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[Impact Thread] Zvezdana is visited by an Immortal. What will she exchange to have her revenge?

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26th of Saun, Arc 716
Continued from Negotiations Between Parties
There had never been an atmosphere quieter or colder than the one inside the royal tent at this moment. Centered in an encampment, surrounded by thousands of men, horses, and weapons, the blue tent had been violated by a taint far more vicious than anyone could ever have anticipated. Only bits before, the current king of Rynmere had ran foot from the tent. 'Negotiations' had taken place between two sides for a country that had been torn asunder by civil war. During those negotiations, a betrayal had taken place. Elyna, a beloved family member, friend, and student had taken her blade and stabbed the Dragon King in the neck. Blood had poured freely from the wound and sprayed around the sharpened edge. Blue Burhan banners were stained with droplets of bright crimson. Arterial blood identified a lethal strike.

Zvezdana had felt her world shatter at the moment that the knife entered the neck of her beloved. In the few weeks she had come to know Veljorn, their journey together had been quick. They had met on chance and were married days after the encounter. She had been swept off her feet, promised the throne, Rynmere, and a chance at true happiness. She had been in love from the very beginning. Even if he did not appear to return the feelings openly, she was clouded by the knowledge he loved her. His secret words in her ear only confirmed that. She had willingly followed his campaign from Burhan to Venora to the gates of Andaris City. Zvezdana – like the rest of his army – believed him to be the Dragon King, the future of Rynmere, and the slayer of Cassander, the boy king.

Now, all of that was gone. Fire was running through the encampment, sounds of voices calling for water and trying to put the flames out filled the air. Cassander and his party had fled and the remaining two dragons had been slain to prevent further fires from starting. The royal tent was at risk of catching fire, some of the edges already threatened by the nearby flames. If she did not move soon, even she would be engulfed in fire.

She sat on her knees, head buried in the crook of her arm over his breast plate. She had pulled his body from the chair where it now laid in her lap. Zvezdana could feel the sticky substance under her fingers as it had tainted her finger tips when she moved him. It coated the front of her dress, causing the normally watery fabric to adhere to her skin. Her eyes were puffy from crying, her face red from screaming at her “cousin”, “friend”, and “pupil.” Even her brother had played a role in this, the metaphoric dagger he placed in her back a subtle sting in comparison to Elyna's crime. When she finally lifted her face to stare at the black plate metal of her husband, she barely recognized herself in her reflection.

Her eyes had a hollow, dark appearance. They stared, lifelessly into the dark plate, her reflection staring back at her in the polished steel. The reflection of a broken woman, with nothing left to live for anymore. A reflection that suggested that all her dreams had been taken, broken, and thrown into the fire for fuel. Her crown was no longer on her head. It was behind her, somewhere on the floor where it had fallen in the struggle to get Veljorn to the bed. It had pulled at her hair, strands of hair now flailing wildly from her up-do. It gave her an animalistic look, a look she only recalled having when she threw a fit at Lamonte a week or so ago against her brother.

How many people had plotted against her? Had Alistair known about this, even though they had come to strenuous terms about their relationship and their family? Faith had had a role, so how much did her cousins know? Were her parents and grandparents involved? What about the Burhan family? Did they put Elyna up to this?

Elyna. The name made her blood boil. How dare she? There was no way she was going to let the Elyna get away with this treachery. She would use every ounce of energy left in her body to lead this rebellion. Zvezdana was going to finish what Veljorn had started, to her last breath.

The defeated queen rolled her head back with a loud groan. Tears threatened her eyes again. There was no way that she was going to lead an army of men against Andaris City. They followed Veljorn, not her. They believed her to be their queen, but only in name and marriage, not action. She had mediocre skills with a sword. She was talented with her language, and it helped raise moral for her to be among the men, but beyond that, she was useless. Agony gripped her heart as she pulled at the sheets with one hand, reaching her other hand out to smudge the reflection in the plate.

“Veljorn…”

Her voice cracked pitifully in the quiet. At that moment, one of the guards came rushing in, hoping that he could do something for his Queen. If he could get her away from the fires, than his mission would be complete.

“Lady Zvezdana…”

“What,“ Zvezdana hissed, staring lifelessly into the plate, “did you just call me?”

The guard, confused, repeated himself. “Lady Zvezdana, please. We must get you away from here.”

