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The Price of a Life



72 Ashan 719

The Market in Lair wasn’t like the Market in Shanty or the Market in Gleam. Yet the market in Lair had the most to offer than any other in Quacia. Housed inside the stone architecture of a den, it kept out the elements of rain and wind, but it also kept out those who might interfere with the various merchandise that was on offer. Slavery wasn’t illegal in Quacia, but there were certain other reasons why Lair had their own slave’s market away from proper society. Here, they had more than mere ithecals for sale.

Zarik walked along the crowd, encased in dark attire of black leathers. He had his hood drawn up, to shadow his face from view, and not a bit of his skin or features could be seen. The only thing that truly could, other than his tall, lean masculine figure, was the gossamer wings that kept folded against his backside and a ring of iridescent light that hovered above his head as a halo. Both of which marked him clearly to anyone with eyes and the slightest knowledge of such things: the man was a mage - another thing allowed in Quacia, though treated warily by those who did not wish to get caught up in such matters as the arcane.

There was a reason why he kept hidden though. In the past trials, Zarik had gathered a reputation for himself. He was known as a lord, as a husband, and as someone who didn’t belong in Lair anymore. The first two were no longer true, however, but the last… it was better if he kept his identity as quiet as possible. Luckily, his reputation didn’t include his halo and wings in how most people described him in their rumors and gossip.

He kept a hand on his belt where his coin purse was, wary of pick-pockets. Zarik listened to the various stall owners shout about their illicit wares. There were herbs that weren’t supposed to be allowed through the gates of Condemnation and liquors not accepted by the ports. People offered up items of enchantment, artifacts that weren’t supposed to exist but somehow had made it the filthy south corner of the world so that Quacians could haggle between themselves about it. Zarik kept a sharp ear, listening for any mention of echo scrolls or likewise.

But there was more than simple items he was here for… Zarik turned a corner, walking through the interior market, and descended the stairs to a lower down level. A large platform was in the center of the basement level, and on the platform, people were in chains: ithecals, humans, biqajs, and so on. There was no discrimination as to who was stripped down to the barest of coarse clothing and shackled to the bolts in the stone floor. Around them, slave traders paced with whips in hand and ready swords at their hips - ready to quell any uprising that might take place.

A few merchants called out, trying to entice the meandering Quacians to consider purchase of this slave or that. Women with ample figures, ready to be used… in the kitchens. Muscular Lotharro offered up to use like dogs in the fighting pits or for hard labor. Zarik recognized a few Guild members lingering around the few Lothar men, pinching at them with metal clasps as if to check the certainty of the muscles and the sharpness of their bestial teeth. Here, one could truly find any type of slave they wanted… and so Zarik hurried down the steps and entered the slave market.

He held his cloak tighter around him, and made sure his features couldn’t be seen. Zarik didn’t want to be recognized. He listened to the overlapping pitches of the merchants. He hesitated, as one of the more boisterous men flurried his hands in gesture to a large woman who had a glower on her face. It wasn’t his first time in the slave market, but it was his first time with actual nel to purchase with. Before had been more out of curiosity and interest in the case that he might one trial be able to keep a slave. While he wouldn’t have as much wealth as if he’d stayed under his husband’s command, he had stored enough that a cheaper slave would be a feasible investment.

There were many reasons he wished for one too. He simply needed to find the most reasonable deal of the lot… someone who wouldn’t require too much training, and could potentially earn more money for their household - as well as earn their keep. Zarik hesitated, then nearly jumped out of his skin when a woman spoke next to his shoulder.

“She’s a fine cook, that one,” said the sly Quacian lady with a heavy Vahanic accent. She pointed at the plump older woman who glowered at them. “Used to have a mouth on her, but we forked her tongue so she doesn’t say anything now.”

“Sh-she’s a bit.. Too…” he stammered, unwilling to say what he thought.

“Ah, yes, she is,” agreed the woman to his unspoken thought. “What are you looking for, sir? Perhaps I can direct you to a suitable purchase. I speak common well.”

She started to lead, the skirts of her lace dress dragged over the stone floor. In her hands, she held a feathered fan. He supposed she was a merchant, or perhaps a negotiator of sorts that acted on behalf of the slave traders.

