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Qit'ria
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Zi'da 74th, 717

Qit'ria held her hand up before her eyes, staring lovingly at her totem. It was an extension of her, quite literally. But it was time to make it who she is. She closed her eyes, and felt the connection to her totem. It was there, always there, it seemed. She hoped so. It felt odd, or at least in her mind it did, to have a piece of her soul separate from the rest of it. But she felt out toward the connection, reached out toward with the same power she'd used to pour into the totem. She grabbed at it with that inner magic, with her soul as she called it.

And she pulled. It felt as if her piece of a soul was an anchor, and she had a hold of the rope. And she pulled at that power. Pulled it back into within herself. And she felt the animal come with it. She focused on that. It was hard to describe. As if... her piece of soul was the meat, and the animal, the rat she'd carved up into the totem, was the spices. It was added onto her soul, and fundamentally changed it, but it was still her soul. That was an interesting thing to learn.

And that flavoring, that identity of the mouse, she spread it throughout her body. And she felt that... wind, that mouse flavored wind, spread and fill her up. And then she began to feel her skin melt. And just as she had during her initiation with Marik, she focused on herself. She acknowledged the presence of the essence of mouse within her, and accepted it. It was just as much who she was, as the mighty huntress. And so, her skin held together, liquid holding a form.

Qit'ria let the mouse, her as the mouse run free. She put her mind toward smaller. Much smaller. She imagined it like compressing a snowball. She took that liquid form of herself, and began to collapse it down within herself. She compressed her form, and felt herself growing smaller. An intense pressure formed throughout her body as she shrunk, one that threatened to bounce back and expand, explosively. She kept the image of the small mouse forward in her mind.

She felt her bones unstitch themselves, breaking without being broken, and she gasped in surprise. This was a pain she couldn't even begin to imagine. As her bones unstitched, her heart was racing. And it felt as if with every pump of that organ, it grew smaller, denser, but it felt as if it wasn't circulating her blood any longer. Rather, it seemed as if it was pumping her blood out of her body, and yet wasn't bleeding. Her head throbbed as her skull shrank with her brain within. Moans, groans, gasps, and half sobs escaped her lips as she shrunk down further and further.

She fell to her hands and knees, or what was left of them. She felt her arms snap at the elbow, and the joints changed. She screamed as the power broke her skull, and stretched it, making it longer. Her organs moved around within her like fish in a too small pond. The pain was overwhelming. But she couldn't lose her focus. She grit through it, only for her teeth to shatter, becoming pointed, spreading out. She kept her self in mind, and held onto Qit'ria the huntress. She could not allow herself to be lost in this pain. To go mad, to come undone and spill out over the forest floor like a dropped wineskin.

Qit'ria embraced the pain, and focused on the change. She embraced her skin melting. She embraced the spikes that shot up out of her, becoming the fur. Her spine extended, and a tail began to form, growing out of the small of her back. Her fingers that were clutching the dirt, cracked and broke and elongated into feet. Her fingernails shot outward into claws. Her face ripped open to accommodate the change in skull shape, and whiskers thrust out. Her ears inflated, her torso expanded, and she finally realized how far she'd come. She was close.

She continued to shrink, and warp, and grow. The pain was lessening now as her bones mended, changing into the new ones she needed. The pressure alleviated as the excess mass disappeared. The feeling of melting soon changed to a cooling metal as her new skin was formed. And then the pain was gone. And she opened her eyes. Her mouse eyes. And all she saw was darkness.
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Why was it so dark? Did she mess it up and her eyes weren't made? She sniffed at the air, immediately finding her nose was much more capable than her Sev'ryn one. And there wasn't a pleasant scent right now. Heavy and thick, salty. Pungent. Sour. It wasn't pleasant at all.

Darling, are you going to keep playing in your clothes piles all day? Or are you going to come out and let me have a look at you?"

Kashehino's voice didn't sound any different. Qit rustled around, realizing the fabric of her shirt was over top her, which was why it was so dark. She felt a bit silly at that. And she never realized just how badly she smelled. Did she smell like that to other people? It was foul. She moved forward to get out, only to trip one of her paws over a wrinkle in the cloth, falling a bit forward, burying her nose even deeper in the stinky clothing. She got her paws beneath her again, and continued to try and escape her clothing prison. The air was acrid, stifling. With her trousers and loin cloth beneath her, and her shirt and cloak above her, she was assaulted with the smells of old sweat, body rancor, and even a tangy, somehow... feminine smell. It was disgusting.

She continued to rustle about, not quite getting the hang of her extra legs. It was different than crawling, even different than genuinely trying to walk on all fours in her Sev'ryn form. As she moved about in the clothing, a whiff of clean air broke through the stench. Qit'ria kept forward pushing, until finally her snout and whiskers broke free of the fabric prison, and took in the wintry air. It was glorious. She pushed through, feeling her large ears drag back on the cloth before springing forward back to their original position. Her nose kept twitching as she took in the air, and she could now see the brightness of sunlight.

And she could sense Kashehino smiling. "Well there you are, cutie. And if that's how you smell, I'm so glad I can't smell it. One of the few perks of this form." Qit'ria tried to look down at her paws, and found she couldn't see them like this. She looked up into the trees, and realized that the highest branches were so far away, they seemed as distant as clouds. The trees were so tall! It looked like climbing it would take a break, at best, if she even could.

She stepped forward, slowly, focusing on how to do it right. She moved her left front paw forward, stepping onto the cloth, and tried to walk forward. But she didn't move. After all, her hind legs weren't moving. She stepped forward with her left front paw, and tried again with her left rear paw, only to be tipped off balance and fell over to the side. She laid there listening as Kashehino laughed and laughed and laughed, right in her ear. Well not right in her ear. In her head, since her mouth never moved.

Qit righted herself, and tried again. This time, left front forward, rear right forward. That didn't feel too bad. Strange, but not bad. She laid her paws done, and tried again using the opposite sides.That really wasn't bad at all. She continued to trot around as such, slowly, carefully, as she got into a groove. She walked about atop her clothes, a bit, still able to smell them a bit, though not nearly as strong. And for that, she was most grateful.

"Well done darling! Doing much better than if I had to walk on two legs. I'm so proud of you."

Qit'ria beamed, pointing her nose up toward the feline that she could now see. Kashehino was still sitting in the cart, head upon her paws as she looked down at the mouse called Qit'ria. Qit'ria hadn't heard that someone was proud of her since she was a little girl. And only her father would say that to her. Her mother never once did. Not when Qit'ria hunted her first animal. Not when she managed to track her mother in a game of hide and hunt. But now, her new friend saying it, and Qit'ria felt loved.

And proud, of herself. She felt it welling up in her chest, her tiny mouse chest. She wanted to roar loudly in her triumph.

"Do it."

And so she did. Or tried. And all that came out was a series of squeaks.

And Kashehino laughed and laughed and laughed.

But still, Qit was proud.
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Knowledge:

Becoming: Thinking small to Become a small form
Endurance: The pain associated with compressing and shrinking
Becoming: Changing skin to furry skin
Discipline: Focusing on your form through the pain of Becoming
Becoming: Extending your spine to create a tail
Becoming Form: Aye-Aye Mouse

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Injuries:
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Fame:
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Magic:
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Devotion:
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Comments:

This was a great read. I had never visualized a Becoming transformation before until I read this. You descriptions of how Qit's feeling is clear and easy to empathize with. The pace of the thread was good and the execution on point with the post transition. Keep up the good work!
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