[The Hollow Sea] Much Ado About The Wrong Thing

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[The Hollow Sea] Much Ado About The Wrong Thing

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21st Ashan 718
Vega was playing the fiddle, pleased with how things were coming on. She had been playing it a lot in the twenty odd trials they had been on the Wanderlust, not least because she had very little else that she could do. With one shattered knee and a broken femur, her mobility was limited. But less so each trial and, just two trials ago, she had stood for the first time since the end of Cylus. Over twenty trials and it had been terrifying. Her movements were getting more and more confident with the bow, stretching the long notes and playing the short ones without squeaking as she did so. Vega was playing scales, practising the movement of her fingers on the neck of the fiddle, feeling the pressure needed for each string, less for the finest, highest pitched and more for the thicker, lowest one.

The practice of scales meant that she was building up her repertoire of movement in her fingers and that was vital to the kind of music she wanted to play. Vega knew the sound she wanted to create although, as yet, she could not do so. But it would take time that was all. Time and patience and she had a lot of the first and was developing the second through necessity. Sitting, her left knee in a brace and her right leg in a splint, Vega looked down and her playing stopped for a moment. Placing the fiddle on the bed beside her, she lifted up her skirt and looked at her legs. Really looked at them. Pale, weak and scarred was what she saw, but then she remembered in a sudden flash of clarity the wave of nausea which had burst in the pit of her stomach as her knee had snapped sideways, like a twig. How, drenched in sweat and pain and fear, she had thought that there, right in that moment, she understood pain in the trill before the strongest bone in her body, the femur, had been carelessly, thoughtlessly, effortlessly snapped.

It hadn't stopped there, of course, and she looked down at her miracle legs and she remembered the feeling of being pulled forcibly through the earth, of dirt and rocks invading her nose, her mouth and how, when she knew that she was about to die and uncaring of the legs or the hundred thousand cuts and rips on her skin, all she could feel was the desperate need to breathe, she had gulped in air in a single, beautiful, breath.

Her legs, so pale and wasted, they had survived all that and what had come after. When all that was left of her was charred bones and melted flesh, these bones had been broken. And yet now? Vega looked down at them as memory after memory fell in on her and a grin lifted her lips. "Yeah, well, colour me well 'ard an' up yours. These bad boys, all of me, we're doin' alrigh', I'd say. Whatcha reckon, Bert?" The last she asked the small stuffed bear who had been her companion since her earliest memories.


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Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Pressure is different depending on the string
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing scales
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As though Bert was answering her, there was a knock on the door. Vega called out, "Come in!" and Fi walked in. Vega grinned at her and gestured to where the woman had a deck of cards in her hand. "That's a funny lookin' fiddle!" Fi smiled at her and shook her head. "No, no practice for me to-trial." Just the night before, both ships had been attacked by pirates and Fi looked rather shaken still. Vega more or less took it in stride, now, although yestertrial she had felt fear grip her. It was the lack of movement, the feeling of helplessness as she'd watch Arlo battle the pirates which had attacked both vessels. He had been, of course, magnificent and Vega could not be more proud of him. Fi had fought valiantly and her skill was obvious, but Vega thought that the woman was shocked at her reaction to Joq'an, Vega's father, getting injured. He'd got an arrow through the thigh.

Fi was shaken, it was true. But not because Joq'an had got injured, but because Huw had. Vega was completely convinced that Fi was harbouring feelings for her father when, in fact, it was her cousin Huw. If Vega had known that she would have approved most wholeheartedly, but she had misunderstood Fi's insistence on getting Joq'an's approval and it spiralled from there. "You a'right?" Vega asked, looking at the woman with concern. Fi gave a nod of her head, and smiled. "I am. It was just.. it was difficult seeing him injured. I don't think I'm doing very well at getting over him, Vega." Fi admitted and Vega had to acknowledge that she felt sorry for the woman.

"Yeah," she said, aware that there was no 'getting over' Arlo for her and that was that. But then, he wasn't her father's age. "That's gotta suck and blow both at the same time. Never mind, time'll sort it, I'm sure." Fi really wasn't sure but she liked Vega's complete lack of empathy, it helped somehow. The full-blooded biqaj looked at her mixed race clan member and held up some cards. "A game?" Vega grinned and nodded. "Always. I was jus' practicin' scales an' I'm a bit bored of them." Fi nodded her understanding of that - it was repetitive in the extreme. But yet, Vega had to admit, she liked it. She enjoyed it, in a way which she could not easily describe.

As Vega shuffled the deck, she grinned slightly at Fi who watched her with an expression of surprise. "You've been practicing," Vega nodded. "I practice the fiddle when Arlo's busy, an' can't hear me. An' when he's close by, I practice paintin' or with the cards." She'd been learning how to shuffle most effectively and she was getting faster at it, too. So, she dealt out the cards and looked at Fi with a serious expression. "How is everyone over there?" Vega asked and Fi shrugged slightly. "They're taking it in their stride. As I usually would." Vega nodded. "Yeah, well you're worried about over here. But he's a'right."

