Getting a Grip

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Worry for the forthcoming trial had her stomach twisted in knots but she still had a job to do. Her group of archers had progressed since the end of Saun and could competently hit the target, most of the time. Less comfortable in breaches these days, Elyna opted for a loose dress on most occasions. Today it was a blue dress, one that had once been stained with Malcolm’s blood. It wasn’t something she usually chose to wear and it was a little fancier than anything she would usually bring to the training grounds, but she was running out of options and couldn’t afford to be fussy. Despite the warm weather she’d opted for a leather jerkin in the hope that it made her look more formidable; more of a solider than a Lady.
At noon, the last hurrah of summer was warm agains the back of her neck. Her hair had been pinned up neatly to keep it out the way. She walked the coarse sand of the training arena and corrected the stance of her students, “Kit,” she rolled her eyes and pushed the young man’s elbow, “elbow up,” she warned him. He nodded but didn’t look around, focused on the target at the far end of the field. It was further than he should be able to reach trying to flat shoot. He released the arrow in a smooth motion and watched with furrowed brows as the arrow flew then inevitably dipped and speared the dirt.
“You killed a worm,” Elyna offered a dry smile. She peered down the rank before clearing her throat. Used to her signal that more information was coming, those with arrows shot them and one by one her students turned to listened.
“As you’ve noticed, the boss’s are further back. I’ll be impressed if you can shoot them flat with your bows – so this is where we really find out if your archers or if you’re not,” she stepped forward onto the line and took Rosa’s bow from the woman. She set her feet shoulder width apart and turned side onto the target. It was then she set and arrow to the string but bent, at the knees and lower back.
“This is how I want you to straighten up, in a fluid motion and lifting both arms so that they circle. This means you can use your whole back in the draw,” she demonstrated the motion lifting the bow up and drawing the string back to her jaw before carefully setting it back to the stave, “practise a few times if you like, but what I really want is for you to draw the string back and be shooting the arrow at an upwards angle.”
She bent once more to demonstrate the motion. Drawing the string back was easy enough when it could use the whole of her body from the feet up and it was easier to end the draw with the arrow at an angle. In a smooth sweep her thumb brushed her jaw and she released. The arrow curved in a high arc as it sped through clear blue skies and thudded into the target boss at the far end. She passed the bow back to Rosa with a nod and retreated, ready to watch her group practise. It was then that she noticed a newcomer. With a wary glance at her inexperienced group she beckoned forward Emily to take over. The small blonde woman slid away from the equipment shed and strode closer to watch.
Elyna approached the newcomer with a cautious smile, “have you been sent to join us?”
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The first thing his grandfather told him, was cities the world over always have a distinct smell, far different from the clean and sweet air of the countryside. His grandfather neglected to tell him how bad. The smell of the city had burned at his nostrils and throat when he first arrived, the stench had even made him ill. The first night he suffered from a constantly running nose, even his eyes seemed to never stop streaming.

He felt like someone managed to make hay fever contagious. Eventually he drifted off into a fitful sleep.

After two days he managed to adapt to the change, although he still found the sheer amount of people slightly unsettling. Having already obtained directions, he waited one more day to get used to the city before he finally set off. Now, the second day of arrival he felt prepared.

Having finally managed to shave, he now looked his age. Hair bound, and thoroughly washed he at least looked presentable. Wearing a tan gambeson with matching trousers, gloves, and his knee high riding boots. He opted to store his cloak as summer’s warmth had yet to subside. As always his grandfather's longsword belted at his left hip.

Thankfully they had dried during the night, lest he arrive for training in damp attire. He felt glad he had this chance. Soon his elation turned to determination. Standing at the entrance of the training arena. Hywell considered himself lucky. Since the end of the civil war Andaris would need fresh recruits. At the urging of his grandfather he took this chance.

Now he was at the first step of his goal, he could only keep going. Taking in a breath he made his way into the arena. What created him was the twang of bow strings, the dull thump of arrows hitting the ground and the voice of their instructor. He watched as the woman corrected their stances.

Although not his first time seeing a bow he had no training in it. His gaze shifted to the trainees, he was impressed with their ease of skill. Turning his attention back to the instructor then began to demonstrate. He noticed the stance was similar to what one would expect in sword training. Watching as the woman pulled the bow to full draw, then eased the string back. He committed each movement to memory.

His quietness had merely been polite, his patience has finally been rewarded. Watching the woman come over he kept his hands relaxed at his sides, not knowing really what formalities were needed. So he did as his grandfather told him, relax and in his words, don't look like a fool farmboy.

