Heartless

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
Malcolm
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It came to him like a dream during sleep, her body warm against his own, moving in sync to the sound of the pouring rain on an old tin roof, clothes and covers abandoned, rules and responsibilities checked at the doors. It had been such a torrid love affair, over too soon, and while all physical aspects had been stripped away, the feelings still remained. There was a connection between them far deeper than Malcolm had allowed himself to acknowledge until his Mortalborn ability saw him wake with a start, gasping and confused by the falling rain that had soaked through his blanket and left his clothes feeling damp and skin cold.
As the unwelcome visions played out in his head, even in his now conscious state, Malcolm knew that this was no dream but a real life event taking place far from his current location. Somewhere out of the rain, with crisp, fresh sheets tangled beneath warm, willing bodies, and the taste of courage on one's tongue, Elyna was making love to another man, but not just any man, one tied to Malcolm by blood. At first it had confused him, perhaps it was the binding with his son that allowed him this sneak peek into the intimate display, but it was Elyna's pulse he felt beating in his chest, the same drumming he had inspired many times before, or set his head against her breast to listen to.
An emptiness settled in the pit of his belly, and where Malcolm thought heartache and disdain might rule, there was only a numb, foreign feeling he himself would have found difficult to put into words. So she was to marry Marcus after all... For a while he sat alone in the dark, letting the rain seep into his clothing, trying to feel anything but this strange nothingness. His body began to shiver and his warm breath breasted the air, a silver wisp curling skyward towards the starless night, taking with it any fantasies, hopes, or misguided trust he had been naive enough to hold onto.
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Malcolm rolled up his bedding and packed his belongs before leading the horse under cover to fix the saddle to his back and do up his bridle and girth-strap. The rain got heavier as the man set out along the road headed south towards the capital, driving his mount against the storm. His cloak flapped in the torrent of air driven under it by the horse's swift galloping until that too was drenched and flattened by the rain. An hour into the ride saw Malcolm stop to water the animal and move under the cover of trees in order to get them both out of the rain. The last thing he needed was a sick horse, something that would only make working for the Knights a lot more difficult.
It took him a long time to build and especially light a fire, even with the right equipment. Malcolm managed to create a lot of smoke, the damp twigs he had gathered in a hurry seeing to that. Some more careful consideration of fuels saw his hard work come to fruition, the small campfire crackling away for some time before his persistent feeding of the flames saw them roar. Malcolm had time to reflect on his current location, putting himself somewhere near Hangwood Forest, closer to Andaris. He looked up to try and see the stats or the light of one of the moons in attempt to try and pinpoint his location, with very little luck.
Focusing on other things had helped quiet the images in his mind, and soon the unwelcome connection he had formed with Elyna throughout the season, was lost. The Mortalborn leaned back against the trunk of a tree with his shield strapped to his arm and his longsword across his lap. He didn't often sleep like this but choosing to wander off into the woods alone had been careless and he wasn't in the mood to take anymore chances tonight.
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A deep, nervous rumbling from his horse woke the man a few breaks later. The rain had stopped and the cloud cover had disappeared, draining the warmth it had originally trapped, leaving the man's limbs cold and stiff. Malcolm looked around at the darkness, his eyes well adjusted to his surroundings without the light of the fire, which looked to have burned out some time ago, though a thin stream of smoke still curled away from its centre, dancing in front of him.
There was a cracking noise behind him, as if someone or something was trying to get close and had stepped on and broken a stick in its travels. Alert, the captain got onto his hands and knees and crawled over to the next tree as quickly and quietly as he could before taking another look around. He figured that it was possible the smell of smoke had attracted someone's attention, and Malcolm hoped it was the horse they had seen instead of him. The chestnut gelding had wandered into a clearing, too exposed for the man to chance getting any closer to without first knowing what or who was moving around the camp.
The Mortalborn watched his horse for any signs of distress and as the animal edged towards the trees, away from where he was seated, Malcolm surmised that whatever it was behind him, must surely be a predator. He readied his sword and slowly edged back against the tree in order to get to his feet, ready to strike when out of the woods, a stocky, dark figure stumbled into camp, headed straight for the pile of smoking ashes where the fire had been. Malcolm's horse grunted and stepped back, wide-eyed and terrified. The man had not been noticed and he was unlikely to get a better chance than this.
With the creature's back turned to him, Malcolm raised his long sword up over his head and sliced at the bear, cutting deep into the animal's shoulder. The black bear growled and spun suddenly, throwing the Mortalborn back against the trunk of the tree with a powerful swipe of its paw, one Malcolm only just managed to block with the use of his shield, feeling crushed between that and the tree. As the bear charged him, Malcolm held his sword close and trust forwards into the animal's chest, buying himself a bit of time and space as it stalked backwards with a disgruntled and hair-raising growl.
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It felt a lot like a standoff, man versus bear, and Malcolm wasn't sure he would come out the victor, hoping instead that the bear's current injuries would see it back off and retreat into the woods. Carefully, slowly, and without drawing too much attention to himself, Malcolm lowered his shield to disguise his right hand, which let go of his sword so that the weapon learned against his hip. He then took a throwing blade from his belt and quickly lifted it to throw at the bear, pressing his foot backwards to steady his stance before releasing the weapon to the air.
It spun too quickly to see and caught the bear in the shoulder he had already attacked with his sword. The bear roared and charged the man again, having the opposite effect the knight might had envisioned. Malcolm grabbed for his long sword and stabbed at the bear again but without much room for drawing the weapon back, his thrust and resulting attack had been weak, easily deflected by the bear, who with the swipe of his strong arm, managed to wrestle the sword from the captain's grasp, leaving him with just his shield and knives.
He dodged another swipe using the face of his shield to protect himself from the bear's paw, which was no doubt thick with sharp little claws that would tear his flesh to ribbons. While he fended off another attack, the shield rattling upon his left arm, Malcolm took another throwing blade but had his feet swiped out from under him as the bear swung low, putting the man on his back, where he smacked the animal wildly in the face with the point of his shield until it edged backwards again, not sure what to make of the man.
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Malcolm drew his hand back, holding the throwing blade alongside his head. He had never taken a shot from this position before, and later when he thought about it, he would remember to include things like this in his own training and the training of his Knights. He took aim, lined up the shot and waited for the bear to still before letting the weapon go, thrusting it forwards with as much power as he could summon from the ground. The weapon spun past the bear's head and caught the tree behind it, he might as well have been off by a mile.
Quickly he scrambled for another knife and the bear approached hesitantly, and adjusted his throw, this time catching the animal in the throat. The beast pawed at its neck, making a strange sound almost akin to crying, and worked the blade free. This gave the knight enough time to roll across the ground, collect up his sword and charge the bear, instead of waiting for the animal to do the same. He was forced to parry backwards however, the bear's paw catching the edge of his shield, straining the arm it was strapped too which left him feeling sore.
As the bear approached, Malcolm was surprised by its endurance, and stabbed at the animal's chest with his sword, hoping to clip a lung or deal a blow that would drop the creature. The bear pushed him backwards, his chest saved by the use of his shield, though it did little for his back, and slammed into a tree, Malcolm knew if he survived this, the ride home was going to be very uncomfortable, if he could even find his horse. Holding the shield up and bracing against the animal's strength, Malcolm struggled to free his fighting arm, which he managed to pull back around the narrow tree and drive forwards, burying his sword in the animal's breast.
The bear wheezed and hung it's head, and Malcolm, not fond of watching anything suffer, put down his shield and took one of the daggers from his belt to draw across the creature's throat, quick but undoubtably less painful than its death might have been had he left it to die. He could count the scratches later in the day, as for now, he was only counting his blessing and he teeth he was able to cut free from the animal's mouth, a story for later.
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Malcolm

