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For all his cheerful, loud, touchable hedonism, Pash was incredibly susceptible to broodiness, often falling back into the depths of his own mind in a darker expression of his immature selfishness that he’d never really had to outgrow when hurt or uncomfortable as an easier way to keep himself from actually dealing with the situation at hand. He’d already spent more than a season attempting to escape from dealing with all that had happened in Rharne, and his hiding place was poor. It showed. It left things exposed to the suns’ light and burned. Brooding and self-directed anger were, perhaps, also just the flipside of being creative—he was, without being able to articulate it properly in words, his own worst critic. He’d already spent plenty of trials blaming himself, critiquing all that had gone wrong between himself and Ari’nne and all the poor choices he’d made leading up to his decision to invite magic into his own life. Letting go was easier, it was true, but he found his heart of hearts reluctant, rebellious.

He was not, however, on the way to a party with the achingly lovely daughter of Delroth just to stand around and lick his wounds—Immortals, no—and Zana clearly would have none of it, not one trill, reminding him with her quipped response, her elbow, and her momentary silence along the beautiful stretch of shore as the sun set that he would be wasting not just his time but hers to do so. And what a time he already knew it could be.

Still, her touch was generous, unwarranted, and possibly undeserved. She wanted him after all—his time, this trial, as far as possible from her normal expectations—and this was his opportunity to show her things outside of her usual life choices.

Seeing him stupid was not part of the plan.

Pash was not so lost in himself to be blind to Vyrja’s subtle judgements, for unfortunately the seafaring minstrel was used to breaking the unspoken rules of his own society at least in this particular respect. He needed variety, he craved interaction, and his insatiable curiosity found him completely uncaring about who he mingled with in terms of clan and race. This particular offense was nothing new to the shipwright’s son, and he knew by the way she glanced at Zana that she was curious about his decision to bring an outsider as an obvious date when he could, on a good evening, have his choice among the Biqaj. Zana, again, was observant and coy, her broken but bold Rakahi bringing a broad grin to his face and her arms around him stirring a warmth of confidence and desire in the hull of his chest.

“Aye, I build for Brujo.” Djet answered with a smile, dark eyes traveling over the blonde in curiosity and interest, as if she felt familiar and as unconcerned as possible that he was checking out someone else’s goods while standing next to cargo of his own. His accent was surprisingly absent in Common, having worked hard to sound completely natural in his fluency, “Though I’ve asked for arcs now for Pash to convince his father, Traek, to take me on.”

Pash smirked at the blonde’s mention of Elijah, unsure as to whether her phrase about sailing was a coy euphemism or if it was an honest account. She was surely far too blunt to need such a metaphor, though he couldn’t help but brush off Djet’s not-so-subtle employment suggestion to briefly interject, not entirely embarrassed that they now shared the strangest of connections and all the connotations that entailed, “Elijah Ki’ouj? He’s a friend o’ mine, y’know. An’ you’re welcome on th’ Muse with me any time y’like.”

The seafaring minstrel hadn’t seen the man for a few arcs, it was true, but he’d done his best to keep in touch. Turning back to Djet, Pash kept himself from ruining their conversation by telling him his father’s opinion of the older Biqaj—that his somewhat serial infidelity and flaunting of it made Traek assume the man was utterly untrustworthy—”I’ve let him know, but it’s hard ‘nough for me t’ change his mind on things concernin’ me, let alone ‘bout some’ne else. B’sides, y’know I work twice ‘s hard ‘s y’ do an’ I’m only visitin’. Ask again once I set sail from here. He’ll miss me. He always does.”

Pash couldn’t help but tease, Zana’s touch emboldening the already quite loquacious bard to perhaps show off a little more than usual, watching the older man fume wordlessly at the suggestion that the younger, musical Biqaj was a better shipwright. Maybe he was. Instead, he turned and began walking again, as if to keep his tongue from getting him in trouble.

Vyrja chuckled, the man’s stray glances to the outsider’s attractiveness not unnoticed, and yet she invited the pair to walk with her with a wave of her hand while she answered the blonde’s question as if to dismiss it all into the salty air, “Me? I keep the books for my clan’s merchants. I make sure all the nel and goods go to all the right people and places. Someone has to be the brains, you know?”