Seeing the cautious smile, he was only glad that the woman seemed far kinder than his grandfather. “Yes, I was told this is where I should go if I wish to become a squire.” Hywell didn't hesitate in his answer, the time for second thoughts have long since past.
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She tilted her head to the side with a half-smile. He looked clean and well, neatly presented. Her gaze travelled slowly from the top of his hair to the edges of his boots. He was keen then and had wanted to make a good impression. He was wearing a sword and it looked as though he was comfortable with the weight, though if this made him a competent swordsman was another question. At the least, he would have practised with it and swung it around his head a few times, like young men had a tendency to do.
“You want to be a Knight?” She lifted a hand and held it against her hip. He had asked to be a Squire and not an Airman. So not a Skyrider then, “you want to be a hero? A hero needs a name…?”
She waited patiently for her answer before turning sharply on her heel and beckoning him to follow, “I can’t sign you up right here in the dirt, there’s paperwork and people far better qualified than me to go through the process and procedures with you,” she led the way without thinking. Boots scuffing over the practise yard and the flagstones towards what remained of the offices.
“I’d like to say that it’s a difficult thing to join the Iron Hand, but you have a pulse and better yet – you’ve got your own weapon,” she shook her head, “so I’m sure we’d be glad to have you. Excuse my frankness, but you don’t look like a boy raised in the city. You’re not from Andaris, are you?” That was intriguing in itself. There was something a little one the edge about many of the young men and woman who came straight from city streets. A sharpness to their wits that so far she hadn’t seen in the stranger before her. She could only assume he was from one of the less populated regions, but probably not Burhan. She glanced at him again, almost certainly not Burhan.
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Though not the first time he's been sized up, it was quite different when a stranger did it. While the woman's gaze looked him over, he thanked the fates that his razor was shape, and his hands steady. Otherwise, he would have arrived looking like a Vagabond. He did his best not to let his nerves get the better of him. Hopefully he would be found acceptable.

“Yes, I came here for just that reason,’ there was no hesitation in his answer. He was already determined on what path he would travel. “Hero?” Smiling slightly he shook his head, “no I don't want to be a hero.” Hywell had no delusions on being a hero. “My name is Hywell Cadwaldr.”

Taking one last look at the students he moved to follow. Keeping a respectable distance, he paid close attention to her words. Hywell, having already surmised the fact it would take a bit more than showing up to join the Iron Hand. Already prepared, he was more than ready for their tests. He understood the procedures were necessary, and would comply with them all.

At the mention of his sword he unconsciously touched the pommel with his left hand. It was a novice’s action, one that many do for comfort or to put them at ease. In his case to settle his nerves. He knew it was obvious he was not from the city. His mannerisms would give him away anywhere. “No ma’am, I'm from Warrick.” He gave a small smile. “I find your frankness far more enjoyable than beating around the bush.” Like the majority of his family, more so than his grandfather, he was prone to being direct.
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“A pleasure to meet you Hywell Cadwaldr,” Elyna gave a polite nod along with her automatic response. Her Mother would have been so proud that some of the lessons in etiquette had paid off. She smiled at his answer. Everyone wanted to be a hero. To rescue a damsel in distress or a kitten from a tree. It didn’t necessarily mean that they wanted limelight, fame or glory but surely everyone was the hero of their own story? Perhaps it just meant that he had a better understanding of the hard work being a Squire was.
“I am Captain Burhan, you should call me Ser. In honesty, you should call anyone who ranks higher than yourself in the Iron Hand Ser,” she bit her bottom lip as she wrapped an arm beneath the curve of her stomach, “I mean you could also call us Captain, or Squire, Knight, Airwoman etc – but unless you’re certain of the persons rank and that they haven’t received a promotion or demotion…I would just stick to Ser,” she offered the wisdom of experience and a less than perfect memory.
The touch to the sword pommel hadn’t gone unnoticed. They made their way between practise courts and equipment barns. Some of it rather ramshackle as the training grounds had suffered along with the rest of the Low-town, “Warrick?” That would make sense. Warrick was known for sending excellent young men and woman to join up. “I hear there are a lot of snakes in Warrick,” she admitted, “It’s a beautiful region, but I have to admit the serpents put me off travelling too often.”
As they passed, Elyna pointed out the two story building, “those are the barracks. If you’re a member of the ‘Hand you’ll be able to sign up for lodging in the barracks. They’re small rooms and the furniture is simple – but it’s a good place to start if you’re new to the city. As for frank talking, I do my best and I won’t tell you any lies.”
It was then that she turned to face the young man. “The offices are just through this door,” she gestured with her free hand, “they’ll ask you to swear an oath to your Knight Commander. It’s not an oath of fealty to the Kingdom, that would be required if you’re made a Knight. Your time as a Squire is a chance to learn and to see if this is a life that is suited to you…there are some members of the Iron Hand who like to…take advantage of the lower ranks, Squires in particular. You’re expected to take orders without question and there are orders you might not understand. But if you feel as though someone is trying to deprive you of dignity, would you tell me?”
There was a particular Baron of the Guard that Elyna had in mind when she made her warning. She’d heard of squires licking boots or worse. Of punishments and demeaning tortures unnecessary to the line of work and duty they would follow. It was a practise she had every intention of stopping.
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“Likewise ma’am,” unlike most youths he did not wish to be the Knight in shining armour, nor rescue the endangered maiden. His desire stemmed from something almost primal. Since the first time he ever held a sword his blood would feel like it was afire. More so when he wielded it in training. He had a passion for the sword, and the Knights were the best choice. Rather than being a mercenary, he desired to fight for Crown and Country. Having trained with his grandfather, he was no starry eyed lad. He knew the effort involved would be grueling. It would test his resolve. Hywell focused not on the fame and fortune most coveted. He focused on what it would take, on how far he would have to push himself.