“You shall refer to your queen as ‘your highness’ you insolent fool.”

“My lady, please. The war is over. The fires will be upon us soon!”

“HE’S NOT DEAD!”

Denial struck that man in the face as Zvezdana moved her body in a fashion that made her appear possessed. Her knees remained connected with the ground as her mind could not make her body function correctly. Veljorn's body slumped off of her lap. Her neck and head lolled in weak fashion and her hands connected with the damaged rug beneath her. She began to crawl to him, growling and hissing. Again, she repeated the phrase.

“He’s not dead. He’s not dead. He can’t be dead!”

Finally she grabbed his armored shoe, staring up at him as a widow. He felt pity for her, and remorse for he had been somewhat close to his king. As part of his personal guard, Veljorn had actually spent time with the knights closest to him. It was probably the sailor in him that wanted to share drinks with his follows. Now, he had an obligation to protect his wife.

“Please. You must come away! Now!”

“Get out! I will come up with something. We will not allow his dreams to end.”

She was delirious with grief, that much he suspected. He contemplated dragging her from the tent, but elected that giving her more time with her late husband might force some sense into her. Especially when the flames threatened her life. Besides, night had just fallen. He bowed, mumbling a farewell before leaving the tent to stand guard. The other guard that had been present gave him a sidelong glance, which was only replaced by a grim look of understanding. Grief had a way of ruining the mind. They would give her just a few bits more before going into the tent and forcefully dragging her out.

Zvezdana remained on her hands and knees, fresh tears dripping from her high cheek bones onto the carpet. Who was she kidding? How would she come with a plan in the next few trills to prevent the men from abandoning their post? She shivered and collapsed into a heap of sobs, slamming her fist into the carpet. Shortly, another scream escaped her lips, barely muffled by the ground. The last bit of energy was leaving her. She whispered a prayer to whomever was listening, begging and pleading for help with all her being.

“Immortals, hear my plea. If there are any that care, come before me. I beg for your guidance and your power for my revenge. I would give anything. Won’t someone help me?”
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A sudden blast and crash of noise tore open the tent to the world around, throwing torches and flames about till darkness was light by their ominous glow on a giant figure. A horrific sound pierced the air as the ground shook violently, that same noise shuddering into a voice spoken with such power, the wind was electrified while the Immortal's overbearing presence pressed upon Zvezdana.

Her entrance had torn the tent nearly completely apart and, standing so tall the human would have to crane her neck just to see the face of the being that answered her call, no one would take notice of their encounter while dealing with the flames and the chaos soon to come. But who was this being? Presented before the mortal woman was a monster; long, purple shimmering arms that were covered in spikes, claws with killing points, hind legs and a thick torso that looked almost like a horse and a head that mirrored something like a snake but it's teeth... three sets that were long and spiked. Black leathery wings reached toward the sky and opened, engulfing the mortal in a full view of this creature's sudden existence.

The voice continued to utter the ancient language, bending and squirming as the massive thing morphed and shrank. But as the creature shrank and took more of a humanoid shape, the powerful voice turned feminine and taunting, laughter sliding through the words that she dragged out, “You mortals and your begging. Is that all you know how to do? Beg..?”

When she'd shrank down far enough to fit within what was left of the tent, the Immortal began circling Zvezdana where she sat crippled on the floor, those same leathery wings dragging behind her. The talons on her toes sank into the ground with each step, the spikes on her legs and arms growing slightly while her skin shifted to a bronze hue. Then finally, her eyes changed from pitch black to the color of burning fire.

Syroa was still towering over the woman at nearly seven feet when she stopped and turned her gaze to the other body in the room. The one that lay dead and covered in blood. It was neither hard to understand the situation nor figure out why the woman had so desperately pleaded for an Immortal to help. But that wasn't the reason Syroa answered the call.

Her lips twisted with sinister intent.

“Such a disappointing flock you all are. Trusting so easily... Dying so easily.” Again she began to change, molding her body into something familiar, something male and strong and mortal. "One would think you beg for it... Do you beg for death, mortal?"

Within the blink of an eye, the spitting image of Veljorn stood smiling down at Zvezdana, though his eyes were cold and twisted as was the smile curving his lips up, “Or is this what you beg for?” Watching the human for a moment, Veljorn's doppelganger scoffed, “Even more pathetic. You don't even know what it means to beg.”

