Review Request 2.1.1

[Noth]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dude, Where's my Goose?
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Kovic says some stuff thats a bit graphic, but other than that, you're fine.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Watching for Subtle Tells to Determine Intent
Leadership: Giving Gifts to Underlings
Leadership: Leaders Advice their Underlings
Tactics: Taking What Someone Discards
Tactics: Making Someone Discard Something You Want.

Kovic: May have had a tryst with Nightshade
Kovic: Stated that he would abandon the tryst.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No


Comment: Everyone other than me has since left the site. This thread is suuuper old. Since only my stuff actually needs graded, if you want a tl:dr, Kovic had Fridgar turn into a goose to spy on Noth. He brought Noth some food. They ate, Kovic said something about being with someone who he described like Nightshade, Noth got salty and told him to end it for the sake of their group.

[Celeste Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hands On
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings:

Celeste

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 maximum)
Acrobatics: Jumping whilst running
Discipline: Not giving in to fear
Discipline: Trying to contain emotions
Endurance: Running through the house
Endurance: Not slowing down for stairs
Intelligence: Gathering small details from a story
Strength: Running up stairs builds calf muscles

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Xander

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 maximum)
Endurance: Cleaning wounds can be more painful than getting them
Endurance: The pain of a broken rib
Endurance: Moving when in pain
Etiquette: Giving in to fussing
Intelligence: The importance of details in a story
Intelligence: Signs and sigils of group membership
Intelligence: How to spot someone marked by an Immortal
Medicine: Techniques for cleaning wounds
Psychology: People can say one thing, mean another.

Loot: Injuries already given in previous thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Celeste Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Change of Plans
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings:

Celeste

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 maximum)
Discipline: Making yourself be quiet when you want to get hysterical
Discipline: Attending to someone else's emotions.
Logistics: Planning for childcare
Logistics: Considering the future
Negotiation: Dealing with difficult people
Negotiation: Giving a little to get what you want
Persuasion: Trying to make Xander see reason
Persuasion: Explaining why his idea is a bad one
Psychology: Dealing with shock
Psychology: Good news can be shocking

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Xander

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 maximum)
Investigation: Piecing together snippets to form questions
Investigation: Considering the most logical meaning of someone's words
Investigation: Trying to make sense of nonsensical conversation
Investigation: Pulling in information to draw a conclusion
Leadership: Taking control of a change in circumstance.
Leadership: Stating what you will do, what you expect others to do
Negotiation: Dealing with difficult people
Negotiation: Giving a little to get what you want
Psychology: People can be very confusing
Psychology: Communication is made more complex by emotions

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Celeste Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Boy King
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings:

Celeste

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (3 posts = 8 maximum)

Deception: Pretending to be a devout follower of a religion
Detection: Noting eye movements
Discipline: Not charging ahead
Intelligence: Consider why someone would do something apparently illogical
Logistics: Planning to overthrow a throne.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Nope
Devotion: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Xander

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (4 posts = 9 maximum)
Intelligence: Identifying information sources
Intelligence: Question the validity of gossip and unverified sources
Intelligence: Consider the consequences of actions
Investigation: Considering different sources of information
Investigation: Look at the motivation behind behaviour
Psychology: Considering what someone who is in love looks / acts like
Seduction: Distract her with kisses
Seduction: Sweep her off her feet
Strength: Carrying a pregnant lady

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Ethelynda: Choose the Right Path over the Easy One (+5)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Food for the Heart
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: No. It’s a tame date.
Requested Rewards:

Pash Vy’ryn

Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Listening to the whole story
Etiquette: Seat the lady first
Etiquette: Using a napkin correctly
Lute: Playing through the nerves
Lute: Ending well in a rush
Rhetoric: The delicate balance of being overly flirtatious
Seduction: Focus on the one you’re with
Teaching: Sharing your history with another

Other Knowledge:
[NPC]Trudi: Hip sway goals
[NPC]Trudi: Likes the taken ones best
[NPC]Trudi: Plays a good game
Culture: Sev’ryn: Creation history
Culture: Sev’ryn: Osẹ-bori
Kali’rial knowledge will eventually be infinite. No need.

Loot: 2 Out with the New Onyx Tasting meals (23gnx2) and a bottle of Moseke’s Harvest (35gn) = 81gn.Yeah. That was one serious date, yo. Deducted from Pash’s ledger!
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Zanik +1 (Prayer)
Collaboration: Yes, with Kali.
Magic EXP: No.

