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Ellen'wyn arrives in Etzos

With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.
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Foster’s Landing was not only the biggest port on the western coastline, but also one of the most well connected cities in the glorious secular state of Etzos. Within a break of the town crier beckoning the citizens to assemble, all those who could attend gathered in the main square. The area was roughly a thirty yard square surrounded by the oldest buildings of the port. Built nearly 200 years ago, the footprints of these surrounding businesses and boutiques were small to allow for more room in the square, however they rose tall with gradual matriculations allowing for citizens to increase their living spaces in the confined areas. The bronze shingles on the roofs were smelted with the precious metals that only could be found in Etzos, in effect reducing the glare from the sun's reflection and giving the structures a calmer appearance.

“I can’t see a thing,” Gangui mumbled out of breath from jogging through the town and aggravated at not being able to push forward through the dense crowd of people.

There was a fountain in the middle of the square. Two gilded Mers, embracing each other in a romantic fashion. It was said that one of the greatest artists in Etzos’ history carved them, nearly two hundred years ago; another testament to the power of human ingenuity when emancipated from the yoke of the Immortal’s religion.

Looking over at Ellen’wyn, his new half-Avriel friend, the mustachio’s face lit up with the capital idea of standing on the fountain to gain a view of the scene, “Let’s step up there!” Brandon followed right behind them. It was quite a scene to behold: a red-headed Avriel with large wings, a man armored to the tooth, and lute totting bard, all standing three feet higher than everyone else. A few people yelled at them, but Gangui ignored them. Who were they to challenge him openly in the public square?
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Ellen was flushed with excitement and a little winded after trying to keep up with Brandon and Gangui’s mad dash from the inn. She didn’t at all know what was going on, but curiosity drove her to follow--she wasn’t quite ready to be alone yet, either, but she would never admit it to herself. The mixed-blood had jogged the whole way there, close behind the shiny warrior and has storytelling companion, struggling to keep up with their long strides. The vast number of people in the square astounded her, and she craned her neck about while trying to take everything in. She followed Gangui up onto the wide ledge of the fountain automatically, relieved to be able to see over the crowd.

“Hear, ye! Hear, ye!” the town crier called in a booming voice. The man was short and fat, with a sparse head of hair desperately styled as if he refused to give up on the disappearing locks of his youth.

“Who is he?” Ellen whispered loudly from Gangui’s side, receiving glares from a few nearby listeners.

“Good people of Foster’s Landing. On behalf of Administrator Enitaplap, I bring to ye a message directly from his hand.”

Tipping the brim of his steely hat, Gangui whispered into her ear without regard of the hushed tones around them. “Don’t know him. Just the town crier. He gives us information from the state.” But she had no idea what ‘town crier’ meant, so she just nodded and grimaced.

Clearing his throat and unrolling some parchment, the crier began in Ith’ession, “The incident that occurred in Saun, which we’ve been calling the Savage Shelf, has been a misfortune to all of us in Etzos and Foster’s Landing. We have set aside aide in the form of rations and nel to the families of the slain, in a show of our human solidarity and our unity as a nation. We urge citizens not to take retribution."

"There has been word of shipwrecks off the Frostbrow Peninsula and Gelid Shore. The area is not safe. It should be advised that no citizen traverse there until more word about the safety of the area has been released. Scavengers, treasure hunters, environmentalists, etcetera, should avoid the region until after the winter season. As usual, I implore you to stay in port; and to those whom lost family in the attack, focus your revenge on the Immortals. Thank you, Administrator Enitaplap.”

During the entirety of this ‘town crier’s long-winded speech, Ellen’wyn grew more and more frustrated. Her face pinched with annoyance, for she couldn’t understand a damn word the man said. He might as well have been talking out of his ass. But looking around her, his words seemed to have a lot of weight and significance to the people here. Some appeared visibly upset, and others excited. It was such a strange mix of reactions, and Ellen looked up at Gangui for answers.