Her smirk was clearly aimed at Djet’s back as the four of them walked until they found themselves at the edges of a gathered crowd, but the woman shrugged as if her own comment was obvious. The main bonfire blazed gloriously, a broad-shouldered man with grey hair and a beautiful, colorful tattooed landscape of a coral reef across his bare back was tending to it, tossing a few more logs into the flames as if they were mere pieces of parchment. There were a few other Biqaj of various ages sitting around their instruments near the bonfire, tuning and chatting, but not yet playing. One or two waved in Pash’s direction, the tall Biqaj apparently well-recognized among his native social circle. There were some folk tending to the food and others standing around chatting in little groups in the sand. Vyrja opened her mouth and began to ask how Pash knew Zana and what she did in a curious, prying sort of tone, only to be interrupted,

“Pash!” Torim’s voice rang out above the crackling fire and the crowd. The man was perhaps only an arc or two older, short and broad-shouldered enough to be called burly, grinning as he made his way toward them, still speaking at a volume as if there was music playing that he had to be heard over even though there clearly wasn’t. Still, he sailed right on in for a rough hug which the taller Biqaj obliged with a laugh, though his hands didn’t stray far from Zana given their proximity. The shorter man grinned at the pair, dark eyes noticing the blonde but it seemed as though he was more interested in studying the two of them together, “Ye said ye weren’t coming! Luff my sails an’ drink me bilge water, ye didn’t bring anythin’ pretty for me, too?”

“Nah. Y’ can get your own. I do th’ pretty work for you all th’ damn time. To-trial, I’m takin’ off bein’ your man in th’ crow’s nest.” The seafaring minstrel's riposte came with a clearly baiting smile, though wordlessly he wondered what all his antagonist of a second cousin would remember of the birthtrial celebration he’d arranged.
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Djet's eyes roamed over her and Zana did what she would always do; she returned his gaze and her appraisal of him was open and unashamed. Her eyes moved languidly over his form, her lips twitching just slightly as she decided that she had the better deal of the two men in the circle of her vision and she turned to Pash and smiled. He liked that her response was to speak in their language, he liked the boldness of it she thought.

When Djet explained that he built for Brujo, but wished to work for Traek, Pash's father, Zana smiled, her ice blue eyes dancing slightly, she would have answered but Pash spoke of knowing Elijah and Zana turned to him with surprise on her face. "Yes, that's him! What a small world. And I'd like that. Can we go out at night? It must be magical," she had very much enjoyed being on Elijah's small sloop which would always be, in her mind, the 'Sweet Potato', but she had been utterly dreadful to the poor man.

Oh well.

Meanwhile, as they walked, Vyrja said what she did and she was an accountant, as far as Zana could tell. No wonder the poor woman was so miserable, Zana thought and she smiled at her. "I'm afraid I wouldn't know. Brains aren't what I'm known for," she smiled in a friendly way and kept her arm wrapped around Pash's waist as they walked.

Zana sent a silent prayer to her father, dedicating the envy and jealousy she saw in Vyrja to him. Then she turned and smiled, ignoring Vyrja's half-spoken question as another man joined them. This one was the one who had organized Pash's birthtrial celebrations, if she recalled correctly. He and Pash hugged, though Pash kept his hand and hers connected, which Zana was pleased with. When the hug was over, she stepped back in to stand next to Pash, her arm linked in his.

The banter between the two of them was interesting but she thought that she felt a slight tension in Pash as he spoke. Zana watched the exchange between the two and if she bristled at the cousin's reference to her as somethin' pretty then she hid it well. "It's a pleasure to meet you," she said with a good natured grin to the man she'd seen only in passing but knew a lot about. After all, when work was done for the night, the girls shared stories and she'd heard all about it.

That night, like this one, she got the best deal.

