Name: Tristan Venora
Knowledge:
Location: Sabaissant
Teddy Venora: Brother
Teddy Venora: Disregards social norms
Teddy Venora: Enjoys the spotlight
Teddy Venora: Vain
Teddy Venora: Singer
Teddy Venora: In love with Lazuli Warrick
Alistair Venora: Cousin
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Cousin
Zvezdana Venora: Married Veljorn Burhan during Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: In love with Veljorn Burhan
Zvezdana Venora: Ambitious
Zvezdana Venora: The story of her meeting with Veljorn
Veljorn Burhan: Engaged to Lazuli Warrick before Zvezdana
Granny Ebony: Matchmaker and marriage arranger
Rumour (Saun 716): Alistair Venora has a thing for Peake Andaris
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Saun: The hottest season in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Etiquette: How to send out a proper invitation
Leadership: How to delegate
Tactics: To avoid an unpleasant marriage, make yourself seem even less pleasant
Deception: How to hide your discomfort
Deception: Mask your true intentions with praise and admiration
Loot: Please deduct the cost of the food provided in this thread, as well as the bottle of wine, from your ledger if you haven’t done so already. This is as per this post. Thank you!
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +5 for hosting an event (tea with your brother & cousin)
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Knowledge:
Location: Sabaissant
House Venora: The most desirable family in Idalos
Tristan Venora: Brother
Tristan Venora: Sculptor
Tristan Venora: Playwright
Tristan Venora: Featured in the Gazette during Saun 716
Alistair Venora: Cousin
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Cousin
Zvezdana Venora: Married Veljorn Burhan during Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Untrustworthy?
Zvezdana Venora: Calls you “Baby Bear”
Zvezdana: Stunning
Zvezdana Venora: In love with Veljorn Burhan
Zvezdana Venora: The story of her meeting with Veljorn
Lazuli Warrick: Engaged to Veljorn Burhan before Zvezdana
Granny Ebony: Matchmaker and marriage arranger
Aelius: Tristan Venora’s friend
Faith: Feisty
Faith: An excellent cook
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Discipline: The importance of practice and repetition
Cosmetology: How to pair clothing so it accentuates the best physical features
Tactics: Avoid alcohol when engaging in a battle of wits
Storytelling: Exaggerate to make a story more interesting
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
Knowledge:
Teddy Venora: Cousin
Teddy Venora: The source of many crushes
Teddy Venora: “Baby Bear”
Teddy Venora: In love with Lazuli Warrick
Tristan Venora: Cousin
Aelius: Tristan Venora’s friend
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Stealth: Use holes and cracks to peer through without being seen
Etiquette: The importance of telling someone when they’ve done something particularly well or poorly
Intelligence: Servants make excellent spies
Tactics: Exercise caution when sharing important or private information
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/.5
Structure: 5/5 Comments: This was an excellent read! Lots of socializing, gossip, and fascinating interactions between the Venoras! All three of you have very strong characters with different motivations, and watching them all come together was fantastic. I really enjoyed reading through this and found about a gazillion people knowledges for you all.
The only reason I deducted a point from Story was because, unfortunately, it felt really rushed at closure. I would have really loved to see 1-2 more posts from each of you in order to properly close off this thread, since you are all still active on ST. There was so much intrigue and banter and hiding of intentions that it felt a bit surprising, or perhaps untrue, that Zvez would leave because of awkwardness at that point in the conversation. Other than that, however, this was so well done. You’re all very skilled writers!
Tristan, it was a bit challenging to read light blue text on a white background. I would encourage you to use a darker colour in future for ease of reviewing!
Teddy, you’re missing a fame ledger and an updated thread list on your character sheet. Please update these both as soon as possible! The only other note is to be cautious of consistency, as Teddy seemed to have a shift in attitude towards Zvezdana. In this post, he seems to feel she is untrustworthy and should be watched carefully, but later on he seems very familial and loving towards her. This may be a result of the post dates being quite far apart and just something to consider for future. And let it be noted that I adore Teddy and loved reading your posts.
If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!
