• Open • The Imperial March

[Rozkia]

Review Rewards

Points Awarded: 15

Lorogh

Magic Applicable: Nurp
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Knowledges:

• Socialization x2
• Endurance x2
• Etiquette x2
• Detection x4

Skillplay:
✓ - Appropriate to level!

Wrap-up: Lorogh is such a sweet little fellow! I was impressed with your descriptions of the march and the characterizations - there was such much to see and enjoy and you portrayed that very well. I would say you teetered the edge of skill overplay - I would suggest to put some skill points in psychology just to be safe! That said, you've done a wonderful job breathing life into this jolly cadouri!

Russel

Magic Applicable: Nurp
Renown: +5 for participating in a public event
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A

Knowledges:

• Endurance x3
• Socialization x2
• Intelligence x5

Skillplay:
✓ - Appropriate to level!

Wrap-up: Wow, you guys did amazing. Russel is going through a lot, goodness. As I was reading I couldn't help flinching; the way you described the pain and the stems in his skin felt real! I'm so glad that someone is playing a curse (especially so well) but I'm a bit sad it's Russel going through it, haha. I appreciated the panic attacks realism too, I enjoyed how it brought Russel to life amongst the other faceless soldiers. Hopefully I get to see more from him!

Closing Notes: I haven't reviewed much recently but this was a perfectly peaceful way to get back into it! Lorogh and Russel will hopefully interact more, their dynamic is interesting so far. As with every review, if you have an questions or concerns please reach out to me via PM!