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As Yrmellyn asked him about his experience, the Mortalborn calmly looked into her eyes for a moment before he replied, “I was a warrior and stood on a battlefield before I decided to dedicate my life to the study of alchemy and chemistry. I believe that in order to reach one’s full potential it is necessary to exercise one’s mind as well as one’s body. Physical weakness, Miss Cole, is an undesirable trait in my opinion.” His voice was a hint harsher as he said the last sentence. He despised weakness, physical and mental weakness, in himself and in others, and he had no respect for those that neglected themselves or wallowed in self-pity.

She sounded so excited as she imagined all the things she would be able to do with alchemy, and his mood softened somewhat as a consequence. He enjoyed discussing his work as much as any of his colleagues or perhaps even more so, especially with somebody that had as sharp a mind as the mortal painter. “I could really make such potions, with a little time and effort”, he replied. “I would never claim to be capable of something that I do in truth not know anything about.” He paused for a moment before he continued, “I do not have any such potions here however. I would have to create them from scratch. If you are truly interested, perhaps I could give you a brief demonstration at a later date.”

Meeting her again would be risky, he realized, especially now that he knew that she was a mage and could quite possibly look into his soul. But there was a part of him, that proud and arrogant and slightly narcissistic part, that wanted to show off his creations, that wanted to be admired and respected for what he did. Even he was not entirely without flaws.

“No”, he said again, firmly. “Alchemy is not magic. It does not require an initiation. Everybody could theoretically become an alchemist, although I would advise against it. Not everybody should become an alchemist. I would be loath to scratch somebody’s remains off the walls because they decided to experiment with substances that they shouldn’t have handled and blew themselves up in the process.” He was not talking about her of course. She did quite possibly have what it took. He was talking about those children that sometimes showed up in his office and demanded to be taught things that were much too complicated for them.

“That, Miss Cole, is up for debate”, he replied as she insisted that her soul was changed, but not broken. Despite that statement he didn’t look down on her or thought her a freak. He found the choices she had made to be rather questionable though.

As he spoke he wondered if it would be possible to study the soul, the spark, to find out what exactly happened when somebody gave in to the temptation of magic – and to find it out without sacrificing one’s own soul. It was a topic he would have to think about in more detail once their meeting had ended, he decided. He needed to know more about her kind.

“Blind faith and blind worship are never good ideas”, he retorted as she pointed out that most people admired and worshipped the Immortals. What powers could compare to theirs? What powers indeed? His powers. If he honed his abilities – and if he found a way to do so without sacrificing his longevity - if he made use of the gifts that Syroa had given to him, then he would eventually be his father’s match. But Yrmellyn would never know of the secret ambition of the man in front of her unless she decided to make use of her magic after all.

“You do have a point though”, he continued. “If that man, that all-powerful man turned out to want to change the world for the better supporting him and worshipping him might be worthy of being considered. Although, as we concluded before, what is good and what is evil is up for debate, and his intentions may not be as pure as they seem at first.”
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The professor calmly looked into her eyes.

Yrmellyn looked back.

Somehow she didn’t feel surprised to hear that he found physical weakness undesirable. He spoke calmly, but here was a streak of harshness in his voice. It wasn’t too hard to imagine Doran as a warrior on a battlefield. Yrmellyn wondered how young he had been at the time though, if it had been before he became a scholar. How many years did it take to become so skilled in chemistry that it was possible to be a university professor? Perhaps not as many years as she had imagined. Maybe it was possible to get there at around at the age of around 30 arcs if somebody was very talented and started in the lower twenties? It seemed like a really fast carreer, but Yrmellyn didn’t know enough about scholars and the education system to be able to question it.

“I’m not physically weak” she informed him. “And I’m not squeamish, definitely not squeamish.” She used the coal to outline a few more details on the portrait while she spoke. “However, I don’t think it’s weak to be intelligent enough to choose your battles. When people are self-overestimating it’s just stupid, and more often than not it ends badly and they come out of their ill-adviced quarrels as bitter losers, ranting impotently at their fate. I’ve seen it many times. Strong people tend to overrate themselves and their conceit becomes their bane. ” She shrugged. “I don’t like impotent ranting much.”

Yrmellyn dropped this topic when Doran told her he could make her the fantastic potions of her dreams, with a little time and effort. If he’d said he was able to make them right away she might have thought he was just bragging, but it sounded so serious and true when he explained that he didn’t have those potions in store and would need to take time to create them from scratch. She believed him!

“I would love to get a demonstration of the alchemy and the creation of those wondrous potions ” she said enthusiastically. “I want to try them all!”