Knowledge:
Location: Sabaissant
Teddy Venora: Brother
Teddy Venora: Disregards social norms
Teddy Venora: Enjoys the spotlight
Teddy Venora: Vain
Teddy Venora: Singer
Teddy Venora: In love with Lazuli Warrick
Alistair Venora: Cousin
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Cousin
Zvezdana Venora: Married Veljorn Burhan during Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: In love with Veljorn Burhan
Zvezdana Venora: Ambitious
Zvezdana Venora: The story of her meeting with Veljorn
Veljorn Burhan: Engaged to Lazuli Warrick before Zvezdana
Granny Ebony: Matchmaker and marriage arranger
Rumour (Saun 716): Alistair Venora has a thing for Peake Andaris
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Saun: The hottest season in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Etiquette: How to send out a proper invitation
Leadership: How to delegate
Tactics: To avoid an unpleasant marriage, make yourself seem even less pleasant
Deception: How to hide your discomfort
Deception: Mask your true intentions with praise and admiration
Loot: Please deduct the cost of the food provided in this thread, as well as the bottle of wine, from your ledger if you haven’t done so already. This is as per this post. Thank you!
Injuries: N/A
Fame: +5 for hosting an event (tea with your brother & cousin)
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Name: Teddy VenoraKnowledge:
Location: Sabaissant
House Venora: The most desirable family in Idalos
Tristan Venora: Brother
Tristan Venora: Sculptor
Tristan Venora: Playwright
Tristan Venora: Featured in the Gazette during Saun 716
Alistair Venora: Cousin
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Cousin
Zvezdana Venora: Married Veljorn Burhan during Saun 716
Zvezdana Venora: Untrustworthy?
Zvezdana Venora: Calls you “Baby Bear”
Zvezdana: Stunning
Zvezdana Venora: In love with Veljorn Burhan
Zvezdana Venora: The story of her meeting with Veljorn
Lazuli Warrick: Engaged to Veljorn Burhan before Zvezdana
Granny Ebony: Matchmaker and marriage arranger
Aelius: Tristan Venora’s friend
Faith: Feisty
Faith: An excellent cook
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Discipline: The importance of practice and repetition
Cosmetology: How to pair clothing so it accentuates the best physical features
Tactics: Avoid alcohol when engaging in a battle of wits
Storytelling: Exaggerate to make a story more interesting
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5
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Name: Zvezdana VenoraKnowledge:
Teddy Venora: Cousin
Teddy Venora: The source of many crushes
Teddy Venora: “Baby Bear”
Teddy Venora: In love with Lazuli Warrick
Tristan Venora: Cousin
Aelius: Tristan Venora’s friend
Alistair Venora: Engaged to Celeste Andaris in Saun 716
Saun 716 Event: An aukari burned down a house in Venora
Saun 716 Event: The aukari population is increasing in Rynmere
Aukari: Appear human
Stealth: Use holes and cracks to peer through without being seen
Etiquette: The importance of telling someone when they’ve done something particularly well or poorly
Intelligence: Servants make excellent spies
Tactics: Exercise caution when sharing important or private information
Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Story: 4/5
Collaboration: 5/.5
Structure: 5/5 Comments: This was an excellent read! Lots of socializing, gossip, and fascinating interactions between the Venoras! All three of you have very strong characters with different motivations, and watching them all come together was fantastic. I really enjoyed reading through this and found about a gazillion people knowledges for you all.
The only reason I deducted a point from Story was because, unfortunately, it felt really rushed at closure. I would have really loved to see 1-2 more posts from each of you in order to properly close off this thread, since you are all still active on ST. There was so much intrigue and banter and hiding of intentions that it felt a bit surprising, or perhaps untrue, that Zvez would leave because of awkwardness at that point in the conversation. Other than that, however, this was so well done. You’re all very skilled writers!
Tristan, it was a bit challenging to read light blue text on a white background. I would encourage you to use a darker colour in future for ease of reviewing!
Teddy, you’re missing a fame ledger and an updated thread list on your character sheet. Please update these both as soon as possible! The only other note is to be cautious of consistency, as Teddy seemed to have a shift in attitude towards Zvezdana. In this post, he seems to feel she is untrustworthy and should be watched carefully, but later on he seems very familial and loving towards her. This may be a result of the post dates being quite far apart and just something to consider for future. And let it be noted that I adore Teddy and loved reading your posts.
If you feel I've missed anything or if you have questions about your review, please don't hesitate to send me a quick PM. Thanks!