[Job Thread] "Guard Duty?"

Fridgar gets hired for guard duty.

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Why in Ilaren's name had he taken this job? Stand outside a door at the start of freaking Cylus of all seasons? He should have just hibernated like the last arc - though Eric hadn't approved and he doubted Rey'na would have either. He groaned, releasing a cloud of hot white air into the darkened trial. What was there even to guard from? Most citizens were at home, cuddled around the hearth - what sort of madman would go out in this weather? Oh, that's right - Fridgar would. Shivering, he looked about the streets of lowtown - not another soul in sight. He put his hands together and rubbed for friction before breathing his warm breath into his palms. Immediately after, he threw his hands into his warm pockets. There had to be a way to fight this cold, this was the last break of the shift. He considered becoming a bear, but felt that the cons outweighed the pros. Perhaps he could exercise somehow?

He looked about the empty streets on the spot for a heavy object but found none. He groaned. Guard duty was the absolute worst. It was even worse in Cylus though, all he wanted was an open fire, maybe some shelter from the cold winds. was that too much to ask? Apparently so. He was so absorbed in the cold and his daydream that he nearly hadn't noticed the shady guy sneaking up behind him for the door to the tavern. The brush of the man's clothing against his own alerted him to his presence. Fridgar turned and put a hand out to stop the hooded figure "Whoa, take the hood off first, buddy." he blocked off the entrance, towering over the smaller person. They said nothing and instead turned to walk away. Fridgar remained alert, especially as the man slowed down on his turn, he assumed his fighting stance

He'd expected some form of fight to be made, but not the knife that the hooded fellow drew on him. The blade cut into his leather jacket before Fridgar punched him with a right cross and sent him to the floor, holding his nose. Without a second to spare, Fridgar appropriated the knife and the assailant scrambled to his feet and ran off. 'What the hell?' he asked himself with a smirk and looked to the knife. He didn't know much about knives, only that they were sharp and that you stick people with pointy end, but Rey liked knives. Maybe she'd like this one? he'd have to tell Rufus about the incident at the end of the shift though, maybe not about the fact that he was keeping the knife.
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Stood once again in the cold silence, Fridgar couldn't help but ponder what the hooded figure was after. It must've been important, for them to have come down to the tavern through the Cylus morning and try to force entry AND THEN start a fight with a Lothar. Whatever they were after, it couldn't have been good. The knife he now carried only seemed to back up his thought process, why did they need that in a tavern of all places? Hell, even assuming the worst that they were trying to assassinate someone, who was there to assassinate? He'd only let a handful of people into the building.

A familiar burn crept up in his chest, forcing a sharp cough from his lungs. He barely managed to curse before coughing again, this round was vicious. There was something wrong with him, but what? It couldn't have been damage left over from warren, could it? No, he'd completely recovered by the 50th of Zi'da. This had started sometime after. Whatever it was, he didn't have time to consider it further. The hooded figure had returned with a friend - not good, both were wearing similar hoods and cloaks, it was difficult to distinguish which one he'd punched prior. "You're still not coming in." he barked with a cough. The two stopped in unison a good 5 metres in front of him "Give me back my knife." demanded the one on the left with a loud whisper, making them the one that had tried to stab him.

Fridgar chuckled "No." he coughed abruptly, taking a step back and assuming his fight stance. The fact that the person had spoken in a whisper made it difficult to distinguish their gender. The two looked at one another for a few trills before returning their gaze to him and walking forward. The one on the right drew a knife, like the one he carried while the one on the left popped their knuckles - they really wanted to get into the tavern, that much was certain. Without flinching, Fridgar raised his fists and used the blades of his forearms for defence. 'Hey, Ilaren. Watch this, it's gonna be good.' he prayed briefly before the left hood rushed him suddenly, charging with surprising speed and punching him straight in the chest. Fridgar gripped them by the wrist and threw them in a swing into the other hood, knocking them both to the snow like a pair of pins. Widening his stance once more, Fridgar put his hand out and inched his fingers toward him in a way that spoke 'Come at me' while they struggled to stand.
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The knife wielder leaped at him from the ground before swiftly meeting a fist to the face, knocking him to the side and to the floor. "Come on, is that all you punks have got?" he mocked, grinning briefly before coughing once more. His mouth filled with the taste and scent of copper, 'Blood?' he pondered before spitting to the floor. The snow turned red at the impact of the spit - not good. While he was distracted, the first hooded figure leapt at him, diving on his hunched over form and nearly forcing him to his knees. With an explosive motion, he threw the hooded figure into the tavern wall with a sharp elbow to the chest. A feminine cry of pain escaped the hooded figure, making his eyes widen with surprise "You're a *cough* chic?" he asked while holding her there.

