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Yana navigated through the crystal spiderweb of Uleuda’s many streets. Its design was not planned, but grown over time. First there had been Yldria, the Mother Crystal, serving as a beacon and a safe haven to the first Yludih visiting Uleuda. Her light had caused crystals to grow around her, distinguishing the safe place from the void around it. Over time, while Yldria’s influence made more and more wild crystals sprout, some Yludih unlocked their true self through meditation and introspection. Instead of disappearing after death, their consciousness transferred to Uleuda, as if they had only fallen into eternal slumber. Yldria crowned those Yludih as her champions, bestowing on them an inner light to rival her own, and the ability to shape the crystals of Uleuda. The Yludih dubbed them Ancients, and looked to them for guidance.

The Ancients worked tirelessly to mold Uleuda into an idyllic hub for all Yludih, their desire to form a society where they could live in peace translated to the creation of the first bits of architecture. Slowly but surely, as more Yludih visited Uleuda night after night, as Ydria’s light spread further and further, the crystal city took shape and grew. Starting from the center and expanding outwards, adding buildings and streets and squares, and even a wall to protect the city from those who would seek to harm it.

Traversing those streets, the scarred Yludih reached the labyrinthine latticework of hallways, branching out into hundreds of small rooms no larger than a broom closet. It was plenty space for the purpose they served. Yana strode through several of the thin paths before she found an empty chamber. She stepped inside, closed the door behind her, and made herself comfortable on the crystalweave pillow on the floor. Legs crossed, hands resting on her knees, she sat as straight as she possibly could sit, and reflected on her day.

* * *


It was not unusual for Yana to be buried in paperwork and administration. Her position brought with it responsibilities and an expansion of her duties –most of which diverged away from field work, and shackled her to her desk. Naturally, the Yludih refused to spend all her time filing reports, signing documents, and frowning over logistics. Every so often she spent a day out of office, investigating homicides, burglaries, and other crimes. Or, if the criminals and would-be lawbreakers of Rynmere decided to lay low for a change, patrol the city. Not everything was equally exciting, but the most important thing was that she could take a little break from all the paperwork.

However, leaving the desk was an open invitation for work to start pile up. It was the primary reason why so many of her peers steered clear of field work altogether, instead preferring to fight their battles with a pen instead of a blade, against stacks and stacks of documents instead of troublemakers, pickpockets, and sexual predators. None of those once-Knights-now-penpushers could comprehend how she managed.

Around headquarters contradicting rumors circulated. One would state she never stopped working, paining her as some crazy workaholic who was always on the job. While not exactly wrong, it wasn’t really true either. Another would have you believe that she was in fact not a singular entity. There were at least two of her, twins or doppelgangers, who both lived the life of Captain Saeri LaChasse. When one was at work, the other took time off. And, if the need was there, they both worked together to meet their quotas. The truth of the matter was a lot less exciting, and several times more mundane. Yana simply put in more hours than her colleagues. She started sooner and finished later. It worked for her, and had ever since her promotion.

The only time when it hadn’t was during the peak of the plague, where she had literally been working around the clock for several days to try and keep up with the sudden influx of problems. Naturally, she’d run herself ragged in no time flat, leading to an embarrassing four day absence due to overexertion and complete exhaustion. Afterwards she’d been a little more careful, though still taking on extra work to compensate for sick and dead colleagues, and her own short break.

One would think that after the plague had been cured there would be a lull. A blissful stretch of time where the Iron Hand as a whole could finally sit down for a moment to catch its breath. Hardly so. There were too many things they had to busy themselves with, no time to slack off. There was the distribution of the cure, which required an escort of Knights to secure the area and protect the medics. More Knights to uphold order among the gathered populace when they came for their preventative injections. And to quell any fighting breaking out over whose spot in the queue was whose, and who got to the area first and thus should get the injection first. Not to mention to calm the emotions of those who had to come back the next day when the medical staff’s work day was over, and evening had arrived.