“I’m looking for someone a bit more…” he hesitated then said, “Domesticated than these. They all look so…”

“Wild?” she finished his sentence for him. “That’s because they are. We only bring the rough labor and those who required more brutal training to the Lair market. If it’s domestic slaves you’re seeking, those are kept elsewhere.”

“Elsewhere?” he asked surprised. Zarik didn’t know that the slave market was split in such a manner. He said, “Are they nearby?”

“I can take you there,” she offered. “We have a tunnel leading to it. But first I must ask to see proof of nel. At least ten gold for entry.”

Zarik felt around his coin purse, then held out the ten gold for her to look at. She took five from the top, then whistled at a nearby merchant who nodded at her. She gestured for him to follow.

They went through a tunnel of stone and dirt, until they went up stairs, and then reached the interior hall of a place that Zarik didn’t recognize. He asked, “Where are we?”

“This is the private auction room of Maestro Danilo, who sits upon the Guild of Industry,” she answered.

“O-oh,” said Zarik and he tried not to concern himself too much about this fact. He saw a few other people in the room, and heard what sounded like bare feet pattering on nearby stone. The woman nodded to a couple of the other people who looked similar to her in dress and beside them, they had also brought potential buyers to the private auction.

“Will the slaves be shown soon?” asked a gruff man with a handlebar mustache from the corner. He crossed his arms and seemed impatient, though Zarik didn’t know how long he’d been waiting. Zarik had only just arrived after all.

“Yes, yes, here they come now,” said the woman as she gestured for the slaves to be brought in.

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Ultimately for Oceta, it was a time of confusion and change that she had never imagined she would experience beyond simple stories. She was well trained enough and old enough to advertise for sale for a hefty amount of coin. The young girl had experienced a cold bath with an odd smelling substance along her hair, bathing her clean, some slightly cleaner burlap rags, and with it, she had obediently followed her master, a bald man with a long moustache with a hint of stubble along the beard. The stranger may have been concerned with why it was exactly the domestic servants were separated from the normal ones, and why the entry was so expensive. It was simply because the domestic slaves were a completely different breed, and worth so much more. Llyr, the noble lord would soon realize exactly why in his first experience with the slavers of Quacia, for it seemed that Oceta was the first to be lead into the room, the girl walking obediently into the room as she stood along the center of the room.

“This is a good slave named Oceta. Her buy price is...twenty gold nel.” An expensive cost to say the least, but with it, he would begin to list the reasons for her pricing. “A virgin, young at thirteen cycles, and capable of breeding many slaves for the future. She is very well behaved, unbranded, and well indoctrinated. She has talent in cooking homecook quality meals, has been trained by one of our own woodwork craftsman, some experience with gardening, and caretaking for simple chores.” The man proceeded to lightly press the girl forward, and for the momentary, she found herself stripped of her shirt, shown evidence she was unwhipped, no scars lasting along her body as she stood there sheepishly, gazing ahead at all that looked to buy her with an unspoken fear in her heart. With it, it seemed she had all of her strong points presented, and with it, she was slowly allowed her shirt back on, her owner gazing about himself.

“Are there any takers of this one?! Twenty gold!” There was a moment’s pause as the people around the room would have to consider it, and with it, a man raised his hand as the master called. “Yes! You in the back!”

A pause as another gentlemen of sorts, a man wearing finer clothes, a fancy feathered hat, as well as a leather jerkin cared to ask, “You said she was trained by a Woodworker. What can she make?!”

A firm nod as the man replied, “Oceta. Tell them what you are capable of making. Tell them the quality you can make it.”

With a firm nod, the short girl proceeded to stand firm, taking a deep breath as she gazed at the many faces about herself as she spoke in a shy, high pitched soprano. A sweet girlish voice filling the room as if to draw all attention towards herself like a product that wanted to be sold.

“I make chairs, shelves, tables, some wooden tools, and doors. I have learned how to make planks, sand the wood, and make most necessities my masters would want of me. I can make smooth wood that doesn’t splinter my master’s hands when he runs his hands along them, and I can prepare meals to feed my masters and mistresses.” Bowing her head like an obedient dog, there was pause, discussion among the room as her owner firmly gazed her over.