At the mention of Burhan his raised a brow. He knew he would eventually meet those with noble blood, granted he did not expect to meet one so soon. He took this information and made sure to remember Captain Burhan.”I'll keep that in mind Ser,” he gave a wry smile.

He wasn't perturbed by the condition of the training grounds. He knew well the effects of war, even during the journey from Warrick there were many Farmsteads that showed the scars. Low-town or no, even the capital had suffered.”Snakes aren't too bad, it depends on the breed.” Hywell was more frightened of the tales his grandfather told him of the Raskithecal. The stories often brought a chill to his spine.

Gazing at the two story building, he wondered if it was cheaper than staying at the Tavern. Though he did not raise his hopes, he wasn't a squire yet. “Is it cheaper than the Taverns? That's good to know ma-uh, Ser.” The young lad many things to get used to.

Stopping as he noticed her turning on her heel, he turned his steel gaze to the direction of her gesture. Nodding as he listened, Hywell found that it was exactly as his grandfather told him. He would have to make an oath, though not an oath of fealty nevertheless it was an important first step. His calm demeanor was disrupted as his brows began to furrow.. Not only the question, but the fact of Knights abusing their power came as quite a surprise. “In truth? I'm not sure.”

His expression was one of serious thought. Certainly not as sharp as those born in the city, and even a little naïve, he was not one to just plunge ahead. His countenance changed and his gaze took on a fiery determination. “I understand what you're asking, but wouldn’t it be dishonorable?” His determined expression took on a small but confident smile.

“I wouldn't break my oath, even if my Knight Commander tried to deprive me of dignity. That's not to say I can't handle it once I become a Knight.” Patience was the first thing his grandfather taught him. He would strike back once he could do so. Until then he would grin and bear it. “Perhaps if you pray, I might avoid such a fate.” He knew there was more to the story, a question like this didn't come without reason. For now he would leave those questions be.
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“I think I’ll just take my bets with avoiding all of them,” the woman admitted. “Taking up a room in the barracks is certainly cheaper than a tavern,” she assured him. The woman leant back against the make-shift building and folded her arms across her chest. “Once the kitchens are back up and running, you’ll get decent meals too. You’ll be grateful for a hot breakfast once they get you up and training in the snow,” the smile widened a little as she remembered. Thankfully it had been a few arcs since she’d bene required to run laps of the training grounds in freezing conditions. It had been one of her nightmares.
He wouldn’t agree to tell her. The woman let out a slow sigh but nodded. She wasn’t surprised but disappointed. “I forget how much this code of honour means to you youngsters at the start. It is not dishonourable to ask for help if you need it. It is not dishonourable to seek justice if it is required,” Elyna wasn’t usually a woman of speeches but it was a subject she felt passionate about. “Dishonour is found more easily in vengeance and trying to correct wrongs alone. Once you sign the paperwork and make your first Oath you’ll be a part of a team. We need strong individuals, people like yourself who want to fight for honour and serve justice and are prepared to make sacrifices for this. Being the best fighter doesn’t make you the best Knight though, it just give you the skills to sell your sword and become a mercenary. The Iron Hand is a team, and we’re as strong as our co-operation,” she held her tongue then. Realising perhaps a little late that she should have curbed her enthusiasm a few sentences before.
Embarrassed she reached up, pushing her fingers through her hair. “Forgive me…” she bowed her head a little, “but I serve the Iron Hand and Justice and sometimes I find that this code of honour sometimes gets in the way of that.” Honour would have stopped her stabbing an unarmed man in the neck. Honour would have prevented the murder of her Uncle. Subsequently, honour would have seen the death of thousands more.
"All the very best to you, young Hywell." She lifted her gaze and offered him a warm smile. Her hand rested on his shoulder a brief moment before she turned and made her departure. Returning to the training grounds and the recruits she'd left in the care of her Major.
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Peer Review

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5


Awarded Knowledge

Hywell Cadwaldr: Potential Squire
Hywell Cadwaldr: Not a Glory-Seeker
Hywell Cadwaldr: Warrick Born
Knighthood: Oath to the Kingdom


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Peer Review

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5


Awarded Knowledge

Captain Burhan: Woman
Iron Hand: Captain Burhan
Iron Hand: A United Force
“Ser”: Honorific for Superiors


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Elyna, I couldn't see anything specific to Pre in here.. can you let me know where you meant?
Also, having reviewed your threads in the past, I noticed more mistakes in this thread than others. I know they are all just typos and the like, and can easily be fixed by a kick proof-read. No points deducted, but it was enough for me to want to flag it up to you at the end.

Otherwise, I nice thread :)


As you can see, I have provided feedback and reasoning behind my review. If you have any questions, comments or criticism about your review, feel free to send me a PM and we can discuss it.
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