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[Written Wisdom] Can Anybody Hear?

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Cal’nist had gotten extremely tired of not being understood and not understanding most of what was said around him. It was difficult, almost impossible, to make a living without being able to communicate. It was humiliating, frankly. He wasn't an idiot -- far from it, he hoped -- and so every time he saw someone give him a pitying or contemptuous look, he seethed inside. Of course, he understood where they were coming from, but it didn't give them the right to belittle him or act superior. If they were in Desinid, Cal’nist would treat people with the utmost respect. But the outside world wasn't quite as kind to strangers as the Sev’ryn were, and he'd learn that a long time ago.

Still, it had been long enough, and he was sick enough of the ridicule that he'd decided to make a concerted effort to at least learn enough Common to get by. Still, it was almost impossible for him to learn the language on his own, so he'd set out to see if there was a teacher of some sort or some place that would have the knowledge he required. After making inquiries among individuals more familiar with Ne’haer, he'd finally hit the jackpot. Apparently Ne’haer had a library, a depository of books, that was actually open to the public. It seemed extravagant, but Cal’nist was grateful for it. Even if it didn't have exactly what he needed, he would bet that whoever was in charge of such a place would know who else in the city might be able to help him.

Unfortunately, he was quite lost. Ne’haer might be a beautiful city, although nothing in Cal’nist’s mind could ever compare to the wonder of Desinid in his mind. Still, there was something rather awe inspiring about the white stones, especially as they sparkled in the direct sunlight. Still, the whole effect could be rather disorienting, especially when they dazzled his eyes and all started to blur together and look the same. After he wandered aimlessly, trying to find the exact location of the library, he realized that he was going to have to do something he dreaded: ask for directions. Although asking for help nearly paralyzed him with fear, both because of the language barrier and because the idea of talking to people in general made Cal’nist want to curl up in a ball and hide from the world. Still, there wasn't much choice at this current moment in time. Scanning the faces of the passerby, Cal’nist decided to stop an elderly looking man on the assumption that he would look more kindly, based off the smile lines on his face.

Walking towards the gentlemen, Cal’nist cleared his throat, at which the older man turned around. ”Excuse me,” he began haltingly, ”Where li-brair-ee?” sounding out the syllables in the word. Cal’nist could hear his heart beat faster and faster, and he hoped his cheeks weren't red with mortification.

Thank Moseke, the man didn't seem to mind the interruption. ”Just around the corner, son,” the old man replied jovially, accompanying his directions with a hand gesture.

Cal’nist breathed a sigh of relief. ”Thank you! the Sev’ryn exclaimed, and the older man inclined his head to accept Cal’nist’s appreciation. Cal’nist made a note to remember the old man’s face, in case they ever encountered each other again and the Sev’ryn was in a position to return the favor. Breaking into a jog, despite the punishing heat and the unrelenting sun overhead, Cal’nist rounded the corner, and right there, in all its glory was a building with a sign that had a book on it. Cal’nist sighed in relief. He had no idea what the words were written on the sign, but apparently this was a common enough problem that the library managed to find a way to identify itself clearly. Of course, it could have been some other building that had something to do with books, but that was unlikely. Even if it was, Cal’nist could, probably find what he was looking for in there.
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Pushing through the doors, Cal’nist’s jaw dropped. The first sensation that hit him was actually the smell. It was musty, but not in an unpleasant way. Fleetingly, Cal’nist wondered if this was what knowledge smelled like. However, the appearance of the library was slightly overwhelming. There were rows upon rows of shelves, each filled with books. Directly across from the front doors was a young man sitting at a desk, who glanced up as Cal’nist entered, but quickly returned to whatever task he had been performing before the Sev’ryn arrived. There were a few tables and chairs scattered here and there, and a few individuals were seated at them, reading or writing furiously. The library had large windows, that let in large amounts of sunlight, and dust could be seen floating in the rays. It was quiet, except for the rustling of paper and the scratching sound of quills on parchment.

Realizing he probably looked like a fool standing there and staring, Cal’nist closed his mouth and cautiously made his way to the desk. As he approached, the young man there looked up at him sharply, waiting expectantly for whatever Cal’nist was about to ask. Swallowing, trying to wet his suddenly dry mouth, Cal’nist bit his lip, before finally caving and asking for help once again. Keeping his voice to a whisper, Cal’nist made his request. ”Teach..Common speak...book have?” The Sev’ryn blushed furiously at his incompetence, wishing more than anything that he could transport himself somewhere else, anywhere else.

