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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.1.4

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Thread Name: War Song
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Sexual references
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Scabbing...?
Medicine: Sexually transmitted illnesses
Medicine: When your patient fakes you out
Business Management: Sending a worker on leave for a violation
Business Management: Maintaining the integrity of your business
Detection: Sometimes patients lie

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Probs not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Nalin Marit
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Thread Name: I for one, want to find out!
City/Area: Scalv Town
Notes/Warnings: Uhm... Grotesque Illness description? Not really other than that really Just some... strange cuteness and minor language...
Requested Rewards: 15xp each Plus Knowledges

Nalin Marit

Skill Knowledge: 12 posts, collaboration= 17 knowledges.
Resistance:Minor Fever
Resistance:Ink Bloom Burn
Deception: Smiling through the pain
Deception: Pretending you're okay.
Deception: Knowing when your mask is failing
Endurance: Resisting Pain from illness over a long Journey
Endurance: Pulling your weight when you're sick
Logistics: Friends Might be able to help you hide
Logistics: Someone that doesn't know you might be better for travel when wanting to hide your location.
Caregiving: Ensuring your siblings safety
Caregiving: keeping your sibling calm when their afraid
Negotiation: Working for what you want
Negotiation: Money's not always needed in a negotiation
Socialization: Trying to make a joke to ease the tension
Socialization: Helping someone understand how humans work
Meditation: Trying to understand your own feelings
Medicine: Sometimes rest is the best medicine

Non-skill Knowledges:
Volker: Caught me when I Fell
Volker: Touched My cheek
Volker: Made me blush somehow
Volker: To the point with words
Volker: Carried me with no prompting
Volker: Paid for a room
Volker: Didn't flinch away when I revealed my wound.
Volker: Helped take care of me.
Volker: Growls... it's kind of cute...
Volker: Won't take the money
Volker: It's not always about looks
Volker: What is this feeling?
Volker: Shouldn't I be afraid?
Volker: My.. protector?
Oor: Is deffinitely not human
Oor: Doesn't like me
Oor: Isn't always there
Oor: Protector of Volker
Oor: Doesn't like Lavender either
Oor: Deems Volker an Animal
Oor: Makes it sound like Volker might be a killer


Volker

Skill Knowledge: 12 posts, Collaboration= 17 knowledges
Acrobatics: Swift thinking and Arm grabbing
Etiquette: Following through with your actions
Leadership: Giving commands
Leadership: Knowing when someone needs rest
Leadership: Being a Guide for those unfamiliar with the area
Medicine: Caring for a sick person
Medicine: Wrap snow in something to cool but not burn skin
Strength: Holding a Man like a Princess
Endurance: Carrying a man for an extended period of time
Socialization:Always good to make sure someone's okay
Socialization: Understanding Non-verbal queues isn't easy
Socialization: Simple questions are sometimes better
Socialization: Recognizing someone isn't using their first language
Navigation: Path finding in the dark
Navigation: Leading others around your "Home town"
Logistics: Figuring out who would be good to have for lunch
Logistics: Sometimes it's good to back away from an original plan

Non-skill Knowledges:
Nalin: eh... he's kind of cute
Nalin: Okay.. really cute
Nalin: He's HOT OKAY?!
Nalin: Bug off Oor I'm going to help him!
Nalin: Didn't mean to offend with money.
Nalin: That can't really just be a disease
Nalin: His smell is... yeah
Nalin: Bliiiiinded by the Whiiiiite
Nalin: Deer in the Swine
Lavender: Deer with the Swine
Lavender: The..... Competition?
Lavender: Wait... so.. she's his sister?
Lavender: Oor says Nalin's screwin her... I'm... not sure i want to believe it.
Lavender: Weird hand thing?
Lavender: Cares about her brother in weird ways




Loot: Volker: -1 gn for Hotel fee
Nalin: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Volker: None
Nalin: Fever 1-2 trials if not treated, and Progression of Inkbloom, Symptoms of Inkboom progressively get worse for the next half trial before dying down.
Renown: Up to Grader
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Return to Work
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence, nothing graphic
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Skill
Medicine: Dealing with multiple causalities in a spread out area


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: At max.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Padraig

Knowledge:
Investigation: Asking pertinent questions
Investigation: Looking for clues in the environment
Investigation: Physical evidence can invoke memory
Leadership: Taking charge of organising a search for injured
Leadership: Instructing scared people what to do
Leadership: Devising a means to inform others of vital information
Strength: Lifting heavy shelves.
Strength: Clearing heavy items from injured people.

Loot:Nurp
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Yes, please. 10 or 15?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 115
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Padraig
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Thread Name: Practical Purchases
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Skill
Caregiving: Even very young babies need stimulation
Caregiving: Talking to babies provokes a response
Caregiving: Caring for twins is a feat in itself
Caregiving: The art of feeding and changing twins
Discipline: Walking over a bridge


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: At max.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Padraig

Knowledge:
Persuasion: Explaining why what you've done is a good idea
Persuasion: Explain how you'll put right the flaws
Persuasion: Why simply giving things away without talking to all involved is a bad idea
Rhetoric: A good description can be very compelling.

