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Navyri grows an interest in real estate, and seeks to buy an investment property. Sometimes taking advantage of a "steal" isn't so obvious.

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Navyri
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Long before the sun rose, Navyri stood before the old mansion, blue eyes glowing in the eerie darkness. A fog had settled along the property and she could smell the sickening scent of rotten leaves, heard the dead brambles crunch beneath the sole of her boot. No one had dared buy such a property.

No one but her.

“How long,” she had asked the banker, sorting through the pristine sketches, “How long has it been vacant?” The Naer continued up the small dirt path, eyeing shriveled bushes along the way, their limited leaves browned and holding on for dear life- perhaps what used to be lush rose bushes once upon a time. Now they were dark and dried up from the sun, a ghost of their past glory. But glory could be restored and a true thief saw value in more than what was easily taken. Capable of putting work in, Navyri was interested in taking more than just some gold from any one individual. She wanted to steal from the city of Scalvoris.

“Well,” the agent stepped forward cautiously, not quite going as near to the property as she was, holding out some papers at arms length, “About 5 arcs, give or take… A few squatters might have come and gone, but once a season, the city tends to have someone come and sort that out.”

“It’s very large.” she stated simply, her head leaning back to follow the dirty walls to the clouds. Age and grim clung to the boards and chipped paint, but there were a number of windows and she was interested in seeing the state of the interior. She glanced down at the papers he had handed her, using her nail to pull up the corners and shift through them, “3,000 nels? Does this include closing costs as well? Taxes?,” Navyri continued to read while the man cleared his throat.

“Why, yes. It’s quite the steal. The property also extends quite a bit in the back, and there aren’t many properties like this left in Scalvoris,” he shuffled to the side, stuffing his briefcase under one arm and pointing to the side of the building. Behind it was a grand field, largely overgrown - a bit ominous in the early morn - a few headstones peeked along the far corner. A family graveyard, most likely. Humans had a funny tendency to grow attached to a plot of land and never leave again, “A lot of potential for a grand garden, no doubt.”

“Hmm,” Navyri’s attention was absorbed in the art and paperwork. Many of these sketches were decades old and showed just how fantastical this place used to be. Now? Now it was nothing but a broken memory. What happened to this place? She slipped all the papers into a folder and snapped it shut, a teasing edge to the curl of her lip, “I do love a good steal. Take me inside?”

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He hadn’t been expecting for her to want to go inside, she could tell. The stunned pause of disbelief said as much, and even in the muggy morning, Navyri could see beads of sweat building along his collar. The banker swallowed, “Yes, yes, um… perhaps a bit of background before we enter? It would never be my intentions to scare you…”

Navyri, who had already begun approaching the front door and paused with one foot on the stoop, looking over her shoulder expectantly.

“It’s just… There are a few rumors, and… some history attached to this house. Many… Many people were murdered here,” he fiddled with the latch of the briefcase and nearly caused it to come undone. He scrambled to have it shut again, “Um..”

“How many?”

He looked sick, “T-Twelve. Three families.”

There was a quiet that settled between them, the dark haired woman considering this and what it meant. It could have a spirit attached to the property… Which would be quite troublesome. But spirits could be destroyed… She would just have to find the right person for the job, or find one of those gems like Noth had. Even still… A pit of worry settled into her stomach, but she stomped it out with the next step towards the door, “Come along now,” she waited, eyeing a particularly large spider web that had formed along the underside of the awning, “I’m sure it will be fine.”

She believed that. After all, each family must have had a tour and decided to buy the piece of real estate. Whatever madness that settled into their mind hadn’t happened till after they had moved in. If she kept her visits to just that - visits, what was there to worry about?

It didn’t take long before he crept forward, hands shaking as he unlocked the front door. Navyri reassured him with a smile and was the first to step inside, struck with the smell of dust and old rot, “Hm,” thick layers of dust coated everything in sight. The floor, the walls, the mantle. It was dim bordering on dark, but that didn’t affect her night vision. She continued moving, digging the toe of her boot into the floor to uncover the color of the wood. It was a rich mahogany, or some Scalvoran wood, Navyri wasn’t quite sure. She had to ask, “What are the floors made of?”

“Uh, looks like mahogany, maybe maple. I’m not quite sure.”

“I thought so too.”

Along the edges of the rooms was lovely crown molding as well as exposed beams in the parlor. Navyri drifted through the house, looking at the tattered lace curtains, yellowed with age and eaten away by moths. Her nose gave a tickle and she sneezed. Dabbing at the corners of her eyes, Navyri continued her examination while her escort remained mostly quiet. He kept looking over his shoulder, “There are a few problems, but the house is sound structurally. Of course, a licensed inspector will be sent for approval once your offer is accepted.”

’Good’ Navyri thought, ’There was no need investing in something with no turnaround.’

She could repaint, refurbish, or decorate. It was termite damage or bad foundation that would simply cost too much. For now, she would look for vision. Navyri stepped from one room to the next, entering the kitchen. Plenty of counter space, lots of storage, a pantry… Nav glanced at the floor, spotting a small latch door in the corner, “What’s this?”