The other man, though, seemed to understand perfectly, and didn’t seem to think less of Cal’nist for his inadequacies. Gesturing that the Sev’ryn should follow him, the library employee stood up and started walking briskly, weaving through the stacks. Bewildered, not expecting the gracious offer of help, Cal’nist quickly jumped to keep up. The librarian clearly had a destination in mind, although how the other man knew, exactly, Cal’nist had no idea. Perhaps there was some sort of organizational method, which, after all, would make quite a bit of sense. After all, it would make no sense to place all these books haphazardly, or no one would be able to find anything at all in here. Finally, they came to a stop and the librarian pulled a few books off the shelves, confirming Cal’nist’s suspicion that there was a method to this madness. The other man handed the books to Cal’nist, then pointed at a nearby table, which, thankfully, was empty. ”Thank you,” Cal’nist whispered at the already departing librarian, before the Sev’ryn made his way to his new workstation with what he was starting to call his precious cargo.

Settling in a spot with good lighting, but where he hoped he would be mostly hidden from passersby, Cal’nist cracked open the first book in the stack. He had no idea what it was about but he had to trust that the people who worked there knew what they were doing, otherwise he'd go insane and never get anywhere on this endeavor.
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Before he could actually get to work, though, Whisper started a running commentary. Cal’nist never knew what would set her off. She would be silent for trials, and then suddenly she just wouldn't stop talking. And since she spoke directly into his mind, Cal’nist couldn't make her stop. Cal’nist loved her dearly, but that didn't mean that she wouldn't get on his nerves. This time, she seemed to be discussing her favorite topic, Cal’nist’s lack of common sense. ”Honestly, it's about time you got around to improving your language skills. I never knew why you kept putting it off. It's not like this was that difficult. All you had to do was ask. Then again, you know what they say about men…”

Cal’nist attempted to tune her out, but that failed miserably. Actually appearing now, she tilted her head at him quizzicality, in a way that was especially fitting given that she was an owl. ”You know that I can feel you ignoring me, right? We’re linked? Bonded? Mentally.”

He hadn't realize that she would notice that, but he wasn't ashamed. He was about to respond verbally, before remembering one, the need to be quiet, and two, that she was perfectly capable of hearing his thoughts. ”It wasn't like you were saying anything novel or new,” he sent to her in as dry a thought as he could conjure. ”And besides, I was trying to focus on the task at hand.”

She fluffed up her feathers and gave him her most regal look, which was surprisingly haughty, although Cal’nist could feel the good natured amusement lurking underneath. ”Well it was quite rude, she replied primly, preening her feathers as she did so.

Rolling his eyes at her antics, which had probably been her goal to begin with, Cal’nist bowed in what he hoped was a comic way. ”My apologies, milady. I meant no offense. May your humble servant return to his studies?” he thought sarcastically.

She sniffed, which was not a sound he thought owls were capable of making for real, and responded, ”Your manners and that apology need work, but I accept. You may proceed. Meanwhile, and here her eyes took on a predatory glint, ”While I patrol this library. There may be danger lurking. Or mice!” On that note she took flight and darted around a corner, disappearing as she did. At the same time, her presence faded to the barest hint in the back of his mind. She'd gone off wherever she went when she wasn't bothering him or he hadn't called upon her.
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Smiling fondly after her, Cal’nist finally managed to turn his attention to the book in front of him. Unfortunately, it appeared that, even with all the help he had already received, there was a chance he'd fail horribly anyway, because on the first page was a series of symbols that made no sense at all to him. He even turned the book upside down to see if that made them intelligible, to no avail. Turning the pages, Cal’nist saw a series of poorly drawn images with some of the symbols from the first page on each subsequent one, but he still couldn't make heads or tails of any of it.

Despairing, Cal’nist flipped back to the first page and stared at it, as if he could will the information directly into his mind. Not shockingly, this didn’t work. Cal’nist didn’t know how long he sat there, staring at the same page. But it was long enough that when someone placed a hand on his shoulder, he had to stifle a yelp, remembering only at the last minute that he was supposed to be quiet. Glancing over his shoulder, he saw that it was the young man from earlier. Holding his breath, Cal’nist hoped that he wasn’t about to get kicked out. Perhaps only people who were actively reading were allowed to stay in the library. That would make sense; they wouldn’t want to waste resources on people who weren’t able to appreciate them.

