Time to Return

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Finn
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Ymiden 24, Arc 718

Soon, even you will know - the crumbling of tolerance, the resignation of a beaten soul, the desire to leave and be left. Soon even you will know that the heartbreak of an individual is a highly subjective thing. The momentary ripple of doubt that the Immortals are truly on our side that tests our faith is as fickle a mistress as it is a friend. Finn failed. Or so he thought. But whilst he was damning the Immortals, he was also determined to prove himself wrong. Telar was dead and that fate hardly felt righteous. So he hit an existential crisis. One that pushed him away from society and into an arc long journey which would make him...or break him.
Over an arc ago, Finn and his mentor arrived in Ne’haer. It was to be another city where the two were to execute their duties of faith and move on. But Telar’s mysterious and solitary journey into the surrounding areas have cost him his life. Suddenly, Finn was left without a spiritual guide, Graft mentor and a companion who gained a fatherly figure to the priest. One he did not realize that he associated with Telar until it was too late. The world has broken Finn’s trust again. He felt disturbed and abandoned. But mostly, he felt empty. For the first time, there was no anger neither any other desire or feeling. Yet, it was not peace either.
He left the city not long after. Ne’haer was still recovering from the Shadow Beast attack then but it promised no solace to Finn who was feeling unsettled by his own response to Telar’s death. Finn feared that if the quiet inside him was to be suddenly disturbed by the most unexpected trigger, he’d break himself again and those around him. For protection and for search of whatever it was within him that suddenly made him feel so...devoid, he left his friends and his job and at least that felt right.
Fast forward an arc and look at Ne’haer. Now, the city is booming again with new squabbles and intricacies of the society. The streets are filled with people of any kind and race. Life was vibrant here once more. And amidst the crowd, Finn mingled with it all. He was walking down the same streets he cruised over an arc ago. Almost every corner reminded him of something - the house that collapsed and buried a person alive but with the help of little Tu’nawa they saved them; the corner where the odd Eidisi half-breed did shady dealing in the midst of their conversation; the routes he took with Rhiane when he accompanied her on her rounds around the other temples. Where those memories oppressed him an arc ago, they now passed through his mind as mere images. Memories of an era in his growth that has concluded.
He was back. This time, he was alone, following his own path. From a conversation he had with a merchant earlier, Finn has learnt a lot about the city. The original temples have been either destroyed in the attack or demolished after it to be rebuilt in the Temple of All Gods as shrines, centralizing the faith, its influence and congregation point. It was a shame as part of Finn was looking forward to visiting his old workplace. But more worrying was the rise against the faith altogether. The priest still kept the few leaflets in his pocket to analyze properly later.
However, Finn appreciated what the city has done. Although, the new location for the Eastern temple was grand, it was also disorienting for someone like Finn. Without a plea for help, however, Finn found the shrine he was looking for eventually. A soft smile settled on his lips as he approached the altar, reaching into his pocket. Finn could already guess all the stories from the coins and personal items left there. The prayers of Ne’haerians as they pleaded the Immortal to bless them with the ability to forgive whispered in his ears. He would not join them today. Instead, he would pay homage to his principal Immortal for the past Finn endured, the way it built him and the fact that now he has accepted it along with all the darkness it carried.
He paid homage to those who brought him to where he was stood now however large or small part they played in his life. In order he placed on the altar a rock for his father who was a farmer and thought him the beginnings of being a man; a needle for his mother who although distant as a parent taught him patience and value of observation; a rusted cuff from a shackle for his slave master who beat him so that Finn could rise again; a leaf from an evergreen tree for his dear friend Ti’niva who helped him find his faith whether he knew it or not; a random herb for Tei’serin who tried so hard to save his mentor; and lastly a sealed letter to his deceased mentor Telar that he would never be able to read containing words Finn hoped would reach him nonetheless wherever his spirit might have travelled.
“With that I have forgiven myself for almost all the pasts and here I lay their symbols. With these I pay you respects, Ymiden. Without you, your guidance and my faith in you, I would have gone down an entirely different path.” Finn spoke sincerely, knowing that Ymiden would hear him wherever he was. Finn nurtured his devotion and dedication to the Immortal for many decades now. So much so it rooted itself into his own set of beliefs. It was one of the reasons why he returned to Ne’haer. So that at last, he could close the circle of the arcs worth of pilgrimage to reach a point and a destination where the last leg of his journey began and now ended. Finn has completed the cycle of mourning for his past and all the could haves. He was ready to finally move forward.
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

