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A tiny Tunawa goes missing and it's up to Niv to find him

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44th Trial of Ymiden, Arc 716

Warm beams of sunlight shone through the small opening of the tree dwelling and onto the sleeping form of Niv, who began to gently rouse from her peaceful slumber. The Tunawa had slowly migrated from her bed and into the comfy nest of her friend Skret the flying squirrel, whom Niv shared a home with. Niv was careful as she wiggled her way free from her furry friends grasp without waking them. Niv’s efforts were all for nothing as skret was stirred awake regargless with silent yawn. Skrets looked up at Niv with her sleepy black orbs and made a few quiet chirps as if to say “good morning Niv, Sleep well?”
Niv replied with a nod of the head a cheerful squeak to say “Yes I slept well” Niv knelt down and stroked Skret’s smooth scalp and added “I hope you did too”

Niv gathered her things for her trip out as she waited for her roommate to become bright eyed and bushy tailed. Niv wanted to go out to collect herbs so she took her small woven sling bag which held her prized reverence book of herbs and of course her sling staff for defence. The last thing she needed was the riding saddle which belonged to Niv’s cockatoo friend who lived in the higher branches of the tree. Patcha was a kind soul who offered to fly Niv around, in return Niv did her best to make her friend feel appreciated.

Niv peaked her tiny head out the entrance and called out an enthusiastic “Caakaa!” to get the bird attention. An echo from above was heard only moments later and not long after that, a white cockatoo came souring down to the branch in front of Niv. The bird bobbed up and down to show it’s excitement, then unfurled it’s wings and whistled. It was obvious to the tunawa what her friend wanted and she was more than willing to deliver. Niv stepped out on to the branch and struck a dynamic pose; one arm outstretched to the sky, the other towards the ground and her legs crossing each other with natural poise. She looked up at her hand then lowered it to look at Patcha who continued to bob up and down eagerly.

Niv opened her mouth and out came the sweet chirping of a song bird, a nightingale to be precise. Unlike the bird she mimicked however, Niv did her best to carry a melody, a cheerful one with just the right amount of repetition. Niv accompanied her song with some calculated spins and a dance that involved rhythmically flapping her arms as if they were wings. When her little performance was done she gave a bow and Patcha followed suit.

Patcha turned his back to Niv and started hopping up and down with a few squawks as if to say get on my back. Niv rushed to grab the saddle, the single saddle bag tied to the back and the other belongings she intended to bring. The Tunawa pushed the saddle onto the large birds back and did up the latches. Patcha lowered his head so Niv could climb aboard, and she did so with only a bit of difficulty because of her cumbersome sling staff.

“I’ll be back later” Niv chirped back at Skret, who always seemed to become suddenly reserved whenever Patcha was around, or really anyone for that matter. Niv supposed it was just the nature of a squirrel in the forest, but most of the other squirrels were very daring so that couldn’t be it. Skret chirped a reserved little squeak before Patcha took off towards the skies.

As the too soared through the trees at a steady speed, Niv coaxed the route out with her chirps and caws to give Patcha direction. They were headed out of Magani since the marsh covering the floor didn’t house the type of herbs she was looking for. It was when they got near the borders of the city that the cries of desperation caught Niv’s attention. She instructed Patcha to follow the sound and they quickly found the sobbing Tunawa couple.
“Whats the matter?” Niv asked them.
“We can’t find our sapling, we’ve looked everywhere he could be..We’re afraid he went out of the city” The father explained in dread.
“Don’t worry Niv is up to the task!” She shouted before she set out to look for the lost child.

She flew low in the forest and after a careful search, she found a fallen toy abandoned on the forest floor. It wasn’t a good sign and fear began to enter Niv’s core.
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The sound of a crow caw drew Niv’s attention from the toy and back towards the forest. The crow sounded distressed and by the subtle variations in tone Niv could tell it really was a tunawa cry. Niv quickly mounted Patcha and the two soared through the forest towards the call.The bird calls got louder until Niv spotted the tiny sprout standing on a protruding tree root with his hands waving about.
“Someone needs help!” the little sprout called out to Niv.
Patcha landed nearby and Niv dismounted, running over to the boy in relief.
“Don’t worry I’m here to help you lost sprout” Niv said with a smile.
The sprout narrowed his brows and looked at Niv in confusion. “I’m not lost, but I do need your help.” The sprout leaped off the the root and sprinted further into the forest “follow me” the sprout called out behind him.
Niv reluctantly followed the sprout, not really sure what was going on but not wanting to leave a young one alone. It didn’t take long before Niv could see the problem the sprout needed addressed. Just behind a bush laid a faintly groaning man and even from a few feet away Niv could see the blood soaked fabric on the mans leg.