Still, she needed to say something, so she leaned her head against Pash's shoulder (or really, closer to armpit if she was entirely honest. Maybe she shouldn't have taken off her shoes) and she spoke in a general sense, but more to Pash than the cousin. "I'm pleased to be here." Her arm tightened briefly around Pash's waist. "So I'm glad that no one's in the crows' nest. That sounds like a very lonely and rather boring place to be." She grinned up at Pash, trying to gauge his reaction to the man who had approached them.
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Walk through my door of desire, baby. Come in, make it your home
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For the tall Biqaj, it was strangely refreshing to hear an outsider attempt Rakahi without simply throwing in the curse words—the blonde’s use of his peoples’ language meant for his benefit was indeed entertaining, endearing. Her pronunciation could use some work, of course, though the distracting problem was it was much easier to find more enjoyable ways to use one’s tongue than language lessons. Swallowing that thought with a smirk, Pash managed a quiet reply,

“Out on th’ Muse? You’re welcome any time, an’ th’ view o’ th’ stars from th’ sea is definitely my favorite, I won’t argue with that. I may even be able t’ offer breakfast for o’ernight cruises.” He chuckled, lagoon blue eyes washing emerald in his mischief as he offered Zana a sideways glance and a grin. It was all he could do to keep from laughing at the blonde’s comment to Vyrja, inhaling sharply as if he was poked or prodded instead and rolling his eyes. Both the woman and Djet weren’t quite sure how to respond, caught off-guard, and were thankfully interrupted by Torim and Pash’s banter instead.

“Borin’? Aye, sometimes, but only ‘cause I’m better lookin’ an’ Torim’s always struggled t’ have anyone ask him out o’ his pants without me ‘round to scout ‘em, hence th’ sayin’ ‘bout someone in a crow’s nest. That’s me, always helpin’. I’m sure he’s missed me.” Pash all but beamed, making sure that everything he said to Zana was just audible enough for the other Biqaj, able to tease his cousin in ways no one else could knowing full well the other man could probably still toss him to the sand more often than not in a sparring match. Besides, he could only guess all the daughter of Vanity already knew, for surely gossip was gossip whether on the beach or in a whorehouse. He shrugged, rolling his work-built shoulders in an attempt to let go of the nagging feeling that eventually his cousin would remember some moment of clarity from Pash’s birthtrial, recognize his guest, and call him out on it in a most disagreeable sort of way,

Torim only grunted in response to the seafaring minstrel’s baiting, not drunk enough to retaliate. Instead, his dark eyes lingered on the mortalborn for a moment, “Ye gonna introduce yer guest?” He may have emphasized the last word just enough to make his tone a subtle dig at Pash’s choices, much like Vyrja, though in truth he did not care as much as she who his cousin chose to hang out with. He stuck out a well-worn and rather large hand, though he was politely kind to Zana’s should she take his, offering a smile, “Name’s Torim. I’d say ye look familiar, but maybe ye don’t.”

“This be Zana.” Pash’s baritone voice hid well his suspicion, though he wasn’t really even sure he cared. Perhaps he gave the other Biqaj too much credit. They were all here for a good time, so there was no reason to spoil the fun. His cousin could simply wait until later to taunt him, instead of deciding to attempt something on a grander scale, “Torim’s m’ cousin. Second cousin, really, but who’s countin’ ‘cept for us Biqaj?”

“Nice to meet ye.” The shorter Biqaj smiled, reluctantly looking to the salty bard for a moment as if asking his question wordlessly, only to wave a hand toward the bonfire and the food and the drink and the instruments and the other people, “C’mon. Ye can meet my da, Yarik, an’ enjoy the well-earned spoils of some hard work not done by yer own hands.”

Djet and Vyrja hovered out of a sense of politeness and perhaps lingering curiosity, obviously friends in some way or another with the seafaring minstrel. They’d all grown up together, honestly, and most of the folks he’d run into tonight knew him or his family by association even if it hadn’t been his father’s shipyard that put on the celebration. He’d been away from home for a few seasons, and even as the four of them made their way across the beach, Pash received a few waves and welcome home comments, though most of them were in Rakahi anyway. He seemed content to wave back and keep his hands occupied on Zana’s person, mostly because she was far more distracting than any conversation could be.

“Y’know, as nice as this part o’ th’ beach is, there’s also a nice lil’ cove ‘bout a half a break walk from here that has a great view o’ th’ sunrise.” The tall Biqaj leaned in just so to speak quietly in the mortalborn’s ear, grinning as he did so, his tone coy and promising before they found themselves closer to the bonfires and a larger crowd, “Jus’ in case.”

