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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Like a Prism
City/Area: Beach Outside Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nah. Just a party on the beach with good music and good friends.

Requested Rewards:
Kali’rial
Skill Knowledge:
Swimming: Holding your breath
Swimming: Floating on your back
Socialisation: Picking up your guests needs without asking (serving water to the thirsty)
Socialisation: Dancing is almost a requirement in social gatherings that involve music

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Rainbow Sky
Pash: Still trying to get you to dance, still succeeding

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash Vy’ryn
Skill Knowledge:
Carpentry: Building a small shelter
Caregiving: Providing refreshment for a beach party
Caregiving: Keeping a shady spot comfortable
Endurance: Playing music in the heat of Saun
Leadership: Leading accompanying musicians
Lute: Keeping a party going with the right tempo
Lute: Keeping up with your accompaniment
Persuasion: Charming persistence

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Rainbow Sky

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, please. Public performance +5, Providing Shelter and Water +1
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Tio Silver
Skill Knowledge:
Dancing: All about footwork
Dancing: Be enthusiastic
Dancing: Go with the flow
Dancing: It's tiring
Dancing: It's hot
Rhetoric: Praising water
Rhetoric: Killer crabs?
Endurance: Dealing with stitches.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Rainbow Sky

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, please.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Mero
Skill Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Lose a layer to keep cool.
Endurance: Drink water!
Psychology: Fake a smile
Dancing: Wild movements? Or intentional?
Meditation: Accepting your own presence.
Investigation: Kissing is hard to look at, but significant
Psychology: Emotions by Proxy
Acting: Hiding your thoughts

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Rainbow Sky

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, please.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Glass and Sass
City/Area: The Ball and Chain, Almund, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Epic bar fight but a quick escape.

Requested Rewards:
Kali’rial
Skill Knowledge:
Socialisation: Buying people drinks is a good way to make friends
Socialisation: Bar fights are insane
Socialisation: Sarcasm

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Glass Trial
Location: Almund: The Buckle and Chain Tavern

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please. Glass Trial Participation +?. Reviewers’ Discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash Vy’ryn
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Signs of a bar fight stirring
Lute: Playing music while touching Tanlges
Lute: Music as a form of self-defense
Persuasion: You’d be surprised.
Rhetoric: You could say we know each other well enough
Socialization: Always an open table
Tactics: Knowing when to leave the tavern

Empathy: Augmenting Elithem abilities through use
Empathy: The tangles of the intoxicated are less resistant

Elithem: Musical Enchantment (Minor): Synergy with Empathy Domain Magic

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Glass Trial
Location: Almund: The Buckle and Chain Tavern

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light overstepping with the use of Empathy and Elithem together—exhaustion and a terrible headache for the rest of the trial.
Fame: Yes, please. Public performance as a form of self-defense +3 (Public Performance +5, Act of Magic -2), Glass Trial Participation +?, Reviewers’ Discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
Tio Silver
Skill Knowledge:
Gambling: Drinking games
Gambling: The art of Cheating
Acting: Cheating? No sir, not me
Acting: Pretending to be drunk
Tactics: Don't hit on women who's friends have flaming swords
Tactics: A good time to escape
Rhetoric: Children's rhymes
Seduction: Blonde + Pirate + Badass = Yes

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Scalvoris Event: Glass Trial
Location: Almund: The Buckle and Chain Tavern

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please. Drinking game champion +?, Glass Trial Participation +?. Reviewers’ Discretion.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: One Animal, Many Customers
City/Area: North of Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence via hunting a deer
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Recognizing Hafrein Deer Tracks

Thrown (Javelin): Twisting your body from the hip for a better throw

Stealth: Use Mud to mask your scent

Stealth: Removing possibly noisy hazards beforehand

Hunting: Boars cover themselves in mud

Fieldcraft: Using branches to craft a hide


Loot: 1 Hafrein Deer Hide (Poor), 1 Hafrein Deer Antler, 4 Hafrein Deer Hooves
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Timely delivery of needed goods +3
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Awakenings
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nah.