The other hooded dude jumped up onto his back and wrapped their arm around fridgar's throat and pulled. he at first tried to fight the inabillity to breath, but later decided to fight the dude instead by thrashing his back into the wall of the tavern and knocking the assailant off of him. It occurred to him that the assailant didn't have their knife anymore, he'd surely be bleeding out otherwise. Coughing violently at the man's release, more blood painted his teeth and gums. He spat it to the snow before turning around and gripping the hooded fellow by the scruff of their clothes and pinning him to the wall, snarling ferally. Without mercy, he threw punch after punch into the hooded figure's head. Blow after blow forced his head to knock into the wall. The female assailant he'd left screamed "NO PLEASE, DON'T! YOU'RE KILLING HIM!! STOP!!" she shrieked, falling to her knees at his side.

he looked to her with confusion, slamming his fist into the stone beside the apparent male's head with a grunt. The girl had sounded an awful lot like his sister, Lilly, whenever Robek had been too rough with him. Her voice gave him chills. With his anger shrouded by curiosity, fridgar pulled the male's hood down to reveal a boy about the age of 17, an aukari. His face was blackened with bruises and cut open in parts 'Oh god, what have I done?' raced his thoughts, he immediately released the boy, sending him to his knees in the snow. His eyes wide in horror, he looked to the kneeling girl and demanded "Take your hood off, now." with a growl in his voice. She complied almost instantly, pulling her hood down to reveal a teary eyed, 15 year old Aukari female.

His heart sank into the pit of his stomach "Why?" he spoke in a pained tone, shaking his head briefly before darting his eyes between the two with shame. "What made you so desperate to get into a bar, that you tried to fight me!?" he roared at the two, earning a startled jump from the girl and a glance from the male. They looked at each other for a second and the male shook his head in disagreement before the female spoke "We were gonna rob it..." she confessed, casting her eyes to the snow.
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Fridgar shook his head, putting his hands to his hips and looking away from the two. 'This can't be happening.' churned his thoughts. "You need the money, don't you?" He asked without looking to the pair. The male coughed and sputtered before sitting up against the wall he'd previously been pinned to "Yeah... We do." he spoke in a sort of haze, the poor boy was probably concussed. "And your parents?" Fridgar asked, still not looking to the pair - he already knew the answer, but needed to hear it. "We don't have any." The boy spoke with the kind of sorrow he'd often heard his younger siblings speak with after their mother had passed.

One of his hands shifted from his hip to his mouth as he started to choke up. Kids. Why did it have to be kids? If they were adults, he would have pummelled them without relent, but children? No way. "I'm so sorry to hear that..." he spoke, clearing his throat. "Mister? are you... crying?" asked the female as Fridgar's eyes moistened. "No, I'm not." he growled through the burn in his throat, he was blatantly crying. "Why do you need the money?" He asked, looking to the two floored children at last. "Food..." spoek the female, looking down with shame. "Shelter..." spoke the male in turn, putting one of his hands to his throbbing head.

"You're homeless?" he asked, he'd already anticipated this but it was upsetting to hear none-the-less. The two looked to each other, the boy nodded sharply before resting his head against the wall. "We ran here from Krome in Vhalar. After..." she choked up. With her lower lip quivering, she cast her head into her palms, shaking softly. "...After mom and dad passed away." continued the boy, inching himself over to his sister and wrapping his arms around her. She returned his embrace, casting herself into him with silent tears running down her cheeks - real tears. As any parent would know, a loud cry was for attention and a silent one was of pain. He'd practically raised his younger siblings for half of his life - this was a real cry, a painful one to watch too.

"He killed them!" she screamed before burying her face in her brothers cloak. Wiping his own tears with his sleeve, Fridgar asked "Who killed them!?" with a ferocious snarl. "A bad man that mom and dad owed. His name is Gideon Maverick." spoke the boy, the only one who wasn't crying out of the three of them. 'Take note of that name and don't you dare forget it, dude. Gideon Maverick, he'll scream for this.' Fridgar turned from the two "For the past two seasons, you two have survived on the streets. Caring and watching out for one another through poverty and the bitter cold. All because this 'Gideon Maverick' took everything you had..." he spoke, wiping more tears from his eyes. "Yeah, we have." the boy spoke. The boy was strong, he had to be for his little sister. Just as Fridgar had been nearly a dozen arcs ago, he probably didn't think anything of it - but he stood out to the Lothar.

