Rewards
Name:
Arlo
Knowledge:
Location: Rynmere
Location: Athart
Location: Rharne
Location: Ivorian
Location: Ne’haer
Vega: You like Big Butts and you CAN lie
Fauna: Spulmokawarta
Spulmokawarta: Amniotic Fluid can be Sold
Field Craft: Skinning Medium Game
Field Craft: Cleaning Bones by Boiling Them
Field Craft: Proper Disposing of Kill
Hunting: Using Every Part of a Kill
Hunting: Cutting to Check if the Kill was Pregnant
Tanning: Steps to Preparing Medium Pelt
Loot:See Below
Injuries:None
Fame:None
Story:5/5
Collaboration:5/5
Structure:5/5
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Name:
Vega
Knowledge:
Fauna: Spulmokawarta
Spulmokawarta: Amniotic Fluid can be Sold
Field Craft: Skinning Medium Game
Field Craft: Cleaning Bones by Boiling Them
Field Craft: Proper Disposing of Kill
Hunting: Similarities between Pelts of Land Animals and Sea Creatures
Hunting: Using Every Part of a Kill
Endurance: Ignoring the Numbness in Small Muscles when doing Finicky Work
Field Craft: Guts as Bait
Loot:See Below
Injuries:None
Fame:None
Story:5/5
Collaboration:5/5
Structure:5/5
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Comments:
Just a couple of comments here. I enjoyed both of your writing (as I always do). I noticed some minor spelling or grammar mistakes, Arlo- just periods instead of commas, missed capitals, unclosed quotation marks, unclosed coding, that sort of thing.
Vega- you actually brought up something that wasn’t said in thread.... In your response to Arlo (where he thought about using the guts for traps), he never actually said anything aloud. Just make sure to reread your partner’s posts so that you avoid that in the future!
I wasn’t sure how you two wanted to divvy up the rewards, so feel free to do so however you wish.
Loot:
1 Medium Pelt
4 Large Bones, Cleaned
10 Small Bones, Cleaned
Set of Teeth and Tusks from Spulmokawarta
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