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+1 Meditation
+1 Mount
+1 Animal Husbandry
+1 Navigation
+1 Detection
+2 Strength
+2 Fieldcraft
+2 Stealth
+3 Blades: Longsword
+1 Blades: Dagger
+4 Shield Combat
+4 Endurance
+2 Throwing Weapons

Basic Knowledge
Elyna: Formally Engaged to Marcus
Fieldcraft: Lighting a Fire in Wet Conditions
Stealth: You can't hide from an animal that's caught your scent.
Navigation: The Moon and Stars aren't always reliable.
Sword & Shield Combat: Dodging

Specialised Knowledge
Horses: Spook when in danger
Bears: Resilient
Bears: Territorial
Throwing Knives: Aiming
Shield Combat: Stance
Shield Combat: Sometimes it's better not to take a blow
Shield Combat: Can be used offensively
Blades: Stance
Longsword: Less power with one hand


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+ 1 Killing a Bear

Rewards/Injuries
Bruises 7 trials to go away. Scratches on both arms, 10 trials healing (scarred.) Will need to be treated to cleanse infection and a stitch or two.

Comment: Nicely written, I love the way you describe his surroundings. Poor Mal, having to feel Elyna in bed with another man! That must suck so much. If you have any questions feel free to PM me, cheers!
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