Torim waved their group ahead of him, pointing toward the bonfire again and letting the other four lead the way while he lingered behind for a moment. There was, perhaps, a moment while the short, bulky Biqaj watched everyone walk away, Pash’s hands on the blonde, Djet and Vyrja chatting briefly in Rakahi, that Torim made the connection. It dawned on him like a sun cutting through the fog—the fog being copious amounts of alcohol—and had anyone been able to see his face, his grin would have bordered on the wicked, but for the moment, Torim held his tongue. There was something about the walking away that jogged his memory, that stuck out to the shorter Biqaj clearly. It was difficult, and once their small group had reached the bonfire, where there were more people, a real crowd honestly, his expression was still something more sly than entirely friendly.

There were the smaller bonfires where food was almost finished being prepared and set out on tables, a little area for drinks and other refreshments, and a few musicians who had begun to put some tunes together instead of simply warm up. The sky was full of stars, dusk quickly yielding to darkness, and the moons sneaking above the watery horizon of Lake Rea.

“Pash, why don’t ye come with me to get some drinks for everyone, eh?” Torim spoke to his taller cousin but his dark eyes lingered briefly on Zana, watching. Pash gave the daughter of Delroth a warm squeeze before he slipped away to follow his cousin.

“Be right back.” He winked with the brush of calloused fingers.
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Zana watched the interplay between the biqaj and she smiled, holding on to Pash as she did. There were undertones here and, in the undertone of his cousin she felt a vague disquiet. Yet here, she was the interloper the one who was outside looking in. It was a tricky game that Pash was playing and, had she known that the drunks from the brothel that night were going to be here, she might have thought twice about it. No, she would have. Because one of them was going to recognise her, she considered it almost inevitable.

So, when it did, if it did, she was going to have to deal with it and so Zana thought about it for a little while as they walked. He lowered his head to whisper to her and she looked up at him and nodded, "I'd like that. They're going to recognise me, Pash. One of them. If they do, it's fine." The woman smiled at him and leaned against him, her hand moving to his cheek as she lifted her face to his, pulling him to her and kissing him. "I can deal with it. I promise you."

They got to the bonfire and Pash moved off with Torim. She met Torim's gaze and her returned one was unashamed. She smiled at him, fairly sure just by the way his gaze on her had changed that he recognised her. Zana was genuinely unconcerned now that she knew how she was going to deal with it and she sat, feeling the sand between her toes and gazed up at the stars. Whatever would happen, would. Pash would deal with his cousin, or not. Zana had an arrogant confidence which, as yet, had always stood her in good stead.

It didn't even occur to her that this night, it might not.
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“Nah. It’ll be fine.” Pash assured her coyly, his words a warm whisper against her lovely lips as an excuse to linger before he turned away, as though perhaps he was convincing himself with them, too.

Even if it wasn’t fine, it would be. Somehow.

Torim was not normally a patient creature: the shorter, broad-shouldered Biqaj not at all as impulsive as his cousin, but instead short-tempered and blunt. Still, he waited until out of earshot at least, possibly out of politeness and possibly because it took him that long to form his thoughts into coherent words that did not involve violence. He did, however, poke the seafaring minstrel in the side, two fingers accurately digging where he knew a still fresh scar to be, his expression no longer friendly and amused,

“What are you even doing?” The older man asked simply in the language they shared, his normally dark eyes now the color of honey while he moved to gather drinks.

“I don’t follow.” Pash winced before smirking, the back of his neck suddenly itchy, attempting to ignore the prickly feeling under his tanned skin by keeping his hands busy, “Are you that jealous? Look, I’m sure I can get—”

“Shut your head. You come home after arcs being away and pine over what you claim is a broken heart. To me. To anyone that will listen to your pretty face. So, you know, I try to do right by you, by us, and look out for your wounded soul and then you talk about magic to me—damn you—and I’ve got to live with that,” Torim spoke quietly, but even if his Rakahi words couldn’t be heard from the distance between himself and Zana and Djet and Vyrja as the pair attempted to make otherwise awkward, idle conversation with the mortaborn as a few instruments began to warm up near the fire, it was clear by his facial expression and body language to anyone that bothered to watch the two that he barely contained very strong anger, “But now, to top it all off, you come to my father’s celebration with her?”