In her inner vision she could already see herself bravely try everything the professor could possibly create, whatever it might be about. Oh, the mere thought of it made her feel wild with excitement. To her this amazing idea was pure art. It felt like it surpassed her wildest dreams. As an artist - and a mage, don’t forget that - she had a reckless and experimental side some called playful and others just found irresponsible.

“You don’t seem to know so much about magic” said Yrmellyn. “If you say so, I’m sure Alchemy isn’t magic, if you don’t count the effects of it and only care that initiation isn’t needed. But it doesn’t seem to be harmless ... science. When you put it that way it surely sounds like people ought to think twice before they become alchemists. I’m sure you wouldn’t blow yourself up though. I’m sure you know what your’re doing and I’ll be totally safe if you give me a demonstration.”

Truth to tell it seemed like she would not be totally safe, but total safety wasn’t the goal of art or of magic. Doran, she thought, would probably not blow them up, chemistry professor as he was, but ... “I find it hard to believe there would be no risk at all for troubles though. Alchemy seems complicated and complicated processes are always a bit unpredictable. You can limit the risk by taking precautions, but I don’t think it’s ever possible to totally eliminate the unforeseen. Well. Understand me right please, it doesn’t scare me or deter me. I find the alchemy and those potions fascinating ...”

The painting and the conversation continued. Yrmellyn shrugged when Doran told her the state of her soul was up for debate. He wasn’t a mage, so why did he think he knew anything about the effects of magic? “You don’t know of what you’re speaking when you say things about magic. Perhaps I’ll punish you by turning you into a rabbit? Or a fish? But fear not. I’m just kidding. Not going to do it. Not to you. I’m far too interested in the alchemy demonstration to want to waste the chance just for a free dinner.” Yrmellyn grinned carelessly at Doran after delivering these blatant lies about her abilities. She wasn’t able to turn him into a rabbit or a fish, but as the man seemed so ignorant she wasn’t able to not give in to the temptation to tease him. “When is the demonstration going to be?” she wanted to know, still grinning.

And then she laughed, not caring if she came off as something of a mad joker. The professor was so serious and outright stuffy despite his youth. It felt like she was in the company of someone who had prematurely gone old and nearly sinister. For a moment she had thought she’d seen a smile in his eyes though, like he was able to feel amused. Yrmellyn suddenly, oddly, for no reason, felt she shouldn’t be childish. She was thirty and hadn’t felt that way for years. “I’m sorry, I shouldn’t joke with you like that, it’s terrible of me. I really do want that demonstration and I promise to not do anything stupid. I would never disrespect the alchemy, or you. I hope you believe me.”

Well, maybe he'll change his mind and not give me that demonstration of the alchemy and the potions after all, now when I've made fun of him and said those crazy things. The thought made her feel like she was sobering up after a fun party, and falling back into reality again.

Conversation, painting and more conversation. Yrmellyn was convinced the portrait would be good once she was done with it. It was just a sketch but it already looked gorgeous. Gorgeous ... like the professor himself. Good motive, good portrait.

“I don’t know if I’d be much of a worshipper of a mere man with power” she said. “It’s after all only a man, and all the power doesn’t change that. He may get his time in the limelight, and be worshipped and admired by some, but at the end of the show death always waits. Worship, no. But I could paint him. Painting people is a bit like worshipping them, for a little while, before I move on and paint someone else. And powerful people always want pictures of themselves. Always.”

Yrmellyn raised an eyebrow when Doran said the imaginary man they were discussing might not have as pure intentions as it seemed at first. “I thought we were speaking about a man of pure intentions indeed. The intentions of pure power.”

She was nearly done with her work for now. It would soon be time to leave. She told him so.
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“I didn’t imply that you were physically weak, Miss Cole”, he pointed out. “I was just making a general observation.” Having said that, he continued to watch her draw. Occasionally there were moments when he admired artists for their ability to replicate reality on a piece of canvas or paper, to some extent. As she insisted that she was not squeamish, he raised an eyebrow – she seemed a little too sensitive in his opinion – before he nodded and remarked, “Good. I didn’t expect you to be squeamish. And I do agree that it’s important to choose your battles and not to overestimate yourself.”

He wondered if Yrmellyn believed him to be this way – conceited – and came to the conclusion that he didn’t care what others thought of him. He had moved past such things a long time ago. As she proceeded to inform him that she wanted to try all of the potions that he had mentioned, he felt the need to say something though. “Some of these potions may interact with each other in a negative way. You may try out as many of them as you want, but with a reasonably long break between uses.”

