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Frid almost forgot to clean a freakin wound!

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Sat at home in his Lothar form, Fridgar found that his arm was still bleeding from the bite of the bronze boar. "Oh shit, I should probably do something about that." he spoke to no one in particular. With that, he removed his jacket to show his wounded arm and walked back into his room. His bag of medical supplies rested on his bed, he quick enough gripped it with his good arm and took it over to his table before setting it down and removing the vial of sterilising alcohol from its contents.

Carefully, Fridgar put a bundled-up bandage to the entrance of the bottle and soaked a portion of its contents into the fabric with the aid of gravity. After re-corking the vial, he went about dabbing the disinfectant on the wound, wincing with pain at his own administrations. Thankfully, the bite wasn't too deep, but it had started bleeding again when he was done. Groaning, he removed the needle and thread from his first aid kit and shakily went about stitching his arm carefully, as he had learned in previous wounds. In his own mind, the sensation was almost pleasant, certainly satisfying as the thread pulled gently at his skin.

After each wound was complete, he'd tie the thread as tight as he could before cutting it with his claw and moving onto the next puncture. The process was painful, sure, but Fridgar was durable enough to get through it, also a little excited. After repeating the same process three or four times to all of the wounds, he sat back in his chair with a sigh.

Finally, the wound was cleansed and sealed with his stitches on either side of his arm - it would surely scar as he didn't have the ether to simply heal it over with Chrysalis, but oh well. Just another three or four to add to the pile. Yawning, he put his supplies away and took the bag back over to his bed and set it down before walking back into the living room of Rey'na's Cabin. He used his good arm as to not strain the wounded one and undo his stitches. After that, he went back to sitting and waited for Rey to get home.
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Fridgar

Story: 2/5 (1 post. Less than 500 words)
Collaboration: 0/5 (Solo)
Structure: 5/5

Knowledge:

Discipline: Working though physical pain
Medicine: For best results, treat a wound as soon after an injury as possible
Medicine: Keeping the proper tools and materials for treatment
Medicine: Disinfecting and cleaning a wound before closing
Medicine: Stitches
Medicine: Treating multiple wounds
Medicine: Securing stitches
Medicine: Avoiding stress on freshly closed wounds
Sewing: Useful for wound treatment
Sewing: Knots
Sewing: Threading a needle isn't easy


Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Loot: N/A
Magic: N/A
Injuries: Due to limited medical and sewing experience, while the wounds will not become reinfected and the skin will close itself after a dozen trials or so, Fridgar will retain a number of permanent new scars, eventually resulting in puckered, white flesh that may itch a little for a half a cycle or so. After that, cosmetic.

Comments: Short and sweet, but clear and well written. Enjoyed reviewing it. I was unable to award points for collaboration since it's a solo thread, and for story, maximum of two points for a single post and fewer than five hundred words. Maximum points for structure.

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