The tall Biqaj put the cold stoneware mugs down that he had been holding and straightened, squaring his shoulders and studying his cousin’s face, “Zana? What of her bothers you? She’s actually a person, you know, not just an—”

“You could have your choice here. Always. That’s just been you wherever we go. You get what you want without even trying. Everywhere, cousin.” Torim interrupted, flustered by Pash’s honesty, by the way the other man always seemed to go right for the feels in every damn conversation lately, “We were all drunk out of our minds, Pash, but not blind. I know who she is and, as all of U’Frek’s domain is wet, I don’t care about that. That’s not my point. Good on you, from all I’ve heard. You spend your nel how you want, even if I only heard otherwise all evening long on your birthtrial—”

“I’m not. It’s not like that. Nel, that is. All of it. No.” Pash tried not to growl, frustrated that he indeed had to defend himself but quickly realizing that his decision to bring the blonde had nothing to do with her profession so much as her lack of belonging. He sighed. There would be no real explaining, no waxing poetic about their exchange, about this evening being a play at something mundane and fun that everyone else took for granted but Zana had never experienced, something that did not include the exchange of coin but instead the risk of chance and feelings. Torim could quite obviously care less about the fluffy reasons behind his younger cousin’s decisions. This was not an accusation questioning his character in terms of moral choice—his cousin would perhaps have otherwise lauded him for his balls to even attempt something so unassuming and normal with her—but a practical, cultural one that had somehow offended his Biqaj sensibilities in ways that the seafaring minstrel had slowly lost touch with over so much time, “I’m sorry. I didn’t really think about that.”

“It’s just us. You know, family. But now it isn’t.”

“It shouldn’t matter. She’s not going to take away from any of that,” The taller Biqaj shook his head and picked back up his mugs with smirk. Would Yarik be so offended? He doubted Torim’s father would really care that much, and he found it hard to believe that every Biqaj on the beach tonight was going to make a point of stopping by to let him know, of all people, that bringing an outsider ruined their party. In fact, how many of the rest of the folks gathered would even notice unless asshats like Torim went around pointing the lovely blonde out, “from any of this. She’s going to have a good time. With me. And you’re the one who’s going to shut your head.” Pash grinned then and it was his turn to be wicked, though the baritone of his voice was much more light-hearted than his cousin’s had been. He was teasing, “I can make you.”

Torim hissed a sound of dismissal, meeting the taller man’s almost grey, threatening gaze with an expressionless face. Pash had crawled back to Ne’Haer a mess, a shipwreck of all sorts of things that he did not have the abilities to entirely deal with. It was easier to get drunk with the man, to take him places and distract him, to help him forget, than it was to stand under the weight of everything Pash seemed capable of feeling and doing and sort through it with his bare hands. He cared, he did, but he didn’t always understand—if ever. Their differences were wide, deep spaces between sandbars far out at sea. They were not cut from the same sailcloth so much as familiar from birth,

“Don’t. I’m just a little disappointed—it’s not like she’s hard to look at, Immortals couldn’t you just look at her all day?—and there’ll be some old folks here who will be pissed off because they always know who isn’t one of us. You know all this. I also know you don’t give a bucket of bilge water, but I do. You can get back in your boat and sail to whatever damn port you like without me next, without her, without anyone. I can’t.”

With that, Torim turned and carried his drinks back toward the other three. He was done. He’d said what he felt and Pash could deal with it as he liked. He, too, really just wanted to have a good time and not miss out on a chance to bring someone home after a bit of drinking and dancing. In that respect, they were no different from each other. But everything else had changed.

The seafaring minstrel stood alone for a moment, missing the familiar weight of his lute over his shoulder, the sound of music now filling the beach with a rhythm and a melody that invited bodies to dance. What was he even doing, anyway? He sighed.

Torim returned to Zana and his friends first and he flashed the blonde a smile that was not disingenuous, even if it was, indeed, knowing. Instead of Djet, he offered her and Vyrja a cool mug of fruity, clearly alcoholic liquid and winked, not baiting the daughter of Delroth so much as letting her know what he knew, “It’s not fancy wine, lovely. More like a local home-brew if ye will, but it tastes good.”

Vyrja laughed from over the rim of her mug already, rolling her eyes.