Dreading what was about to come, Cal’nist was taken completely off guard when the librarian simply pointed at one of the other tomes on the table and said, slowly and quietly, so that the sound didn’t carry, ”Book,” then followed that by pointing to a sequence of characters on the sheet before him. The other man repeated this a few times, then turned the page. Cal’nist was confused, but willing to play along and see where this went. Gesturing at the picture of the fruit, the librarian, still in his soft voice, commented, “Apple,” then underlined the series of symbols above the picture. Returning to the first page, the librarian pointed out the same series of characters that were on the Apple page.

Comprehension dawned, and, with it, Cal’nist felt like a complete idiot. The first page was clearly the Common alphabet. Similarly, Xanathea had a series of characters that were linked to sounds, and putting them together formed words. It would make sense that most languages had some other similar link between writing and speaking. This book was clearly an instruction manual for learning the alphabet, the sort that would be given to young children, given its pictures. He couldn't believe he didn't figure it out on his own, as clearly even a child could do it. Still feeling like a dunce, Cal’nist nodded happily. Keeping his voice pitched low as he sought confirmation. ”Think understand.” Pointing at the page before him, he tried to put it into Common terms he knew. ”Shape make sound. Shape with shape make word.” Hopefully the kindly young librarian could make sense of that.

Apparently, it was enough, as the librarian grinned proudly at him. ”Exactly right!”
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Cal’nist didn’t know why the other man had reached out to him, but he felt that he had to thank him somehow. Making sure to keep his voice pitched low, to follow the so far unspoken rules, Cal’nist strung words together in what he thought was a coherent manner. ”Much thanks.” Feeling like that wasn’t enough, Cal’nist struggled to put together a coherent enough sentence. ”I called Cal’nist. You name?” Even that wasn't enough and Cal’nist lamely added, ”Need help?”

The librarian smiled and stuck out his hand, and spoke, making sure to enunciate each word as he did. ”My name is Bran. It's nice to meet you.”[/b] That much Cal’nist recognized as a common greeting in, well, Common. Cal’nist took Bran’s hand and shook it. Continuing, the librarian matched Cal’nist’s volume. ”I appreciate-thank, I thank you for the offer of help but it's unnecessary-no need!” Gesturing in a way that encompassed the entire library, Bran explained, ”Here at Written Wisdom, we encourage and help all seekers of knowledge...er...learners.” There was a lot of words that Cal’nist didn't quite understand in there, but the Sev’ryn felt that he got the gist of it. Bran patted Cal’nist’s shoulder again and finished up with, ”Keep up the good work. Ask me questions if you're lost. And come back anytime.” With that, the librarian left, no doubt off to help another fledgling scholar.

When he left, Cal’nist came back to the alphabet. Apparently each picture was a word that started with the letter and sound it made. Feeling pleased that he now had some direction, he went through the whole book, devouring it voraciously. Once the trick was explained to him, he started recognizing at least a few of the characters, and managed to match the sounds with the shapes. Still, by the time he finally decided to call it a day -- his brain refused to process any more information about Common -- he was feeling quite delighted at his progress.

Whisper reappeared, but she didn't say anything. Instead, she simply nuzzled him under his chin, content that he was content. Picking up the book, two of which remained untouched, he returned them to where he thought they had come from. Retracing his steps to the front door, Cal’nist memorized the route. Even if he didn't know exactly how the library was organized, he could at least remember that much. Whisper flew in lazy laps above his head, totally ignored by the rest of the library patrons. When he reached the front desk, Bran looked up and smiled, giving him a little wave in farewell. Cal’nist responded in kind. As he pushed his way through the door, blinking in the sudden and direct sunlight, he made a resolution to come back often. The library was a magical place and once he'd mastered Common, who knew what mysteries were tucked away on those shelves.
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I really enjoyed reviewing this thread, it was great fun to read. I loved how you portrayed Cal'nist and his finding his way to the library. I love the librarian and your description of him. I really hope that Cal'nist gets to spend a lot of time in Written Wisdom, it seems like it will indeed be a really magical place for him! Please do let me know if there is anything you think I've missed or if you have any questions. I look forward to reviewing more of your threads!

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Knowledge

Discipline: Controlling your emotions
Language: Common: Asking for the library
Language: Common: Making yourself understood
Linguistics: Breaking a phrase down into syllables
Linguistics: Symbols have meanings (letters)
Linguistics: Letters combine to create words
Linguistics: Using books and examples to learn language
Linguistics: Understand the general meaning of a sentence helps you "fill in the blanks"
Running: Jogging in heat
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