“So then tell me, human, what you're seeking from my kin.”
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The tent had been split open, revealing flames and smoke reaching up to the darkening sky. A silhouette stood in the background of fire, demonic and fear invoking. Zvezdana huddled into a smaller ball, already deflated from the battle of grief that was raging within her. She did not understand the words that came from the being. It was not a dialect that was native to Rynmere, and she doubted it was native to Idalos. Was this the Ancient Language? Could it be that she had actually summoned an Immortal? The creature’s ability to shift and transform suggested that she was a mage or an Immortal, and with the previous prayer, Zvezdana had to believe she was now before a real Immortal.

When the creature had entered the tent, bowls of fire and torches that had been set up to provide light in the tent had been knocked over. The tent canvas immediately became fuel for fire, which now came from inside and outside the remains of the tent. It burned in a circle around them, the encampment clearly able to see everything that was going on. Where heat could reach, Veljorn’s blood began to boil and pop on the table, turning colors from red to black. She watched the creature twist her form from demon to woman, and finally to Veljorn, taunting her the entire time. When Veljorn, her beloved, stood before her, her heart jumped. This doppelganger gave her enough strength to push herself up from the fetal position to her knees. She looked between the body of her mortal husband to the Immortal impersonator.

This was her chance to have him back. Could this Immortal bring him back for her? They would then strike fear into all of those that stood against him, for a man that cheated death would be considered a true Dragon King. Slowly, she stood up, being ever so bold as to approach the Immortal that had appeared. Maybe this was all a delusion. Maybe she was already dead and this is how hell would torment her for eternity. Would Famula enjoy watching her spirit suffer for having been a part of this civil war?

She touched the breast place of the doppelganger, staring at him through sad, hollow eyes. This creature was her last chance, and it breathed life back into the fire she thought had previously gone out. The embers within her soul sparked back to life, an internal flame roaring with rage. She could have said anything that she wanted, made any selfish request to have her husband back. Instead, what came from her lips was truly evil.

“I want them to pay for taking him from me. I want to lead this army, march into Andaris City, and claim Cassander’s life for myself. They should all pay, ever last man, woman, and child that stood against us,” Zvezdana hissed, turning her back on the doppelganger as she went into a delusional tirade. Before her very eyes she pictured a battlefield filled not only with the bodies of soldier, but innocent city folk were also littered amongst the dead. She reached up with curled fingers to grasp at this image, her blood tinged nails gripping what would be viewed as air. Zvezdana saw all of Andaris burning in her grasp.

“I want revenge.”
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Syroa simply watched as the mentality of the mortal quickly spiraled down into the pit of her despair. The Immortal would have found humor in it, would have even appreciated the woman on a small level for her twisted sense, but Syroa was not of a merciful mood. Oh, no.

Whispers between the Immortals traveled quickly in the realm of the spirits, where those resting found their dreams and her kin beckoned to for safety. Those same whispers echoed as if Emea were a cave to reverberate such noise and finally, Syroa's patience had evaporated. She seized the last cry and pulled on it like a rope, guided to the place where upon this mortal woman stood.

No, Syroa would not help her. She would shut her up.

“And what makes you think you deserve what you so desperately want? Simply because your tiny little head is decorated with breakable jewels and a false crown?” The doppleganger laughed, “You are nothing but pathetic and weak, no mortal man would think to follow you, much less dare to bring any city to ruins just for you to stand upon it and call it your victory. You are no victory.”

Approaching Zvezdana, Syroa reached out and grasped the arm that still lingered in the air and yanked the mortal around to face burning molten eyes, their shape changing every instant. “Or maybe it was your upbringing?” She commented, her form shifting from that of Veljorn to a serpent like creature with long, scaled arms. “Was Daddy not kind enough to you?.. Or was he too kind? Hmm?”

Watching the woman's reaction earned blistering laughter from the Immortal.

“So pathetic. No mortal, you will not have your armies, you will not have your city, and you will not have your life with your false crown. You will suffer as those you slaughter suffer for I curse you and your sniveling, whining mouth that you become the very thing that lurks within the darkness of your heart. Never again will others look upon you as a woman but as a monster in mortal flesh. Henceforth you will be an abomination of your line, your judgment and actions will forever be second guessed as they will be guided by the monster you'll become.”