Djet opened his mouth to complain his hand was empty, only to have Pash push a mug at him before he could say a word. The tall Biqaj drank in the blonde first, recentering himself with a coy expression replacing the one he’d walked over with, free hand roaming her person for a physical anchor. If she wanted, they’d stand in their little gathering for a few bits, enjoying their drinks (which were actually quite tasty), making mundane conversation about boats or the sea or what Ne’Haer fishing was like this season as if nothing was out of place. Torim was funny, Djet was dense, and Vyrja jaded, but they were in fact normal people and may have, in fact, made real efforts to include Zana in whatever they talked about without wanting her to feel uncomfortable. Real people were sometimes boring, it was true, but they also had their moments. Pash’s friends were curious, not insatiable as he was of course, but interested in who their friend brought with them, maybe intimidated by her almost untouchable attractiveness, and yet not at all intimidated by the tall Biqaj who was with her. It was an odd dance, but they made it work until their mugs were empty and the sky was full of stars.

“Dance with me.” Pash finally leaned toward Zana to speak quietly, their bodies touching and his lips brushing not her ear but the soft skin behind it. His words were not in the form of a question, the sand still warm under his feet and their conversation at a lull. He was tired of the weight of social expectation, and he was here with her for more than shop talk, “Or perhaps I’ve bored you already?”
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Pash didn't seem inclined to worry, and Zana was happy to go along with his feelings there. It would be fine, he said and so she smiled and leaned forward to plant a kiss on his lips before he left. His cousin wanted to speak to him, so Pash went and spoke. Zana sat as he did, feeling the sand between her toes and looking at what was happening here. At the people who were gathered and assembled here and she realized that they were all together. All united. All one.

She didn't belong here.

Zana was not a woman who really cared about what other people thought of her and she didn't now. However, she cared very much about her own comfort and, as she watched the cousin poke Pash in the side and the pair of them arguing she came to a decision; her ice blue eyes followed Torin as he came back. She took the drink and smiled at him. "Thank you," she said and she watched what happened next. Pash came back, he wrapped his arm around her and Zana smiled at him, turning her head to kiss him with a soft kiss. "So, Torin," she asked, calm and friendly. "Are you angry at Pash for bringing me because I'm a prostitute or is it because I'm not a biqaj?"

Her eyes were calm, she asked out of interests sake, it seemed. "Because I'm not working tonight, I'm on my night off. You, in fact, are the only one that's ever paid for my services here, so I wonder if my job has nothing to do with it?" She smiled, shrugging slightly and turned to Pash with a smile of genuine regret.

"No, I'm going to leave. Thank you, I had a lovely time while it lasted," reaching up she trailed a finger over his nose and she grinned. "We should have considered that other people aren't able to see beyond and to the actual person. Thank you, Pash, for being able to do that." Gesturing around she grinned. "I had fun. Thank you to all for your hospitality." The drink, which she hadn't touched, she handed back to Torin, then turned back to Pash.

"You should stay, be with your family, your people." Zana whispered to him with a smile. "And I should go back to mine. I hope to see you again, maybe try this date thing again, but just the two of us. Or not. Goodnight, Pash." With a nod and a smile to Djet and Vyrja, Zana walked away.
Let's build a house of fire, baby. Not one of wood or of stone.
Walk through my door of desire, baby. Come in, make it your home
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“Doesn’t bother me, what ye do, even if I've seen ‘t all m’self.” Torim shrugged, his tone dismissive as his dark eyes narrowed at Zana’s questions. He refused to look at Pash, if only because he could feel the chill of his accusatory glance without needing to see it reflected in the younger man’s tidepool gaze. Even when she pointed out his previous expenditures in front of his friends, the shorter, broad-shouldered Biqaj didn’t seem at all ashamed—if there was only one thing he and his cousin had in common, it was certainly that they were not easily made to feel sorry for their life choices, no matter how wild. He could spend the coin he earned how he wanted as far as he was concerned, and the blonde’s profession was certainly the least of his worries at the moment.

