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Alex plays a Teacher

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
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Vluharqih
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She could tell his simle was forced, though whether that was from her taking it too far, or just him trying to hide his obivous anger, Valyeria couldn't tell.

She watched, silent, as Andras' elbow crashed into the side of the man's head. It wasn't something she'd ever be able to do- the strength required to knock a man out cold was far beyond what she'd have without extensive training- but nevertheless she noted his technique. Maybe one trial it would come in handy.

The man, meanwhile, had crumpled to the ground in a heap, his head barely stopping before it smacked against the stone.

"Nice catch," she murmured, her voice back to normal. When he turned around, he seemed more relaxed.

"This is part of it at least. Convinced you never would've been able to charge me yet?" Quickly, she shifted to Nightshade's form, growing to stand several inches taller. She shifted again, turning into the old woman. "Oh, I don't know what you're talking about! I woke up this morning in here!" Finally, she shifted back to Alex.

"But does it really matter what I am? The point is that it's helpful. Just leave it at that."

There was no need for her to tell him more. Then she'd be giving away secrets that might be best kept for the shadows- to a guard, no less. Now granted, he wasn't the most scrupulous of men, but she disliked the idea of helping to harm her race.

She turned to him in the dim alley and stared up at him. "So, are we even now?" She paused and looked pointedly down at the body between them. "And what are we going to do about this?"
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She didn't want to answer him and avoided the question well enough by saying it didn't matter... Did it? Andras wasn't quite sure what to say, watching each form morph and take shape, and how she had a little act for them. He wasn't quite sure if charging her would be the problem, however he had already made her a deal. It would be hypocritical to call her in on magic, or... racial abilities. But it did make him weary. His mind was already trying to piece together their past interactions, to see if there was a detail he missed.

The man from the house seemed... relevant. How he had just disappeared. Had he been around the whole time, just shifted into something else, or had he escaped. And how? “We're even,” he whispered, his mind still working, “You've taught me quite a bit. We're even.”

It wasn't a lie. Alex had been a decent teacher, and while he had enjoyed their lighthearted lesson, this was useful. When he didn't make a move to turn her in, she acknowledged the body. What are we going to do about it?

“We?” he asked, brow arching and a smile relaxing his tense features, “Far as I'm concerned, he's just a drunk guy. Found him here. We could leave him. I could take him in.” The stories were already forming in his mind. No doubt he would be believed over this putz. He was Venora and in the king's good graces, “You're free to go.”

Andras had no love for this man, and knowing Alex's secret... and how terrifying she could be... perhaps if he offered the body up, she could make him disappear. Then... the man's family could come out of hiding. Andras would be fulfilling his promise, and he bent down to pull the body up. He was looking at Alex, and the unsaid message was clear, “Unless you wanted him for something?”
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Andraska


Knowledge:

Acting: A character requires a backstory
Acting: Putting all the pieces together
Acting: A gruff sailor used to yelling
Deception: A bad lie can be covered up by a good disguise
Detection: How people walk
Detection: Detecting jewelry to determine wealth
Disguise: The way you walk can be a giveaway
Disguise: A pebble in a shoe to make you walk oddly
Disguise: Your voice
Disguise: Observe those you want to mimic
Intimidation: Get up close and personal
Psychology: Does money buy a criminal's loyalty?
Alex (Vluharqih): Really good at acting
Alex (Vluharqih): Just a criminal?
Vluharqih: A Yludih

Loot:
N/A
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Devotion:
N/A
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Story:
5/5
Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
5/5


Vluharqih


Knowledge:

Acting: A confident young woman reveling in her sexuality
Acting: An old lady
Detection: Deducing someone's occupation by the way they move through a crowd
Detection: Andraska's gait
Disguise: Altering your gait
Disguise: Pulling your hair back
Disguise: Hunching to appear older
Intimidation: Talking in a sweet voice to make your victim more afraid
Andraska: Has potential
Andraska: Hiding something
Andraska: Likes acting
Andraska: Can be intimidating
Tristan Venora: A playwright

Loot:
N/A
Injuries:
N/A
Fame:
N/A
Devotion:
N/A
Magic:
These points can NOT be used for Domain Magic

Story:
5/5
Collaboration:
5/5
Structure:
5/5


General Comment:
How come I'm the one to get all the best threads? 8-) I'm not kidding, this is one of the better threads on this site. Legitimately, you two worked really well together and separately, I just think you're both such talented writers that this is the expected result of you pairing up.

Story:Lovely and mighty fine, I enjoyed it very much
Collaboration: Really good, I mean, not perfect yet, but you two should definitely work together more often
Structure:All good, no issues

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions or concerns. Have a wonderful day! :)
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