The Banker poked his head into the room, “The wine cellar. I believe,” he reviewed his notes and looked up, “There’s an entrance from the kitchen as well as the outside.”

Navyri crouched to open the door and suddenly paused, having a flashback from the Miasma. Face paling, she took a deep breath and yanked the door open. Immeidately she hit with the smell of rot and death. Dark stains were visible on the floor, somewhat in the shape of a body. A large rat scurried across the floor, and Navyri dropped the latch back down, standing and taking a step back.

Was she going to be sick?

The banker rushed forward, pulling his handkerchief from his pocket, “Are you okay, Miss?” He must have smelled it too and swallowed to settle his stomach. Death never really bothered the Naer, she had seen it enough over the course of her life, but mixed with the old smell of decomposition and rat feces and the rot… She pinched her eyes closed and pushed Belaera far from the recesses of her mind.

“I’m fine. Let’s go to the next room.”

“Are you sure? Do you need to rest for a moment?”

“I'm am fine.” Navyri removed her hand from the counter, stabilized, “Is that the dining room?” Pushing her shoulder’s back, she continued forward.

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The dining room was a unique shape, the table actually left behind. It was covered in a table cloth in similar disrepair as the curtains, but from where she stood, she could actually see some of the sunrise through the ample windows; able to imagine herself sipping on coffee or watching the steady trickle of rain on a cool day. It had a romanticism about it. It sold a fantasy.

Navyri pushed back the table covering and found the abandoned furniture to be still usable, appealing even. Everything needed a good scrub. She stared out the windows for a moment longer, some of the panes broken, and noticed another figure standing behind her reflection. The Naer tensed and turned, but all she found was the banker, a concerned expression still on his face, “Are you-”

A pointed nail pointed at his face, “Do not ask me if I am fine again. If I need to rest, I will tell you. Understand?”

“Y-Yes, miss.”

The Naer dropped the cloth back in place and smacked her hands together, dust flying into the air. From there, she headed confidently towards the grand stairs, ignoring the crusted blood clinging to the handrails. Some parts had clearly been missed by investigators, and she began her ascension, testing each step before putting her full weight upon it. There was creaking, but otherwise it held steady, “How many rooms total?”

“7 bedrooms, six receptions-”

“Receptions?” She turned at the top of the stairs and looked downward.

“Ah, yes. Rooms fit for any use. There’s the garden, and of course the privacy of the location is something to consider. Last reported, a working well supplies fresh drinking water to this house, there’s also a creak out back for any laundry.”

So much to consider, and lots of rooms she had passed on the main floor alone. Navyri began to move down the long hallway, peering into each space. Some doors were open, most closed. One was lined with shelves and a few discarded books - a library, or study. She liked that. In another, she found remnants of a rope still tied to the beams of the ceiling, a turned over chair cast aside.

She headed towards the far end of the hallway and reached for the knob. It did not turn. Navyri furrowed her brow, the banker coming up behind her, “This isn’t supposed to be locked.”

He knocked on the door. No answer, but it did sound like something scurried across the floor and he jumped back.

“An animal. Bird or squirrel…” Navyri knocked this time, sharper, but no sound followed. She could fly from the outside and look in, but something about the mystery of it all enthralled her, “I’ll take it,” she said in soft resolution.

The banker jerked.

“3,000, full asking. Inspections to be covered by the bank,” she began to head towards the stairs, “Between seven to ten days, any furniture in showing to remain with the property.” She pulled the folder out from beneath her arm and held it out to him sharply, a denial not even crossing her mind, “I believe we have some paperwork to do.”

And just like that, Navyri bought her first house. Her headquarters.

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From start to finish the creep factor was on about this abode, everything seemed odd and abandoned more then it should have and how quick they were to take the nels and process the transaction.

Very shady

The graveyard in the back and her thoughts on human attachment are rather ominous indeed.

I liked this.

I liked this a lot actually. I can see a huge amount of further role play potential for this property but will require a story teller to really tap into this for you so I've got the crucial part out of the way and am declaring it haunted as you've already articulated the article about this property very well.

Maybe some plot notes for some solos can be provided by your local story teller as your now in possession of the property.

But this has all the the potential for some rewarding role play.


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XP: 10

Loot/Injuries/Overstepping

Loot: 1 fine murder mansion, still furnished will require appraisal to sort the junk from the treasure.
Injuries; the loss of 3,000 nels
Renown: 20 My reasoning for this extravagant amount is that you've purchased the property that the wealthier townsfolk whisper about, places like this have social stigmas that even thieves avoided places like this and tend to even have urban legends attached to them and you can expect these sorts of movers and pushers of the island to gossip amongst themselves. Anyone who's anyone is gonna have an opinion about the purchase. While just a simple business transaction on the surface there's certainly an impact among nobility as it's certain the previous owners were well established in the community with power and influence to match.

And here Navyri is, standing on there graves. Lol

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Appraisal: Consider Return Value
Appraisal: Don't Let Rumors Ruin a Good Deal
Appraisal: Death Makes Real Estate Cheap
Appraisal: How to Spot a "Flip"
Business Management: How to Buy a Property
Discipline: Resist Old Traumas & Persist
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