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Masked Ball: Legality of Magic

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The debate was over. Considering the 'People' had few questions left to ask, Woe had ceased all arguments and Olivia seemed to be in support of him, Alistair considered himself - perhaps incorrectly - to have won the debate. He did not say this openly, but for his own pride he did find an uplifting smile gracing his lips. It was good that he had known so much information about the politics of magic in the Kingdom, though of course, he only utilized information presented - he didn't want to seem... overly knowledgeable on the subject.

Around this time, with the debate beginning to wrap up, he'd sworn that he could hear commotion ongoing elsewhere... the sound of some sort of surprise in the greater ball area, though he wasn't quite sure what that surprise was about, or who it had been caused by. What he knew was that he promised to treat Robek, or Fridgar, on the following night. As such, he raised himself and asked the moderator a direct question: "Is this debate over, then?" he posed, casting off the assumed role of the King when inevitably it appeared that indeed, it had ended.

"Very well, thank you muchly my subjects," he said sarcastically, weaving his way past the tables and the guards and back into the ballroom for the grand finale - an announcement that would trump all expectations.
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Masked Ball: Legality of Magic

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Woe, Alistair & Olivia
~~And, we're calling it!~~

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Hey guys - glad this got finally wrapped up! Thanks for your participation. Olivia, I'm sorry that I couldn't award you higher marks, but as an abandoned thread, the peer review guide is clear. I really enjoyed watching this debate and reading about what you said and how you each dealt with it. You all played your level of knowledge really well and the subtle interplays between pcs was really interesting to read. All in all, a great thread ~ thanks to all concerned.

Ali

Alistair
Story 10/10
Collaboration 5/5
Structure5/5

Knowledge
Leadership: Leading discussions
Persuasion: Build up your argument
Persuasion: Suggest compromise
Rhetoric: Stating an overview
Rhetoric: Clearly stating your position
Socialization: Discussion in groups
Socialization: Leading debates
Tactics: Conscription of mages strengthens military might?
Tactics: Consider all types of military might

Fame: +10 (Event participation!)

Woe

Woe
Story 10/10
Collaboration 5/5
Structure5/5

Knowledge
Etiquette: Addressing a "King"
Persuasion: Start with something very reasonable.
Persuasion: Build up your argument
Persuasion: Suggest compromise
Persuasion: Point out potentially dire consequences of not listening to you.
Rhetoric: Clearly stating your position
Socialization: Discussion in groups
Socialization: Taking part in debates
Socialization: Arguing a viewpoint you don't agree with
Tactics: Allow powerful groups amnesty to build loyalty and trust?

Fame: +10 (Event participation!)

Olivia

Olivia
Story 2/5 (thread abandoned ~ as per the peer review guide)
Collaboration 3/5 (2 posts ~ as per the peer review guide)
Structure 0/5 (thread abandoned ~ as per the peer review guide)

Knowledge
Etiquette: Smiling to overcome an awkward moment
Persuasion: Start with something very reasonable.
Persuasion: Build up your argument
Rhetoric: Clearly stating your position
Socialization: Discussion in groups
Socialization: Taking part in debates


Fame: +10 (Event participation!)
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