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Tristan attempts to impress Alex

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When he admonished her as he left, Alex felt a burn rise to her cheeks. She wasn't sure how she had managed that- she was normally so careful with her poisons. Obviously she had done something, since she was the only one to touch the bowl, but she didn't know what.

As soon as he was gone, she went over and peered at the stove. It was cooling down, but there was still a giant crack running down it. She coulnd't see anything wrong with the bowl or the chainmail, though that meant nothing. She wasn't good enough with metals or alchemy to know what the chainmail might have reacted with. Working your way through a problem like that only worked if you had enough knowledge on the topic.

When he returned, proudly toting the bowl of snails, Alex stared at him. Really?

Snails?

She looked inside as he left again, poking them about in the bowl. Nope, just regular old garden snails. He needs them, but doesn't grow or breed them? Then again, can someone breed snails? How would they do that?

Those questions occupied her until Tristan came back, at which point she asked him.

"Do you breed snails?" There was no hint of glibness in her voice, nor was there any sign of facetiousness. She was totally serious and slightly curious. Her own efforts at breeding rats had led to failure- disease, malnourishment and inexplicable deaths meant that she had resorted to buying them off rat catchers as she needed them. Perhaps she could take his process and tweak it.

She poked and prodded at the snails, drawing more of the slime, but not enough to soak the stone dust in. When Tristan spoke up again, she narrowed her eyes at him. Actually? What is that supposed to mean? That makes it sound as if he wasn't planning on having it be from two before... She nodded at his question, her hands going back to poking at them without much enthusiasm. They wriggled and slid around the bowl lazily, her spatula barely prodding them along.

She stared at him cautiously as he left, trying to read as much as she could into his movements. Not a whole lot, it turned out.

When he returned, he seemed more relaxed than he had when he left, though who knew why that was. Perhaps he was just nervous about Alex finding out his secrets?

Alex left the mixing up to him- she didn't want to be involved in any more explosions, especially ones without a stove between them to keep them safe.

She grabbed her bolt of cloth and followed Tristan into the kitchen, smiling at the memory of the disaster that had been here last time she was here.

A thought stopped her dead in her tracks- Why was he doing it in the kitchen if he had stuff in his workshop this time? Come to think of it, where was all the stuff he had in his workshop last time I was here?

Following his instructions from before, Alex knelt to start a fire, a task that took her several bits longer than it should've. She wasn't used to fire starting that often- her burners were far easier to start, and the fire was always kept burning in The Gardener's Grace. She grimaced as she realized he wanted her to soak it in the mixture. After the stove, she had been trying to avoid doing much of anything, lest she ruin something else inadvertently.

The mixture was soon hot over the fire she had scrounged up, and she set the bolt of cloth inside. It quickly soaked into the cloth, disappearing as if sucked through a straw. Alex looked at Tristan with the obvious question in her eyes.

"I-Is that it? Was that supposed to happen?" Carefully, Alex pulled the now damp cloth out of the pan and held it up. It wasn't dry, but there was no dripping mess anywhere, and the mixture they had made was all gone. There was no trace of the stone powder visible on the cloth, though Alex fervently hoped that meant it worked.

"Well, I suppose we should test it?"
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“Do I breed snails?“ Tristan repeated. The question surprised him, and it showed – for a moment before he laughed out loud as if Alex had made a joke. “No, of course not. There is no need. I’m not sure if you can even breed snails, to be honest. I just grow salad in my garden. It magically attracts snails. As long as there is a tiny bit of salad left, they’ll keep on coming! I could probably protect my salad by dousing it with chemicals, but I don’t want to eat chemicals.” He shuddered as he said that. Chemical salad probably didn’t taste good!

He’d thought that she would realize that he was a fraud as soon as he added the “mystery ingredient”, but she was as clueless as ever. He wondered if there was an Immortal of Acting or something like that and if he or she was watching right now and sent a prayer to them just in case before he started to mix everything. He was a little more relaxed now. Of course he had been pretending to be relaxed all the time, but he actually felt relaxed now because they were almost done, and Alex still hadn’t caught on.

As Alex started the fire, he watched her and wondered if he should quickly add another mystery ingredient, something that created sparks or smoke maybe, so that his fake alchemy looked more impressive. He had some sparkling powder left over from one of his latest art projects, but then it might interact with the statue powder and the snail slime negatively, and he didn’t want to have to replace his kitchen again.

Once a nice fire was burning, he handed Alex the bowl and waited with bated breath. And then he waited some more and started to breathe again because he couldn’t hold his breath for longer than a bit. As the mixture started to disappear, he blinked and rubbed his eyes and nearly asked Alex where it had gone before he remembered that he was supposed to be the alchemist.

“That’s an excellent sign”, he thus cheerfully informed her and secretly wondered if his snail slime mixture had somehow become caustic and eaten through the bottom of his bowl. He resisted the urge to turn it over and check. Instead he continued, “It means that the cloth has absorbed the alchemical stuff.” His eyes widened as she suggested that they test it. There was a chance that it had actually worked, and that he had a secret talent for alchemy, but he didn’t want to count on it. On the other hand, he could just claim that she needed to actually wear the cloth for the magic to take effect if that initial test failed. Yes, that was it.

