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They stopped at the end of the road and Malcolm got down from his horse, handing the reins over to Godric, who was happy to tow the animal back to Lysoria. "You sure you don't mind?"
"Malcolm, it's fine, go say hello to your old friend, I'll stop for a drink at the tavern and meet you back here later."
The knight nodded and stepped through the gate that led up to the small cottage beside the lake, and as he turned back to thank his comrade, Godric was already disappearing down the road.

There was light beyond the door, it glowed below the ends of the curtains used to dressed the windows, and lit up the crack below the base of the door. He had opened this door a thousand times before, yet as he balled his fist, ready to knock, hesitation struck. How many years had it been? How many times had be promised to return in letters and failed to come back? Malcolm emptied his lungs silently, and with the gesture, cast out his doubt.
Knock, knock, knock.
Now his heart was pounding, he didn't know where to look, and nerves saw his fingers stitched together behind his back. Night had fallen and the closed flower petals had forgotten the last of the sun's rays. The lakeside played host to a symphony of small tree frogs, and crickets, their song echoing all around him. The door opened following a drumming of light footfalls, and Malcolm glanced up from his feet to look at the woman who stood beyond the wooden divide. He let his hands fall at his sides and rocked back on his feet.
The two of them stared at each other for a spell before Avari finally opened her mouth to speak, only for the words to escape her. Slender fingers tightened against the bronze knob, the door creaked, and the flesh around the woman's knuckles lightened a shade or two. As she looked up into familiar green eyes, Avari shook with disbelief, eyes watering as the tip of her nose took on a rosy hue under the pressure of as hand raised to mask her shock. Malcolm blinked away the burning sensation that spread up through his nose to fan out under his eyes, and combed his hair back from his face, ready to say something. Avari sprung forwards then, throwing her arms around the man while his guard was down, and slowly, he lowered the raised limb to close it around her.
"I'm sorry," she whispered, her right check pressed to his chest.
Malcolm lifted his free hand to stroke the woman's hair. "It's okay."
"Are you real?" She spluttered, not sure if she should laugh or cry.
The knight's made an amused sound and tightened his arms around the woman. "I'm real, I'm here," he cooed.
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Avari studied the lines of Malcolm's face in the flickering candlelight. The pad of her thumb traced the edge of his cheekbone and settled in the dip below it. "You're so old," she smiled, "look at you."
"You look exactly the same."
"You were always too tempted by your gifts."
Malcolm leaned forwards against the table they had moved to sit at, and folded his arm to prop his jaw against a closed fist. "Only when it was absolutely necessary."
"You used to have a bald patch right here," she observed, "where your facial hair hadn't come in, do you remember?"
"And here, and here," Malcolm smiled, straightening a finger to point under his jaw.
"I'm sorry, I know it's rude to stare, I just... all these arcs I imagined you as the same young man I knew you as. I can't believe the change."
"No grey hair yet," his smile morphed into a playful smirk.
Avari folded her arms and tucked her hands against her sides. She averted her gaze and slumped in her chair a little. "You never reply to any of my letters."
"I moved away from Burhan," Malcolm admitted, "to the capital. I meant to write you but."
"You got busy, you were always busy."
"Sell the farm, come back to Rynmere with me and buy as you once intended," he reached out and took one of her hands.
Avari sighed. "That was arcs ago, Malcolm. Things have changed. How is Vanessa?" the woman added bitterly.
"There is a lot to tell you."
"I'll get the wine."
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They drank and talked well into the night. Avari had always been so easy to talk to, because for the most part, she had a tendency to be quite neutral regarding current events in the man's life. Ava had never liked Vanessa, not because Malcolm had settled down and had a family with someone else finally, but because Avari had known things Malcolm was unaware of, her borrowed abilities letting her tap into information that would ruin the man sitting in front of her, were he ever to find out. Hundreds of years had passed since their time together had ended, but hurting him would be just as difficult now as it had been all that time ago.
"Elyna sounds very brave, just your type," Avari smiled, swirling the last of the red wine about in her glass. "But she will bore you, Malcolm, mortals always do."
"No, you're wrong," he shook his head and put the empty glass down before pouring out the last of the contents of the bottle straight into his mouth. "She's special."
Ava rolled her eyes and got up, abandoning her chair to rinse both of the glasses in the container of soapy water she kept in the sink. "You know what mortals are like, they aren't bound by the same rules as we are."
"And what rules would those be?"
"Physical, mental, biological," Ava shrugged as she made her way down the list. "They age so quickly, they have no self control, you watch, you'll go home next season and everything will be different. You're a sucker for the pretty ones, Malcolm, you always were."
"It's more than that," he shook his head and got to his feet. "Elyna makes me happy, there are no secrets, she knows what I am, who I am. I've not trusted anyone like I trust Elyna."
"... Not even me?"
Malcolm moved to stand with Avari in the kitchen. "Thats different and you know it."
"How?"
"We were children, Ava. We are different people now."
A slow smile saw her lips curl. "Well, perhaps," she looked him up and down, "you do look a lot different, stern, angry."
"I do not," his brow furrowed.
"Right there!" She laughed and turned to face him, rather than stare over her shoulder at the man. Ava reached out with her hands to set them on his hips and drew him closer.
Malcolm stiffened, hesitant, and slow on account of the wine. Avari took a step closer and put her arms around him slowly before drawing them up over his chest to rest upon his shoulders. Tentatively she reached for his face and rose up on tiptoes as she leaned in. Malcolm touched his right hand to the left side of Avari's face and kissed her brow. "Godric will be here soon."
Ava undid the top button of Malcolm's shirt. "You said that a break ago, he probably got a room in Lysoria." She undid another button.
Malcolm closed his hand over Aavri's and lowered his voice. "Bedtime."
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[columns=2]Avari: Dislikes Mortals
Avari: Loves Malcolm
Avari: Barely recognizes you[/columns]

Comments: There wasn't a lot to go off of knowledge-wise, but this thread was very well written. I love the cerebral nature of Malcolm, and there were some lines describing their emotion that made me literally feel them. Beautiful thread.
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