“See? A very good slave. She’ll do anything you ask. Oceta!”

Her eyes raised up immediately at the words, gazing into the man’s eyes. “Y-Yes master?” A firm rear back for a moment as the man slapped her across the face with a sharp sting ringing across the room, her head rearing to the left for a moment as she recovered herself. “Thank you master. Would you like for me to t-turn the other cheek?” Her face stung, and with it, the man opened his arms wide, looking to the audience. She laid there, her right cheek turning red, her soft cerulean orbs gazing over the area, half hoping none of the people before her would purchase her. They filled her with fear and worry. A complete 180 from the wild slaves he had seen previously.
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The auction began, and it began with a girl – an older child but young woman in the transition of her years – likely between Hazel and Zarik himself. He moved aside, to keep his back to the wall, and watched the proceedings unfold. Odd, he never thought this kind of world existed. He’d only ever known the open slave market of Lair or the occasional procession in Shanty, not… whatever this was. Was this how wealthier people purchased their slaves? It did smell much nicer in the room.

Not familiar with slave auctions, he couldn’t tell if twenty gold was considered expensive or cheap for what was listed about her. She didn’t require training from the sound of it. Cooking, wood working, gardening, chore work… he winced when the slaver lifted her shirt to show that she didn’t have any scars. It served as proof of her good behavior, certainly. Even Zarik couldn’t say the same about himself. By the time he’d been her age, his back had been heavy with scars from his father’s belt. He exhaled in a quiet sigh and crossed his arms over his chest. He looked at the crowd and the other buyers.

The others seemed to consider whether it was worth purchasing her or not. He watched as a wealthier man, someone he vaguely recognized from his walks on the luxurious neighborhood of Riovara, ask about her craftmanship skills.

Zarik listened to her answer closely. She spoke common well for a Quacian girl, another one of her skills that hadn’t been presented until now. It was impressive to think that she could make all those things, especially in a city such as the one where they were: where wood was such a luxury commodity. He hoped someone would make use of those skills, though he still mused over the other ones that had been mentioned.

He hadn’t expected what came next. He hadn’t been prepared to see the trader slap her hard across the face. Zarik jolted slightly, his shoulders tensed. He almost stepped forward, but then realized this was an expected display. Right, of course it was. She was a slave. What was he thinking? He felt his Becomer spark growl inside of him. He heard the faint, demure offer to turn her cheek…

…and Zarik heard his own voice before he realized he was even speaking, “Thirty gold.”

The man in the feathered cap retorted, “Thirty-two gold.”

Zarik glared at him from behind the shadow of his hood. He said, “Thirty-four.”

A woman tittered in the crowd and added, “Thirty-five.”

“Thirty-six,” said the feather-cap man.

“Forty,” jumped Zarik in a clear voice that nearly echoed in the room. He hesitated, and then he lowered his hood and revealed his face. The blond flipped his bangs to the side. On his forehead, the golden scarred Mark of Faith from the Theocratum’s carvings showed to the crowd. He heard murmurs. A few of the crowd had recognized him for who he was… or who he used to be, but they didn’t need to know such changes had occurred in his private life. For all the Quacians knew, he was still Lord Zarik Venora with the great wealth of his husband behind his noble name. It would be foolish to continue a bidding war with a man who could simply toss an onyx nel into the mix. Gold was nothing compared to that.

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In this battle of bids, it would seem that there was bit of misconception on just how much money the man was spending. An unskilled laborer could be hired for a whole day for just a single silver piece. He was giving forty times that, or also eight whole days or so of a skilled artisan’s labor. However, when it seemed that this famous and apparently wealthy man was revealing his identity to some regard to some, it made them all the more competitive. The wealthy nobleman considered the value of this slave, and with it, he chuckled to himself, wanting to make this rich fellow suffer for the slave if it seemed he was so daring to purchase her. “45 Gold.” Just looking to push the man to pay the most for this slave, he seemed happy with this little internal game, and the question would come to his mind most surely. Was she worth it? She looked ahead at the man who offered forty gold pieces, and with it, her master grinned savagely, his teeth practically shining a sickening yellow.