Without hesitating, Fridgar reached into his pocket and withdrew an onyx nel before turning around and putting it in the palm of the Aukari boy. The boy's eyes lit up in protest, seeming to snap him from his haze a little. "We can't accep-!" "YES! YOU CAN! Fridgar cut him off mid-sentence. The boy looked up at him with fear for a moment before nodding his head. The girl jumped at his roar, looking to him fearful before down at her brother’s palm with confusion. "But we tried to kill you...?" she sobbed with a confused tone. "I don't care." he spoke, leaning over slightly before kneeling to be eye level with them. "You two go buy yourselves a house, food to last you the season and then find jobs. If ever you need anything, anything at all: I live in a cabin out in the woods, but I'm at this tavern every few trials." he maintained eye contact with the two with every word.

The two stared at him with disbelief. Within trills, the boy had started tearing up. It was only brief however, before long they'd thrown themselves into Fridgar, hugging him tight. "Thank you so much...!" sobbed the boy into his shoulder. "Mister, we don't even know your name..." cried the girl into his other shoulder. With watery eyes, Fridgar returned their hugs "Fridgar. My name is Fridgar, and who are you two?". A moment of silence passed before the male spoke "Austin." the female followed after with "Gwen..". Fridgar pulled the two from him gently and spoke "Well then, Austin and Gwen, let's find your other knife. And here's your other one back, too." before giving Gwen back her dagger and searching through the snow for Austin's. Once he'd found it, he returned it to Austin.

"You two be good now, no more robbing taverns, okay?" he asked with a smile, helping the two to their feet. They nodded in unison, both very solemn. "Good, now go buy a house. I'll see you around, okay?" he spoke with a smile, waving them off. "Thanks again, Fridgar!" Austin shouted back with a wave. Gwen followed suit "Bye Fridzy!" she called out, waving her hand as they turned a corner. The lothar laughed gently 'Fridzy? What, does she think you're a softy?' She probably did in all fairness, and would she be wrong? he sighed before Rufus opened the door to the tavern and spoke "Oh, Fridgar! Your shift ended 30 bits ago! Thanks for taking up the merc-work by the way, here's your nel." he spoke before handing Fridgar a pouch of 20 gold nel. "Oh, it's no problem, Rufus. It’s only fair after the hell I stirred here last season. Thanks for the second chance!" he spoke before walking off with a wave.

'A second chance, huh... Some people just deserve second chances, I guess.' he wondered with Austin and Gwen in mind. 'But people like Robek and Gideon Maverick... They're something else.' His fist clenched into a ball, his lips curling into a snarl at the thought. Within trills, he released his fist and walked into town, he had a few things to pick up before heading home to Rey'na.
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Name: Fridgar

Knowledge:
Location: Andaris
Location: The Blacksmith Arms
Rufus: Owner of The Blacksmith Arms
Self: Your weakness is children
Gideon Maverick: Murdered the parents of two aukari children in Krome during Vhalar 716
Austin & Gwen: Their parents were murdered by Gideon Maverick
Austin & Gwen: Homeless aukari siblings in Andaris
Austin & Gwen: Indebted to you
Detection: Be aware of the movement around you
Interrogation: Use a loud voice to scare the answer out of your target
Psychology: A loud child’s cry is a request for attention, a silent one is real
Philosophy: Some people deserve second chances, but others are just evil
Intimidation: Use your height to intimidate others
Intimidation: Use a loud voice to intimidate others
Unarmed Combat: Standard fighting stance
Unarmed Combat: A good punch to the head can cause serious injury

Loot: -1 onyx nel, +20 gn
Injuries: You find yourself coughing up blood on and off for the next few trials. You should probably get that looked at!
Fame: +2 for giving a gift (nel), +3 for timely delivery of needed goods (nel), +4 for victory in single combat
Devotion: +3 to Ilaren for winning a brawl in Ilaren’s name, +1 to Ilaren for protecting a tavern from being robbed

Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 0/5
Structure: 5/5
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Comments: This was an entertaining read, Fridgar! I don't think I've reviewed one of your threads before, and I'm glad I got a chance to. Your character is quite imposing while also being incredibly sensitive. I really enjoyed the contrast between his loud, roaring voice and the tears streaming down his face when he was talking to the aukari. And oh my -- giving away an onyx nel to two strangers?! Fridgar definitely needs a financial advisor to help him manage his money, haha. Very sweet, though.

One piece of feedback I'd like to share: I deducted a point from Story for overplaying your character’s skill. While you have a good amount of unarmed combat knowledge and an expert level of Strength, please keep in mind that your character only has 4 XP in Unarmed Combat. This makes him quite unskilled. It’s difficult to imagine that he would be able to pull off any sort of skilled moves in a fight against two attackers - one of whom has a knife. Going forward, I would encourage you to play to your skill level while you work on adding more points into Unarmed Combat.

Overall, however, this was a fun thread to read! I look forward to your next one.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
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