Then there were the many deaths among the Iron Hand too, leading to a decrease in manpower. The forces were spread thin over Andaris, and crime rates were on the rise now the Hand was understaffed. Likewise, personnel transfers and promotions had to be approved or denied, with each day bringing more of those to the desks of the officers than a whole season used to. It was only natural that the empty spots be filled, but dealing with all that was a serious drag.

And, of course, there was the issue of all the orphaned children.

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A loud knock on the door roused Yana from her reverie, snapping her back to the present. Without a pause to wait for a response, someone swung the door open and stepped inside. Tall and wide, without any distinguishable features. Blank as just about any young Yludih,their crystals not even holding a color or hue. They simply refracted Yldria’s lights, as well as their own, shining and shimmering like a brilliant cut gemstone. The Yludih halted abruptly once they saw Yana sitting crosslegged in the little space, radiating a certain amount of frustration and annoyance. Even without the facial features to communicate the mood, the tall Yludih still seemed to catch on.

“I would ask if you know what knocking is, but since you actually did knock that’d be plain redundant,” the interrupted Yludih snapped, chimes short and scratchy. “So then I wonder why you’d knock and enter immediately after? Don’t you think that defeats the purpose?”

Several seconds passed without a reply, unless the couple butchered sounds it produced with faltering voice could be considered as such. They carried no meaning, despite resembling the first syllables of words.

“I… is apol— alopo— ap-o-lo-gy,” the intruder mangled. “Do punch door. Am forget wait. Not purp…ose erupt.”

Yana frowned. The other crystal person let out a shattering noise of frustration, fists balled and shaking.

“Not here talk … ” A pause, head cocked. Then they produced a series of sounds that more or less resembled the phonetics of the various characters of an Idalosian language. Yana didn’t recognize the word they tried to spell, and just shrugged when the Yludih faced her with expectation. “..No?”

“No,” she responded.

The other Yludih looked dejected. “Am apol…gy. Yludih talk … not soft. Is few age, me.” A sigh. “Go now.” They stepped out, closing the door, but stopped then, and addressed Yana once more. “Know talk study be where?”

She frowned, browless. “Near the square around Yldria.”

“Is repeat, plea?”

“Close to the large square around Yldria,” she spoke again, slower this time. “Where you arrived. Started.” Nothing suggested they got any of that, so Yana repeated herself again, miming alongside to be best of her ability.

“Oh! Yldria? Large. Bright. Warm.”

“Yes.” She nodded.

“Thank.” They closed the door, and Yana tried to regain her focus.

* * *


The courtyard was full of squires, fuller than usual. These were not the ones who’d been with the Hand for some years either, these were new. Most did not have a tunic yet, simply dressed in stained and dirty, but durable clothes. Those dressed in the colors of the Hand, wearing the uniform of the Squires had joined less than a year ago.

It was clear to see in their movements, their body language. The way they stood tall, chest out, shoulders back. It could be seen in the way they saluted. Heels snapping towards each other, as if forced by magnets. Elbow bent at the exact right angle, the correct hand clenched into a fist, side of thumb and index finger placed over the heart. Other arm rigidly remaining by their side. Neck and back straight, eyes on the horizon, facing forward with pride.

It was obvious from the way they handled their weapons, swords already moving fluidly through the air, striking alternating sides of the dummy without issue. How loose their joints were, how they used the whole arm, not just the shoulder. There was strength in their form. It came through in the way they held their shields, those heavy plates of wood reinforced with iron and steel. Always in position, covering the torso during an attack, forearm stable. No tremble, no fatigue. It was visible in their footwork, precise movements drilled into them from many daily exercises. Wide for balance, but not in a way that relinquished explosivity.

And it could be seen in how healthy they looked. Lean and muscular, athletic and tough. Boys and girls in the middle of their teens. A stark contrast to the twig-like state most of the newbies were in. Skeletal figures whose ribs could be counted, and whose sunken cheeks and sockets gave the impression of an army of dead waifs rather than living orphans.