“That is true”,
he calmly replied as she pointed out that he didn’t seem to know much about magic. “As you have probably already realized, I’m not a mage.” He was growing mildly irritated as she felt the need to state that alchemy didn’t seem to be harmless science although he had already told her that it was dangerous. Few of his thoughts were visible on his face though. The expression on it was carefully neutral, and he sat as straight as ever.

As she proceeded to inform him that she was sure he wouldn’t blow himself up, he didn’t say anything, but merely inclined his head. She was correct. He wouldn’t. “There is a certain risk if you handle some of the more powerful substances, but you can minimize the risk by having a background in chemistry and medicine. I’m glad that that doesn’t deter you though”, he remarked somewhat dryly. For a moment he wondered if his initial assessment of her character had been correct. She was intelligent and inquisitive, but she seemed a little hotheaded as well as prejudiced to a certain extent, both qualities that unnerved him slightly.

As she felt the need to point out that he was not a mage and proceeded to inform him that he didn’t know what he was speaking about as a consequence, he felt quite irritated. For a moment there was a flash of something in his eyes that had always looked at her so coolly before, a hint of the gift that Syroa had given to him. “Oh, I think I do, at least in regards to these matters. I have a functioning mind and a functioning pair of eyes. I have interacted with mages before. And I do not believe that you are capable of turning me into a rabbit or a fish, Miss Cole. You practice the wrong kind of magic for that. Your magic allows you to see the nature of things, does it not?”

“Whenever you have time”,
he informed her as she asked him when the demonstration was going to be. “Although I do not think I said anything about us eating dinner together”, he added in a somewhat sharper tone. A moment before he would not have been averse to eating with her and possibly getting to know her a little better, despite her being a mage, but the way she acted now made him reconsider those thoughts. He was still quite interested in showing her what he was capable of though.

“I’m glad”, he remarked somewhat sarcastically as she insisted that she would never disrespect his trade or him.

Her next statement did, surprisingly enough, amuse him. As she informed him that painting people was a bit like worshipping them, he couldn’t help himself. He asked her, in an almost overly serious tone and with a somewhat uncharacteristic twinkle in his eyes, “Do you worship me then, Miss Cole?” He had meant that question in jest, but he realized that he would not be averse to being worshipped, though not by her. People all over Idalos prayed to his father. Why should Ziell be more deserving of their attention than him?

It seemed like she was nearly done with her work though, so he decided not to say anything more regarding the matters they had discussed, but beckoned for her to come over to him. “I would like to take one last look at your drawing before you leave, Miss Cole”, he informed her.
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Yrmellyn watched Doran and for a moment she had an odd impression of how the air between then sort of rippled with an energy she didn’t understand, accompanied by a low and dreamlike buzzing sound. It was a brief experience, over and gone again as instantaneously as it had started. The feeling was hard to describe. Later, when she would muse over it, she would think: it was as for a moment the world we call real rippled like the surface of a lake when a stone hits it, and through you look through the mirror of the water down to unfathomable depths beneath.

Had there been something in his gaze that contradicted the neutral calmness of his face?

She watched him silently. The sarcasm in his voice hadn’t been lost on her.

She just nodded and listened as he spoke. It seemed best so.

Yrmellyn hadn’t spent years as courtesan without learning to read people’s signs of irritation and displeasure. The attunement, even in passive state, added to her well-developed ability to detect these signs even when somebody behaved as neutrally as Doran Thetys. He seemed so calm and composed and self-assured, but there had been something testy in his voice when he made a point of telling her he had so not invited her to have dinner with him.

She chose to focus on the sketch and worked silently while she pretended to not have noticed the testiness. It sure seemed conceited of Doran to assume that she aimed to eat dinner with him. She chalked it up to his looks and his social position and knowledge. Maybe a lot of people chased him and tried to invite him to dinners ? Perhaps he expected her to ask him out? Nice idea... but Yrmellyn was low on money and couldn't afford to invite people to dinner.

"It will be very interesting to have a closer look at the potions. Any time."

Painting and worshipping ... Even as she said these words Doran's expression changed. There was suddenly an unexpected twinkle in his eyes, and despite the grave tone he spoke in he actually seemed amused. Perhaps he even cracked a joke, when he asked her if she worshipped him. The conversation had turned absurd, but she also found it familiar. This kind of question, possibly a teasing joke, possibly something else, seemed impossible to answer without coming off as a fool. She had seen it before. It was part of something she thought of as “rituals” and “games people play”.

In response she gave him the radiant smile of her past self, the smile she had used to give her prospective protectors in the times when she had used to play along in games she didn’t care to play with people anymore. She didn’t give him the faked lovesick gaze of a courtesan eager to please tough. Instead, she felt amused too, and her eyes were twinkling just like the professor’s. She spoke in the same kind of extremely serious tone as he did:

Worship?” she said, as she went over to him to show him the picture. “I created this picture of you, as I see you. I gave it my full attention and did my best to do you justice. In this sense you may call me the creator of your image. Maybe it means I worship you? Then again. The picture was made by me and it will maybe last forever. My creation ought to worship me, don’t you agree?”