Niv’s tiny head darted around her surroundings to see what she had to work with and quickly spotted a thick coating of moss on a nearby rock. Without explanation Niv sprinted to the rock and began digging her arms under the browning edges of the otherwise green moss.
“What are you doing?” The confused sprout called out in protest.
“I’m going to use this to soak up the blood, Help me get it off and carry it over.” Niv instructed.
“sorry rock, but I need your moss” she whispered.
The sprout didn’t hesitate in rushing over, but it was clear by his weary expression that he didn’t understand the plan. With the help of the sprout, the moss was freed from the rock in a timely manner. Each tunawa took a side and carried the moss over to the injured man. The placed the moss over the mans leg but Niv quickly realized that pressure was needed. The leather string that worked through the mans shoe would have to do. Niv untied the knot and forcefully pulled the string free.
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“hold this” Niv gave the rope to the young tunawa and they worked t to bind the mans leg.
“okay I need you to go with Patcha back to your parents and get help for this man. I can’t do much to heal him on my own, he needs his people.”
The young tunawa’s face scrunched up in protest but he none the less stopped over to the bird while mumbling something about fairness.
“Take him back to his parents and get help Patcha, I’m counting on you” Niv nuzzled Patcha’s feathery head before sending the bird off.

Niv was left alone with the man and felt helpless. While the moss would slow the bleeding, the wound was still dirty and bad spirits fester in the unclean wounds of tall folk. Niv would need water or some kind of special herb to clean the wound. Niv wished she could at least spot the saw like edges of a nettle leaf around the area but nothing seemed to be of any use and Niv was afraid to leave the man alone.

The only thing Niv could think to do was examine the condition of the man. She already knew about the wound on the leg but it was unlikely that was his only wound. She walked over to the mans head, to see if he had any Trauma. Right a way Niv could see a tiny stream of blood coming from the man’s messy brown hair. The mans rugged face was other wise intact but Niv knew that tall folks most important organ was in their head. Niv placed her hand on the mans head to see if the fire had taken him and was happy to find that while his brow was damp with sweat he was not burning up. The breath coming from his mouth was steady which was also a good sign. Niv walked around to the back of the mans and searched through the mans hair to discover the damage to the mans head. Niv wasn’t an expert on human biology by any stretch of the word but there didn’t seem to be much damage other than some blood.

She moved to look for other wounds but she started to hear him groan and rustle about. She ran to greet the mans waking face who went went wide eyed as soon as he spotted the tunawa before him.
“Don’t try to get up” Niv instructed in Xanthan but after seeing that the words didn’t seem to register she repeated in common.
“no move, yew hurt Help be coming” Niv said with more urgency as the man started to make efforts to move.

“What did you do to me Tunawa?” The man scowled accusingly at Niv.
“I found yew like dis, Me help” Niv retorted “What yew be calldah?”
“You mean my name…it’s Gaius.” the man groaned.
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“I calldah Nivi, yew come Desnind fer reason or yew lost?” Niv couldn’t think of much to do with the man other than keep him engaged with questions. She knew enough about healing to know that keeping an injured human awake was the best course of action.
“I..I came her for a reason.” Gaius seemed to be looking past Niv at his surroundings. The sudden cawing of a nearby bird startled him.
“Wat reason?” Niv pushed, the more evasive Gaius was the more intrigued the tunawa became.
“Don’t you have some place else to be?” Gaius sighed “I’m fine and you’ve even got help coming, so just leave me be little one.”
“Cannot do dat Guyis, it mah duty to watch ova yew as a member of duh Ordur of the Aduhnaaah” Niv put her foot down in defiance. “I look after yew! now tell Nivi how yew’d got in Desnind and how you’d gotten’ hurt.”
“Fine..I’m a slave..I escaped my sadistic master by boarding a ship. I wasn’t even sure where it was going I just need to go someplace else. I wasn’t born a slave…but everyone I know is probably dead.” A single tear leaked from the mans eyes and drifted down his face. “do you know what thats like?!”