“I… do not understand?” She tested the words carefully, and seemed confident after a moment. “This man, he say big words?” She didn’t have the Common vocabulary for ‘important’. It frustrated her further; her feathers ruffled slightly as she tried to voice her concerns.
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As the crowd erupted into conversation, the bald announcer hastily made his exit. The citizens pushed forward trying to get the speaker to return, but the military guard present pushed them back with long pikes, even hitting a couple of them with the wooden shafts. For all the words of welfare and safety, the brutality of the state’s fist was still present. The immediate question that came to Gangui’s mind was why only say the announcement one time? How would they remember such words?

“Ellen’wyn, it was a confusing message to me as well,” the mustachio whispered leaning in, his whiskers nearly touching her face, “There is word of treasure up north. Seems dangerous. They are also helping out the families of those affected by the Savage Shelf incident…”

Unfortunately, Gangui had not heard of these occurrences. Turning now towards the bard, he rested a gauntleted hand on his shoulder, “Have you heard of this before, brother? What’s the Savage Shelf?”

Ellen hummed, seemingly disgrunteled at the barbarian's words. She looked at Brandon with a hopeful expression.

“I’ve heard some talk,” Brandon started, though he seemed skeptical. “Apparently there have been attacks on travelers, and they say that an entire scouting party was killed by a giant shadowy beast that’s been prowling some of the back roads at night.”

Gangui’s eyes widened and for the first time since he met Ellen, he looked at her with greed in his soul. The pupils of his dull blue eyes shrinked and the metallic sound of his armor rustled as he placed two hand’s on the redhead’s shoulders gently shaking her in excitement, “The pirates are sure to be all dead and if we capture some of their treasure then we will be rich! Rich enough to--”

The mixed-blood started when Gangui’s heavy gauntlets wrapped around her. “Wha--?” She seemed to have the jist of it, and she interrupted him with a firm stare. “We are stranger. Why we? You not know me.” Her common broken.

“Anyone who sweared off the Immortals is good enough in my book,” Gangui retorted. He had been around the block a few times already and he didn’t trust her completely yet, but he had no reason to fear her. A little female Avriel with soft skin and a beautiful face would be of little concern to him. She would not have the strength to pierce his armor, let alone out smart him. Plus, if she turned out to be a good person, then this would be the perfect opportunity to test her.

Before Ellen’wyn could respond, some yelling broke out several yards away from her. The trio turned towards the arising din only to see another sellsword - looking - type standing on the platform. Naturally drawn to commotion, Gangui hopped off the fountain with notable grace, on the balls of his feet. Gathering up near the man, they quickly found that he was organizing a expedition to reclaim the treasure and taking volunteers who had experience.

“Fuck this guy,” Brandon scoffed, especially at the man’s repeated use of the term ‘fifth of my name to fight in these parts’, “I wouldn’t trust him with a fishing skiv,”

Gangui nodded, “Aye, I wouldn’t follow this man either,” Not falling for the man’s speech.

“This is getting crazy, Gang, every bastard and their mother will be attempting to find this treasure.”

“We should go after it ourselves.”

“I ain’t going anywhere, my place is at the pub, no songs of glory will come out of this.”

Gangui laughed deeply at the bard, then looked at his new friend, Ellen’wyn, “Let’s go back to the pub and talk about this. We should see what the other’s think.”
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A few breaks later, Ellen was dejectedly chasing bits of food around with her fork on a small plate of morsels the waitress had brought her. The tavern was loud with activity, buzzing about the scene from the town square. Gangui and Brandon had gone back and forth, and Ellen, of course, hadn’t been able to follow much of it. At this point, the exhaustion from her trip was weighing her down, and being surrounding by so many strangers was starting to make her wings itch. She needed some solitude, meditation, and about one full trial of sleep.

Gangui sauntered over with a glass of rum-water in his gauntleted hand. Sitting down with a loud thump, Ellen could hear the loud protest of the wood chair. Clearing his throat and removing his iron helm, he placed it next to her, adjusting it so the blue feather didn’t obstruct her view.

“Looks like the whole lot of them are going after the treasure,” he growled, clearly annoyed at something.

