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Alistair
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38th of Ymiden, Arc 717

"As a gift for the incredible value of this spear, I will provide you with a few complimentary lessons on how to use it," the man said, in an accent thick of Rakahi. He handed Alistair the weapon, a spear of a thick wood that felt hard as stone, leading onto an exceptionally high quality blade with refined metals and edges as sharp as a Feron's claw. Across the blade ran an emblazoned golden viper, which would only expand the wounds given through the spear's impalement. It was mastercraft to be sure, and it was incredibly expensive.

He had commissioned it through letter before his arrival, with Fridgar listed as the beneficiary, and it had taken more than a fortnight to craft. A small fortune had been spent on its acquisition, and he was told that the finest, purest steel had gone into its creation. He was satisfied. Taking the spear into his hands, he took a breath and focused on the feeling. It would be interesting to adjust to, but he'd played some with lances and spears as a youth, and inevitably he'd grow fond of the weapon.

Alistair was a mobile combatant - he wore leather armor, he blinked around like mad, he strafed, stepped, rolled and danced around blows. The blade had done well for him, but it was not his weapon. It was a weapon -- a weapon of the Rynmere Knights, a weapon of war for the most basic and common of men. He was no such man - he fought in unique and exceptional ways.

"First, an introduction, from man to man. I am Keanu Ki'Lozdara, great blacksmith of the Valley of Kings. I am the son of two biqaj seeking fortune in a land of danger, and I am born from their ambition. You on the other hand are more like my parents than I -- you left wealth and securty in a foreign, Northern realm, and now seek prosperity far away. I respect that. You will need skill in a weapon such as this, however, to survive the Fields of Gauthrel. Even then, your safety is uncertain."

The man shrugged. "I'm a mage like you've never seen," he said, casually. He knew the Lotharen consensus on magic -- it was a tool to be used against the monsters. He felt the same way, though their perception on what a monster was... was probably different.

"Ah," the man nodded. "Even moreso -- a mage must learn to protect themselves. Trust me, I know," he winked. Alistair's brow rose -- this had to be an incredible thing, two mages openly admitting their talents to one another in a public space. It wasn't like the man's forge was in a secluded corner of the city; there was no such thing. Uthaldria was packed.

"Let me teach you of the spear, Alistair of an unnamed Northern House," he called him. The man had withheld his dynasty, not seeking his secrets to be sold from opportunists a world away. "I promise you, you will appreciate my lessons. Come behind my forge - I have a garden in which we can practice."

Biting his lower lip, he nodded in agreement. What would be the harm?
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"Now, let me teach you of the spear, and remember these lessons well," the man said, taking a practice spear from a weapon rack sitting against the wall. "To start, the classification: a spear is considered a polearm, a long weapon typically utilized for its reach. In war, or in the endless grind against monsters here in Gauthrel, it is used to slay horses, animals or monsters from a range. It is difficult to perfectly swipe at some equestrian beast as it charges at you, but easy to stab it from meters away and watch it fall. This is how the spear first found use in the lands I come from, and surely yours -- but that is not how it is used in Gauthrel," he explained. He twirled the spear above his head, rapidly, then quickly brought it down and pointed the tip at the Northern nobleman.

"That style of fighting... that lunge-obsessed, militaristic method, is not the best way in which to wield a spear. No. Here, where all men must be hardened in bones and blood, we teach a different style of fighting. The Lotharro call it 'Sevarna,' or Shadowdancing. It was developed by both Biqaj and Lotharro alike, in the confines of this very city. Here in Gauthrel, animals are intelligent, fast and powerful." He demonstrated as such, becoming incredibly mobile, dancing around Alistair; encircling him.

"This style of fighting was developed to wage war against both man, animal and vicious beast -- it utilizes mobility, acrobatics, fluidity. Strafe, dodge, dance around their strikes and their movements. Parry only if you must, dancing around their strikes when you can. Get behind them, or to their side - hamstring them, destroy their calves, forearms, the muscles in their back, their thighs, or run your spear through their neck. Whittle them down, destroy them. When the enemy is tired out or too weakened to properly fight back, you may bloody your weapon with little resistance." He continued to show off, twirling his spear and exchanging hands, stepping and leaping around in incredibly fluid motions.

"It is as acrobatic as it is the finesse of the spear. One must master both to master this style of fighting. In addition, endurance is a useful skill to master, and surprisingly strength. The blows that are made must count - you must fully dedicate your body to each attack, though remain vigilant and agile enough to come back from a dedicated strike if you are met with resistance. It is an incredibly intricate style of fighting. Let me show you some of its core principles." He stopped before Alistair, stepping back several paces. With his eyes, he commanded the mage to strike at him. Alistair complied, performing a full swipe from side-to-side with the tip of his spear. Keanu backstepped, avoiding the swipe and quickly uppercutting with the point of his practice spear. Alistair's weapon flew from his hands, a stunning display of very precise strength going into the man's blow.