Kali’rial

Skill Knowledge:
Tactics: Dressing for the occasion
Cosmetology: Less is more with makeup
Etiquette: Using a napkin correctly
Socialization: Jealousy isn't a nice feeling
Teaching: Sharing one's culture with another

Other Knowledge:
Location: Cally’s
NPC: Trudi
Pash: Is a terrible flirt without even realising it
Pash: Eldest son of four
Callys: Eat all the things, they are amazing

Loot: Already deducted from ledger - One long thin black cotton dress, One black chiffon shawl with white beading, One stick of kohl, One hand mirror - Total cost: 8GN, 97SN
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes, with Pash
Magic EXP: No.

[Pash Raj'oriq]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Until the stars come home
City/Area: Cally’s Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Just a job thread. Pash plays some music and uses his Ethilem blessing abilities to make sure everyone has a good dining experience.

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
• Lute: Choosing your melody to suit the season
• Detection: Body language can help gauge emotions
• Detection: Noticing relationship details from a distance
• Psychology: Touch as a relationship indicator
• Psychology: Families that enjoy a meal together, stay together

Other Knowledge:
• Musical Enchantment (Minor): Targeting a particular audience

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably not.
Devotion: Zanik +1 (Prayer)
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: No.

[Pegasus]

Note!

All prior review requests are reviewed under the "old" Devotion system (please award Devotion points as requested, where appropriate). All threads from this point on will be subject to the new Devotion system. If your thread is a Minor Quest for an ability, then please link the PSF approval and make that clear in your request (which should otherwise be as usual) and a Prophet with PSF access will review the thread and check / approve the Minor Quest & Ability

Thank you!

[Aqihlih]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Trials to Getting Started
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope,
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: A steady income is vital
Disguise: Knowing the language helps with authenticity
Medicine: A concoction to help with sore throats
Medicine: It's possible to get sick during Saun
Medicine: Stress on the body helps grow sickness
Surgery: It's helpful to practice on the dead

Loot: Nope, it's a job thread.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: +1 for the General good deed of helping the man out (it should be noted that +1 belongs to the persona of Laurel)
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope

[Hart]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Oakleigh] Something about Alchemy.
City/Area: Oakleigh, Eastern Settlement, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: I put two knowledges about Hart's MB Ability Fulfillment in skill knowledge and two in general knowledge because I felt the last two were personal, rather than about skill. If that's too much, however, feel free to subtract the knowledges about animal husbandry and replace them with the other two MB knowledges.
Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (3 posts = 8 knowledge + 5 additional posts = 13 total)

1.) Alchemy: Imbues a property from one object into another
2.) Alchemy: Binders: Slug slime binds the required reagents together
3.) Alchemy: Binders: How to procure slug slime
4.) Alchemy: Mediums: Various types of cloth can be used as an alchemical base
5.) Alchemy: Reagents: Mirrordust makes an alchemical product reflective like a mirror
6.) Alchemy: Reagents: How to procure mirrordust
7.) Alchemy: Reagents: Iron fillings make an alchemical product hard like metal
8.) Alchemy: Triggers: Used to turn an alchemical property on and off
9.) Alchemy: Requires the balancing of an alchemical equation
10.) Animal Husbandry: Handling slugs
11.) Animal Husbandry: Slugs eat leaves
12.) Mortalborn Abilities: Fulfillment: Can sense other beings' needs
13.) Mortalborn Abilities: Fulfillment: Getting the gist of a beings' needs, but not necessarily the details

OTHER KNOWLEDGE

The Alliance: Followed Hart to Oakleigh
Faith: Died after giving birth
Hart: Mortalborn Abilities: Fulfillment
Hart: Fulfillment: Needs to protect Ayla from Aelig / "What he really needed... was for Aelig to go away for good so that Ayla and he would be able to live in peace."
Immortals: Famula: The immortal of servitude
Rynmere: Magic is banned as of Ymiden 717
Location: Tristan's Estate in Oakleigh
Tristan: Had a daughter, Ayla, with Faith
Tristan: Targeted by Aelig

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Hart used his Mortalborn Ability Fulfillment. Having sensed Tristan's needs (specifically, to protect Ayla from Aelig), Hart will feel compelled to fill those needs. If he can't, he'll begin to experience obsessive thoughts and possibly depression.

Having also used his Mortalborn Ability, he will suffer from aging and will feel tired and have flu-like symptoms for a few days after.

Hart also punched a piece of cloth as hard as metal, so he should have some light bruising/small cuts on his right fist that should heal up fine a couple days later.
Fame: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No (unless alchemy counts as a magic).

Thanks for reviewing!

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mounting Tensions
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This was never finished as Inali left ST. I thought I'd submit it since it's been a few months.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Noticing when somebody's angry
Intimidation: Sometimes your mere presence can be intimidating
Politics: Mortal laws should be used for mortals
Psychology: How the mind of a racist works
Strength: Pulling an assailant away from his victim
Storytelling: Setting the record straight

Inali: Eidisi
Inali: Not a Seeker

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: General good deed (helping Inali): +1
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No