Requested Rewards:
Kali’rial
Skill Knowledge:
Detection: Deep injuries can leave lingering pain even when healed
Cartography: How to mark locations on a map
Rhetoric: Convincing another to journey Idalos
Rakahi Pidgin: Rajo (beautiful)
Philosophy: Fate might be a real thing

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Pash: Ran away from home
Pash: Feels guilt for his decision
Pash: His father was injured in 716
Pash: His brother was killed in 716

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: M/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash Vy’ryn
Skill Knowledge:
Cartography: Sketching a rough map
Cartography: Marking cities on a map
Cartography: Charting a course
Drawing: Pen and ink
Endurance: Keeping watch when already exhausted
Navigation: City locations across Idalos
Navigation: Travel times by sea
Navigation: Multiple-port journeys
Rhetoric: Admitting your mistakes
Tactics: Planning a multi-stop sailing voyage

Non-Skill Knowledge:
N/A (All the Kali’rial knowledges are just assumed at this point lol)

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Pash really needs a long nap.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Padraig
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: An Unexpected Withdrawl.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Bad guys. Violence. Very PG13
Requested Rewards:
Faith
Deception: Deception doesn't have to be a lie.
Discipline: Not allowing yourself to panic when you are vulnerable
Discipline: Letting a loved one go in order to protect them
Persuasion: Being clear about what you are saying
Ranged Combat: Throat shot
Ranged Combat: Adrenaline boosts actions and accuracy
Unarmed Combat: Groin kick in combat.
Unarmed Combat: Ensure that weapons can not strike you

Loot: No (ledger up to date re: gift)
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Give a gift (+2), Take down robbers in a bank!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Padraig
Bladed Combat: Take advantage of surprise
Bladed Combat: Maintain focus
Bladed Combat: Fighting multiple opponents
Detection: Noting different behaviours.
Detection: Criminals dress differently?
Detection: Spotting familiar faces
Unarmed Combat: Acting as a shield
Unarmed Combat: Shielding against multiple opponents

Loot: Clothing (as per Faith's post)
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Deal with robbers in a bank!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Three to get ready
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild cursing?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Endurance: Biting through pain
  • Unarmed combat: headbutt
  • Tactics: striking first for an advantage
  • Acrobatics: walking when drunk
  • Intimidation: the "or else" threat
  • Pickpocket:Stealing other people's drinks
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises all over his body, a black eye, headache, bruised ribs
Fame: Prolly not
Collaboration: nah
Magic EXP: (nah)
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Victor Amielle
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: The Curious Case of Amelia Verres
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: The thread's just a little weird. It's also part one of two.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Researching an employer (and the work they have for you)
Logistics: Certain Projects require careful Planning
Persuasion: Persuading somebody to tell the truth (or at least trying to)
Psychology: Sometimes it's acceptable to lie
Psychology: Parental pressure
Detection: Noticing when somebody is nervous

Amelia Verres: My fake fiancee
Amelia Verres: Jewelrymaker
Amelia Verres: Cares what other people think of her
Amelia Verres: Doesn't really want to get married
Loot: No. But Victor loses 2 gn because he buys two mugs of mead
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Positive. Victor buys Amelia a drink and agrees to help her (she's pretty desperate).
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Gangui
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Profession: Faction Leader
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Drugs are bad and drug dealers are worst
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Drugs and death
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
The Underground: Basic Layout
Location: The Laughing Potion
Vluhariqh: Aka Valyria
Drugs: Taking them for the first time
Hallucingens make you see alternate realities
Faldrun: Killing him is motivation
Galloping a horse to death

Negotiation: Offering services in exchange for items
Negotiation: Using gold to get out of contracts
Persuasion: Swearing Oaths
Persuasion: Declaring sides
Persuasion: Using moral superiority
Intimidation: Wearing full plate armor to look more menacing.
Mount Horse: Riding on hallucinogens.
Discipline: Psyching oneself to push forward.
Endurance: If your going through hell, keep on going.