It was twice the amount he had originally been intending and then some. However, little did the blonde lord realize this was but a sham. A scam of which the bid would push him to a higher and higher point, the money given to the master, the slave given to him, and the money shared accordingly to the appropriate bidder. It was a manipulative practice, and an easy to manipulate trade for such a person who had never participated in the slave trade. Only when the highest of prices was to be raised by this renowned individual would the master slam his hand along a small podium, pointing at Llyr in earnest. “SOLD TO THE FINE GENTLEMAN!” With a chuckle, the girl widened her eyes in a mix of terror, awe, and perhaps intimidation that the man would spend so much for a simple slave. However. In the next few moments, she had found a rope attached to her leather collar, leading her towards another room as double doors would lead him up a dimly lit hall, up a set of stairs, twin guards in full steel gracing him as he was allowed in. By that time, the master stood before him, pointing at the lovely young girl before lightly pressing her forward.

“My payment…” Slowly holding his hand out for the payment, a glint in his eye, he would gradually take the black coin, and or many golden coins with a manipulative glint of happiness before he looked the fellow over. “Pleasure for your patronage. Though...may I say someone as well known as you coming here is sure to attract business~ I do hope to see your patronage again. Hehehe…” With that said, the girl looked up at the man with nothing but respect and yet excitement in her heart as she bowed her head. “I am now yours. From this day until my last day. Or until you sell me off as you see fit master...” Being handed the rope, she would follow him as he saw fit. Walking with him guiding her like some dog, walking quickly to keep with his pace, and not saying a word. He was her owner now, and he was owed nothing but the utmost respect for such a large purchase.

Gradually, as they were likely leaving the slave market, her eyes wandered and thought about what it was he would use her for, why he would spend so much money on her, and what her destiny was to end up as. Would she end up his pleasure slave? Would she end up in a kind and wealthy master’s home to spend the rest of her days? Or would there be what she feared most? A mix of torture, beatings, starvation, and death to her? Perhaps it was a mix of all of the above. Her hands lightly fiddled with themselves as she stepped with her ragged shoes, eyes staring ahead as she blushed pink at being lead about with the rope throughout town. Yet, it was sign he was a new master, a new owner claimant on her body and soul. With nothing much else to say, it was done. However, she decided as his slave, she must let him know appropriately.

“M-My master. I should inform you that I will need some simple tools to perform my job effectively. Or a simple sharp knife would perform well enough...and a chisel and hammer as well would be enough for me to make bowls and other shapes for you. Primitive chests are also not beyond me my master.”
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The other bidder seemed more than willing to push and shove the haggle up and up, until a few of the other bidders gasped at just how exorbitant it was starting to get. Nearly 100 gold nels for a mere scrawny girl, the first of the selections even, as the lord hadn’t even taken the time to see what other slaves were on offer. It was a foolish thing, a terrible exchange by any measure, for the likelihood she’d actually prove her investment… the handlebar mustached man from before shook his head and muttered about the poor dealing that was happening before him.

Zarik, however, understood that something was off. He could see the glint in the other bidder’s eye. He just wanted to make him pay a great deal… but even with such knowledge, he couldn’t keep himself from demanding to win the purchase. However much the trader wanted, he would give, if he had it. After they had passed 80 gold nel, he figured the other bidder didn’t have any nel to spend at all and eventually, they would have to let Zarik win. So when would the slaver’s greed run dry?

155 gold nel. That was when. It was nearly all the money he had left, but…

…he looked at the slave girl. Her cheek was still red from the slap. The loud claim of his winning bid rang in his ears, drowned out by a rush of blood in them. He recognized the fearful awe in the cerulean eyes. Zarik followed along through the double doors, to where they would exchange purchase and payment. He reached to the coin purse and gathered the payment in his hand. The enchanted item allowed for the exact amount required. He traded the handfuls over and watched as they were counted, until the merchant thanked him for the business.

The girl greeted him with polite words of a properly trained, domestic slave. He smiled slightly. Once he was handed the leashed rope, he looked to leave without a word or nod or otherwise toward the slavers. He simply wanted to be gone of the place.