Because that’s what they were. Orphans.

The plague had struck hard and without mercy. Men and women of all ages had been cut down with impunity. No distinction made, all were equal before it’s blighted sword. Life had already been tough with parents to provide for them, when all members of the household could fetch a day’s worth of rations at dawn. When those were gone, the older siblings had to step up to comfort the younger ones, care for them, sing them to sleep. But who would the same for them now? Who could they turn to for help?

Fortunately, even without parents, they could still get rations. Unfortunately, children wandering the streets alone were easy prey. Their day’s meal the target of other families, of starving dogs and beggars, of other orphaned children. It had been a fight to survive. It didn’t get better when the disease was finally cured.

Rations were no longer being distributed. The economy began to start back up. Landlords came to collect their rent. Children were kicked out, into the streets. More complaints of theft were addressed to the guards, from rich and struggling merchants both. From families who paid too little attention to their coin purse. A lot of the Knights looked the other way unless they had no other choice. Much to the chagrin of many. What were they to do though, beat the newly created orphans who were fighting for their lives? Take away the stolen food, and return it to the wealthy merchants, leaving the children to starve? Sure, there were some who did not mind committing such acts, but such people were few and far between.

It had sparked a debate within the upper echelons of the Hand, a discussion that had lasted for days. Then some more to consider the logistics of it. Then more to convince the ruling faction of Rynmere. But a solution was found.

Recruit all willing orphans into the Hand, where they would have a roof above their head, food to fill their bellies, and a small wage to provide for siblings who were unable to work. Meanwhile, this would solve the shortage of Knights. Older, more experienced squires would receive a promotion sooner than they should. Several Knight Stewards were elevated the rank of Captain to fill up empty seats, and ditto for Knights to Stewards. Additionally, a degree of flexibility was expected. Now squires were put on a fast track –if they were old enough, naturally—they would become part of a squad far sooner than normal. Classes would focus on practical skills rather than theory, with drills making up the bulk of it. As part of a squad, they would gain valuable work experience.

Of course, not everyone was cut out to be a squire. Those deemed too young were given other jobs in the interim, like carrying messages around HQ, or put on cleaning duty. Some were staffed in the kitchen to help the cooks, do the dishes, or serve the slop that everyone pretended was food. Those few that could read and write had the privilege of assisting the clerks. Those with behavioral problems or troublesome personalities which revealed themselves during the training had their squirehood revoked, and were given another occupation in or around headquarters.

And just like that, the Hand struck two flies in one fell swoop. Well, more or less.


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Yana let her vision return, becoming aware of the room around her. Both her knees and lower back were starting to hurt from the position she was sitting in. She rose ungracefully, limbs stiff and sore. It felt as if hours had gone by, but she couldn't be sure. Prior experience told her it'd been only a couple minutes, fifteen at best. Either way, the Yludih had no intention to continue this exercise right now. Perhaps she should go for a little walk, stretch her legs, and then try again. Mind made up, the scarred Yludih headed out, leaving the door wide open so people would know it was free. She didn't mind losing it to someone else, there were more than enough chambers in this complex. Finding another would take her no time at all. That was a concern for later though, first she'd like to get some feeling back into her calves and feet.

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Comments: I really enjoy the way this dream opens up with a description of Uleuda. The way the light of Yana plays off the light of crystalline structures around her is very well described in detail.

As for the dream portion of this, it makes me miss Rynmere in some part. For all its problems, it was a very rich setting with so much development poured into it.

It was interesting to learn how things theoretically might be going in the aftermath of the Plague getting cured. One would think even the Iron Hand would have a hard time keeping it together, yet as it came clear here in this scenario, they were one of the main bulwarks against the chaos it unleashed.

An interesting tactic to recruit the orphans, giving them a place where they can go to have a surrogate family, and receive shelter/food/etc. I'm sure it'd work well for the Iron Hand if they actually adopted such a tactic.

Great writing, enjoy the points!

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