Niv paused for a moment as she took in all the information Gaius told her. The word slave was one she had heard somewhere, but it was hard to place. It was briefly mentioned to her by Noah but the true explanation came in from a dream. Niv’s memory was foggy on it but it was definitely a bad thing.
“I lose friends long time ago in smoke, leave home aftah dat.” Niv thought back to the dark time in her short life, but had a feeling she didn’t fully understand the mans loss. “yew safe ‘ere doh, Desnind donna hav bad tings like dat.”
“I wouldn’t call this place safe.” Gaius gestured to his injured leg.
“oh yah, yew ne’va tolded meh how yew’s hurt yewself. Didah animal attack yew or yew just fall to ground like a silly monkey?”
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“Silly Monkey?” Gaius raised an eyebrow.
“It joke to make happy, Happy make duh pain mor eezee tah take.” Niv smiled back at the man.
“Sure..Well anyway I got attacked by a creature. I managed to kill it but it got me pretty bad..then I tripped and must have hit my head.”
Niv noticed the tiny bit of blood on the rock near the man and it made the tunawa worry even more about the condition of Gaius’s cranium. The injured man still didn’t show any signs that he had taken any internal damage which Niv used to convince herself that the man was fine.
“Wat creature look like?” Niv tried to stay as neutral sounding as possible and not let the worry enter her voice.
“I didn’t get a good look at it but it was some kind of Dog. Well at least I think so, it was probably the ugliest dog I’ve ever seen and much stronger. I didn’t see it die, but I wedged my sword deep into its hide before I ran away. I’d be surprised if the ugly bastard didn’t bleed out, I sent the message that I’m not food ether way.” Even with all the confidence, it was clear Gaius was doing his best to convince himself by the shakiness in his voice.
“Weapon special ta yew?”
“well it was the only weapon I had so it was important in that way, but it was nothing special.”

Niv nodded her tiny head as she tired to think of more questions to ask him. Nothing really came to mind so Niv began to dance by starting up a rhythm in her shoulders. Soon she was wiggling her arms like a slithering snake and tapping her feet against the ground.
“What are you doing?” Gaius looked dumbfounded but the sudden strange behaviour from the tunawa.
“I dance” Niv swayed her hips and pivoted in her feet in a circle.
“But why..”
“I not know, I jus do.” Niv shrugged her shoulders and twirled on the point of her feet.
Gaius didn’t have a response, he just held a quizzical look at the tiny creature dancing in front of his face.
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“Hello!” came a nearby holler from a deep voice in Xanthan. “any one in need in of assistance here!”
“over here!” Niv called back in her native tongue “There is a foreigner with a leg and head injury, I don’t know how bad it is.”
“There right away” The voice was reassuring and strong. It instantly made Niv feel more relaxed despite not really knowing if this mystery man was even equipped to help.

A strong sev’ryn man with a thick beard and a Grey cloak of the Order of Adunih entered the scene through the foliage. The cloaked man was followed by an entourage of cloaked men and women in green cloaks.

It didn’t take long for the grey cloaked man to begin assessing the situation and asking Gaius questions on his condition.
“Did you apply this moss?” the bearded man asked Gaius.
“I think it was this Tunawa actually?” Gaius replied back with uncertainty.
“Oh well thank you Tunawa, have you considered joining the Order of Adunih?

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Knowledges:
  • Medicine: Moss as an Absorbent
  • Dancing: Pleasing a Bird
  • Desnind: A Place Safe for Slaves
  • Slaves: No Friends or Family
  • Order of Aldunih: Healer Faction
  • Language: Speaking Common with Humans
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I had to dock you for structure as I noticed significant spelling errors in your first post. There were a few names that should have been capitalized as well. I noted that the use of quotations while telling a story might be difficult for you. If you would like some help on this, please feel free to contact me.

Using another language was excellent in this, but words should be spelled correctly or use hyphens. “Yew” was an excellent substitution for “you.” Post 4 was much better than Post 3 for your language barrier.

I also did not understand why the man asked if she wanted to join the Order. She had already stated that she was a part of the order initially. Was this her induction thread? If so, then she should not be a part of the order quite yet.
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