Fi sighed and shook her head, putting down the base card she had chosen as Vega did the same. "Do you think he even knows what I'm thinking?" Fi asked and Vega wished she wouldn't. It was awkward and did the woman not realise that this was her father they were talking about? "No, love, he hasn't got a clue" It was strange, Fi thought, because Huw had been so careful of her, so concerned and tender, yet Vega knew him much better than she did. "Really? He seemed so worried." Vega resisted the urge to roll her eyes. "Love, I've known 'im all my life an' he's like that. Always has been." Fi sighed and motioned to Vega to move. Vega put down a card on her own basecard, opening up a full half of the constellation. Fi huffed and discarded a card, the only option to her when she could not go on either her own cards or Vega. "Wow. Outta luck." Vega commented and Fi chuckled. "So it seems," she said, her thoughts on Huw.

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"Although," Fi said with a slight smile as their game finished, Vega having won by having more stars in her constellation than Fi. "I know you've been playing Stars a lot. Want to try something new?" Vega grinned and her eyes swirled colours in amusement. "Always," the mixed race redhead said, immediately. Fi looked and frowned, just slightly. "It is, or can be, a little physical. If it starts to hurt.." Vega spoke, interrupting the well meaning biqaj, but not prepared to listen to fussing. "If it starts to 'urt, love, then we'll 'ave gone back in time by quite a number of trials an' I'll be more worried about that than playin' cards. It's fine, I won't do anythin' that jeopardizes gettin' better." Fi smiled and nodded her head, and then motioned to the deck.

"Deal the deck out equally," Fi said, and Vega did just that. "Now, we put cards down, one at a time. We drop them, though, because the aim is to, when two cards match, to put your hand down on the deck and say the word 'snap'." Vega looked at her and raised an eyebrow. "Are you 'avin' a giraffe, love?" There was no doubt, she thought, Fi was more than capable of doing just that, but Fi shook her head. "I promise you, no. It's more difficult than you'd think and it builds your reflexes."

Vega was a long way from convinced, it had to be said. Still, she started the process of dealing, As she did, she glanced up at Fi. "You fight real well, you know." Fi grinned. "It's a gift. A talent. When you get back on your feet, I can teach you if you like?" Vega shook her head, indicating that no, she didn't want or need that and Fi raised an eyebrow. "You think sword fighting not important? You're excellent with that bow, no doubt, but what if you get into close range?" Vega chuckled. "I don't want you to teach me cos I'm better than you. Much." Fi looked up in some surprise and Vega shrugged. "I never understood false modesty. It's false, an' I try not to ever be that. You're good. I'm better." Fi grinned, not worried in the slightest. "Then, you can teach me, perhaps?" Vega nodded. "I'd be 'appy to. So come on then, let's play this stupid game."

At first, they played in a careful and controlled manner. Fi, especially, was sure to be gentle, but Vega was much more aware of her own limitations and she was quick to point out that she was not made of china like a cup, and very quickly, the two of them started to get into a rhythm of playing, dropping down cards and looking for those which matched. There was a very different skill involved, but Vega liked the physicality of the game, enjoyed the feeling of it being a physical challenge of speed, dexterity and reflexes. That was where she excelled and, the first time that Fi slapped Vega's hand, the redhead grinned and her face took on a clear expression. Challenge was most certainly accepted.

And throughout the good ship Wanderlust, could be heard the sound of two women squealing with laughter to cries of "SNAP!"
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Gambling: Game: Stars: Win by having the most stars in your constellation
Gambling: Human game: snap. A game of dexterity.
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  • Skill:
    • Gambling: Playing to your own advantage
    • Gambling: Practice shuffling to maximise fairness of the deal.
    • Gambling: Game: Stars: Win by having the most stars in your constellation
    • Gambling: Human game: snap. A game of dexterity.
    • Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Pressure is different depending on the string
    • Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing scales
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Comments

This was a simple premise that was well-used, weaving together both the solo music practice and the social aspects of gambling quite well, as well as providing an excellent amount of characterisation. The story was easy to follow for the most part except for a portion of the second post that left me a little confused after I'd read it a few times, especially when I kept reading. There seemed to be a glaring contradiction to me but perhaps I was just personally slow on the uptake that Vega is still under the impression that Fi is interested in her father. Due to your narrator insight that Fi actually has feelings for Huw, followed immediately by Vega's, it was immediately apparent that they were separate. Perhaps that would have been much clearer if this thread was read after the one about the attack but as a stand alone story, it could have been made a little clearer. Aside from that, it was very nicely contained with a nice little introduction explaining Vega's journey thus far in Ashan and ending on a good end point that made me smile.

Overall, a very enjoyable read, well done!
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