The mixed-blood regarded him for a long moment, leaning back in her chair, fork carefully placed on the table beside her plate. She wasn’t sure what she thought of him yet, though he’d given the soldiers a hard time when she was cornered moments after setting foot in town. She’d had a while to think about the whole situation now, and finally concluded that it wasn’t because she wasn’t human. There was enough mention of Immortals thrown about all day that she realized something very strange went on in this place. Her poor grasp of the languages here were making it very difficult to figure anything out, but a few pieces were falling in place.

Gangui himself had an energetic air; he seemed prideful but kind enough so far, but he was taking quite a few liberties. Perhaps he thought she was now some sort of comrade, and Ellen wasn’t sure what she thought about that. He and Brandon were the only two people in all of Etzos that she knew, and she wasn’t sure if should stick close to them longer or ditch them while she could.

The barbarous mustachio took off his gauntlets now. “I am going after the treasure.” He placed the heavy plate on the table. His hands were rough and calloused, so much so that his fingerprints had been worn away.

“How you know it is real?” There was almost a scoff there; a growing annoyance at all of this hubbub. It was none of her business anyway. She had only just set foot off the ship less than seven breaks ago. He smelled musky, like a mixture of sweat and leather. He definitely seemed the part of a warrior, which made his giant armored stature that much more… well, more. But she wasn’t sure if he was truly trustworthy. Really, she didn’t know anything substantial about this man.

“We won’t find out sitting around here,” Gangui said, drinking from his cup again and wiping his lips with an open hand.

Ellen huffed, exasperated, and leaned toward him, bracing her elbows on the table. “Why want my help? I do not understand you. You are… strange man.” There was no attempt to speak kindly. She made to stand, rubbing her face vigorously and with a frustrated air. “Very tired, see? Long journey, little sleep. Ship is not fun. Bad food, boring people. Too much new things now. Need a bed.”
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Gangui examined Ellen’wyn for awhile, thinking deeper into why he had wanted her to become his ally in the first place. Perhaps he hadn’t really thought this through. Delving inward quickly brought up old memories. The most noble warrior Nightshade Eld had saved him on the day he arrived in Etzos. The shrieking Aukari defilers were only a hazy memory now and so was the arrow wound to his calf. Absentmindedly, he touched his right leg as the dull ache under his armor returned, summoned by nostalgia.

“I know of a good safe place, not everywhere in Foster’s Landing is good,” Gangui responded, eyes somewhat distant, still lost in the past.

“Where is good place?” she asked, sounding exhausted and defeated. Ellen seemed to think she was staying here, and her shoulders sagged at the concept of dragging herself to another inn. “Far, or near?”

“It is close by, you’ll be safe,” Gangui absentmindedly pointed in a general location behind him. It was the harbor, not making any sense, “I’ll take you there.”

The main thing that he remembered from that shameful day, was Nightshade Eld sitting over his bed as he fought off death. The blood loss from attack nearly killed him. No one had ever done that for him before, not even his father, blood of his blood. Nay, a random stranger helped him. Completely out of altruistic compassion, with no prior history with him. To top it all off, she was an Avriel, just like Ellen’wyn.

Looking upon the girl infront of him, her face suddenly started shifting into Night’s in his mind’s eye. The melted into one, as if he was on one of Vluhariqh's drugs. This is when he noticed the difference between the two avriels (other than obvious ones); Nightshade was hard and Ellen’wyn was more beautiful and perhaps innocent. Night had been through what seemed much more trauma and experienced a hardening of the heart perhaps. Nay. That wasn’t Nightshade. She had shielded her heart. Yes, that was it. A person with a heart of stone would have never given a stranger such care.

“You ask me why I want you on my team?” Gangui said, finally snapping out of his moment, “The most noble and honorable warrior in all of Etzos is an Avriel named Nightshade Eld. I owe her my life. I can tell just by looking at you that you’re are a good person and we need more people like you around!”
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He was just so positive. How did he do it? He seemed to have a limitless amount of energy, and just being around him was emotionally exhausting. But what she could make of his statement made her hold pause. Ellen regarded him quietly, chewing on each bit. There was that name again; Nightshade Eld. She was curious to say least. And this woman was an Avriel. Ellen’wyn knew little about them, except that her father was one. It made her stomach churn just to think about it. She was torn by his words, but moved by them as well.

