Review Request 2.1.1

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fishing for Family Feuds.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Carpentry: Go with the grain
Carpentry: Types of wood
Carpentry: Tools of the trade
Carpentry: Types, and uses, of sandpaper
Carpentry: Types of joint
Fletching: Basic parts
Fletching: Determines how the arrow rotates
Fletching: Straight fletch
Fletching: Wrap fletch
Fletching: The direction of the helical wrap doesn't matter
Fletching: Wrap fletch is much better at distance

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

Arlo

Carpentry: Go with the grain
Carpentry: Types of wood
Carpentry: Tools of the trade
Carpentry: Types, and uses, of sandpaper
Carpentry: Types of joint
Fletching: Basic parts
Fletching: Determines how the arrow rotates
Fletching: Straight fletch
Fletching: Wrap fletch
Fletching: The direction of the helical wrap doesn't matter
Fletching: Wrap fletch is much better at distance

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Completion
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Research: Compiling data
Research: Ensuring that data is triangulated and cross referenced.
Surgery: Blood separation
Surgery: Blood typing
Surgery: Racial differences in blood
Surgery: The use of blood in surgery


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: No.

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Fracticide
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nothing too graphic. This was intended to be a collab thread with myself and Finn, but chances are he isn't gonna popping in proper for a few weeks at least, and we really needed to move forward before another season passes us by. It was supposed to have a different ending but that's been pushed back too sadly. Just posted and reconfigured what we have in our google doc.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Weathering incredibly personal insults without immediate retaliation
Discipline: Resisting the urge to bash a face in
Deception: Feigning ignorance
Endurance: Taking a punch to the cheek
Intimidation: Viciously creative threats
Intimidation: Juxtapositioning calmness and sudden shouting
Intimidation: Feigning sweetness to convey a threat
Intimidation: Brandishing magic as a tool of terror
Intimidation: Letting the potential threat of violence speak for itself
Unarmed Combat: Pinning a smaller opponent to a wall
Unarmed Combat: Slamming an opponent into a table

Non-skill knowledge:
PC - Finn
Finn: 'Travelled to Ulthaldria'
Finn: Hates you
Finn: Thinks you're a shite sister

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Punch to the face and cheek.
Fame: Prolly not. Maybe negative for damage to an interrogation room and use of magic?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: used a bit of magic, but probably not enough to count. No

[Noth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: What's Yours is Mine
City/Area: Etzos Underground
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence, not graphic.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Requested Rewards:

Noth

Knowledge:
Tactics: Kill the Head to Assimilate
Tactics: Make a Harsh Entrance to Deter Retaliation
Intimidation: Making Phonetic Noises to Emphasize Bodily Destruction
Intimidation: The Power of Touching Someone
Unarmed: Using Armor to Deflect Punches
Unarmed: Detecting where a Punch will Travel.

Loot: More gangsters and thugs for A'A.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, nothing serious.
Fame: Negative 2 or 3 for beating a gang leader to death in order to dominate his followers.

Kyin

Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges:
Investigation: Realize When a Hunch is Wrong
Investigation: Note a Person of Interest
Investigation: Don't Directly Interfere (Until You Have Dirt on Them)
Investigation: Know When a Suspect Plans to Stay
Investigation: Tail a Suspect
Stealth: Avoid Person of Interest's Sight

General Knowledges:
Noth: One Winged Avriel
Noth: Sensitive to Dumbassery
Al'Angyryl: It Exists and is Not for Good People



Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A, No one saw anything.

Already Reviewed! Cheers!

[Keegan]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Busy Buzzings
City/Area: Rhakros
Notes/Warnings: Keegan hits a dog in the name of science.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Poisons: Venom milking is a delicate process
Poisons: Datura trumpets are pretty and poison
Poisons: Poisons with dual delivery methods
Animal Handling: When to have a firm hand
Empathy: When careless threading gets you noticed
Discipline: Doing things right over doing things easy

Loot:

• One batch of poison (venom & ground datura blossom)
• Poisoned tobacco, rolled and tinned
• A stupid dog that she got as a gift and paid for
• Jar of Sandman wasp venom (Effects: paralysis, slight euphoria)
• Jar of datura trumpet blossom dust (Effects: Short term memory loss)

Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

[Yanahalqah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Langauge Learning: Draketh
City/Area: Andaris
Notes: I tried making this interesting, but all I ended up doing was bitching about the education system, run out of ideas of how to write a decent student thread, and made a boring one instead. Be warned. It is bad.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: skill:
-Linguistics: Draketh
-Linguistics: Tenses
-Linguistics: Building a vocabulary takes time
-Intelligence: writing down what is said
-Teaching: different ideologies
-Writing: copying text
Non-skill
-Andaris: University
-Draketh: Present tense
-Draketh: past tense
-Draketh: written form
-Draketh: the past tense suffix
-Draketh: Basic vocabulary
-Draketh: Pronunciations

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Scalvtown Outro
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: It’s kind of mushy for a job thread.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Lute: Improvising memory as song
Lute: Difficult emotions expressed with hope
Meditation: Exploring memories through music
Meditation: Processing difficult emotions with music
Storytelling: Telling a story without words

Loot: Priceless treasures called memories.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: Nope

[Navyri]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Tricks of the Trade
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Mature! A hot and heavy make out session. One person takes off their shirt.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Skill Knowledge:
Deception: Create A False Sense of Comfort
Detection: How to Spot The Intent of Others
Seduction: Sharp Nails Can Feel Good on Skin
Seduction: Claim Territory with Scratches and Hickeys
Poison: Using Poisonous Lipstain
Pickpocketing: Raiding Pockets The Morning After

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Kali'rial]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Obidience and Discipline
City/Area: Scalvoris Surrounds
Notes/Warnings: One strong cuss word and a punch to the face
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (6 out of 6 for one page solo)
Language: Xanthean (General conversation)
Stealth: Avoiding being detected by travelling companions
Discipline: Learning to obey your elders
Discipline: Ignoring pain to stay focused
Ranged Weapon (Shortbow): Maintaining tension in extreme conditions
Strength: Socking a delinquent one on the jaw. POW!

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Dyn'rial: Can be a very hard teacher
Dyn'rial: Doesn't give praise verbally
Xan'neua: Has let overprotectiveness turn her sour
Lenwyn: Was a total jerk

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Presentation
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nupe
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: Transmutation: The Varied Fragrances of Perfume
Transmutation: Ether Missile
Acrobatics: Speed Vault
Running: Outrunning your pursuer
Detection: Sensing hostility
Investigation: Asking for directions

Normal Knowledge:
Etzos: Location – The Citizen's Free Market
The Black Guard
The superficiality of the upper class
Presentation is Paramount

Loot: nu
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Fame: A bit of negative, maybe? Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: nu
Magic EXP: yes pls