face trial. You are a commander, Krome, not judge and executioner.”
“As a man in service to the crown, I can’t afford you the time you request. However, a battalion will take time to recruit, train and provision. In service to the crown I ask that you act with all haste to bring traitors back,” it was then that the Burhan Baron lent back once more.
“I hear that my daughter is pregnant by a man who is already married. I hear that no one is able to account for her movements between Ymiden and Saun. I’m told that she killed my brother, Veljorn in cold blood. Of the words I hear from her lips, I could not tell you – because I have heard none,” the slender man stood behind his desk. Gathering the paperwork into neater piles. “Make the most of your time, Warden. I will ask that your rewards are delivered to your home in Mid-town…I presume you accept your new commission?”
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Malcolm hadn't known what to expect, but for the judge to approve everything bar one wish that was outside of his control, left the knight speechless for a brief time. He understood that he would be expected to act quickly, but a hundred knights would take at least the season is not a little longer to recruit and train to a level of experience that would see them all home safe again. In all of Malcolm’s years as a knight, he had but one strike against his name and that had been the unexpected loss of Simon.
Judge Pavoo got to his feet while Malcolm remained momentarily glued to his chair. No one could account for Elyna’s whereabouts between Ymiden and the end of Saun? This news did not sit with him well and his thoughts went back to the two letters he had received from the young squire Rafael. If the boy had known she was missing, how had everyone else missed it?
Malcolm got to his feet quickly, it would not be right to outstay his welcome, and there was no doubt in his mind that lord Burhan was a busy man. “I do accept, my lord, the warrants will be carried out with no justice served by my hand… there was just one more, a deserter by the name of Heath Lane.” He wanted to tell the man that he had thought Vanessa dead at the time he had proposed to Elyna, but the truth was by their wedding day he had known something was amiss, and so he said what he was willing to see done. “All will be made right, thank you for your time, my lord.”
As Malcolm turned the door handle to leave the office, he was met by the clerk who was on her way in to announce that the next person in the waiting room was ready to be seen if the judge had time. The knight slipped by her with a backward glance, catching the sight of Pavoo against the soft light that lit up the tall windows at his back. He felt angry with himself then, he had encouraged Elyna to choose between him and her family without realising that her family consisted of such an honourable man as her father Pavoo. It was strange to think that he had gone all these years in a similar role, acting Baron of Krome, and yet had little to do with the Burhan's, preferring to stay as far away from politics as possible.
He walked down the hall to exit the building as the Warden of the North, a title very few could challenge or ever lay claim to. A season, he thought, one season of hard work to complete all of the warrants he had been assigned, and he would be a lord again. What would his students think, and what would Elyna make of the new title? Malcolm didn't know whether to smile or frown, on the one hand he had just been promoted, but on the other, it all came at a cost, one that would change his family forever.
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Knowledge:
Location: Judicial Offices
Location: Pavoo Burhan’s Office
A summons by Pavoo Burhan
Promotion: Warden of the North
Leadership: Doing the right thing, though it will cost you
Leadership: Seeking Permissions
Elyna: Missing from Ymiden to Saun
Elyna: Killed Veljorn Burhan
Elyna: Won’t speak to Pavoo
Marcus: Your shame
Pavoo Burhan: Rational thinker
Pavoo Burhan: Judge of Rynmere
Pavoo Burhan: Elyna’s Father
Pavoo Burhan: Would not have sent you to the arena
Pavoo Burhan: Believes your life is in danger
Pavoo Burhan: Knows Vanessa is alive
Pavoo Burhan: An honourable man
Yoreth Blackwood: Recruiter for Qe’Dreki
Yoreth Blackwood: Head of the dragon?
Vanessa: Memories hurt your scar
Negotiation: Take time to collect your thoughts
Warden: A Commander, not an executioner

Task Task: the arrest of Yoreth Blackwood, Vanessa Krome, Marcus Kromes, Heath Lane, Edmund Burhan, Vivian Warrick & Zvezdana Venora

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Loot: Warrants for the arrests of: Yoreth Blackwood, Vanessa Krome, Marcus Kromes, Heath Lane, Edmund Burhan, Vivian Warrick & Zvezdana Venora

A two handed bastard sword. The hilt is wrapped in black leather and engraved with silver filigree to match the sheath. At the top of the sheath is the symbol of Rynmere. The design etched into the blade beneath. On the reverse of the blade the following virtues are written in Draketh: Thou shalt not Forget. Thou shalt be Just. Thou shalt Endure.
This may be kept or sold for a value no greater than 100gn

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Hooray! Congrats to Malcolm! I certainly enjoyed writing this thread. Your contribution was wonderful and helped build a real sense of the world. I loved that Malcolm remained true to his original character and determined to serve as a Knight. I could see the different ways that he was being pulled in and the conflicting decisions he has been forced to make. Thanks for the words!

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