“You sound sure.” It wasn’t a question. “Take me to new place, please. We talk more on the way.” Her things were piled by the table, and she scooped up an armful of items, tired and slow in her movements. She swayed slightly on her feet, feeling drained. “You wear armor every day? Never heavy?”

The warrior dropped a few gold nel on the table and prepared his belongs to depart. “Aye, little-birdie, I never take it off--” When Ellen’wyn stumbled, he stepped forward, surprisingly light on his feet--prepared to catch her, though she didn’t fall.

The half-blood paused when Gangui moved to aid her and she smiled a little; the first time in a few breaks. He couldn’t be so bad after all, if that was his automatic response. Perhaps she was being too hard on him. Too suspicious. “Wait,” she realized suddenly. “Sleep in metal too?” Ellen seemed more awake now, mostly out of surprise, her face twisted in puzzlement.

“Etzos has an evil side, a shadow,” the mustachio growled as the two began to amble away from the dockside pub. “One never knows when a predator lurks in the night.” His face was flushed in a serious, brooding expression; his tough features casting dark shadows.

The redhead suddenly threw back her head and laughed. It was a loud, bubbly noise; all teeth, crinkled eyes, and grinning cheeks. The image of this bear of a man sleeping in his bed in full armor had her splitting at the sides, and it took a while for her laughter to completely subside. First dying down into quiet chuckles, she eventually regained control. “Naked sleep is better. Should try that. Very nimble. Many in Desnind sleep…,” she explained, but trailed off. Absently, she touched her neck where the necklace her mother had given her previously hung. Ellen’s smile faded, and she lapsed into an upset silence.

At the mention of sleeping naked, Gangui’s cheeks reddened ever so slightly, almost imperceptibly so. He coughed and raised an eyebrow. “I would sleep… ahem... naked, but I have no help to fend off the dark night. I must be prepared for danger.”

The small pendant was the only thing truly tying her to home, other than her memories. But the physical reminder had been an anchor thus far in her journey, and suddenly she realized how lost at sea she felt without it. It had been carved with her mother’s own loving hands; a gift for a daughter leaving home for the first time. There was a knot in the pit of her stomach, and Ellen wondered if she might vomit again. She mumbled an absent acknowledge as Gangui spoke, but she was lost in her own thoughts. I wonder where they took it? Can I find that soldier again? Would they return it willingly? Could I steal it back? Ellen’wyn chewed on her lips, brows furrowed in contemplation, fingers tracing the hollow of her throat where the pendant should be resting.
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The mention of sleeping naked immediately brought the animal mind to the forefront of the warrior’s thinking. He could feel the fire within him, which he beat down into his subconscious, just how his father used the rod to discipline him long ago. Taking several deep and noisy breathes, he subsided his loins just as quickly as he was aroused. He looked at her now with slightly intoxicated thoughts of taking her to his home instead. The mercenary of his mind battled the romantic, would he reveal his hidden abode to this person yet for the mere crap shoot of a chance of finding a partner.

Shaking his head, he decided that there was little honor in such a path. If he knew anything, it was that his moral and honor code and his commitment to being an Etzorsi patriot, would came before anything, even a beautiful woman.

Finally the pair arrived at the only inn that Gangui trusted her to be at in Foster’s Landing, “Here we are,”

The innkeep didn’t speak good common, so the warrior rented the room on her behalf in Ith’ession. Presumptuous as always, he signed the ledger for an entire week with a scribble of the quill. Clasping her luggage, one in each hand, he lead her up the staircase and to her room, pushing the door open with his foot.

Ellen didn’t much pay attention to Gangui’s dealing with the innkeeper, but she did thank the old owner, and he smiled at her, which was all the encouragement she needed. The redhead followed the mustachioed warrior up to her room--practically dragging herself really--and stumbled in when he opened the door. It was small, but clean. The single window overlooked a row of buildings across the street. She practically purred as she sat on its edge, pulling and then furiously ripping at the laces of her moccasins so she could kick them off and wiggle her toes.