Through the foyer, he found that it led out – not to Lair, but rather to a small area in Shanty. So this was one of the Guild’s hide-outs was it? He supposed they probably had even more tunnels connecting it to the Gleam and Fortress neighborhoods. Zarik took a moment to gather himself and figure out where they were. He left his hood down, not caring so much if he was recognized. Briefly, he felt a tad embarrassed now… he had purchased her so foolishly and… did she think less of him for being tricked by the slavers? For being so blatant in his willingness to pay whatever to… to… hadn’t he gone in to get a slave to help with the future – whatever that ended up being?

He looked forward, listening to her as she called him master and informed him of things she would need. The tall biqaj started to walk, holding the rope loosely, but still leading her so they wouldn’t get separated by the meandering crowds on the Shanty streets.

“I do not need you to build things for me,” he said simply, a blended accent that sounded both foreign and native to the southern region on his tongue. He glanced at her before looking forward again. “Not immediately anyhow. What was your name again? Ah… Oc… what are you called?”

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When she was handed over, when she was lead out, and when she was told she would not need to build things for her? She had immediately tensed, her eyes widening as she had wondered if her worst fears were coming into reality. The raven would proceed to look upon the almost angelic fellow before she wondered if she was to indeed be tortured or put through hell. Though almost instant relief came through her breath when he simply stated, “Not immediately anyhow. “ When she was asked of her name, she had politely bowed her head for a moment before speaking accordingly to the new master in general, reintroducing herself. It was an exercise of proper etiquette that would allow her to fall for the man’s command as he asked.

“This slave’s name is Oceta. Although if you wish to give me another name, I shall remember it and wear it proudly master.” Gradually picking up the pace again as they were to walk through the mostly barren and or stone regions of the land, she had felt familiar in this territory as they were once again above ground, and for a few moments, she had felt semi-glad that it seemed there was going to be no pain, no suffering, even if it could be the fact she was rushing into conclusions. Acting polite, trying to put a shallow smile on her face, she had quickly decided to try her hand at persuading her master otherwise that the land present before him was indeed the best place to buy the tools needed for the cheapest price.

“My master, I should inform you that due to the timber shortage of the land, metal tools and such for lumberwork have drastically decreased in price. There would be no better place or time to purchase them than now, meaning no disrespect master. This slave would gladly work with any tool you provide, graciously.” Stepping with gentle and soft footprints, the little girl was unsure about how she should feel about the fellow, and while there were questions in her mind about why it was he would spend exactly so much for her, she would listen, reply, and wait for an opportune time to inform him of what she had witnessed. The sickly little game her former master and his accomplice had played. A game of tactics and deception that was a standing trial for Llyr, the new master before her. After all, seeing as she belonged to him now, he deserved every bit to know what was going on. An embarrassed blush on her face as she spoke in shame at having to speak, fearing a beating.

“Master?...At the auction, the rich man and my former master had manipulated you. The man would keep increasing his prices so you would spend more and more. When you purchased me for so many gold nels, they would split the money when you leave, and both would leave richer, my former master more so when the man who competed with you would buy another slave.” If he turned to look upon her, she’d almost instinctively raise her arms as if to defend herself from a blow, a reflex she had developed from her years in captivity, her eyes wrenching shut, and yet no resistance at all. Those arms slowly dropped as she wrenched her eyes shut with a grimace. It would just show him how she had grown and developed, and how fearful and respectful this humble girl was. She knew her place in the world, and she was designed to follow it. This was why she was here. “Please forgive me!”
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“Oceta,” he repeated. He hummed in simple acknowledgment. Should he give her a new name? His father had once taught him that names held immense sway over a person’s mind, if used correctly. If the individual learned – or were trained – to forgo one name for another, different kinds of attachments could be made, and new identities formed around them. If her former master called her by that name, then he could confirm in the farthest corners of her mind that he was her new master – simply by choosing a different name for her. But if she’d been given that name at birth instead… things would be a bit different. If she felt attached to her name in a fond way, that also would make things different for him. His father would encourage it, but… Zarik didn’t make any decisions then. He could barely decide whether he wanted to keep his own name, toying with his own identity and the potential need to go into hiding, let alone whether to choose a name for a slave girl he hadn’t expected on purchasing until the very moment he had done so.

