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Andras continues to perfect himself.

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20th of Ymiden, 717

The woman before him lunged, sword slicing the air between them when he leaped back, throwing his own weapon upwards to meet the downward cut. Steel hissed and Andráska immediately pushed forwards, throwing the opponent's arm backward and watched as she tried to regain her footing, but he was already pulling his shield close and slamming forward. The female's armor clanged loudly against the metal and the nobleman gritted his teeth, absorbing the vibrations that electrified his arm. Shield fighting was an exhaustive task that worked his muscles and kept him strong – no doubt he would pay the price tomorrow.

The woman, Margery, was knocked backward and Andras struggled to see over the metal on his arm. His shield was a large heater, and while providing ample protection, he was learning that it made it harder to see ground attacks. He tried to twist his body, to counterattack the boot she shot towards his shins, but his feet stumbled over themselves, unable to predict her movement. He absorbed the blow, taking in her attack with stride, with his toes curling secretly within his shoes.

“You've gotten stronger,” she commented, abandoning her shield and rolling quickly across the floor, “I'm pleased to see you've been taking my advice.”

Andras thought to what she had said – to drink green, gelatinous shakes and how to care for his body. 'Muscles can not get stronger without proper rest', she had said. The noble had done more than enough of that. Since slaying his sister in Rharne, he had been resting, unable to use his arm and slow from his injured leg. Now he was healed and training harder than ever.

“I need to make up for lost time,” he commented, using the conversation as a distraction and trying to swing his sword low, towards her hip where she was vulnerable. Margery flinched, catching the blade with her own before it could bite flesh. Andras realized how close he had been and grinned, “Every opponent has a weak spot when fighting,” He attacked a few more times, each one being met with a respectable guard, “Yours are your hips.”

Margery was backward jogging away from him, widening the combat area. Making him come to her. 'Controlling the battlefield,' he thought.

“Thinking of my hips, Venora?”

The comment instantly made his cheeks go scarlet. Margery, standing almost at six feet and built like a lumberjack was not the kind of woman he would normally prefer in that way, and when he hesitated, she seized the opportunity.

Moving with a speed he had not anticipated, she charged, arms and legs pumping until she leaped like a roaring, warrior goddess. Knees to her chest, Andras hardly registered her feet hit the base of his shield until she kicked off, the entirety of her weight sending his body flying into the ground. The air was seized from his lungs and stolen as a trophy, the handsome noble suddenly coughing and gasping for breath like a dying fish. Trapped beneath his shield as pain shocked his shoulders, he squirmed, sliding out from beneath it.

What... what was that?

Meanwhile, the former knight rolled expertly to her feet, breathing heavily as she looked down upon his sprawling form, hand outstretched with a smug expression “You still need more practice.”
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It took a good while for Andráska to catch his breath, but when he did, they were back at it again, this time with a lecture from Margery as she raved about the importance of strength and protection, “The shield is the perfect offensive and defensive weapon when you're cornered. When you bash your opponent, do this,” she pulled her own close hefting up up to shield her shoulder so that only the top of her head peaked over the curve. It was close to her body, and Andras pushed himself to his feet, trying to imitate her movement.

She circled him and demonstrated the limited space a weapon could penetrate his defenses, and how to step so that he wouldn't trip over his feet again. He wasn't to cross one leg over the other and needed to be careful where he placed his weight. Otherwise, he might have to dodge out of the way, and not be able to get his feet moving in time. Andras practiced her drills, the burly woman giving steadily predictable attacks until his movements were second nature, his arms lifting, lowering, and extending over and over until the muscles in his shoulders pleaded for mercy. The arm his shield was attached to had been broken the season prior and was freshly approved for training again. He was hardly used to the strain and began to slide out of the heater.

“What are you doing?” Margery demanded, brows furrowing in annoyance. Andras gave a boyish grin, shrugging while he caught his breath.

“Switching arms. If I keep training this one, I'll only get slower and weaker. Let me practice with this one too.”

“You'll have to reverse all the moves.”

“I know.”

“...This doesn't bother you? You will have to use your other for sword fighting.”

It was then Andras realized Margery wasn't aware of his little talent, “Ah, I'm ambidextrous.” She stared at him for a moment, and he wondered if she knew the word, “I can use both hands equally.”