Loot:The house has been bought, money deducted etc from ledger. House
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Maybe 5 for buying a house without even seeing it?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 142
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Thread Name: Under Starry Skies
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
Skill
Caregiving: Check to make sure that she's really alright
Caregiving: Know when it's time to back off.
Cooking: Prepare in advance in order to get your timing right
Cooking: Fish cook quickly
Cooking: Seasoning fish inside and out
Cooking: Use oil with fish, but sparingly
Cooking: Wrap fish in bacon to add flavour
Cooking: Use the bacon fat to season vegetables
Cooking: Steaming vegetables
Cooking: Poaching pears in brandy


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe 5 for hosting a local?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Vega

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Puppies like it when you fuss them
Animal Husbandry: Puppy needs comfort
Animal Husbandry: Let puppy sleep on your lap
Animal Husbandry: Dogs like to be scratched, especially behind the ear.
Animal Husbandry: Puppies have distinct personalities
Caregiving: Think about if a place might make someone sad.
Caregiving: Consider ways of making people psychologically comfortable
Etiquette: Call your boyfriend's father Mr Creede
Etiquette: Speak your condolences, sincerely.
Psychology: Familiar places can have many different impacts on someone grieving


Loot:+1 puppy!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Maybe 5 for hosting a local?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Rowan
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Thread Name: [Cally's] Finding Your Feet
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope, pretty chill
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge: N/A (Doesn't want any)
Loot: No.
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Renown: No.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Rowan

Knowledge:
  • Skill
    • Detection: Assessing furnishings to determine a restaurant's expense
    • Detection: Finding kindness in people
    • Endurance: Adjusting to being on land after being at sea
    • Etiquette: Apologising for a messy appearance
    • Etiquette: People will help you if you're polite
    • Persuasion: Convincing another to hire you
    • Rhetoric: Making polite enquiries
    • Seduction: Using flirtation to try to get what you want
    • Subterfuge: Hiding evidence of a rough past
    • Tactics: Planning a possible retreat
  • Non-skill
    • Location: Scalvoris Housing Offices
    • Scalvoris Town: Your new home
    • Location (Scalvoris Town): Cally's
    • Faith: Works at Cally's
    • Faith: Genuinely kind and helpful
    • Cally's: Charity Endeavour
    • Trudi (NPC): Waitress at Cally's
Loot: +1 Server Job at Cally's
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Renown: Possibly, due to being seen with Faith/being employed by Faith.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 177
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Relief Effort 2: Logistics
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is part of a series of thread involving a number of pcs and a few days. The full list and overview are here
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Leadership: Being clear when drastic times are calling for drastic measures
Logistics: Find out what's needed, not what you think is needed
Negotiation: Barter down
Negotiation: It's not about what it's worth to you - it's about what it's worth to them.
Negotiation: Making sure that you are explicit in negotiations
Negotiation: Promising to return what you borrow - or replace it.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: at max
Collaboration: nope
Magic EXP: no
Last edited by Faith Augustin Champion on Mon Apr 23, 2018 10:01 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 119
"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Kasoria
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Thread Name: I. Before
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Developing Calluses Over Knuckles and Joints
Tactics: Knowing When to RUN
Tactics: Nullifying a Numerical Advantage With a Narrow Battlefield
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Perfect Your Form, Then Work on Speed
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Targeting Feet to Immobilize Your Enemy
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Hurling Hard Objects at Soft Targets


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Rand and Co.: Schoolyard Bullies and Future Thugs
Etzos: Riddled with Narrow Passageways Between the Rings
Etzos: Some Schooling Made Available (Quality Dependent on Payment and Location)


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe a little, from when he was a boy
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Kasoria on Wed May 02, 2018 1:58 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 121

Appearance

  • Habitually dressed in boots, breeches, tunic, and cloak.
  • Long hair down to the shoulders, usually swept back or in a rough ponytail
  • Prefers a trimmed beard and mustache

Mutations

  • Star-shaped scar on each palm.
  • Air around him seems to thicken and become more turbulent the closer a person gets to him.
  • Pitch black eyes, from tear ducts to the pupils.
  • Arms from shoulder to palms appear as if heavy chains are wrapped around them.
  • Wisps of black smoke constantly drifts around his body, forming the rough outline of a cloak. The more agitated he becomes, the thicker the layers get.
    Note: the torch-motif medallion Kasoria wears negates the visible effects of this mutation.
  • Roughly circular pattern across breastbone, constantly transforming, and resettling
  • Sunken, closed eyes in the back of hands; they open when stared at
  • Skin takes on the tone and quality of whatever material he's just Transmuted
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Juniper
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Thread Name: How many trials have passed like this?
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: It's just... depressing to be honest XD
Requested Rewards: 6 Skill knowledges and 10 points
Knowledge:
Meditation: Pushing back the negative (even if you fail)
Meditation: Repetitive actions (like punching) To try and calm down
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: The fist
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Punching more than once
Torture: Being forced to sit in your own refuse.. yeah.. that's a thing
Torture: Going without food or water


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore hand for a few trials? not like that's going to make much of a difference XD
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: (No)
word count: 115
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Story Time
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Noth

Knowledge:
No knowledges

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: No.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Faith

Knowledge:
None

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: None
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

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