While he considered this, he realized that he’d have to make room in Lucretia’s home for the girl… he closed his eyes even though he continued their walk. He should have spoken to Lucretia about this: did the Ryn ex-seeker even approve of slavery? He wasn’t certain about the matter. What if she told him that he couldn’t keep the girl there? He supposed they could stay at his late father’s house, even if it smelt of old fish and rotten meat, and he was desperately trying to find someone to sell it to.

Oceta had started talking, but he didn’t listen too closely. He opened his blue eyes again and watched their path forward, as he couldn’t only think of himself but of the girl’s path as well while they made their way toward the Gleam. What she suggested about purchasing tools was smart, clever almost… but completely out of line. Zarik jerked the rope as to gain her attention, and he shook his head.

He winced momentarily when he realized what he’d done – treated her like an unruly dog that needed to be reined in – and Zarik almost apologized for it upon his recognition, if not for the awareness that it was pointless to apologize to slaves. He lightly bit his tongue instead and focused on their journey through Shanty. Up ahead, he could see the cobblestone streets turn to the brick-laid paths of the richer shopping district of Gleam.

The slave offered insight, however, into the dealings of the auctioneer and bidder. He sighed when he heard it. He led her to the side of the street, to get out of the way of the crowd, and went into the entrance on an alley. Zarik turned toward her. She raised her arms in reflex of an expected slap or hit. A sense of nostalgia washed over him. He recognized that motion. There was so much in Oceta’s reaction that reminded him of… himself, and yet, he’d never been a slave. Zarik felt troubled by this, but he tried to focus on her instead. He had been about to snap at her, to tell her that he didn’t need informing about things he already knew – especially from a slave – but he lost the will to conjure such a response.

Instead, he said plainly with eyes that had irises which dulled from an ice-blue color to a dim gray, “I know. I also knew that, eventually, they would have to let me purchase you. Otherwise neither of them would get anything. The price I paid for you was simply the price they were willing to sell you for. Perhaps it was a bit much, but… it is your worth. It is all business, just the same, even if it required me to play the fool.”

Whether he truly believed that, Zarik didn’t give any indication otherwise. He glanced over her, hesitated, then said, “Let’s move on. There are a couple errands I must finish before we return to… home.”

How would he ever start to explain the predicament he was in? It was incredibly irresponsible of him to purchase a slave in such a situation, he knew, but there he was anyway. He lifted his hood so that his features were hidden in shadow again, started their walk, and led her along.

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☠ The Price of a Life ☠

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Points awarded: 15, for both involved

Knowledge:
Oceta
Knowledge
Detection: Informing your master of a scam.
Discipline: Following your training as a slave without question.
Endurance: Slave training.
Endurance: Extreme slave training.
Endurance: The uncertainty of what your new master wants.
Etiquette: As a slave, avert your gaze.
Psychology: A lifetime of slavery impacts you.
Psychology: To be humble is a desirable trait among slaves.


Zarik/Llyr
Knowledge
Appraisal: Emotional connection creates the illusion of higher value.
Appraisal: Selecting cost effective investment (slaves).
Appraisal: The qualitative difference between public offerings and private offerings.
Appraisal: The potential cost of future upkeep.
Business Management: Hiring slaves is less expensive than hiring free citizens
Business Management: Supply and Demand of the Slave Trade
Sociology: Slavery is one word for a very complex reality
Sociology: What is the difference between unpaid labor and slavery?
Negotiation: Emotions get in the way of reasonable bidding.


Fame: +10 each; for Oceta being purchased from a guild and being led through lair/shanty by a locally renowned lord.

Wealth: -1 WP for Llyr upon purchase of a slave.

Injuries: bruised cheek (Oceta)

Notes: This so well written, and I love the flow and how effortless both of your pc's posts went with one another. Llyr gives me that noble feel of owning a slave or two and I love how self conscious he is about how he treats Oceta. Oceta is sooooooooo fricking adorable and I love it. Her only desire is to build stuff and i feel like an overprotective father "LET MY BABY BUILD FURNITURE IF SHE WANTS TO BUILD FURNITURE!!" well done you two enjoy your rewards.

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