Margery stayed quiet, her mind working behind her eyes, and when he had finished changing arms and grabbed his shield with his right hand, she struck low, blade flashing. “Cheater,” he gritted, blocking the blow and doing his best to read her body so he could switch rapidly between guards. She had shown him two, both of which he found easy enough to remember. It was the details that kept catching him up.

He swung, stepping inward, causing Margery to raise a hand to begin scolding him, “You step just before you swing, not into it. You need to watch your footwork or you'll tell your enemies your next move. Again.”

Andraska sent a begrudging prayer to Pier and Pre asking for strength and braced himself. It was going to be a long day.
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Margery was a ruthless instructor.

She never wanted to hear that he was tired, or that his arms hurt. She pushed him unlike other trainers, forcing him to stay on his toes and push through the pain if only to survive her brutal hits. It was no secret the woman specialized in unarmed, so more than once Andras has to block against a sword strike, immediately followed by a punch. The first time she had done it, he had been looking at her sword and didn't expect to almost get a black eye. He had barely seen her out of his peripheral vision and was able to use his reflexes to get out of the way in time. It was luck... mostly.

“It is easier to keep the sword moving if it's closer to your body,” Margery offered, noticing how he lunged, “Your blade has a balancing point. Extend too much and it not only makes it harder for you to swing and easier for your opponents to disarm you.”

“Easier?”

“Yes.” In that moment, she illustrated this to him, having him attack her slowly, and watched as his sword arm reached out, and how she came downward, her own blade sliding and then she yanked away, his own sword leaping from his hands and clattering to the ground, “Just like that.”

“Show me again,” he said, running to retrieve his weapon, and panting as the shield weighed him down. His shoulders would feel their session in the morning, “I want to try.”

Besides the obvious advantages of being able to render your opponent almost helpless, Andráska thought to the other benefits. Once in a fight to the death, and your only weapon is ripped away from you, fear would settle in. And it would only give him more of a dominating edge.

Margery waited patiently, but sweat had built upon her brow and she was looking more worn than he thought he had ever seen her. Was she finally tiring? Oh, praise the Fates. Maybe Andras' lesson would complete itself before he died, “Tell me,” she said, “Do you miss the Iron Hand?”

The large woman took her stance, as did Andráska, trying to follow through the way she had shown him, “Sometimes.” He missed the idea of climbing the ranks and earning his place. Now... it was given to him, “The guard is harder.”

“Harder? That's not what a steward told me.”

Andráska brought his blade down, but was too slow in hooking his opponent's and failed to disarm her. He retook his stance, silently telling her to do the same. She didn't need prompting and followed his lead, “Well, if he's a steward, then he's never been in the guard. I patrolled the streets a lot as the Hand, but as an Ouroboros...” he shrugged, “I'm sent overseas. I have battled a Sessfiend, I am trained constantly. Everyone expects perfection. It's... a challenge.”

He didn't want to say exhausting. Such words could sound ungrateful and while he saw no one around, he was never sure if ears were listening.

“So, the rumors are true,” Margery whispered, meeting his eyes, “You really killed her?”

Her. His sister. Andráska Sessfiend Slayer. Kin Killer.

“Yeah. They're true.” With swift confidence, Andráska brought his blade down and forced her sword away, watching the metal soar away and then fall with a great clatter.

That was enough for today.
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ANDRASKA

  • Knowledge:
    • Shielded Combat: Shield Bash
    • Shielded Combat: Moving with Uncrossed Feet
    • Strength: Carrying the Weight of a Shield
    • Strength: Training Both Sides Equally
    • Tactics: When to Use a Large Shield
    • Margery: Using Quips in Battle
    • Title: Kinslayer
    • Title: Sessfiend Slayer
    • Melee Combat (Blades): Disarming Your Opponent
    • Melee Combat (Blades): Step Before You Swing
    Loot: None
    Injuries:
    • You will be significantly sore for the next trial or two. It is recommended you stretch and take warm baths to relieve some of the tension in your muscles.
    Fame: +10 (Affirmation of Sessfiend Slaying Rumors)

    Story: 5/5
    Collaboration: 0/5
    Structure: 5/5


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Comments: That was very well done. Even if it was a grinding thread, I like how the combat was done at your skill level. It pained me a teensy bit to give you the titles, but at this point, I think it is appropriate if you have not yet been awarded them. Additional fame is granted for having another believer in your accomplishment.

If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thank you!
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