A giggle escaped her then, “And you'll become a monster.”

As the Immortal spoke, dark, deep red and black tendrils slithered onto the mortal woman's skin, biting and sinking into it as the curse was placed upon her.

“But with this, mortal, I will grant your revenge. Your madness will reach out and with it, you will slaughter everything in your path.” Releasing the arm then, Syroa stepped back and watched as the red and black tendrils clung to Zvezdana like smoke, absorbing into her very being. Where Syroa's hand had been were deep claw marks, a wound and marking of the curse. “Six times an Arc, you will shift into a beast that will wreak havoc on the world around you. It will destroy as you wish to destroy right now, anything and everything. The things you hate and the things you love. You will be forever satisfied in your thirst for revenge and you will perish in agony as you take from those closest to you their love and their life.”

“Go forth now, mortal, and do not dare call upon my kin for your trivial matters anymore...” And with that, Syroa's body burst into a storm of black feathers as a giant bird took off into the night sky.

There upon the ground laid Veljorn, dead still for the world to see.

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Form of the Beast(Sessfiend)- Syroa’s curse is especially unique among the Immortals as it focuses both on punishing a mortal and on punishing everyone around them. Syroa’s mark manifests as a wound she has inflicted with claws, bite, or tail that scar especially vivid on the marked’s body. Immediately, the marked will experience a minor and permanent change for as long as they are marked. Their body will thicken, grow stronger and faster. The marked will gain a faint taste for human flesh and blood, constantly tantalizing them. At the first mark, however, this taste can usually be resisted. In addition, the marked will find it harder to resist temptations of flesh and fury, finding themselves short tempered and drawn to the comforts of another. Most terrifying, however, is what only the marked can feel. Beneath their skin, a furious monster awakens and churns within their flesh and bones. The marked can feel it at all times, gnawing and scratching for release. Twice a Cycle the marked will transform at night into an immense, savage beast. Only those who truly know the marked would be able to spot anything of familiarity in the transformation. Claws, fangs, bulging muscles, sometimes wings. The shape taken is a reflection of the beast awakened within the cursed, a bestial inversion of their weaknesses and strengths. A cursed has no control over this transformation and immediately sets out for mortal flesh and blood. Its hunger is insatiable and fury only increases its power. The beast will ravage for the entirety of the evening, miraculously regenerating at astonishing speed and acting with both primal and sentient intelligence in how it hunts and kills. Just a break before dawn, amid maddening agony, the cursed will resume their true form, exhausted. Blessedly, the memories from this time are feverish and unclear. Some have taken their life before the curse takes hold of them, unwilling to turn on friend and family. The Beast seems to know who the cursed cares about and makes a habit of stalking, terrifying, and finally slaughtering them.

Curse Removal: If you wish to remove the curse, please get with a prophet in regards to seeking out Karem.
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The words hit Zvezdana hard enough to pull her from the wicked nightmare she was envisioning. If that is the case, why are you here? Zvezdana wanted to say, but her maniacal thoughts kept her lips shut over an internal snarl. How dare this Immortal come here and tempt her with power and vengeance and give her nothing? How dare this beast refer to her ambition as a practical failure? She may not be victory now, but she would be victory. She would see those that took everything from her hang from the burning arches of Rynmere’s architecture. Before she could turn around and address the woman as a queen, her arm was gripped roughly and she was forcibly whirled around.

Suddenly, any remnant of queenly behavior left her as she became a mewling child before the Immortal. Is this what fear is? Her body began doing things she didn’t want it to do: it shivered with anxiety and she began to perspire due to stress. Her knees gave out and she found herself crying out as the beast began to change once more. The cry was mixed with fear and anger pulled from Syroa’s reference to her father. The Immortal’s bore into her soul, lighting a rage fire that would forever burn deep within her soul.

Zvezdana’s gaze was averted when she felt something crawling along her skin. Like little worms, the black and red tendrils began to bore into her skin, moving beneath it towards her center. A shrill scream escaped her lips as she slapped at the tendrils, scratching at her arm as they crawled up and into her torso. This can’t be happening! I don’t want to be a monster!

But you already are.

What…?

Where had that voice come from? Her mind drifted its focus away from the tendrils and refocused on the voice. Her ears strained to figure out where it had come from, but it was her mind that figured out that it was not a mortal’s voice. It had come from within. Zvezdana seemed to be torn in two, her body aching with pain and her voice screaming out while her mind was battling something else entirely. Something that was inside of her.