Torim was no longer in need of fussing about saving face after Zana spoke, “But, aye, it matters to me who ye are. Pash should know better, but I suppose he's been away long enough to forget—”

“Ze, I've always thought 't were stupid, an’ y’ know ‘t. I don’ know why y’ gotta go an’ be such a djout ‘bout ‘t.” The seafaring minstrel hissed his interruption, aware that this is where he became different from most of his people: just like he'd never chanced coin, he'd never cared about being inclusive. He loved his family and his friends very much, too much sometimes, lived a life quite identified with his heritage, and felt as though he had a real sense of racial and clan pride, in his opinion. He was a good Biqaj, in those respects, but he had developed over the arcs (from a very young age, honestly) absolutely no concept of turning others into outsiders. He never understood why it mattered or why he should care, too insatiable when it came to people and relationships of all kinds that he didn't think twice about bringing someone who wasn't Biqaj to what could only have been called a closed, private party. Ever. If the person was interesting—and Zana was a person, though perhaps that was hard for many to see clearly—that’s all that had ever mattered to the salty bard for the sake of entertainment.

The problem wasn't just tonight, either. He was a repeat offender for stepping in cultural toes when it came to unspoken racial rules. It was, perhaps, one of the reasons he’d come to understand a life of travel was his ultimate destiny.

“It's not stupid. It's how things are. How I am. Did ye forget?” Torim bristled even as Zana was thanking him and handing her drink back to him, touching his cousin in familiar ways that didn’t require the exchange of coin and telling him she’d had enough. The dark-haired shipwright smirked, perhaps amused that he’d both annoyed the blonde and Pash without entirely intending to, but his amusement was of the darker, wounded kind. The younger man owed him, he told himself, owed him big for dumping all his secrets into his lap just a handful of ten-trials ago, for coming home broken, for leaving in the first place.

The taller Biqaj frowned, caught in the middle of a mess of his own making, annoyed at himself for being so distracted, for being so forgetful.

“No.” He scowled at the mortalborn’s back, but spoke to his people first even if he didn’t look at them, “I’m no’ gonna stay, either, jus’ ‘cause I’ve been away long ‘nough for qy’akot t’ forget what that word means.” It meant family, but not necessarily those related by blood. Pash wasn’t usually one to express his words with hand motions, but he was full of ire now, having made a promise and having had expectations, only to see them come unraveled far too soon, and his calloused hands moved to add emphasis to his Rakahi words with sign. He’d made the mistake, and it stung that he’d forgotten so much, that he’d lived his life differently for so long that he could now feel the distance between himself and those he’d missed, those he’d once been so close to. The chasm between them was colder, darker water than he remembered, and Pash looked to Torim with a frown that spoke to the depths of his confusion.

He didn’t want to fight, though he knew he could settle things with his cousin with a bit of silver and sweat on the sand. Always. But some things just weren’t the same, no matter how warm his mother’s hugs were or how drunk his cousin could still convince him to get,

Eja’yoamaI’m sorry—I’m no’ th’ same, an’ I told y’ that.” The seafaring minstrel offered quietly to Torim, aware that what he admitted to was way more than the other man could handle, that his cousin had not wanted to know about his magical abilities any more than he’d wanted to know about the broken relationship that brought him home instead of homesickness. They’d have to come to terms with each other in new ways, after all these arcs as both family and friends, but tonight was not the night, “Tell your da th’ same, eh? I’m sure I’ll hear ‘bout ’t tomorrow in th’ shipyard.”

But then he walked away, too, a few long strides to catch up with the blonde without waiting for an answer from family, if only because he knew they’d see each other for trials to follow until he set sail again, the urge to travel itching his tanned, inked skin as if to assuage the hurt that burned across the back of his neck,

“I’m sorry.” Pash said for the second time, quieter, this time to Zana, though for the first time that evening, he chose to keep his hands to himself, not so much out of shame but out of self-depreciation, as if he believed she would be well within her rights to smack them away should she want to anyway, “They’re m’ family, but I guess m’ people have changed. I didn’t think, I—well—y’ didn’t have any fun, so don’ humor m’ otherwise.”