~ Ymiden
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He spent the following few bits inside the shrine, absorbing its adherence to nature, the fresh air as it carried with itself the scent of flowers. It felt much lighter in here. He began liking the setting more and more. So much so for a few trills he imagined what it would be like to work here again, in this new and reborn version of his old workplace. Eventually, the moment felt complete. His visit to this place was marked by a soft smile settling on his face as he turned around to walk away, only to be stopped by a priest.
“Excuse me, sir.” The young man said, looking at Finn with curiosity and strange familiarity. “Are you, by any chance, Finn Ashbroken?” The young one asked earning a raised eyebrow of surprise from the man in question. How and why would someone know his name? Someone that Finn did not recognize.
“Yes?” He responded with clear uncertainty on what to make out of this, turning to look at the priest properly, hoping that anything would give him a hint on who he was talking to. The young man of faith must have noticed the confusion for he gave Finn a brilliant, wide smile of confidence and warmth.
“An arc is a long time for sure.” He said, extending his hand towards Finn as if to introduce himself. “Toman Stott. I was an acolyte two arcs ago. We crossed paths when you sometimes visited the South Temple. I went to the funeral last arc. Never had the chance to say how sorry I am for your loss.” The words slowly clicked in place and although Finn still did not recognize the man’s face, he managed to give a convincing smile of acknowledgement.
“Thank you Toman. It’s nice to see you again.” Finn replied, pumping the offered hand. “It’s great to see that you’ve taken up the robes. Is it something recent or…?
“Oh not as much anymore. I’ve been a priest for about an arc now but I'm still learning. As you know very well yourself, this is a neverending journey.” The man admitted, shrugging his shoulders with a youthful charm and enthusiasm of an eager student. “Have you just come to stop by?”
Finn gave that a thought for a moment. It was not that he needed to make the decision on the spot. He was more or less settled on what to do. But for a trill, he wondered if that choice still felt right. “You know, I think I might stay for a while.” The older man admitted, with a soft smile of his own. Somehow, it was possible for Toman to grin even wider than before.
“Well, that is great! The Faith could use people like you, you know. You have experience. Other members will recognize you and welcome you with open arms. And I’m sure you can get a placement here as well! It was Ymiden you worship correct?” Toman seemed to be the passionate kind. The one who believed in heart, mind and soul in what he was doing. That fervour was powerful. It was a magnificent driving force and Finn felt quite taken with it, giving a heartfelt laugh.
“The Faithful, is it? Are you part of it too, Toman?” Finn has only ever heard of the order during his last visit to Ne’haer, but never really paid it much attention. He did not expect to spend long in the city back then, but now… Now was a different story. Now, he needed a place to call home, a community, a group of people he could socialise with to set his roots.
“Yeah, of course! Ever since I joined the priesthood ascension. I was brought in by my mentor and it has been so very helpful and rewarding. The Faithful do some great activity around the city…” The boy went on to list all the beneficial tasks that the organization did whilst Finn’s mind went to the leaflet in his pocket. Sure the Faith addressed those too and there was no doubt in his mind that it still functioned as the religious and moral compass for the citizens.
“...and that’s why we need more hands on the deck. I think we would all be grateful and honoured if you could join us, Finn. Like I said, a man of your experience is sought after. We still remember how much you helped during and right after the shadow beast attack.” The boy said and for a moment Finn got the impression of an intentional ego rubbing. However since Toman was so young and clearly keen, he just wrote it off as part of the young man's personality and as an honest compliment.
“Well, I guess it won’t hurt. So where do you say I...sign up for this?”
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They do not yet understand the purpose of forgiveness. It is not to spare wrongdoers a punishment they deserve. It is to spare the injured ones the ongoing pain they do not.

~ Ymiden
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Finn
  • Skill Points - 10
  • Renown - +10 for joining the faith
  • Skill Knowledges
    1. Etiquette: Remain polite even when at loss
    2. Disguise: Hiding lack of knowledge
    3. Navigation: Recognize old place
    4. Sociology: Uprising from rumours
    5. Intelligence: Gathering information for free
    6. Detection: Meaning of offered things
  • Non-Skill Knowledges
    1. Location: Ne’haer: Temple of all God and its shrines
    2. Toman Stott: Acolyte turn priest
    3. Telar: Deceased
    4. The Faithful: Religious organization
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Small note: You know the Knowledges limit only applies to skill knowledges. You get 6 skill knowledges for a solo. But non skill knowledges you get as many as you want.

This was a lovely homecoming thread, nice and somber. I truly felt what the strangeness of returning home to see changes that weren't expected. Well done sir.

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