To her own surprise it actually felt like she would like to be worshipped, in particular by him. But she also felt a bit sad, because her words reminded her of her mortality. Her days were numbered, like all other mortals’ days. The paintings she made were all that would remain when she was gone.
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  • What an absolutely lovely thread! UGH. It was exhausting, not because it was badly written (in fact, I loved the writing), but due to the fact that I kept wanting to get lost in the story and was trying not to miss knowledges. I try to be generous, and I believe you guys deserve it given how much effort was put into this. I saw no grammar/spelling mistakes, or at least they didn't jump out on the page so the story flowed nicely. Honestly, after reading this, I want to throw my characters at both of you! Great job.

    P.s: Don't forget to edit your grade request with my sick a** stamp. <3
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    Doran - 5/5/5[/center]
    [*]Deception: Pretending to Be Sick
    [*]Deception: Imitating an Expected Reaction
    [*]Socialization: Keeping Conversations Clipped and Direct
    [*]Socialization: Steering Conversation In A Favored Direction
    [*]Socialization: Sharing Personal Philosophies
    [*]Socialization: Reconsidering Initial Judgements
    [*]Deception: A Thought Out Backstory Gives More Credibility
    [*]Etiquette: Faking Interest to Be Polite
    [*]Etiquette: Opening Doors For Others
    [*]Etiquette: Listening is More Important than Talking
    [*]Detection: Using Someone's Appearance to Make Conclusions
    [*]Teaching: Reprimanding Reckless Behavior
    [*]Teaching: Point Out the Flaws of Mainstream Thought to Encourage Deeper Thinking
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: Thought You Were a Thief
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: A Persistent Painter
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: Apprentice of The Great Mariuz Arbin of Rharne
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: Ex-Courtesan
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: Above Average Intelligence
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: A Good Conversationalist
    [*]Yrmellyn Cole: An Attunement Mage
    [*]Business: Political Events Can Disrupt Income
    [*]Business: Scheduling (& Rescheduling) Meetings
    [*]Psychology: The Soul Is Black
    [*]Rhetoric: Providing Alternate Explanations to Phenomena
    [*]Discipline: Following Through Despite Personal Distaste
    [*]Philosophy: Darkness and Morality Are Spectrum, Not Absolutes
    [*]Tactics: Changing Strategies to Adapt to Unexpected Outcomes
    [*]Logic: Magic is Intimidating Due to Unpredictability
    [*] Endurance: Remaining Absolutely Motionless
    Yrmellyn Cole - 5/5/5
    [*]Doran: Chemistry Professor
    [*]Doran: Pretentiously Trained in Ne'hear & The Academy of Viden
    [*]Doran: Quite the Philosopher
    [*]Doran: Hates Hats and Surrealism
    [*]Doran: Enjoys Conversation with You
    [*]Doran: Doesn't Favor Immortals
    [*]Logic: Sneaking Men and Hooded Figures = Thief
    [*]Tactics: How To Adapt After A Failed Attempt
    [*]Detection: A Person's Tone Can Reveal Their Mood
    [*]Detection: Appearances Are Deceiving
    [*]Detection: Using Someone's Dress to Make Conclusions
    [*]Detection: Noticing Different Smells And Their Origin
    [*]Detection: Analyzing Changes in Facial Expressions
    [*]Detection: Drawing Information from Your Surroundings
    [*]Detection: Identifying Sarcasm
    [*]Deception: Playing Innocent
    [*]Business: Taking a Customer's Wants into Consideration
    [*]Business: Political Events Can Disrupt Income
    [*]Business: Scheduling (& Rescheduling) Meetings
    [*]Socialization: Introducing Yourself
    [*]Socialization: Following The Tone of a Conversation
    [*]Socialization: Sharing Personal Philosophies
    [*]Socialization: Using Follow Up Questions to Provoke Thought
    [*]Psychology: Staying Realistic About Yourself
    [*]Painting: The Artist's Mindset Affects The Work
    [*]Painting: Prepping The Subject and Scene
    [*]Painting: A Good Subject Matter Makes For a Fine Result
    [*]Drawing: Begin with Soft Outlines
    [*]Drawing: Shadows Add Depth
    [*]The Immortals Are Flawed
    [*]Discipline: Resisting the Temptation to Use Magic
    [*]Etiquette: Being Long Winded Can Be Exhausting to Others[/align]
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