The tall Biqaj smirked, his warm baritone voice chagrined, and he looked out over the dark waters of Lake Rea, at the stars, but not back at the irresistible Daughter of Delroth, not now,“Maybe that’s more real life outside th’ brothel than y’ needed t’ see. Don’ go home lettin’ that be all y’ see on account o’ me.”
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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It wasn't what she was it was who she was? Zana looked at Torim and she smiled, mirthlessly. Her icy eyes told a very clear story; she didn't believe him. Why? Because even an idiot like this one understood that it was a bad idea when cousins marry and, if you allow no one into your circle, that was inevitable. It was very much about what she was, but the particular what he was focusing on was on her not being biqaj. Delroth save her from small minded fools, she considered and she said no more, just walked away.

Pash quickly caught up with her and his first words were an apology. Zana shook her head. "You have nothing to apologise for, Pash. You did nothing wrong." He kept his hands away from her and Zana understood what he did and why he did it. Or, at the very least, she believed so. Don't humour him otherwise? Zana glanced at him and then she smiled, amusement on her face. "I have no intention of humouring you, Pash. I haven't done so thusfar and I won't begin. Not least because no, it was not fun." As he stood there, all moping and broody, Zana shook her head slightly.

"I would suggest that it isn't them who've changed. It's you. You saw a bigger world." Maybe. Or something else entirely. He spoke, then, about seeing the world outside the brothel and Zana smiled. On account of him. He was young, she had to remind herself of that. That youth made him prone to being self-focused and he was; not in a bad way or a good one, but just in and of himself he saw things as his fault, his problem, his reason to mope. "People are delicious, Pash. There'll be horror and outrage at what happened, that you brought a human whore to the family fires. Yet half of them would pay if they had the coin and half of the outrage is that you haven't."

Zana moved then to step into the bard's arms, putting her own arms around his waist and lifting her head to kiss him. Slowly at first, gentle kisses teasing along his lips like she had that night in the brothel, but then her hands moved to behind his neck and her kiss deepened. "Don't take everything so seriously. They'll be talking about it for seasons to come."

She had pulled herself close against him, her hands moving down to explore his familiar chest and torso, to trail over his back but then, she stepped away. "I'm going to go home now. This was an abysmal date and you will need to do a lot better, I'm afraid. But since you make me tingle to my toes when you kiss me and because I have a fondness for broody biqaj men, I'll give you another chance." One last lingering kiss and a whispered word against his lips. "Since it's you."

With that, she stepped away and grinned. "I'll see myself home. Go make things right with your family. No matter what they else they are, they're blood. If one of you died this trial, this would seem very unimportant and you'd regret not putting it right. Let me know if you'd like to try again to persuade me that your way of life is somehow better or more honest than mine." She was teasing him, there was no doubt, but she still turned and walked away, hips swaying.
Let's build a house of fire, baby. Not one of wood or of stone.
Walk through my door of desire, baby. Come in, make it your home
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Points Awarded: 15

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Knowledge:
Acting: A pout
Etiquette: Idle chit-chat
Etiquette: Underwear is usually expected
Etiquette: Speak the native language, it's polite
Etiquette: Meeting strangers
Etiquette: Family will always be more important
Psychology: Confidence is noticeable
Psychology: A robust ego makes it hard to insult someone
Psychology: Telling a broody person they're brooding doesn't help

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Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Devotion: Delroth: +8

Comments: The second Zana thread I've done today. Being that I wrote Tarouz, and constantly channel my innter Delroth, I love how haughty Zana is. She is absolutely the preening and priss bird, but predatory in her mannerisms. I love the way she is written. I will say that I noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but I'll assume that was just in your zeal.
Pash
Points Awarded: 15

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Knowledge:
Deception: It’s not always actually okay
Etiquette: Compliment your date, even when they already know they look good
Etiquette: Some cultures don’t care about personal space
Psychology: Knowing when it’s not a salvageable situation
Psychology: Biqaj social rules
Rhetoric: Keeping up with a witty date
Rhetoric: Dealing with family opinions
Seduction: It’s okay to keep some things a mystery
Socialization: Knowing where the good parties are

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: None
Devotion: N/A

Comments: Okay. You know how I feel about Pash's natural charisma. I love love love him. And then, using the Pidgin in this thread? Can I give you MORE XP for being so damn creative with the language? Okay, maybe I'm biased. You did so incredibly well with Torim in this thread, moreso than the other threads I've read. Quite enjoyable, and as always, more Pidgin plz.
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