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Alistair
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Thread Name: The First Witch of Skalden
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Hey boo

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
I don't want any.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe slight or small for brazenly approaching the anti-mage lady and embarking on a mission to kill the Witches.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: Muse to Me
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Cooking people
Etiquette: Offering people the food they like
Linguistics: The difficulties of talking to somebody who doesn't speak Common well
Linguistics: Asking somebody to write something down in their native language in order to have it translated later on
Politics: Reading up on the history of your duchy is important
Research: Why Ynidra became a cannibal
Research: Interviewing somebody for a play
Writing: A play about a Naerikk
Writing: A play that has everything!

Yndira: Naerikk
Yndira: Eats People

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for offering to make Yndira a star and write a play about her.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Last edited by Tristan Venora on Tue Jun 26, 2018 6:10 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 126
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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: [Oakleigh] It's Just Business
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: The other PC stopped posting. My part of the thread is over 1.500 words.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Welcoming a noble visitor
Etiquette: Wearing appropriate clothing
Linguistics: Certain names just sound better!
Linguistics: The language of wine
Linguistics: Certain terms just don't make sense!
Politics: I should probably change my name to "Oakleigh" sometime
Politics: Have fun first, talk about politics later
Politics: Doing business with a fellow noble
Seduction: You are allowed to have more than one lover

Damon Andaris: Wine merchant
Damon Andaris: Blessed of Ilaren

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for doing business with a fellow noble.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Last edited by Tristan Venora on Tue Jun 26, 2018 6:10 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 125
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Thread Name: [Venora] Memory: Balls Aren't for Me.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: The other PC stopped posting. My part of the thread is over 1.500 words.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to be a pair of young lovers
Cosmetology: Pink isn't for everybody
Deception: Lord Venora is over there!
Persuasion: Save me!
Persuasion: Let me steal you away
Politics: Wear the colour of your House!
Running: Running from an unwelcome suitor
Seduction: Wild girls are great!
Stealth: Looking for something to hide behind

Lorena Burhan: I kissed her

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Yes, for running from an unwelcome suitor, kissing Lorena in front of witnesses and causing a scene.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Last edited by Tristan Venora on Tue Jun 26, 2018 6:10 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 124
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Tristan Venora
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Thread Name: The Family Tree
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. This should probably be "mature", to be honest, but unfortunately I didn't make the first post and thus can't add thread tags.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: The many uses of beards
Etiquette: Cleaning your hands with your shirts is practical, not bad manners!
Linguistics: Words don't always mean what you think they mean
Linguistics: Nicknames
Sculpting: Peake 2.0
Sculpting: Working for a difficult client
Sculpting: Branching out and making prosthetics
Sculpting: Sometimes sculptures don't reflect reality

Peake Andaris: Gay?
Peake Andaris: Lost a leg
Peake: Might keep a harem of sows somewhere
Peake: A great man, in every aspect

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Tristan was going to make a sculpture of a really important man, so maybe?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Thread Name: Purchasing Power
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread. My part is over 1.500 words.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Refraining from touching that muscular slave
Discipline: Not jumping back even though you are afraid
Interrogation: Interrogating a new slave
Persuasion: Fight well, and I'll treat you well

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Thread Name: The Language of the Waves
City/Area: Scalv
Notes/Warnings: Memory. Rynata is sometimes referred to as Sirin
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Linguistics: Phonetic alphabet
Linguistics: A written language
Linguistics: Basic lessons in Rakahi
Stealth: Finding a good hiding spot
Running: A quick start
Negotiation: Setting your eyes on the reward

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Ship: The Blue Wing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: The Ballad of Jersey Krome
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Dyin' Ain't Much Of A Living (Unless You're Into Necromancy)
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Language and Violence

I haven't heard from Lucy in weeks and she hasn't been online for two, so I'm gonna wrap this up. Thanks in advance, and I've let Lucy know to get in touch with... whoever grabs this, when she comes back!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Throwing Knives): The Back is a Nice, Broad Target
Blades (Throwing Knives): Fifteen Feet is a Safe Range for a Novice
Discipline: Taking The Time to Make a Useful Observation
Poisons: How Long It Takes Ghost Mushroom (Weapon Smear) To Kill
Stealth: Still, Silent, Unnoticed
Strength: Carrying a Corpse


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Magic: Real, But Rare
PC Lucretia Meadows: Young, Unstable, Musician and Mage


Loot: Payment for the contract - I'm thinking around 250gn (around $5000, which seems fair considering it's a hit, sure, but kinda... low-rent)
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yes and No - word gets around that a rat vanished, likely on Vorund's orders, but specifics... well, hence the "vanished" part
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Thread Name: Fire in the Blood
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
Research: Write clear notes
Research: Consider all angles of a problem
Research: Ensure that you test as much as possible
Writing: Lab notes should be numbered
Writing: Write for others, make things repeatable
Writing: Labelling / numbering systems.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Max already
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
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