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Alistair
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Thread Name: Duskfall
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Polearms: Spear - Rapid Swing
Polearms: Spear - Shadowfall
Polearms: Spear - Dancing Snakebite
Polearms: Spear - Duskfall
Acrobatics: Rolling into a crawl
Acrobatics: Front-flipping from a crawl

Alistair: Shadowdancing Master
Alistair: Spear Master

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Aeon
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Thread Name: Heading East [part 3]
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel (Uthaldria)
Notes/Warnings: Death and blood. Nothing graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Dodging while jumping
Acrobatics: Keeping your balance on a small surface
Acrobatics: Cartwheel
Detection: Silence can mean something
Hunting: Identifying your target among a pack of others
Hunting: Going for the alpha

Shadowdancing: An Uthaldrian form of using the spear
Shadowstepping: Altered form of Shadowdancing
Korim: Invented Shadowstepping
Korim: Dead

Loot: 250gn for the completed bounty, details in the thread. Also a key to the world of Narnia
Injuries/Overstepping: I'm sure there are some
Fame: Positive please, completing the bounty, killing stekir.
Devotion: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Thread Name: Pups On Their Own: Part 1. Dehydration
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: IMMODESTY!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Fighting through dehydration
Endurance: Fighting through hunger
Endurance: Striding through incredible weakness
Fieldcraft: Water is cleaner upstream
Fieldcraft: Purifying water with a bag
Fieldcraft: Finding a creek via sound
Fieldcraft: Using everything at your disposal
Strength: An empty stomach can burn through muscle

Fridgar: Clever
Fridgar: Survivor
Fridgar: Gallant to his kindal
Understanding a peasant's thirst
Northern Gauthrel: Few trees
Eastern Gauthrel: Many forests

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel, Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nope, good clean fun!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Working through dehydration
Fieldcraft: Make the most of resources provided
Fieldcraft: Locating water sources down hill
Fieldcraft: Filtering scummy water for drinking
Fieldcraft: A lot easier with becoming
Fieldcraft: Tying knots
Fieldcraft: The importance of keeping hydrated
Strength: Carrying an unconscious ally to safety
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Alistair: Unfamiliar with the wilderness
Alistair: Appreciates your expertise
Eastern Gauthrel: Full of trees
Location: Eastern Gauthrel
Path of the Jeger: Left you and Alistair for dead?
path of the Jeger: Trials are hardcore


Loot: A meter long length of rope, 2x tightly woven bags used for filtering water
Injuries/Overstepping: Rope burn around wrists, headache
Fame: Good deeds? Only Alistair saw though
Devotion: None definitely
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Pups On Their Own: Part 2. Food
Alistair
City/Area: Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: IMMODESTY! And Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Greater animal density around rivers
Polearms: Spear - Rending foes in half from beneath them
Hunting: Higher chance to find animals around a watering hole
Acrobatics: Stepping and flipping to scale a hill
Acrobatics: Sliding beneath a foe
Endurance: Using adrenaline to fight through weakness
Endurance: Carrying weapons in a state of weakness
Endurance: Traversing difficult terrain in a state of weakness

Me: High Maintenance
Fridgar: Angry at me
Is impracticality wrong?
Eastern Gauthrel: Divided by rivers
Scython-Ur: Hunt in packs
Scython-Ur: Cunning hunters
Scython-Ur: Go straight for the kill, watch your vitals

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Killing Scython-Ur (+3)
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
City/Area: Eastern Gauthrel, Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Nope, good clean fun!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Conserve energy for the best results in the long run
Fieldcraft: Stay topped up on water
Hunting: Higher chance to find animals around a watering hole
Hunting: Distract smarter prey from the front and ambush from the flank
Hunting: The edible parts of a Scython-Ur
Hunting: The Exhilaration of landing a kill and then eating it
Unarmed Combat: Aim for the eyes
Unarmed Combat: Use your legs when you can't use your arms
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Alistair: Cheerful in life and death situations
Alistair: Fell because you distracted him
Alistair: Struggles with his anger to this trial
Scython-Ur: Hunt in packs
Scython-Ur: Cunning hunters
Scython-Ur: Go straight for the kill, watch your vitals

Loot: 3 Scython-Ur Carcasses
Injuries/Overstepping: Rope burn around wrists, headache
Fame: Killing Scython-Ur (+3)
Devotion: None definitely
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Profession: Fanatical Philanthropist
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Thread Name: Careful What You Wish For
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Geek central
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Etiquette: Speaking to the Dean
Negotiation: Explaining what you want
Negotiation: Giving concreate examples to nullify counter-arguments
Persuasion: Putting forward a moral argument
Persuasion: Appealing to an individual’s academic ego.
Persuasion: Applying your case to what someone already knows

Loot: (If applicable) None

Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) None

Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) I’d think maybe +2 or +3 for becoming a professor (?) and maybe positive for appealing for the rights of slaves.

Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None

Collaboration: (No) Solo

Magic EXP: (No)
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Thread Name: Teaching & Learning
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Investment Thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Gardening: Planting crops in order to spread out the harvest of vegetables and fruit
Gardening: Large gardens require more organisation
Gardening: Spray insect repellent every five trials
Agriculture: Crop planning is essential
Agriculture: Preparation for harvest
Agriculture: Planning for livestock farming

Other Knowledge:
NPC: Paul: Very organised
NPC: Paul: Flirts with Tina
NPC: Paul: Farmer
NPC: Tina: My friend

Loot: (If applicable) None

Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) None

Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None

Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) None (2 threads with no devotion!? What's going on Faith!)

Collaboration: (No) Solo

Magic EXP: (No)
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"Every evil has its good, and every ill an antidote."

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Playing the Background (Solo/Job Thread)
City/Area: Cally’s Restaurant, Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris Island
Notes/Warnings: None.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
  • Detection: Reading your audience
  • Detection: Musical preferences change by the amount of alcohol consumed
  • Discipline: Knowing when not to use Empathy
  • Lute: Encouraging romance with a melody
  • Lute: Adjusting play style for a different audience
  • Socialization: Purposeful eye contact
Other Knowledge:
  • Location: Cally’s
  • Cally’s: The Staff Entrance
  • Cally’s: Rich folks dine here
  • NPC: Trudi: A flirtatious waitress
  • NPC: Taylor: Quiet and aloof
  • NPC: Jo’get: Sous chef
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, positive. Making Cally’s dining experiences musically pleasing.
Devotion: No. (I should be working devotion to Zanik in more. My bad.)
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Alistair
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Thread Name: A New Leaf (Job)
Alistair
City/Area: Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Hiring a new employee
Business Management: Orientation
Business Management: Using your employee's strengths to introduce new features
Business Management: Overworking an employee
Business Management: Handling an employee roster
Business Management: One needs more employees for more opening hours
Business Management: In a high class locale, all of one's employees must dress well
Rhetoric: Inspiring confidence in another

Sabaissant: Slangs and mock names
Fridgar: My lover, my warrior, my employee

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: +1 General Good Deed
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Fridgar
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Using different words than you would normally
Acting: More convincing while disguised
Acting: Useful for throwing people off your scent
Disguise: Becoming is useful
Disguise: Clothing must match the persona
Etiquette: Keep clothing in mind
Etiquette: Greeting a noble
Throwing weapons: Throwing clothes
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Alistair: Your new boss
Alistair: Supportive of your doctoring 'skills'
Alistair: believes in you

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None?
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Keegan
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Thread Name: You Were Cheap
City/Area: Rhakros
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges
  • Poisons: Nightshade fumes are not safe
  • Poisons: Myrta bud dust is messy
  • Discipline: The importance of patience
  • Linguistics: Pinpointing accents is hard
  • Medicine/Research/Poisons?(not sure which is more appropriate): The Sandman Wasp sting and it's symptoms
  • Research: Confirming ingredients and dosage
Other Knowledges
  • Barlow Baynard: Believes your wickedness is a blessing
  • Barlow Baynard: Bought you because you were cheap
Loot: Did she successfully craft the poison?
Injuries/Overstepping: Inhaling the myrta dust causes temporary euphoria and numbness
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Either +2 from Lisirra for developing a poison or -5 from Lisirra from failing at an experiment, depending if she was successful or not.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No


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Aeon
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Thread Name: A (scy)thon of fun!
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: It's really short and not that fun
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Controlling the amount of food the animal eats
Animal Husbandry: How to feed a Scython-Ur
Animal Training: Training a Scython-Ur
Animal Training: Rewarding nothing isn’t good
Animal Training: Bite
Animal Training: Jump

Ariel: Scython-Ur kitten
Ariel: Tamed, but not trained
Connor Blake: Doesn’t like Ariel
Connor Blake: Knows a woman that could make you powerful
Connor Blake: Believes in you
Scython-Ur: Common mounts for Jegers

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: Never!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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