Note:
Vlu is not active anymore...

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: bruises
Fame: Maybe some positive rep for being honorable about his contracts and talking to Vlu before bailing?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Life of Fi
City/Area: Etzos - Outlying Cities
Notes/Warnings: Robin says some mean stuff to Zipper and drives her to tears on the inside
Requested Rewards:

Robin
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Not Pulling Hair
Discipline: Curbing Behavior
Discipline: Not Yelling
Discipline: Talking to Zipper
Endurance: Surviving unfamiliarity
Negotiation: A Truth for a Truth
Negotiation: Knowing When to Speak
Negotiation: Knowing When to Listen
Persuasion: More Flies with Honey

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC - Zipper
Zipper: Hates Boats
Zipper: Attractive yet horrifying
Zipper: Wanted to leave Etzos as a child
Zipper: Stubborn as stone
Zipper: Your babysitter
Zipper: Crazy fascist bitch
Necromancy: Discussing Felicia's magic
Attunement: Arses
Empathy: Arses
Becoming: Self-esteem challenged cunts wanting to be anyone else
Transmutation: Senses, comprehends, warps
Transmutation: Make things, shoot energy, kicks arse

Zipper
Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation: Sculpting
Transmutation: Restoring rusted metal
Deception: Offering half-truths about your magic
Deception: Lying with the truth
Deception: Deflecting questions
Discipline: Tolerating people you despise
Endurance: Suffering a sleepless night on a rocking boat
Intelligence: Gathering information by making them ask the questions
Intelligence: Provoking information with hard questions

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC - Robin
Robin: Has a necromancer sister
Robin: Rescued Finn
Robin: Is ignorant of most Domain Magic
Robin: Has less power over water
Robin: Can’t stand other Defiers
Robin: Inexplicably believes in freedom over order and structure
Defiance: Listen and speak to the elements
Defiance: Defiers have elemental preferences
Ne’haer: Not under Immortal rule
Uthaldria: Land of Hordes and Monsters
Hiladrith: Bordering Etzos
Aberration: Addicts with power
Necromancy: Raises dead bodies

Loot: No for both
Injuries/Overstepping: No for both
Fame: Prolly not for both
Collaboration: Yeah
Magic EXP: No
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Noth
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Review Request 2.1.1

Thread Name: Volatile Concoctions
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None


Noth

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Definition of Reagant
Alchemy: Definition of Neutralizer
Alchemy: Your Powder is a Neutralizer
Detection: Observing Someone As They Work Is a Great Way to Learn
Persuasion: Offering Something for Someone's Help
Tactics: Scheduling A Meeting Far Ahead
Tactics: Allow Someone to Test Something Before Using It.

Doran: Surprisingly Not Arrogant
Doran: Stabbed Xiur
Doran: Will Make You A Gauntlet

Loot: Lost some powder and a few golden nels.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Doran

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Analyzing an unknown Reagent
Alchemy: Certain Reagents negate each other without a Binder
Alchemy: Certain Reagents need to be combined with another Reagent of equal Potency
Alchemy: Certain Reagents require a Target Material of high Quality
Alchemy: Reagent: Noth's Powder: A powerful Neutralizer
Alchemy: Using a new Tool for each Working Step in order to prevent Contamination
Alchemy: Definition of a Neutralizer
Tactics: Scheduling A Meeting Far Ahead

Research: The Container an Object came in can provide clues regarding its Origin
Negotation: Offering an Item of greater Value in order to get the item you want

Location: The Broken Blade
Location: The Gardener's Grace
Noth: Half Avriel
Noth: How he found the Powder
Noth: A possible ally?

Loot: 1/3 Pound of Neutralizing Powder and a Really Old Bag
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive 1-2 for volunteering to help someone with a problem.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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