Smiling, he handed her a hammer. “Feel free to give it a try!” he told her. “Unless you’d rather use an axe? I have lots of things that you can hit strong-as-chainmail cloth with!”
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When he explained how he got so many snails, Alex had to keep herself from flushing. Of course, salad would make sense. Though that said, she highly doubted it was magic salad. For all his alchemy, she doubted he was a true mage, though it would make a certain amount of sense. No, she decided, he would be very proud of his ability and tell people if he were. No rumours she had heard of involved Tristan Venora and Magic, so she cast the thought away.

“Why don’t you want to eat chemicals? They sound oh so delicious!”

When the liquid disappeared so quickly, she had cast a questioning glance towards Tristan, but he quickly convinced her it was normal. Shrugging, Alex nodded and spread the material out on the table. As she worked it dried, and by the time it was flat, it was also dry. It was a bit stiff in places, and Alex folded the fabric back and forth a few times to try and work it out. It didn’t work.

Alex swung the hammer hard, arcing it overhead and slamming it against the table. It landed with a thunk, and a serious dent appeared in the table beneath it. Alex shot Tristan a look, before asking for the axe.

She mimicked the last swing she made, and the sound it made was almost identical. But the most important part was that the blade didn’t cut through the fabric- merely transferred the energy into a blunt blow. It wasn’t perfect, but Alex was overjoyed.

“This is perfect!” Alex squealed, surprising herself. Where did that come from?? “Thank you for this,” she continued in a far more normal voice.

“So, how much do I owe you for this and for fixing your stove?”
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Tristan pretended to watch calmly like a real alchemist would as Alex spread the cloth out on the table. He noticed that it was a little stiff. For a moment he was worried that it would also be brittle and break the moment she tried to fold it, but fortunately it stayed in one piece. He breathed a sigh of relief, one of many that trial and watched as she swung the hammer.

He expected the cloth to either explode or get a hole and thus become unusable, but instead a dent appeared in the table beneath it. The axe didn’t seem to do anything to the cloth either. He just stared at it incredulously for a moment, and then he grinned all over his face, completely forgetting that his table was now damaged and would have to be repaired.

“Yes, it is”, he agreed as Alex called it perfect, as if he had expected that outcome all along and turned to face her again. Secretly he sent another prayer to the Immortals of Luck and Acting and whatever other Immortals might have had something to do with it though.

“You’re welcome”, he added and proceeded to think about the price. He had no idea how much alchemy cost since he wasn’t a real alchemist and had never practiced fake alchemy before that trial either. He only knew that his stove had cost fifteen nels, and the chainmail had cost twenty nels. He furrowed his brow, looked at the cloth, looked at Alex and then decided to just almost double that sum.

“How about sixty gold nels?” he asked.
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Alex smiled at Tristan as he agreed- it would be a pain to try and sew together, but that wasn't her worry; someone else could handle that part.

She nodded at the price- sixty nel seemed more than fair, though considering the fact that she still had to have it sewn together... She shook her head as she tried to picture how she would explain that to whatever seamstress she hired, and the countless needles that would go dull as a result.

She pulled her purse and counted out sixty nel, passing it over. She rerolled the fabric and threw it over her shoulder, staggering slightly as the weight threw her off balance. Alex caught herself before she fell, and shakily held out her hand to shake Tristan's.

"It was nice doing business with you, milord." She went to curtsey, then thought better of it. "I look forward to meeting you again at some point soon, and I thank you for your services."

She inclined her head and turned, leaving his house quickly. Her arms began to tire, but she staggered her way home, dropping the bolt heavily on the bed as she collapsed, excited but tired.
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Knowledge:
  • Alchemy: Heating Down Metal
  • Alchemy: Limit To How Many Enchantments Can Be Used
  • Alchemy: Process Depends On The Material
  • Alchemy: Reagent Needs To Be Added At Creation Stage
  • Alchemy: Using A Mortar and Pestle
  • Tristan Venora: Likes Being Treated As A King
  • Tristan Venora: Destructive Tendencies
  • Tristan Venora: Maybe Not An Alchemist

Loot: -5gn for roll of fabric, -60gn for Tristan, +1 Bolt of Alchemised Fabric
Injuries: -
Fame: -
Devotion: -
Magic: -

Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Comments: I really liked the tension of playing Vlu's backstory and Alex as innocent. Good writing!


Tristan


Knowledge:
  • Acting: Making Simple Tasks More Impressive
  • Alchemy: Another Form of Art
  • Alchemy: Needs A Binding Liquid
  • Alchemy: Process Depends On The Material
  • Alchemy: Reagent Needs To Be Added At Creation Stage
  • Alchemy: Very, Very Dangerous
  • Padraig: Pretending To Murder Him
  • Vluharqih: Needs Protection With An Alchemised Dress

Loot: -115gn for Chemist Kits, -20gn Chainmail, -10gn Chain Coif, -1gn for iron filings, -15gn for hand axe, +60gn from Vluharqih
Injuries: -
Fame: +1 Doing A Good Idea (Helping Alex With Her Dress)
Devotion: -
Magic: -

Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Comments: I think you played the tension between wanting to do alchemy and not being able to do so well - you can see that Tristan is an actor!


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Good thread! I laughed at Tristan's antics of pretending to be an alchemist. Vlu was great, too - trying to hide that she was a poisoner and seeming innocent was great. I did feel I had to remove a point in alchemy as this was rather a grand attempt at something neither of you had the skill for. This honestly shouldn't have worked as it did (even with the explosions). There'll be no intervention but please keep this in mind!
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