Standing in the room with her certainly felt awkward to Gangui. Regardless of her winged appendages, she was a pretty woman with a comely shape. He didn’t know whether or not to stay. He wasn’t one for reading the opposite sex. Nay, he was a man of the field. He felt more comfortable clashing steel swords on some misbegotten hill for some forgotten reasoning, except for the mere hatred of his opponent. He hadn’t felt the touch of a woman in over an arc and yearned for it. He didn’t allow himself these feelings though.

Honor. That was always on his mind.
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The warrior placed her bags unceremoniously on the floor and she looked at him in the dim light spilling through the window. He made the space seem even smaller, and she laughed once more at the unique silliness of him. Feathered helmet and all. He seemed so foreign. Most of the men she had ever known wore leather and hides, or hardly anything at all. But Gangui practically twinkled as he stood there, looking quite valiant in his colorful armor. After a few moments, Ellen’wyn noticed the distinctive silence in the room. She smiled awkwardly, clearing her throat.

“Erm… Thank you, Gangui, for help,” she finally said, rising from the bed but not moving toward him. She rocked slightly on her toes, feeling oddly uncomfortable. “Do not know where I go but you find me. So… happy for that.” Ellen steeled herself for the next part. This she had been preparing for, for most of their walk. “And I will help you, if you help me. They stole my charm. Gift from mother. Want back, very much. You will help?” Her voice had grown a little thicker with emotion, and her eyes were almost pleading in the inky light of the room.

Taking a knee so he could better talk to Ellen eye-to-eye, Gangui placed a surprisingly gentle hand on her shoulder. His skin felt hot through his leather glove. “It’s alright little-birdie.” There was a look of concern on his face. “I will help you, but tonight we must rest.” Perhaps he felt for her, or perhaps it was a show? Ellen didn’t know yet. It could have been a ploy, but she didn’t even care at this point.

Rising to his feet again, Gangui prepared to leave the room. He paused at the door as if reconsidering something. “I’ll see you at the dockside pub tomorrow,” he finally said. He didn’t order her, or suggest it, or even ask; simply said it as it were already agreed upon. A simple fact. Closing the door behind him, Ellen could hear the creaking wooden staircase and his heavy footfalls fade.
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I’m getting into Gangui and Brandon, they’re little duo of interestingness. A warrior and his poet. Then there’s Ellen’wyn, fresh off the boat, tired and not fluent in the language. You all play the barrier between you two so well, and I enjoyed reading your thoughts. Keep it honorable. Someone has to. The Nightshade Eld praise made me giggle.

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Running: Jogging to the town square.
Tactics: Taking the high ground in a crowd.
Intelligence: questioning state messages.
Leadership: Not falling under the rule of another sellsword.
Persuasion: Sometimes honesty is the best policy.
Leadership: Making decisions for others.
Etiquette: Walking a girl home at night.
Strength: Carrying heavy objects up a staircase.
Discipline: Avoiding the primal sexual urges.

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Ellen’wyn: Avriel
Ellen’wyn: Cute when she is exhausted
NPC: Administrator Enitaplap
Administrator Enitaplap: Sends words of welfare and pacifism.
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Ettiquette: Don’t Interrupt
Ettiquette: It’s Rude to Make Assumptions
Investigation: Pressuring for Answers
Investigation: Simple Questions, Simple Answers
Linguistics: Struggling with Language Barriers
Running: Keeping Up with Tall Folk
Endurance: Recovering from a Jog
Endurance: Battling Drowsiness
Intelligence: Suspicion of Strangers

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Gangui: Likes to Presume Things
Gangui: Probably A Nice Guy
Gangui: An Exotic Man
NPC: Administrator Enitaplap
Vhalar 6, 717: The State Makes an Announcement About Treasure
Nightshade Eld: Avriel
Nightshade Eld: Possibly the Most Noble Warrior In Etzos
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