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Why Did I Murder Niv?

124, Vhalar 117
Ilinis bolted up in bed, sweat clinging to his sheets. It had to all be a dream. There was no way it had all happened. He suddenly felt a burning sensation on his ankle, the same as when the fire had licked against his skin as he had foolen the little wooden girl. He clawing at his clothes revealing his flesh. Suddenly, the burning stopped. Around his ankle a soft green light glowed, weaving under his flesh. When it stopped, all that remained was a large circle of soft green vines. He cursed and jumped out of the bed as he screamed. "Edasha! I know you can hear me, you deceiving whore! How could you do that to us?!"

As he ran about his house searching for water he continued to curse her. The bitch had tricked them all. She had forced them to kill innocent people in her name all for some halo. He stopped. The halo. He didn't even get that from the ordeal? He had sacrificed so much in her name and to gain power to avenge his power only to get a replica. He found the pack of items at the foot of his bed, and he tosses them about the room searching for the faux-halo. "It has to be here somewhere! That at least had to be real too!"

He finally found it in the bag, and he cradled it to his chest. He laughed bitterly to himself. This worthless trash was all that remained. He pulled his canteen of water from the items, poured the water on his ankle, and began to violently scrub the flesh, willing the vines to leave him. The harder he scrubbed, the redder his skin became. Eventually, the flesh tore, but still the vines remain.

He wasn't certain how long he remained on the floor of his home, ankle bleeding, and clutching the fake halo. He rocked back and forth. Edasha was the cruelest immortal he had ever met -- the only immortal he had ever met. He rocked back and forth. So many people had died in the maze, and it was all her fault. He rocked back and forth. He heard Niv's voice. "I brought the frogs and bugs here and I just wished for water for your bite.” She offered a smile to the Ilinis and moved a little bit closer to where he lay rocking on his floor. “Anything to help a friend.”

He rocked harder and closed his eyes. She wasn't there. She wasn't there. After a moment he calmed himself. She wasn't there. He knew that. It was okay. He opened his eyes, and she was directly before his face. "What's wrong, friend? Can I see your flower?"

He screamed and struck out at the image before him. He saw the shock on her face, the same as it had been in the maze. She hit the ground and her body burst into flames. She screamed. He rocked back and forth. "It hurts! Make it stop! Ilinis make it stop!"

He began to cry as he rocked back and forth harder. He mumbled over and over with her as she screamed. "Make it stop. Make it stop."
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124, Vhalar 117
He heard her scream again, and then finally it stopped. Then there was a sickening crunch. Her limbs were torn from her body and stretched by the vines until her ashen form broke apart. He blinked, and then she was gone. "No. No. No. No. No."

It was all wrong. Why was she here? Why did she haunt him so? He had to do it. He had to! Edasha had fooled him into thinking that he was some sort of champion for her. That he was a chosen of the Immortals. He did it for her -- no, she made him do it for her. He forced himself up and shakily set a wine glass on the table. Wine would do him good. It would calm his mind. He opened the wine rack. There was no hope within.

He stumbled back and the wine glass crashed to the floor. He heard Niv's voice once more. "“I will sit wid you and we will share. We soon be on same side right?"

His face hardened. Forget Edasha. He owed Niv. He would do what he could for her, and he hoped that she was able to pass on from this realm with ease. He didn't believe Famula would be pleased with him if it were his fault that she were trapped here. The first thing he could do is honor her memory. He walked across the room, not feeling the broken glass as it glanced against his unprotected feet. His blood mixed with the shattered vessel and pooled on the floor. When he reached the house plant he kept in the corner of his home, he knew that this would have to do. It was the only nature that he had in his home, and seeing as how she was a girl of bark, it would have to do.

He clawed at the dirt, parting it to the side. He continued to dig. The soil stained his fingers and invaded under his nails. It wasn't something he was used to, but he ignored it and dug deeper. Eventually the roots of the plant were exposed. They were the source of life for this plant. He took the faux-halo and placed it into the soil, intertwining it with the roots under the plant. As worthless as the halo was, he hoped that it would serve the nurture the plant in some way.

He gingerly spread the soil back over the hole he had created, burying the halo and refortifying the plant. He then watered the plant. While he had failed Niv, he could start over by making peace this way. He heard Niv's words whisper in the back of his mind, "You be a friend?"

He wished he could tell her yes, he would be her friend.

Ledger:

-1 Wine Glass (;_;)
-Halo moved to house
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124, Vhalar 117
Ilinis suddenly felt a terrible burning in his felt. His gaze trailed downward and saw the amount of blood on the ground. Famula's breath. That was a lot. He ran his fingers over the blood on the ground, and then pressed them into the soil. It was only right that his remembrance to Niv taste blood after what he had done to her. Then, he pulled the flower Edasha had given him from his coat; the flower that he had used to trick Niv. He twirled the violet petals in the blood until they turned crimson, and he planted that too in the soil with his plant as a reminder of the blood that Edasha caused him to spill.

He poured water over his feet and brushed the small glass fragments from his skin. It hurt, and he deserved it. Then he began to clean the blood and glass from the floor. With each drop of blood he wiped away, he felt as if he were wiping away a sin. With each drop of blood he wiped away, anger replaced what had lain there before. He would be able to heal from this pain. He had his whole life ahead of him to gain the knowledge and resolutions that he sought. The poor bark girl would have none of that.

He suddenly thought of his brother. Niv probably had a family. Would they hear the news of the cruel Edisi that had slain their daughter for no reason, just as his brother had been slain? Would they dream of the day that they could slit his throat, just as he did the mages that had killed his brother? Probably. If he had a way to get word to Niv's family, perhaps it would bring them some peace to know that Edasha had killed their daughter. He would want to know if an Immortal had been involved with his brother's death, using mortals as a scape for their nefarious plots. With Edasha as cruel as she was, that meant there was only one resolution. The Immortal would have to die. She would have to atone for her sins. Mortals didn't deserve to deal with guilt for an act they were forced into.

He paused, the floor completely clean. "Can...you even kill an Immortal?"

They had to be able to die. The Shattering had happened, after all. What had caused the event? Perhaps the Academies would hold more information on it, although he doubted it. He would need to ask someone who was there then -- one of the Immortals themselves. But why would an Immortal give up information on how to kill one of their own. He slammed his fist into the side of the table. Why was everything so difficult?! He was powerless to avenge his brother; he knew that a mage's power was no jest, and he had no way to combat their threats. He was even more powerless to avenge Niv. A mage's power had to pale in comparison to an Immortals. "Damn it, all!"

He would find a way to do it, he had no doubt. He was an Edisi after all, and if anyone in Idalos could do it, it would be one of his kith. He tried to organize his thoughts. First he needed to find the ledger for the Bank; if he did that, he would still have some of the city's resources available to him. While doing that, he would find a way to make contact with one of the Immortals. He frowned. He would need Nels for that. He remembered the treasure map he had gotten so many seasons ago. Perhaps that would do. After that, he would bribe his way to the right circle, convince an immortal, avenge his brother, and finally kill Edasha.

He laughed, bitterly. Easy.

Ilinis heard Niv speak once more. "No be sad, friend. I wish you to be happy."

He hoped that was the last tear that he shed for Niv. The emotion made him uncomfortable.

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-Moved Edasha flower to house
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