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Re: Gambling

I am moving this thread to Abandoned. If the original author or another wishes to pick it up to complete it, drop a message in the Skills OOC thread with a link to this.

PS this one seemed about readyish? So maybe touch base with Malt?
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Re: Gambling

I think this is ready for comment / review. I'll post in the OOC too.
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The only nitpick I can find and it is 100% my own personal opinion, which is changing the term from "Form Following" to like "Reading Proxemics" Or "Reading Body Language". But that is my own opinon. Looks good otherwise :)

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Re: Gambling

Prongs wrote: Mon Jan 28, 2019 11:14 am

The only nitpick I can find and it is 100% my own personal opinion, which is changing the term from "Form Following" to like "Reading Proxemics" Or "Reading Body Language". But that is my own opinon. Looks good otherwise :)

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Well, my understanding is that there is more to reading someone's tells than just body language or proxemics. It's an almost preternatural thingie. You good with keeping it as is, or do I need to change it?
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Which ever you want, it was just a thought for clarity. But not something that has to be changed.

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Re: Gambling

Prongs wrote: Mon Jan 28, 2019 9:49 pm

Which ever you want, it was just a thought for clarity. But not something that has to be changed.

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Cool - if you're good, then I'd be happier keeping it! Thanks!!
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Okay then! I don’t see any other issues. I’ll keep it up a few more days to see if anyone else wishes to provide feedback. Good work!

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Since no one else has provided any other feedback, I will go ahead and approve this. Good Job!

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