"I call that the scorpion's sting," he said. "Striking quickly, deadly, with extreme efficiency - ending a man on the spot, or disarming him to decide his fate. It's a stunning maneuver; you will need such surprises to demoralize your foes early, if you wish to prevent an extended engagement. Fights with a spear against a close-quarter combatant can be long," he explained. The mage managed to catch his weapon via a running jump. After doing so, he leapt for Keanu, holding his spear in both hands. The man dodged to the side, turning his body. He whacked Alistair on the tailbone, showing him the weakness he presented.

"That move was good -- a jumping attack. Acrobatic," he said, nodding. "However, you must recover quickly. Remember, while one can dedicate to their lunges, swings and strikes, one must be fluid. Any moment of weakness and you will die, if your opponent is truly worthy of your enmity," he explained. Alistair nodded, fallen to his knees, though he rose quickly and lunged with the spear. Met with a parry, he lunged once again - a remise of sorts, though with the spear rather than a long blade.

"Not bad, you have talent," he said, before butting the side of the spear's length beneath Alistair's weapon. The mage recoiled from the strike, and Keanu took that moment to his advantage, pressing his spearhead against the nobleman's neck. Alistair, beginning to understand, rolled beneath the man's maneuver and managed to slide past him. He swung upward with his spear, attempting to knock the man onto his knees, before pointing the tip against his back; an assured victory. Keanu however turned to face the mage, blocking the blow with a shove of his spear, pushing Alistair back while he strafed to the side. He twirled his spear as Alistair attempted to lunge at him with an increased tempo, parrying strikes before ducking and swinging outward, sweeping the mage off of his feet.

The practice spear sat against his adam's apple; Keanu's win. He nodded, rolled on his side and rose.
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"So, what have we learned? Sweeping one off his feet, striking firmly to disarm or disable a foe, lunging, swiping, stinging from the back, punishing a target for their weighty movements... and that is with the spear alone. Acrobatically, I saw development. Rolls, leaps, momentum, even the beginning of dancing. Now you must learn to strafe, sidestep, spin around strikes and master both your feet and legs alike. Jump vertically, diagonally, twirl, zig-zag, feint, slip around, turn and surprise... so many maneuvers, so many years to master them. I hope you enjoyed my complimentary lesson," he nodded, bowing to the young man. Alistair nodded in return.

"I did enjoy it -- quite a lot, actually," he said, controlling his breathing and allowing his body to return to a state of calm. This was a very precise style of fighting - adrenaline, rage, and fury likely did not do well within it. His high endurance helped him with that fact, though he knew he would need to work mentally to master this craft as well. But... from what he'd already experienced, this Shadowdancing was something he quite tremendously enjoyed. He'd never felt so at home engaging in what was merely a spar - he moved around so much, and soon, he would move around well. He bowed to the master and blacksmith, and held his incredibly crafted spear firmly in his hand.

"Do you have a name for it?" the man asked. Alistair nodded his head.

"Indeed," he replied. "Shadowsong. I will dance to its tune," he said, laughing a little. It sounded pretentious putting it like that, though Keanu seemed to nod in approval of the name. "Shadowsong. I like it very much, My Lord," he called him respectfully, "Come find me again if you wish to master Shadowdancing. There are others surely better than I, though most of them in this city speak Haltunga alone, I'm afraid," Keanu explained.

Acknowledging that, the nobleman nodded his head and left, returning home to tell his mate of the wild experience he'd had in a garden hidden from view - and what great fighting style he'd come across.
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Skill Knowledge:
  • Polearms: Spear - Shadowdancing
    Polearms: Spear - Shadowdancing is focused on mobility, acrobatics, fluidity
    Polearms: Spear - Scorpion's Sting
    Polearms: Spear - Utilized for range
    Acrobatics: Jumping Attack
    Acrobatics: Evasion


Other Knowledge:
  • Keanu Ki'Lozdara: Blacksmith, Mage, Shadowdancer
    Uthaldrian Fighting Styles
    Uthaldria: Valley of Kings
    The Pointy End: Smithy


Loot: Shadowsong, Masterwork Terrendyte/Beryllium Emerald Spear

Comments: "Shadowsong. I like it, my Lord." FUCK YEA YOU DO. Super easy thread, nice and grigitty-grindy. Take your points and knowledges and go do other stuff, like throwing that spear through a Rupturing portal into Cassander's head.

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