Zvezdana fell once more to all fours when Syroa released her, shaking with fear, pain, and anger. She faced the ground, her thick hair covering her face entirely as she cowered before the immortal. Her right arm was marked with scars that glimmered strangely as if they held some sort of power about them. Syroa spoke of transformation and thirst, something Zvezdana would soon come to understand. As the black feathers settled around her, there was an odd silence before a strangled yell came. Life had returned to the environment around her.

The guard that had spoken to her earlier came running in, confused as to what had occurred. The tent was in shambles and his queen was now on her hands and knees with strange marks on her arm.
“My lady…?”

“I will have my revenge,” came a contorted version of Zvezdana’s voice. It creeped the guard out enough to reach for his sword. Something was not right.

“Lady Zvezdana, we must be away. You will drive yourself mad here.”

Zvezdana moved in a fashion that was possessed. Her back arched like an angry feline and she her limbs stretched her torso upwards until she was standing on her fingertips and toes. Her shoulders twisted towards him and she craned her neck to stare at him through strands of hair. Instinctively he drew his weapon. This was not the woman his leader had married, and he was willing to bet money on that. He was struck by fear, held solid in his position.

Zvezdana simply stared at him with eyes the color of fire.
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Knowledge:
Veljorn: Slain By Elyna
Veljorn: Death Drove Zvez Insane
Veljorn: Will Never Live Again
Elyna: Friend No More
Elyna: A Target of Revenge
Title: Fallen False Queen of Rynmere
Despair Breeds Insanity
Immortal: Syroa
Syroa: Shape shifting Creature of Fury
Syroa: A Chance For Revenge
Syroa: Merciless, Manipulative, and Destructive
Syroa: Sessfiend Curse
Sessfiend: Hellhound
Sessfiend: Uncontrollable Destruction
Sessfiend: The Animal Within
Revenge Is Life, Revenge Is Everything

Curse Information: Form of the Beast(Sessfiend) - Syroa’s curse is especially unique among the Immortals as it focuses both on punishing a mortal and on punishing everyone around them. Syroa’s mark manifests as a wound she has inflicted with claws, bite, or tail that scar especially vivid on the marked’s body. Immediately, the marked will experience a minor and permanent change for as long as they are marked. Their body will thicken, grow stronger and faster. The marked will gain a faint taste for human flesh and blood, constantly tantalizing them. At the first mark, however, this taste can usually be resisted. In addition, the marked will find it harder to resist temptations of flesh and fury, finding themselves short tempered and drawn to the comforts of another. Most terrifying, however, is what only the marked can feel. Beneath their skin, a furious monster awakens and churns within their flesh and bones. The marked can feel it at all times, gnawing and scratching for release. Twice a Cycle the marked will transform at night into an immense, savage beast. Only those who truly know the marked would be able to spot anything of familiarity in the transformation. Claws, fangs, bulging muscles, sometimes wings. The shape taken is a reflection of the beast awakened within the cursed, a bestial inversion of their weaknesses and strengths. A cursed has no control over this transformation and immediately sets out for mortal flesh and blood. Its hunger is insatiable and fury only increases its power. The beast will ravage for the entirety of the evening, miraculously regenerating at astonishing speed and acting with both primal and sentient intelligence in how it hunts and kills. Just a break before dawn, amid maddening agony, the cursed will resume their true form, exhausted. Blessedly, the memories from this time are feverish and unclear. Some have taken their life before the curse takes hold of them, unwilling to turn on friend and family. The Beast seems to know who the cursed cares about and makes a habit of stalking, terrifying, and finally slaughtering them.

Curse Removal: If you wish to remove the curse, please get with a prophet in regards to seeking out Karem.

Loot: N/A
Injuries: Claw marks on the right arm.
Fame: -30 Fame - For calling on an Immortal to win her fight.

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/5
Structure: 5/5

Comment: I awarded full marks because even as this was short, it was a very good read and lovely to see such a noble woman cripple and cursed to rock bottom. I think Zvezdana's reactions where natural and her twisted nature even before the curse believable. She could be seriously ruthless if she wanted to be. Your writing was also very well done and flowed naturally. I can't wait to see how this curse shapes Zvezdana's personality!!
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