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Ryder
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Thread Name: Muggings and Maidens
City/Area: Etzos :)
Notes/Warnings: Not really
Requested Rewards:
Blades - Longsword: Disabling their arm
Blades - Longsword: Using the flat of the blade
Blades - Longsword: Blocking overhead
Blades - Longsword: Aiming for joints
Intimidation: Actions speak louder than words
Intimidation: Bloodshed leads to fear
Loot: Good guy points!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope!
Renown: Not sure how much, but for saving a guard in open space
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
ImageDoran Cooney
word count: 76
"The most dangerous people in the world are not the tiny minority instigating evil acts, but those who do the acts for them" ~ Suzy Kassem
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Kasoria
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Thread Name: To Trouble Their Fathers: Part III
City/Area: Westguard, West of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Kasoria back to his usual self... after being decidedly UN-Kassy. One more "tidying up" thread to go, and this Quest is done!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Lie to Protect Them
Intimidation: Pissed Pants? Consider the Point Made
Intimidation: All about the Specter of Terrible Acts
Intimidation: Crippling as Just the START of the Intimidation
Psychology: Knowing The Tells of a Lying Child
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Spinning Low Knee Kick

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Martyn: A Born Storyteller
NPC Tony: Enlightened, Crippled, Silenced
NPC Alsome: Knows the Truth, But Fears Ever Speaking It

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: No
Collaboration: Nuh-uh
Magic EXP: Neeeeeewwwwp
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Last edited by Kasoria on Fri Jun 01, 2018 10:10 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 127

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: At It Like Rabbits
City/Area: Emea (Dream)
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Emea: spirits can touch dreamers
Emea: Can self-wake by a strongly emotional event
Emea: Blending nightmare and dream
Aberration: The structure of Harvesters is unique and detailed
Aberration: The Harvester can touch their mage in a dream as in a fracture.
Research: Studying a subject up close

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
ImageDoran Cooney
word count: 81
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Devin
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Joined: Tue Apr 03, 2018 4:25 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Baron Smooglethorn
Renown: 1077
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Thread Name: Perfection In A Bottle
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: It's a weird thread. I bought Perfection In A Bottle from the Point Bank and wanted to acquire it IRP.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Definition of an accelerator
Alchemy: Reagent: Naf-rush: A potent accelerator
Deception: Pretending that you are going to leave
Discipline: Trying not to smile
Intimidation: If they don't comply, threaten to call the guards
Intimidation: Screaming can help

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
ImageDoran Cooney
word count: 95

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Zafir
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Profession: Miner
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Thread Name: Broken Promises
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Grief
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Listening to authority
Endurance: Forcing your body to obey
Endurance: Surviving emotional pain
Endurance: Finding inner strength
Mining: The consequences of over-confidence
Mining: Monsters may lurk

Non-skill Knowledge:
Baelam Sheulai qalar-Treid: Owner of Oscillette
Oscillette: Ellunian Refuge in Ne'haer
Sar'Vanis: Iconic weapon of the Sar'Vanis family
Sar"Vanis Family: Zafir is the last left in Ne'haer

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Small? Not sure really (Returning to his home community after he was thought eight-arcs dead.)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: A Hostage Situation
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Acting: Deliberately getting on peoples nerves
Acting: Pretending to be an honest man
Appraisal: Checking gold nel
Appraisal: Identifying fake gold nel
Intelligence: Getting a birds eye view
Intimidation: Threatening a hostage

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Small - Kidnapping someone moderately famous.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Handled!
word count: 67
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Juniper
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Profession: Adventurer
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Thread Name: Humble Beginnings
City/Area: Ne'Haer
Notes/Warnings: WARNING: ANGRY TUNAWA INSIDE
Requested Rewards:
Han


Skill Knowledge: 8 (collab)+ 6(9 posts)=14

Hunting: For Friends
Meditation: Praying to Center Yourself
Meditation: In the Heat of the Moment
Discipline: Making Friends Because You Have To
Persuasion: Convincing Someone to Let you Help Them
Intelligence: Probing Questions
Caregiving: Offering your Home
Caregiving: Helping to Get Fed
Caregiving: Persistent Kindness Yields Results
Caregiving: Offering Sympathy to A Stranger
Caregiving: Joking to Lighten The Mood
Caregiving: Making Sure Your Friends are Cared For

Non-Skill
None Requested

Juniper


Skill Knowledges: 8 (collab) + 5(8 posts)= 13

Polearms- Quarterstaff: One hand/armed wielding
Animal Training- Hen Harrier: one low, soft whistle = calm down, safe
Animal Training- Hen Harrier: beak tap when not flying to "Wait"
Meditation: Using fear as a grounding point
Intimidation: Threaten Pain From your bird
Intimidation: My Business is my own, bugger off
Intimidation: Good posture, Look Bigger, stronger and prouder
Field Craft: Checking if meat is still fresh enough to eat.
Socialization: Be Prepared
Socialization: knowing you're an oddity
Socialization: Being Cautious of Humanoids
Socialization: Placing a Little Trust in someone.
Interrogation: Managing to answer most of the questions

Non-Skill
Han: Makes Jokes
Han: Want's to be friends without gaining trust
Han: Weird, but I guess he's okay.
Han: Sometimes goes off into space
Han: Seems interested in my past
Han: Asks way too many freaking questions

Ne'Haer: Markets
Ne'Haer: Alley ways
Ne'Haer: The Lake


Loot: Sinna paid for some food that i marked down for 5sn, (not sure if that was too much or too little)
Injuries/Overstepping: Not really?
Renown: Up to grader
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 291
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Amaris
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Joined: Mon Mar 27, 2017 10:18 pm
Race: Mer
Profession: Councilor of Natural Affairs
Renown: 242
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Thread Name: A cut above the rest?
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Polearms (Naginata): Looks like a sword with a long shaft
  2. Detection: Winking of metal in the light
  3. Detection: Recognizing designs
  4. Endurance: Continuing with a seemingly hopeless task
Loot: - 37 GN for the naginata, 1x standard naginata
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 65
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Kasoria
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Posts: 1541
Joined: Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:34 am
Race: Lion Person
Renown: 935
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Thread Name: To Trouble Their Fathers: Part IV
City/Area: Westguard, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Finale! I hope you like it, I really think I rushed. But 'tis the new season and there's so much more to do!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Adopting an Air of Indifference to Bad News
Intimidation: Letting Someone Know Family Ties Can Be Broken
Intimidation: Raising Your Voice For Quiet
Negotiation: Striking a Deal
Negotiation: Offering Knowledge for Obedience
Socialization: Bringing Gifts for Children

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Reggie: Strong Woman, But Still Afraid of Kasoria
NPC Martyn: Learning Quick to Hide The Truth
Etzos Culture: "Until That Day"

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: No
Collaboration: Nuh-uh
Magic EXP: Neeeeeewwwwp
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Last edited by Kasoria on Sat Jun 02, 2018 10:00 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 121

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Amaris
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Posts: 527
Joined: Mon Mar 27, 2017 10:18 pm
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A stab in the dark
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Idiocy ahead
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Mathematics: Multiplication
  2. Polearms (Naginata): Footwork for basic movement
  3. Polearms (Naginata): Practicing proper form
  4. Discipline: Drawing the line with yourself
  5. Discipline: Seeing your decisions through
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A bump on the back of the head, a gnarly bruise on the hip, and another bruise on the elbow.
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 77
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